The Devil's Trap - Chandra Nandini SS Story - Completed

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Lifez_Beautiful

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Posted: 8 years ago

#91

Res dear... Will catch up all the chappies I missed n then unres! 😃

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alanta

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Posted: 8 years ago

#92

Sangeetha, Really appreciate for the hardwork and preparations you put in with each update and the amount of research u do is evident in the detailing.

This Chanakya and Chandra are really clever like the real ones.

Thank you for the update. Waiting for the next.

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Shailaja

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Posted: 8 years ago

#93

Absolutely brilliant military and diplomatic maneuver. But this is how I would have expected the real Chandragupt and Chanakya to deal with the situation.

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AshtaVasus

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Posted: 8 years ago

#94

Originally posted by: alanta
Sangeetha, Really appreciate for the hardwork and preparations you put in with each update and the amount of research u do is evident in the detailing.
This Chanakya and Chandra are really clever like the real ones.
Thank you for the update. Waiting for the next.

Thank you Alanta. Glad you liked it.

I dint like the way Chandra closed Apama's chapter just in a day, in the Show.

And it's all the more scary when she made Arnold's " I'll be back " statement to Helena. Emotional atyachar is not over yet.

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AshtaVasus

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Posted: 8 years ago

#95

Originally posted by: shailusri1983
Absolutely brilliant military and diplomatic maneuver. But this is how I would have expected the real Chandragupt and Chanakya to deal with the situation.

Alas, the Show made Nandini to cry for 1.5 yrs but allowed Apama to go scot-free today. Just like that. No torture. Nothing. And Chandra dint doubt Helena an inch. . He hasn't learnt from his mistakes at all.

And no sight of Chanakya advicing Chandra of such an important decision. I can't believe that Chandra took a decision based on Meggu suggestions. Disappointed.

But I have a different plan for Apama in this FF.

Edited by rajatshweta - 8 years ago

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Bronze.

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Posted: 8 years ago

#96

Hey,

Yet another great chapter.. the first part with selecucs was nice read, it was interesting to see how his mind works.

The second flashback part was excellent.. you do full justice to the historical Chandragupt & chanakya. Man, they are smart.

Keep updating.

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AshtaVasus

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Posted: 8 years ago

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AshtaVasus

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Posted: 8 years ago

#98

Originally posted by: Bronze.
Hey,
Yet another great chapter.. the first part with selecucs was nice read, it was interesting to see how his mind works.
The second flashback part was excellent.. you do full justice to the historical Chandragupt & chanakya. Man, they are smart.
Keep updating.

Neetu 🤗

Thank You ...

Am glad that you liked it.

Seleucus thoughts were not covered in the Show. But, the arrogance of both the ladies, is due to his army strength only. So, I thought he should get due credit in the Story - his thoughts, his problems, his love towards his Family, his decision as a General, his dilemma etc.

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alanta

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Posted: 8 years ago

#99

Sangeetha, now this was indeed a brilliant one👏
I so wanted something like this to happen in the show, but nothing of that sort happened.

Now you numbered each and every crime Apama committed and every single one of them got proper disclosure and everything got accounted with ample eye witnesses and evidence, now this is called a perfect trial.

In the show Apama's political conspiracy is yet to be accounted for which all this CC drama began, now its almost like they have forgotten about it and the Roopa track didnt get proper closure, and Apama just escaped . This was injustice from the show's POV.

Happy that you addressed every loose ends regarding Apama and you ensured that Apama is truly got trapped. Guess in the show they rushed to begin Chandra repentance track.

Thank you for the update Sangeetha.. Waiting for the next. All your updates are really nice but this is my favorite 😳

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HistoryGeek

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Posted: 8 years ago

#100

The kind of research and historical details you have put into this chapter is mind blowing!! The real intellectual charisma of both Chanakya and Chandragupta shine though. Selucus' reaction was justified here, how many time will he keep making trips to India with his entire army!

I agree when you said the show shouldn't have let Apama get off like that, this easily And Helena pe to aanch bhi nahi aayi.

Lovely chapter, thoroughly enjoyed it!!!

So sorry for being late!