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Posted: 13 years ago
#71
dekhte hain time milega to zaroor updt karoongi.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#72
@ bhoomi : nice CS dear, update the next part soon !!😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
#73
Nice character sketch bhoomi👍🏼...waiting for update😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
#74
guyz here's d 3rd part!
CHAPTER 3
In Badi Haveli -
The guests come in. ( Sumitra, Raj, Pooja and Dev Vyas )
Meera - Aaiye, aaiye aapka hi intezaar ho raha tha. Aane mein koi takleef to nahi hui na?
Sumitra - Ji nahi. Vaise aapka ghar bahut hi sundar hai.
Raj - Haan, par Amarji kahan hain?
Meera - Ji vo yahin hain bas aa rahe hain. Leejiye aa gaye.
Amarjeet - Aur bhai sahab kaise hain?
Raj - hum theek hain. aap bhi kushal hain na. Ab zara Ashish ko bulaaiye na, Sagai kar lete hain.
Meera - Ji zaroor. Shashank, jao apne bhaiyya ko bulakar lao.
Mihika, beta rasm ke liye saara saaman lekar aao.
Mihika - Ji maa.
and then shobha comes in.
Shobha - Namaste.
( and touches Sumitra n Raj's feet )
Raj and sumitra - Khush raho.
( Dev is staring at her with his mouth open. Shobha looks at him and instantly their eyes meet. Shobha blushes a bit )
Shobha - Main aap logon ke liye sharbat lekar aati hoon.
( Ashish is sitting in his room and is thinking that the guests have come with the marriage proposal for Shobha )
Shashank - Bhaiyya, aaiye aapko bula rahe hain.
Ashish - Mujhe? Haan chal main aata hoon.
He comes out into the hall. He feels a little absurd when everyone looks at him at once. He starts thinking y the girl ( Pooja ) is dressed in traditional clothes coz he is still unaware that it is his engagement.
Ashish - Namaste.
Everyone - Namaste beta.
Sumitra - Ab sagai ki rasm shuru karen?
Meera - Ji ji. Ashish beta aao Pooja ke paas aakar baitho.
Ashish - Kya? main? kyun? sagai to shobha ki hai na?
( everyone stares at him like he is mad. Ashish is shell shocked when he hears that it is his engagement. )
Ashish - Maa????????? Ye sab kya hai? Kya maine kabhi aapse kahan ki mujhe doosri shaadi karni hai? nahi na, to ye tamasha kyon?
Meera - ( embarrassed ) Ashish ye kya tamasha hai beta?! chalo rasm shuru karte hain.
Ashish - Maa par..
Raj - Ye sab kya hai Meeraji. Kya ye sagai hone bhi vaali hai ki nahi? agar beta shaadi ke liye raaji nahi tha, to hame bulaaya kyon?
Meera - Nahi nahi aaisa kuch nahi hai. Aap shaant ho jaaiye. Ye sagai hokar rahegi. ( to Ashish ) Ashish, rasm shuru karo. Karo!!
Ashish was heart broken...
Ashish - Ji...
( and then after the engagement when they went back home, Ashish walked straight into his room and shut the door with a bang )
Mihika - Bhaiyya, darwaza kholiye. Dekhiye hum sab ne ye aapke acche ke liye kiya tha.
Ashish - Mihika, tum to meri bahan jaisi ho na, to tumne aaise kaise hone diya?
Mihika - ( to meera ) Ab to bas Kanika di hi inhe samjhaa sakti hain.
Meera - to Kanika ko phone lagao.
Mihika - Ji maa.
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In Shekhavat Rajbhavan -
Sooraj - Dhara, aap kahan hain, dekhiye hum aapke liye kya laye hain?
Dhara - Hi dad! Bataiye kya laaye hain aap!??
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CHAP 3 done! kaisa laga? plz comment.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#75
wow yaar aisa lagta hain ke koi serial dekh rahe hain,very nice honey,keep it up.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#76
@ bhoomi :
small update, but it was nice😊..ashish ko agar pata hota ki uski sagai hone wala hai to shayad woh uss waqt ghar mein hi nahi rehta !!
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Posted: 13 years ago
#77
nice update Bhoomi!! small but too good one.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#78
Awesome update ! :D
Short and sweet...:D
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Posted: 13 years ago
#79
Aaj mera 1st n most tough exam paper khatam hua... to mostly i'll updt 2de. Thnx fr d comments guys!
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Posted: 13 years ago
#80

Here's an addition 2 d CS -

Priyanka Singh ( one of d antagonists )
She is a model in search of a career in Jaipur. Much abt her will unveil later. but 1 thing ,she will b a nuisance for Shobha.

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