Coming home: A Chandini OS!! Thank you note on pg 3 - Page 3

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: aishwish

Shubha and krithika

A big thank you to you two 🤗

If not for you two I would have never written this OS...it was you two who kept on telling me that I can write...apart from the usual banter at AT there has not been a single serious post of mine which wasn't praised by you two...the confidence you gals showed in me is the prime reason I could write. guess what just like chandu even I need push😆 ab bhugatna bhi tum dono...be prepared there will be more to come😆

what have I done to have you girls and what would I do without you two.

I hope I have conveyed my gratitude towards you two properly.

Love!!




Arre yaar ..ye kya tha😲
tera realwa talentwa ke liye ..hume tanku kyun ?😆
fokat mein apun logo ko credit de kar pahmous kar rahi hai 😆
lekin... tu na tension na le ...hum pull n push strategist hai 😉
tere ko chinkara supply karte rahenge ..so that tu na humko yummy wala OS deti rahe😉 hum selfish pyaasi pretaatmas 😉😆😆

but sach mein Aish ...tere andhar ek dum mast writer hai⭐️ and tere main knowledge b hai yaar be it any matter and we have seen this . Issi liye abh na zyada nautanki na kar .. plz ..continue kar...apna knowledge , writing skills ka pradarshan kar aur hume padne ka sowbhagya do😉

Humari apeksha tumse kuch zyada hi hai 🤗
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: shubhaR




Arre yaar ..ye kya tha😲
tera realwa talentwa ke liye ..hume tanku kyun ?😆
fokat mein apun logo ko credit de kar pahmous kar rahi hai 😆
lekin... tu na tension na le ...hum pull n push strategist hai 😉
tere ko chinkara supply karte rahenge ..so that tu na humko yummy wala OS deti rahe😉 hum selfish pyaasi pretaatmas 😉😆😆

but sach mein Aish ...tere andhar ek dum mast writer hai⭐️ and tere main knowledge b hai yaar be it any matter and we have seen this . Issi liye abh na zyada nautanki na kar .. plz ..continue kar...apna knowledge , writing skills ka pradarshan kar aur hume padne ka sowbhagya do😉

Humari apeksha tumse kuch zyada hi hai 🤗


DITTO ! *copy paste*😆
Shubha inspiration from u r parde main ...song 😆

Aish ... parde main dont keep u r talent bring it out 😉
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Posted: 8 years ago
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aishu bache - Congrats .
But what i am going to write may not be liked by you.

I think you have attempted something light and fun supported by a supposedly thirsty CGM.

Somehow to me the OS did not strike a chord as you did not touch upon the innocence, purity and charm of the old CN Jodi. I missed the central theme or knot.

Knowing you, I know you are capable of writing much better and touching stuff.

If you just wanted a very light one , this is okay. But give one more try with some theme. ( OS can be small but theme has to strike the reader).

Liked reading this one too. 😃
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: jayaks02

aishu bache - Congrats .

But what i am going to write may not be liked by you.

I think you have attempted something light and fun supported by a supposedly thirsty CGM.

Somehow to me the OS did not strike a chord as you did not touch upon the innocence, purity and charm of the old CN Jodi. I missed the central theme or knot.

Knowing you, I know you are capable of writing much better and touching stuff.

If you just wanted a very light one , this is okay. But give one more try with some theme. ( OS can be small but theme has to strike the reader).

Liked reading this one too. 😃


Jaya 🤗 thanks a lot!!

Now I didn't wanted a "thirsty CGM" rather was attempting to portray a phase of his life where finally with his love beside him, after shedding the baggage of his past life, he is having a taste of being "normal" while doing some really regular stuff and seeking pleasure out of it...which I can see I have completely failed to convey to you...so I have noted all your points and I'll try my level best to incorporate them in my coming works as in whatever is possible with my limited literary skills.

About trusting my capabilities of writing "much better and touching stuff" ...first of all thank you for putting so much of faith in me, but jaya, I think I will take a lot as in A LOT of time to reach up to your expectations...meanwhile making you all endure such disasters 😆

Thanks a lot for your comments, contrary to your belief I liked it and liked it very much, it inspires me to push my limits 😳

Edited by aishwish - 8 years ago

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