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Posted: 9 years ago
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SUSHIM AND ARADI MODERN FF

This is a modern ff on SUSHIM and ARADI(his wife). Bear some Stupid changes as well as mistakes 😛as m trying my hands at ff for the first time...if u don't like what m writing plz do tell me i'll try my best to improve it.Suggest a name for sushim-aradi and ashoka-devi.Suggestions for other parts are heartly welcome...LEAVE LOVE😊

Introduction to the Characters :

Sushim

Aradi

Ashoka

Devi

Ahankara

Siamak

Bindusara

Charumitra

Dharma

Helena

Chanakya

Chandragupt...

Part 1 Prince SUSHIM

The Maurya Mansion

Everyone was present at Ash's(Ashoka) room and dadu (Chandragupt) was fiercely looking at Sush (Sushim) after Sush revealed everything about Ash and his fight, his behavior towards ahan (Ahankara) and what all happened in the room few hours ago .

FEW HOURS AGO...

Sush: Servant jaao aur Ahan ko mere paas bhejo.

Ahan comes to him

Ahan: Sushim tumne mujhe kyu bulaya?

Sush: Matlab ab tumhe ye bhi roz roz yaad dilana padega kya ??? arey haa ash ko bhulogi toh apne kaam yaad rakh paogi na!!!

Ash was Coming to him for some talks but stops in between and listens to their whole conversation

Ahan: Nhi Sushim aisa kuch nhi hai.I was busy with my brother as he was crying .

Sush slapped Ahan

Sush: How dare you ? How can you lie so desperately? You r well known tumhara bhai mere saath tha .

Ash Entres the room in anger and hits sush, Sush falls down and ash starts beating him vigoursly . Ahan tries to stop him but he didn't So in order to stop ash , ahan picks the vase kept behind on the table and hits it hard on ash's head which makes him fall unconscious and sush gets shocked.

Sush: Ashoka!!!!!(shouting loudly).

Everyone hears sush's voice and run towards them.

Ahan: Sush m sorry I didn't do this intentionally just to save you I...

Sush: Stop! Just don't utter a single word infront of the family. Mujhe Samajh me nhi aata tum mere liye hamesha trouble kyu create kar deti ho.not just for me but for everyone around you.

Sush takes ash to his room and make him lay on the bed.

Everyone comes to them and ask what happened to Ash.

Dadu: Sushim beta bolo kya hua Ashoka ko?

Sush: Vo Actually ... umm...meri aur ahan ki behes ho rhi thi jise sun kar ash ko gussa aa gya aur vo aa kar mujhe maarne laga aur phir...

Bindusar: Aur phir.Phir kya hua sushim ?

Ahan: Aur phir maine Ashoka ko ...

Sush(cutting Ahan in between):Ahan ne Ashoka ko rokne ki koshish ki par vo nhi ruka toh maine gusse me aakar uske sar par vase se hit kar diya.

Ahan is Shocked to hear Sush's words tries to speak the truth but Sush stops her and takes her away from the room cause he was noticing the fear of hitting ash clearly in Ahan's face and he was worried as she was desperately trying to say what all actually happened . He did not like the idea of family members coming to know the reality

Sush And Ahan were sitting in the lawn silently. Just then Ahan breaks the silence and asks

Ahan: Why were you doing this to me I mean zarurat kya thi uski.

Sush: Zarurat thi. Ash is my little bro and when I learnt about his feelings for you ,I thought to keep myself away from you and him. Maine Usey hamesha sacrifice karte dekha hai but love is not something to sacrifice and especially when it's a girl like you .Mai tumse dur nhi ho paa rha tha isliye socha tumhe khud se dur kar deta hoon. Aur isiliye tumse rudely, cruel behave karne laga.Aur vaise bhi vo tumhe zyada khush rakhta hai mujhse.

Ahan was all in tears.

Sush: Chalo rona dhona band karo Ashoka needs you more than me now.

Ahan: what will Dadu Do with you have you ever imagined Sushim?

Sush: Ye Sab Baad me soch lenge chalo abhi.

FEW HOURS LATER...

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Posted: 9 years ago
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disha 🤗 thanks for writing a ff on sush...
uski wife k saath story ko achhe se dikhana 😉 all the best... 👍🏼
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This was nice and seems really interesting 😉
Sushim- Aradi omg ☺️

Gud job buddy ⭐️
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Wow...it's really interesting 😃
Do continue...😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: _barbie

disha 🤗 thanks for writing a ff on sush...

uski wife k saath story ko achhe se dikhana 😉 all the best... 👍🏼



Thank u buddy...N I'll definately try my best 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: melodica

This was nice and seems really interesting 😉

Sushim- Aradi omg ☺️

Gud job buddy ⭐️


Thanks for liking it dear😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: hetvi.ipkknd

Wow...it's really interesting 😃

Do continue...😊


Thanks...will do it A.S.A.P.
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Wow this is awesome! Can't wait for this!
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FF on Sushim...
This one seems interesting...
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Part 2 I WON'T COME BACK

Sushim Comes to the room with Ahan.

Charu(Charumitra):Sush tell me beta what actually happened it's clearly visible from your face you are lying or hiding something. Batao mujhe kya hua?

Dharma: Haa Haa!! Jaise isse accha aur saccha toh koi hai hi nahi. Mere bte se itni nafrat karte the toh bol dete. Mai ise lekar kahi aur chali jaati.

Ahan: Enough Choti Maa!

Maa, Mai batati hoon sushim aap sab se kya chupa rha hai .

Sush(The way he talks with his buddies): AE tere bheje me ek baar me kuch ghusta hai ki nahi. Aur agar marne ka itna hi shauk hai toh direct ticket katva deta hoon.

(In his thoughts)Saala Khud toh maregi mere ko saath leke maregi.

Chanakya listens sushim's language and says

Chan: Ye kaisi bhasha ka istemal kar rahe ho tum. Sanskar kaha bech kar aaye ho.

Sush(thinking): Bhagwaan!!! Baap Dada Tak thik tha Ye Baap ka Dada kyu gift me de diya hai mujhe aapne.

Chan: Sushim kuch pucha hai maine

Sush: Bade dadu vo main mazak kar rha tha.

Chan: Aise waqt me mazak karna sahi lagta hai tumhe, kyu sahi kaha naa maine. Ghar ke bade bte ho iska naajayas fayada mat uthaao.

Ahan was continuously laughing listening to their conversation.

Chan goes to Ash, his favourite great grandson.

Sush: Badi hasi aa rhi hai...do minute baad rone wali ho tum jab bade dadu mujhe ghar se nikal denge.

Dadu: Sushim Aakhri baar tumse puch rha hoon kya sach me ye sab tum hi ne kiya hai beta?

Sush: Galti se hua dadu par ye galti bhi mujhse hi hui hai...

Bindusara: Baba jab bol rha hai galti se ho gaya toh maaf kar dete hai is baar.Such incidents won't happen ever after atleast from his side N I assure you for that.

Chan: Apne bte ka side lena band karo Bindusara. Isne galti ki hai aur saza bhi ise hi milegi. Aur Chandragupt tumse toh ummed hi nahi kar sakta ki tum ise saza doge. Sushim Sushim Sushim tumhe kya lagta hai...

Sush: Darrr!!!!!!!!!!!!

Chan: Bohot acche lagna bhi chahiye. Aur mere khayal se is baat se aur darna chahiye ki ab se aane wale 6 mahino tak bina is royalty ke tum kese rahoge.

Sush: Kese rehna hai that's my problem. Bas aap ye bata dijiye ki kaha rehna hai. Yaa vo bhi mai khud hi jugaad karu.

Chan: Khud hi dekh lena.

Sush leaves the room immediately followed by Ahan, Charu, Bindu N Chandragupt.

Next Morning.

Sushim was ready to leave the Maurya Mansion. Leaving behind everyone. Not just for 6 months but forever according to his plans.

Charu: Please try to convince baba. Once he'll leave he won't come back.

Dadu: Pareshaan mat ho Charu. Kismat ne iss pagle ke liye kuch bada socha hoga.

Sush: Dadu is right maa! Don't worry I won't leave you alone. Aap teeno ko lene vaapas zaroor aaunga.

Ahan(Thinking loudly): Aur mujhe ???

Sush(Thinking): Chahata toh hoon tumhe saath le jana par ashoka ko tumhari Zarurat hogi.

Ahan made her mind that Sush won't greet her before going. But she was so wrong She is his first love...Before leaving

Sush(Pointing towards Ahan): Mai chalta hoon...Mai Finally Jaa rha hoon...Kisi ko aur kuch bolna hai????

Ahan: Bye Sushim. Hope we'll meet soon.

A sad sush was now all in smiles...She finally greeted him for the last time

HOPE TO SEE U ALL SOON saying so the so called EVIL prince left everything behind. Heading towards the new beginning of his life...No Beginning of his LOVE STORY

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