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BARBlE

@BARBlE

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Posted: 9 years ago

#71

may i say this was the most well written update 😳

would like to receive pm for updates after leap, bcoz we will be leaving...

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Disha_Juyal

@Disha_Juyal

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Posted: 9 years ago

#72

Thank U so much guys but _barbie I was thinking to stop this ff after leap bcoz i can't even imagine someone else in Sumedh's Place so...

DO YOU GUYS WANT ME TO CONTINUE WITH THIS FF?????

PLEASE RESPOND I WILL GO WITH MAJORITY...

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BARBlE

@BARBlE

Stunner

Posted: 9 years ago

#73

Originally posted by: Disha_Juyal
Thank U so much guys but _barbie I was thinking to stop this ff after leap bcoz i can't even imagine someone else in Sumedh's Place so...
DO YOU GUYS WANT ME TO CONTINUE WITH THIS FF?????

PLEASE RESPOND I WILL GO WITH MAJORITY...

even i cant imagine anybody else as sushim

but in ur ff, they are collage students, and their growth will be gradual , Lil chance of them growing up by 5-10 yrs all of a sudden...

show's leap is few weeks away, so i think it wud be better to conclude the story in next 2 months, i understand this is not wat u planned, but its better than keeping it incomplete and leaving midway

Edited by _barbie - 9 years ago

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Ash

@melodica

Stunner

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#74

Cute part. AshVi

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Ash

@melodica

Stunner

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#75

Originally posted by: Disha_Juyal
Thank U so much guys but _barbie I was thinking to stop this ff after leap bcoz i can't even imagine someone else in Sumedh's Place so...
DO YOU GUYS WANT ME TO CONTINUE WITH THIS FF?????

PLEASE RESPOND I WILL GO WITH MAJORITY...

Will love if u would continue even after leap. Let that not affect the pace of the story and u end ur story like u decided, I will continue reading 😃

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Disha_Juyal

@Disha_Juyal

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Posted: 9 years ago

#76

Originally posted by: melodica

Will love if u would continue even after leap. Let that not affect the pace of the story and u end ur story like u decided, I will continue reading 😃

thanks a ton fr ur support melodica I will try my best...😊😊

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Disha_Juyal

@Disha_Juyal

Beginner

Posted: 9 years ago

#77

PART 11

Next morning

Sush was waiting for Aradi outside the college campus and then she arrived.

Sush: Akeli aayi?

Adi: haa.

Sush felt happy like never before although he met several girls who often came alone to meet him but this time he felt something more than good.

Adi: Kyu mujhe kisi ke saath aana chahiye tha kya?

Sush: nahi mere hote hue tu kisi aur ke saath (He thought for a while about what he said and clarified himself) I mean Devi, Vo kahan hai.

Adi: She said vo school attend karke sidhe wahi aayegi. But uski ek condition hai vo akele nahi jaayegi aisa bol rhi thi toh mujhe bhi uske saath padega and vo dono apne me busy ho jaayenge toh mai akeli ho jaaungi toh for that purpose tum bhi mere saath chaloge.

Sush: Yaar ye kya baat hui apne bhai ki date me mai kya karne jaaunga?

Adi: I don'tknow anything. Tum chal rhe bas.

(For the first time Adi spoke like she has ultimate rights on Sush, which she never felt before.)

Sush: Fine, but tab tak hum kya Karen?

Adi: College attend karte hai.

Sush: Tu pagal ho gayi hai...

Adi: I was joking baba. Mujhe thoda kaam hai mai jaa rhi use finish karne you decide what you want to do. Ok Bye see you then.

Sush: mai le jaata hoon naa tujhe tera kaam ho jaaye toh hum saath me caf chalenge.

Adi: Nahi mai chali jaaungi you go and enjoy.

Sush: Arey meri maa enjoy karne ke saath ki zarurat hoti hai aur vo mere paas abhi nhi hai.

Adi: But still mai chali jaaungi.

Sush: ab maan bhi jaa yaar mera bhi time pass ho jaayega.

Adi: Accha fine.

Sush and Adi were together all day long they were enjoying each other's company. They were in their own world. It was evening now. As per the plan they were suppose to meet at 6.