Hello Shailu.. Back after a long period.. and it did take some time for me to complete the pending chapters..
The story is progressing beautifully.. MUs creating rifts between the couple, who inspite of being in love with each other, is unaware of how to accept the feelings and take their relation to the next level..
Yaa Chandra wasn't too kind with nandni in the previous chapter but his broken heart and disappointment is justified coz he is a male.. and guys are often nadaanđ The women lot is more sensible and matured, mostly, I believe so.. He was in the illusion that nandni has no feelings in her heart for him, so he decided to keep himself away from the girl..
Although chapter 28 is not a VDay wala special romantic chapter but it was too good.. Nandini calling for Chandra while feeling sick was wonderfully written and could be vividly imagined..
I was guessing that she would fall seriously ill and only then Chandra ke dimaag ki batti jalegiđ
Chandra had to come running to her..
this chapter had no such sweet Chandni scene but you have very cleverly set the grounds for some interesting CN realization sequence, making the readers wanting for more and eagerly waiting for you to update the next part..
So when are we getting the next chapter?? No no I dont demand you to hurry up.. please take your time and write down.. Its going to be damn interesting and good, I am sure..
Ayega re ayega.. chandra ke dil mein paschatap ayegađ that why was he not beside her when she us so much in need of him..
Loved the update a lot.. and all your previous chapters too..
The snan scene from one of the previous chapters was good.. and the convo between purohit and chankya where the purohit was trying to read and match Chandni's horoscopes was another very interesting part for me.. I know these kinds of predictions were very much in practice among the saints and purohits in those days whereas in recent times people dont have much faith in all these but I will be honest with you.. I really have interest in astrology and wanted to study the subject too but my parents never let me waste my time behind them..đđ anyways in your story everything was so good and dreamy..
Thanks and congrats on having so many readers of the very popular FF of the CN forum "Written By Destiny And Etched In Blood"..
Edited by Titli_KK3148 - 8 years ago
