CN SS: ~REVENGE~ part 11 updated at page 31 - Page 9

Originally posted by: jayaks02

Chudail is like my compliment to you 😆. If you do not like, I will stick with stuti devil.

Are you only 19 ? You write exceedingly well the Fiction stories which once again tells me that Age has nothing to do with talent.

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Originally posted by: Shinning_Stuti

I will retain the portions i loved the most .

PART 4:::

. "I am sorry Helena that I can't teach you these tactics. For these are not any standard war tactics learnt from my shastraguru; all these moves that grab your eyeballs are the result of my own experiments with my body and my sword; It is all because of my own long practice that I almost overcome the hurdle of gravity while fighting, and my body becomes a weightless feather which can fly in sky. It is not so easy Maharani! "

You are creating a very ABLE Sishya of Chankya through all this. Initial days of serial was like this. I will not make any more reference but as the love story was theme, they have made him a lover boy. I love reading about his abilities. They create a magic of invincible CG.

The entire conversation was so good but I am picking up what appealed to me the most . They will have something to do with CG as I am his PICHI( die hard fan)

"Beauty- especially a woman's beauty is not my cup of tea."Chandra joined in her laughter while defending her attack perfectly. He vaulted back and took his position splashing his sword against the air. "Do you think beauty really has any value at all?"

Hmmm - Will come back after 10 chapers and see his status . 10 or it will take more ?

Italics one summarizes his upbringing well.

"And women know to utilize that weapon very well!" Chandra became distracted for a moment. He remembered that night with Nandini- her moves, her smile, her alluring glare which turned into brand of fire all of a sudden in viciousness... How the beautiful princess had planned almost perfectly to gift him death, with the weapon of her beauty! None knows, but he cannot hide from himself, that he could not spend a single lone moment after that night when those beautiful, fiery and vicious eyes did not flash in his memory...His heart suddenly filled with a strange antipathy. Why the hell he is unable to forget and ignore that almost negligible event with Nandputri in his eventful life!

In spite of the enmity, there is an attraction from the beginning here. You have been brilliant to bring it up from CH1. Even Nandini gets disturbed by him , his gaze and his eyes. I have loved how you have kept this angle.

The skill of handling any sentimental person, especially if she is a woman, is completely unknown to Chandra. He could not understand what to do other than patting on her palms and giving an assuring smile. "Believe me, you are wonderful. Malayketu is not even worth of your hatred."

Ah !! What a line.

"You are a great warrior Sandracottus, but you are novice in case of emotions." Helena came closer. "There is a very slight difference between love and hatred. Both of them are generated from the same source, so both reflect the same action. Just like one cannot live without thinking about the person he loves the most, at the same time he keeps on thinking about the person he hates the most. And who knows better than me that it takes only a moment to change the love into hatred!"

Helena stole someone's lines. But she is very apt to speak about this . First hand experience. 😆

"And what after that? What after you take your revenge from Malayketu?" Chandra said amusedly. Helena looked at his face shockingly. Perhaps she had never thought about it before...

Chandra's Questions are much more deep. He speaks little compared to his wives but his questions are sharper and have a lot of sub-text. It makes us wander in addition to Helena but she does not seem to get it.

"You are right! Perhaps the fire of revenge is the greatest weapon of a woman; she burns the world along with burning herself!" Chandra seemed unmindful again. His mind again starting roaming in that night with Nandini... The fire of Nandini's eyes... "I don't want your respect Chandragupta, I want revenge!'" How much dreadful that fire of revenge is?

Tst Tst - Chandra is smitten - He has not seen anyone like Nandini till now.

God! Again he is thinking about that woman! Is that spark in her eyes becoming his obsession?

"What the hell she is doing here?" Helena's irritated voice took him back in the real world again. "Who?" Chandra looked near the entrance passage. It was Nandini, as usual guarded by the special safeguards. His brows automatically frowned while a slight smile caught his lips for no reason. "Good Morning Nandputri!" He greeted in a chivalrous courtesy. Nandini bent her head out of respect to the king.

Nice !!!

"I thought this girl is being house-arrested, Maharaj! So either I got it wrong, or I don't know the definition of house-arresting!" Helena taunted cruelly.

Chandra looked at Helena's extremely disgusted face with amused eyes, then directly looked at Nandini's guards with a question. "The Queen-Mother had ordered us to let her meet her family in prison, my lord!" One of the soldiers answered.

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Nandini stayed quiet, her eyes were vacant. Why she is asking for a duel? A stupid idea of showing own superiority? In this case Nandini cannot abide by her. She tried to show that she just does not care of this arrogant yavani! Helena came in front of her and pointed a sword in front of eyes. "Take your position..."

I liked it here - Their confrontations can be very meaningful instead of just J inspired and vampish. I am glad you are giving a peek into Nandini's mind here.

"I don't feel to fight now!" Nandini was ready to get off the place.

"The queen of Magadh is ordering you!" Helena's voice echoed.

Nandini gazed at her face, with pitiful vacant glare! Then she smiled with helpless sarcasm, with a good amount of princely arrogance in eyes. "As you wish, your highness!"

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"Very well done ladies!" Chandra spoke out in a very calm and measured voice. They did not feel his presence, so both of the queens looked at him with surprise. Chandra moved forward, and came in front of Nandini. "I am very much known to Helena's skills; but did not witness your skill from close. I must admit you are a wonderful fighter!"

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"Thank you Your Majesty! I apologise for telling so, but your majesty, you are not completely unknown to my warrior skills..." Nandini smiled respectfully. "Long ago right in this Magadh, in a full moon night, we had a duel sword-fight between us! Maybe his majesty cannot even think that a woman can fight equally with a man; so he preferred to forget that incident." Her smile turned into sarcasm.

This one can instigate Chandra in a clever way too.

"Of course I did not forget Nandputri! How can I forget how you ruined my most important mission that way?" After gazing at her sparkling eyes for a moment Chandragupta sniggered. "That day you're in a disguise of a male, and your sword was talking in the language of a warrior. You're eyes were sparkling the ray of valour and courage that day... not like this recent night, when in a disguise of a eager, seductress bride, by spreading webs of sensuality in the air you were ready to kill a man after drowning him in your intoxication! So maybe that recent picture has overlapped on that image of a warrior princess in my mind!"

Was Helena listening to all this ? No doubt she got the undercurrent chemistry quickly. 😆

Nandini for once felt a jolt of embarrassment from her conscience, as the truth in Chandragupta's words stung inside, making her to look much more inferior in front of him! But since her silence will obviously prove her defeat, she started once again. "What a woman can do your majesty, when she will never get an opportunity to fight against her enemy in a war? Some chivalrous men think fighting with a woman may hamper their virtue of being a khsatriya veer!"

She is the argumentative Magadh. 😆

"So you do not want a fair chance of avenging the death of your family?" Chandragupta's cold smile was unbearable. He effortlessly rotated the blade of the heavy sword in front of her eyes. "As far as I remember, you were eager to fight with me at the day of battle; so eager that you did not hesitate to throw a knife in my back after the time of battle was over, and also awarded me with a title of cowardice, and questioned my masculinity for abiding by the principles of a warrior," the sting of taunt in his speech was clearly piercing Nandini. "So now? You are not ready to try a duel with me? Why? Is it a special quality of Nand dynasty that all of them feel comfortable to attack behind back?"

Nandini placed her eyes on his eyes. They had started flaming in fury again like that night, but as expected that flame of fire could not overpower the icy-cold glare anyway. Chandragupta kept on looking at her, with a slight aversion in his smirking eyes, keeping on swinging his sword effortlessly like a feather. "Come on Nandputri!" He addressed again. With swinging the sword- one... two... three...

If she does not forget what he did to her family for a good time, we are in for a treat. She is going to be that much more difficult to tame.

CLASHHH!

Nandini's fierce sword sprung up like a bolt, and clung with the sword of Chandragupta. Light flashed out from the point of the clash. Chandragupta's eyes beamed in an amused spark of victory. Nandini stepped back for two steps, and her sword swished in the air mercilessly. Chandra observed her movements for a moment with a calculating eye, then vaulted back suddenly as Nandini's sword was going to pierce him. With a slight smile intact on his lips, he casually swayed his sword against her fierce moves. The first miss flamed up Nandini's rage, her sword swung in the air with the spell of annihilation being poured inside the sharp razor ready to slash Chandra in pieces. She could see nothing around her- except blood and blood and blood... the blood of her father and her brothers, whom Chandra has slashed inhumanely in front of her eyes. The memory of his father's savage death again flashed in front of her eyes. The shout of her brothers in the time of their death started ringing in her ears. This man has ruined her world, this man has taken away every happiness from her life, this man has murdered her father and brothers. He has to pay for it. Nandini cannot spare his life when she is alive! He has to pay for the blood of Nand dynasty. Nandini will take revenge for her father! Like an insane warrior Nandini moved her bloodthirsty sword driven by a blind desperate rage from inside. Her eyes were invoking fire, and she was looking like a lively image of destruction. Like a bolt of thunderstorm she was rotating the sword, the merciless powerful strikes were clanging with the sword of the opponent in each step, sparking fire.

But her opponent is a strange person. With every stroke of sword Nandini could understand that Chandra is not at all taking her ferocious attack very seriously, rather he is only defending her sword in a very casual attitude. The light smile was still fixed in his lips, as if he is playing with her anger. He did not counter attack for once, nor did his smile hide for a little moment. But even in his casual defending moves he was so efficient that Nandini could not even overpower him for a little moment despite using all her force against him! The more her rage was getting uncontrollable, the more he was provoking her with his cold smile of appreciation in his lips. Her anger was overpowering her skills and telling upon her energy level unnecessarily and she could feel that, and also she could feel that Chandra is going to win this duel without even striking back for once!

I loved every bit of it. COOL CAT your Chandra. And the fuming Nandini who cannot keep her emotions in check.

"Very good Nandputri! At least you are able to take out some of the drops of my blood!" Chandra's voice was heard. Helena, with a big sigh of relief opened her eyes. Chandra was on the ground while his lips are beaming in smile, Nandini was in front of him, smiling with a usual princely pride. She saw Nandini to stretch her hand to Chandra to help him. "I am sorry that I could not control my sword at the very last moment and it wounded you. I was all ready to attack and just then you threw your sword. I got no chance to control... Else," She pronounced every word very prominently. "Nandini knows how to maintain a warrior's norm. She does not attack on an unarmed warrior!"

"I am happy to see that Nandaputri!" Chandra looked at her eyes intensely. His deep glare again stormed inside her heart. "You are a good warrior, but uncontrollable... like an arrow... You need to have control on you when you are handling a sword."

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"Do you have any question, Nandini?" Chandra asked with a mild smile.

Nandputri has changed to Nandini.

Nandini turned back. "Yes I have; but maybe I know the answer... You were testing me. You were trying to see whether I attack on an unarmed warrior or not. You were examining to what extent I can control my rage and my sword."

"I have grown up playing with risk. I love it. And Helena..." He touched her shoulder. "It is not necessary to show the opponent how much strong you are in the game of revenge; sometimes measuring the opponent is much necessary."

Chankya's Prime Sishya. Proud of your construction. Keep it up.

"I can't understand you Sandracottus!" Helena smiled hopelessly.

"I am not so complex to understand Helena. I am a warrior, and so I know how to tackle which kind of warrior in which way. Anyway... emm" He kept a distance from Helena suddenly noticing the on growing proximity between them. "You need not to worry. This is a very mild scratch. I will take care of it well."

"Why did you suddenly challenge Nandini that way, Chandra?" Helena asked suddenly, quite unmindfully when Chandra was about to leave. "It cannot be only as I did the same?"

Chandra turned back to her. His eyes were unreadable. "You know what Helena, when something- be it anything- any fear, any odd feelings or any memory, disturbs me and distracts me from my work, I prefer to face that directly rather than trying to ignore and forget that. This works much better to concentrate!"

This will come back to haunt him later. 😆 When he cannot fathom what is happening to him after 7-8 chapters, I am so very looking foward.

He left the place. Helena kept on gazing. Suddenly she could feel her heart filling with a dissatisfaction and despair. Whatever be the reason of Chandra's sudden reckless act, she would feel the hidden flow of passion flowing in each and every stroke of their fight. She could feel the strange spark between them when they were talking. Nandini and Chandra are entirely different to each other, but both of them share a strange chemistry. They do have a deep bond of attraction and repulsion together, and when they collides, they inflame fire! The current of electrifying passion between both... Helena could not feel good after realizing this!

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She does not have any feelings for Chandra. Once upon a time Chandra had become her support when she was broken after Malay's rejection; but those days were too short-lived to give birth to any different feelings. Their marriage was entirely political where both of them had own benefits, and Chandra is a very good partner. Because of living together for a good long time and also for having same age they have become friends. But they do not think anything else about each other ever. Neither Chandra has any problem to hear her blabbering on Malayketu nor does Helena feel irritated ever to see Chandra cutting jokes and being proximate with his second wife Durdhara.

OK - But Is Helena becoming something else in future ? 😆

But God knows what happened today! Why something is stinging inside her heart after feeling the passion between Chandra and Nandini despite knowing they have an ultimate enmity?

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Loved the camaradarie between Dur and CG but she is batting too much for Nandini's POV on a single day !!

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The dark cave is completely abandoned from the ray of light coming from outside. Only a torch is burning at one side of the wall of the cave, offering a little visual effect in the darkness. In that semi darkness one can only guess that a dark silhouette of a tall, muscular strong-built man sitting on a hard rock-bed, with his furious glare violently roaming in the dark cave, with a vow of destroying everything before him! He is Mahapadmanand, the former Magadhnaresh, the lost majesty!

"Your Majesty..." A calm and composed voice floated in the air with a man with a torch in his hand appeared. The man is standing on the border of middle-age and old-age, bald headed with a healthy top-knot as a sign of his status and face perfectly blended with the same proportion of wisdom and cunningness, and has a golden sceptre in hand showing his rank in the imperial court. The former king almost rushed to him. "Amatya! Say me, is that shepherd guy killed? When am I going back to my palace?"

Nayanika and Nandini being planned as a pawn to assainate Chandra . So very interesting . The plot is getting thick. Would like to see how CG plays both.

Originally posted by: immaawesome

Hey Stuti (Hope that is your name here),

Read through all the 4 parts today.

I must say what a beautiful continuation of the promo sequences.😛

Though i caught up with the show on HotStar I did see the promos and then was disappointed at the storyline. Anyways, no point in bickering about the path CVs have taken.

Undoubtedly, if a version of this would have been depicted in reality I must say WOW! But alas! its a FF.

Your flair and the portrayal of the scenario to the reticent emotions was beautiful. I like a story where I can imagine the nuances. Here I could. It's an appropriate blend of everything.

Looking forward to part 5 of the parallel universe created here!😆

Regards,

Ray

P.S. - Are you Bengali by any chance? I read a couple of comments while scrolling down the pages.

Originally posted by: jayaks02

Originally posted by: rajatshweta

Hello Stuti,

Read all four Chapters at one shot.

Very very interesting plot. Biting my nails and waiting for further fight episodes and ego clashes between C and N, how he tames her and vice versa.

Cant keep waiting.. pls post more chapters 😊