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Posted: 8 years ago
#81

Originally posted by: banuprasa

Dear,


Complete update shows how much we are angry towards those greek gang...

Wonderful update... 👏👏👏




Thank You Banu... 🤗

Even I can't wait to send Apama back to Greece.
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Posted: 8 years ago
#82

Originally posted by: rajatshweta


But please bear with me. The further chapters are also going to be a bit lengthy only... 😕


Bring it on, I love long chapters 😃😃
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Arey waah, new update! Yay 🥳

Chandra's treatment for Helena gave me tremendous antarik satisfaction THAT'S her place, that's what she deserves, damn I am waiting for her to go down like that in the show as well!!

Your entire conception of the C&C conspiracy against the Gator Greeks is really, really innovative. Especially the way you interlaced the aspect of ethnography being THE major reason for Megasthenes' stay in India. Very crafty of Chandra and Chanakya 👏

But ye Mega to ekdam fruit & nut nikla re 😆 I was laughing at the way he desperately wanted his royal lifestyle despite being in the middle of some 'royal' soup at the moment! #IncredibleAudacity 😆

Bichara, so jittery about his writing skills! He actually should have been a court jester, except he couldn't have been that either, because comedy timing ki to lag jati, the man is sooo slow 🐷😆

Another splendid chapter this was Sangeeta, enjoyed it to the core!!
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Posted: 8 years ago
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By the way, fantastic lines, these:

All these days he was cheating Indians. Now he will have to cheat Greeks. And he is getting paid in gold and a life of comfort - for doing nothing. Why Not ?

Megasthenes is one helluva thali ka baingan... except, this will prove to be one of his BEST qualities in favour of C&C and blast-in-the-face against Apama and Helena. Yay
Edited by aquameera - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#85

You cannot call it an affair..she truly loved him..but he ditched her..you bring that Maggu in that room..really..really he annoys me much..what is brawn(physical strength?)

No Chandra won't do the act of pulling a woman's hair.

To helana

.nallaa..nallaa kudu..appathaa enga aaththiram adangum

Megasthenes was a Greek historian who came to India in the fourth century B.C. as a representative or ambassador of Seleucus Nicator. He lived in the court of Chandragupta Maurya for about five years (302-298 B.C.)

In CN ,Maggu is shown awfully as a despicable man..but you have redeemed him and have given him the status ,but the method is not lawful

Again I say..your flow of language is exemplary

Edited by siva06 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: siva06

You cannot call it an affair..she truly loved him..but he ditched her..you bring that Maggu in that room..really..really he annoys me much..what is brawn(physical strength?)

No Chandra won't do the act of pulling a woman's hair.


He used to be like this with Nandini - pushing her to the floor (recent episodes), pulling her by the shoulder and holding the back of her head by his hand (prior to her disrobing scene, post dhananand death in piplivan), dragging her by the hand and verbal hurts ( a lot of episodes)...

I thought it would be a poetic justice if he imparts the same behaviour to his other wife too - who was the cause of all his rude behaviour with Nandini.

I said Holding her hair - meaning the back of her head - I dint say Pulling her hair.


To helana

.nallaa..nallaa kudu..appathaa enga aaththiram adangum

😆

Megasthenes was a Greek historian who came to India in the fourth century B.C. as a representative or ambassador of Seleucus Nicator. He lived in the court of Chandragupta Maurya for about five years (302-298 B.C.)

In CN ,Maggu is shown awfully as a despicable man..but you have redeemed him and have given him the status ,but the method is not lawful


You are right. Meggu was an ambassador. He was not a Politician and Prime Minister as shown in the Show.

Going with the Show, I made Meggu's fictional profession into a further fictional one - a court jester (my vadivelu) - "naanum, evlo neram dhan valikkaadha madhiriye nadikkaradhu" ...


Again I say..your flow of language is exemplary

Girl, I stick to simple English. I don't have the acumen for flavoury choice of words like you, Aishwarya, Nikki, Shailu and a lot others I see in this forum. You guys rock your Posts with such beautiful pick of words that makes me go Awww ...now why dint I think of that ??

Edited by rajatshweta - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: aquameera

Arey waah, new update! Yay 🥳


Chandra's treatment for Helena gave me tremendous antarik satisfaction THAT'S her place, that's what she deserves, damn I am waiting for her to go down like that in the show as well!!

Well, Nandini has been Chandu's punchbag . He has been ill-treating her for so long. I wanted Helena to be at the receiving end, for a change. She wants Chandu all for herself, right? Then she should be ready to bear his dark side as well... 😉

Your entire conception of the C&C conspiracy against the Gator Greeks is really, really innovative. Especially the way you interlaced the aspect of ethnography being THE major reason for Megasthenes' stay in India. Very crafty of Chandra and Chanakya 👏

Thank You Darling 😛

But ye Mega to ekdam fruit & nut nikla re 😆 I was laughing at the way he desperately wanted his royal lifestyle despite being in the middle of some 'royal' soup at the moment! #IncredibleAudacity 😆

That's called Greed, girl. First, he wants his life to be spared - that too treason committed against the King and... caught by the King himself. Then, when he gets that, he wants his Royal Lifestyle also to continue . How cheeky is that ?
Both C&C uses this Greed to their benefit, to avert the war and turn the conspirators against themselves.


Bechara, so jittery about his writing skills! He actually should have been a court jester, except he couldn't have been that either, because comedy timing ki to lag jati, the man is sooo slow 🐷😆

One look at the actor who is playing this Meggu role , and we know that he doesn't actually fit into any position ... 😉
He is a typical example of a lot of guys in the corporate world - has top position, knows nothing, but is a relative to someone up the ladder ... I had a tough time fitting him into the job of his historical likes ... 😃


Another splendid chapter this was Sangeeta, enjoyed it to the core!!
Thank You Darling 😛


By the way, fantastic lines, these:

All these days he was cheating Indians. Now he will have to cheat Greeks. And he is getting paid in gold and a life of comfort - for doing nothing. Why Not ?

Megasthenes is one helluva thali ka baingan... except, this will prove to be one of his BEST qualities in favour of C&C and blast-in-the-face against Apama and Helena. Yay


Edited by rajatshweta - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#88
Thoroughly enjoyed the chapter. Down with an eye allergy so not making a big comment. My latest FF chapter is also ready. It does need a bit of editing and I have been unable to do it. Maybe I'll post it after one or two days when they feel better.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: shailusri1983

Thoroughly enjoyed the chapter. Down with an eye allergy so not making a big comment. My latest FF chapter is also ready. It does need a bit of editing and I have been unable to do it. Maybe I'll post it after one or two days when they feel better.



You have always been the first person to comment on my story. This time when you remained silent for 2 days after I posted the latest chapter, I sensed something must be wrong. I thought its something to do with your naughty son, but dint expect you to fall ill.

A bad time for our IF writers I guess. Even Avantika is having some family emergency. You are down with eye allergy. And Lalli is being trolled and threatened by some diehard RT fan, for posting a critic comment about the show,

Please don't worry about the stories dear. We write stories out of passion. And its for free reading to the viewers. Its not worth wasting your health over. Please take care of your eyes. Comment only when you are well. I will wait.
Edited by rajatshweta - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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