Coming home: A Chandini OS!! Thank you note on pg 3

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Do naina aur ek kahaani

Thoda sa baadal thoda sa paani aur...ek kahani.

Her musical voice hit the final low note before ending the lullaby ...bindusaar must have been asleep . Who wouldn't? she has an enchanting voice with an equally soothing effect. Yes who wouldn't but him would sleep. Chandragupta grinned mischievously , tonight was not the night to sleep. Finally he would have nandini all for himself. He mentally chided himself for being jealous from his own son but couldn't help. His son's growing obsession for his choti maa was making things really inconvenient for him to say the least. He would not leave nandini for a moment to begin with and if he did by any chance he would make sure nobody else gets access to his mother and definitely not his father. Man he still remembers the tantrum the boy threw after waking up and finding his father's head resting on his mother's lap; off lately his son's favorite spot. Their battles were epic and one sided with he always loosing and sulking.

Nandini teases the real culprit is his genes but wasn't he always reasonable as in he has always shared nandini with all the ladies of the palace who it seems have no work other than hovering besides her. Why does everyone has to be gushing over his wife so obsessedly when he the rightful person was there to do the honors. But tonight he would compensate and compensate all. With a sly grin he pushed the door of his room, their room

Entering the room he saw bindusaar sleeping peacefully in his cot clutching the small toy flute made in gold, nowadays his favorite toy. When awake he will blow in it and produce sounds which would deafen an already deaf . Shaking his head while smiling he searched for her. His eyes trailed to the dressing mirror...there she was dressed in a light blue outfit removing the last pieces of her jewelries .He leaned at the door frame watching his wife. Good! he would be spared from the tedious fidgety task of removing those complicated pieces ,why does she has to wear them anyway... she was one of those rare beauties who would look all the way more alluring without all those fineries .So pure, so innocent, like a dew drop but then he liked the fact that she in her complete entrancing form is exclusively for him and only him.

Only he has the right to sip in the intoxicant that those dark orbs have to offer, to taste the delicacies her full luscious lips have to serve and keep close her petite frame with all her curves snuggling perfectly into his frame. Putting a trail to his maverick thoughts about his very own wife Chandragupta chided himself once again .Tonight was not the night to be wasted on thoughts it was a night for actions. She was done removing all her jewels ... her dupatta was carelessly dangling on one side of her shoulder giving him a clear view of the otherwise hidden assets ...Lord she was looking dangerously tempting.Her hair now undone were flying carelessly wild and untamed with wind rustling and whispering through them making him jealous only he has the right to do that...he groaned inwardly... Will this woman ever realise the kind of effect she has on him.

She looked through the mirror meeting his gaze, passed him a coy smile... enough for him to take the cue. Not leaving her gaze for a moment he strode towards her ...she turned around looking at him playfully taking a step back while he kept moving forward with each step she took back. Both of them knew where it was going...finally she collided with the wall . Towering his frame over her he bent down to inhale the fragrance of his woman ...the fragrance which drives him insane ...ruffling her hairs with his hands ...he blew in her ears softly before nuzzling her neck making her grasp his arms ...knowing that was her soft spot he continued the torture making her moan in pleasure. Thoroughly enjoying the effect he was having he ran his fingers on the length of her arms as she pressed herself deeper into his chest. Engulfing her into his embrace Chandra made her look at him...and was once again drowned into those dark deep pair of orbs which were looking back at him with all the innocence in the world.Her luscious lips were tempting him dangerously compelling him to cover the inches between and he was precisely doing the same . WHEN...

Oh! when a shrill cry broke the spell making the couple throw horrifying glance at the source of the noise . Baby bindu was awake and by this time was holding the railing of his cot trying to stand , calling for his mother as his mellow cries grew to indignant ones .

Throwing his hands up in frustration Chandragupta resigned and watched his wife running to tend their son,cradling and soothing him. Letting out an exasperated sigh he sat on the dressing chair hoping baby bindu to once again drift into sleep.

Hours later...

The king and queen watched their son crawling on the bed with his toys spread around. The prince had no plans to sleep... not tonight at least. He cooed in glee playing a rattle and turned around to show it to his parents with his tooth less grin ...looking at his mother he threw the toy and sprang towards her on his fours laughing and cooing as she held him close to her bosom

Chandragupta watched with content ... his thoughts trailing back to his gurukul days.

His friend mohan has asked " Chandra tumne kabhi koi swapan dekha hai ( Have you dreamt ever)

"ye kaisa prashna hai...har manushya swapan dekhta ha jab woh raatri kaal mein nidra mein hota hai? he has asked frowning (translation: what kind of a question is this...each one of us dream while we sleep). His friend was not someone who would ask frivolous questions just for the sake of it.

" Arey nahin mitra main un swapanon ki baat nahin kar raha main unn swapanon ke Vishay mein baat kar raha hoon jo hum jaagte hue dekhte hain jo hume sone hi nahin dete ( no my friend not those usual dreams I'm talking about those which we see while awake which doesn't let us sleep)

"Achcha toh aisa kaho na ...mera swapan hai ki main apne acharya ki har apeksha par khara utroon, unke akhand bharat ke lakshya mein apna ek mahatvapoorna yogdaan doon (oh! You mean those dreams ...okay so mine is to full fill every expectation that acharya has from me and take an active part in fulfilling his aim of akhand bharat) said Chandra with a blazing confidence and loyal submission on his face.

" Tum ab bhi nahin samjhe , ye tumhara lakshaya hai jaise acharya ka hai akhand bharat...main uss swapan ki baat kar raha hoon jinke bare main hume pata hota hai ki woh kabhi poore nahin honge tab bhi hum unhe dekhte hain...hume pata hota hai ki woh kabhi vastavik nahin honge tab bhi hum jab prathana karte hain tab ek baar unn ke bare mein avashya sochte hain (you still don't understand ...this is your aim just like acharya has akhand bharat. I meant those dreams which we know will never full fill still we dream about them...we know they will never turn into reality but still every time when we bow down to pray we couldn't help but remember those dreams in our prayers)

"yeh Kya vichitra baatein kar rahe ho tum aaj ...chodo ye sab mujhe jaane do paath ka abhyaas karne ka samay ho gaya hai (what rubbish are you upto today...now let me go it's time to do the lessons)

Saying so Chandragupta had taken an abrupt turn lest his friend comes to know that he too dreamt, dreamt when he was clearly not allowed to do so. Acharya has not brought him to let him dream still he dreamt ...OF HOME.

Ba ba ba...his thoughts were broken by his son's blabber he is learning to speak and trying his hands feverishly into it. Scooped into nandini's arm he was now throwing his hand towards him indicating his desire to be held by his father . Obliging his son's wish (as if the doting father hadn't ever) he took him into his arms. Bindu cooed into the crook of his neck occasionally looking up and clapping his hands. Taking a smiling nandini into his another arm he smiled blissfully.

Chandragupta maurya was finally home


Okay guys this is my first attempt at writing...I don't know how it has shaped up good bad worse...this whole idea came to my mind ...was gushing with such force that I couldn't help but pen it down cheating my study regime. So that was it...if you read it and happen to like it by any chance do press a "LIKE" that would mean a lot for a scribbler like me and by any chance I'm fortunate enough to get a comment from your side...criticism sar aakhon pe😳

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Krithzz thumbnail
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Posted: 8 years ago
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👏👏👏 ⭐️ ...
I have no words to say Aish ...its just so so beautiful ya . Its like a beautiful dream

loved it .❤️ imagined also each and every scene ..it was awww...😳


Faltu CVs will never ever give such such masterpiece ...even to think is waste of time 😆

but you did it for us ...hat a beautiful write up Aish🤗

Those Gurkul days fb ..Chandra's hidden desire 👏⭐️ Moments with ChaNdiSara 😳⭐️ beautiful...beautiful...beautiful...👏⭐️

Thank you for giving us this Aish🤗Love you ya 🤗

Give us some more dose plz...🤗.😉we are one selfish souls na 😆


Edited by krithikaRao - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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I am in dreams now... this was like dreamy ...
So very beautiful Aish, please write more 😳😳
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Beautiful and ethereal like a beautiful piece of poetry.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Achha!! this is the reason you went underground?😆 to re-emerge with this piece of creativity??😃

Honestly, i don't get much time so can't follow the wonderful FFs written by other members regularly, but because this is a one shot so i gave it a shot😉

I like how you built up the scene, it was not rushed, with all the little details of gazing eyes, jewelleries and all.😳

Portrayal of CGM seems somewhat more honest and real than the 'sanskari mahaanta' 😡shown in TV channels. Like, at point of the expected interruption created by baby Bindu, CGM doesn't hide his frustration under veiled parental love. This is very natural trait particularly for a man. also his little battle of jealousy with dear son.😊

In following scene to interruption, when he starts imagining again, the twist, if I may say so, is unusual in good way (his student days flash back). Typical cliched scene would have been getting carried away admiring his wife's maternal excellence🤢

Overall, in one shot you covered CGM's love life, fatherly instincts, alpha male qualities of a King, a slice of past as a student in ashram, his life's aim, and heavy impression/influence of his Guru. But also his hidden desires and dreams. Not easy to encapsulate so many aspects in a single piece. Good Job!👏👏

The final/last line takes away all accolades- Chandragupta Maurya was finally home - unabashedly I can say I loved it!😊😃👏

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Posted: 8 years ago
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mere ko koi shock ,surprise nahi laga ye os dekh kar ...mere ko pura vishwas tha ..hai apne behna ke talentwa per😎
O behna o behna
tere OS ka ka kya kehna 😆⭐️👏

aish yaar sach mein ..asia lag raha hai jaise...

aao tumhe chand pe le jaye
pyaar bhare sapne sajaye
chota sa bangala banaye

pyaar ki hai duniya
door aasmaan pe
milke na bechede
koi waha pe
aishi bhi ek dagar hai
aisa bhi ek nagar hai

aao tumhe chand pe je laye

ek dum dreamy hai yaar

mano ek ek scene mere aankhon ke samne chal raha tha yaar ⭐️👏

aish ..mere ko pata tha ..tu badiya writer hai ... iss baar mein zyada tarif sharif nahi karungi ..aakir sinskar to hum mein same hai na 😆😆

jaisa choti krithi ne bola ... chandisara scenes were so dreamy yaar ...humara chota sa family ...aur koi nahi type

aur woh Gurkul wala fb 👏 chandu ka chupa hua desire..mano dabake rakha tha ... andeka kar raha tha jise...aaj uske samne ..reality banke khade hai OF HOME

aur ending toh ..ek dum picture perfect yaar ek dum chandinish

nazar na lage

and titile suits ek dum perfectly yaar ⭐️👏

aur even my repeating choti's words ... hum pyaase aatmas ko aur chahiye yaar

aish ...thanks for this yummy wala treat 🤗 ek dum super se uper wala mast write up tha yaar ⭐️👏

tere liye prize hai ...5 mints zyada time in snan kaksh 😉😆

mere ko pata hai 5 mints mein b tu bahut chamatkar kar legi 😆😆


(b/w serious kouestion 🤪...chandra says ...mera swapan hai ki main apne acharya ki har apeksha par khara utroon, unke akhand bharat ke lakshya mein apna ek mahatvapoorna yogdaan doon

ye apeksha souten se humare liye koi danger toh nahi hai na ? 🤣😉 kyun ki chandra is saying apeksha par khara utroon 🤪🤣 akhand bharat wala yogdaan doon 🤣🤪)

it was unintentionally funny Aish 🤣 pata nahi chandra aur acharaya ka apeksha😉 matbal expectations,requirements kya hai for akhand bharat 🤣


Edited by shubhaR - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Aish it was just mesmerizing yaar.. wonderful 👏👏👏
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Shubha🤣 your gutter mind activated 🤣
Am sure Aish ...might have never imagined you will have this Apeksha from her Apeksha 🤣
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: krithikaRao

Shubha🤣 your gutter mind activated 🤣

Am sure Aish ...might have never imagined you will have this Apeksha from her Apeksha 🤣


you bet not even in my wildest dreams I imagined this APEKSHA🤣 though I had full apeksha from this girl that she would definetly do apeksha ki garima ka antim sanskaar🤣
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: aishwish


you bet not even in my wildest dreams I imagined this APEKSHA🤣 though I had full apeksha from this girl that she would definetly do apeksha ki garima ka antim sanskaar🤣


yaar...maine kya kiya😉😆 ? bas apna innocent wala apeksha vyakt kiya 🤪😆😆




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