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Posted: 13 years ago
#51
Here's a mini char sketch -
1. Sooraj Shekhavath
Sooraj is Dhara's dad. He is one of d richest businessmen in Jaipur. He is very very proud of his wealth n loves money more den anything in his life, he also luvs his daughter.
2. Preeti Shekhavath
Preeti is a loving n understanding mom. Very well educated and modern.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#52

Originally posted by: frozen.devil

Here's a mini char sketch -
1. Sooraj Shekhavath
Sooraj is Dhara's dad. He is one of d richest businessmen in Jaipur. He is very very proud of his wealth n loves money more den anything in his life, he also luvs his daughter.
2. Preeti Shekhavath
Preeti is a loving n understanding mom. Very well educated and modern.


nice...😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
#53

Nice CS! Waiting for P-2!!

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Posted: 13 years ago
#54
thnx guys... will b updting soon...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#55
nice character sketch...
waiting for the next!
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Posted: 13 years ago
#56
preeti is dhara's mom??kuch choti nhi hai??
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Posted: 13 years ago
#57
ya aru, aisa lagta to zaroor hai, but i cudnt think of many ppl...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#58
aaj mein 2nd part updt kar doongi, k?
guyz tell me whether i shud take lalit negi aka digu as a char in my ff?
Edited by frozen.devil - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#59

Here's d 2nd updt guys!

CHAPTER 2 :
In Eternity mall -
( Sarika n Dhara r shopping )
Dhara - Sarika, dekh na, ye dress kaisa lag raha hai?
Sarika - Bahut pale hai yaar, koi vibrant color choose kar! tujhe suit karega.
( Sarika notices d kumkum smear on her forehead coz she is very observant. )
Sarika - Dhara, dulhan ka jodha nahi legi? 😆
Dhara - Kya?? 😕 😲 😡 kya matlab hai tera?
Sarika - 😆 😆 😆 apna chehra mirror mein dekh. mathe par sindoor laga hooa hai! 😆
( Dhara rubs it n stares at her )
Dhara - tu mujhe pehle nahi bata sakti thi? pagal ladki! pata nahi kitne logon ne dekh liya! ab chal yahan se! ho gayi meri shopping!
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In badi haveli -
( Ashish comes back home with a bag of jalebi and samosa. Mihika comes in )
Mihika - Dijiye bhaiyya main ise andar rakh deti hoon.
Ashish - Mihika, ye sab kyon mangvaya hai?
( Mihika is about to say something when meera enters )
Meera - Ashish, beta tu aa gaya! ja haath mooh dhokar ek acchi shervani pahan le.
Ashish - Shervani?? 😕 😕 Kyon ma?
Meera - Tu jo main kehti hoon so kar. hamare ghar koi aa raha hai.
Ashish - ji main kapde badal kar aata hoon.
( he is about to go to his room when shobha comes back home from her college )
Shobha - bhaiyyaaa!!! 😃 😃 😃 ( she hugs ashish)
Ashish - Are kya hua tujhe? 😊
Meera - Road par chavanni, atthani mil gayi kya? 😆
Shobha - Maaa! mera mood kharab mat kijiye. pata hai aap ki ye beti 1st yr final exams mein 88 % lekar aayi hai! 😃 😃 😃
Ashish - arre vaah!
Meera - Meri bacchi!
( Mihika comes with a big bowl full of kheer )
Mihika - mujhe pata tha, shobha itne acche marks lekar aayegi, is liye maine pehle se hi kheer tayyar rakhi thi! aaiye sab log aur kheer khaiye.
Shobha - tooot pado!! 😆 😆
( Ashish walks to his room n shuts d door )
Ashish - Mayuri, kash tum bhi inn khushiyon mein hamare saath hoti.
( Meera n Mihika start cleaning n arranging everything in d house neatly. Mihika is busy preparing food for sum guests )
Meera - Shashank, beta jaa kahin se nariyal, paan ke patte aur gende ke phool le aa. haan aur maine sunaar ke yahan angoothi banvane di hai, bill mere purse mein hai, jaa lekar aa. Dhyan se.
Shashank - Ji maa. Lekin in sab cheezon ki kya zaroora... ( he stops himself as he knows that he wont get any answer )
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In Shekhavat Rajbhavan -
Preeti - Dhara, aap kahan hain?
Dhara - Ji mom, aapne bulaya mujhe?
Preeti - Dhara, hum soch rahe the shopping ke liye chale. aap aayengi hamare saath?
Dhara - shopping!!!! phir se!!! nahiii!! ( n she runs to her room giggling )
Preeti - pata nahi kya hogaya hai inhe.😕 ( she shouts out to dhara ) Hum parlour jaa rahe hain, Dhara. Jaldi aa jayenge.
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Chapter 2 done. Kaisa laga? plz comment!
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Posted: 13 years ago
#60
dhara is coo...nice update...😊

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