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Posted: 10 years ago
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soo i m really happy , as soo many peoples liking my storu as i m here posting first after coming home 😉------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------

ashok and siamak left the ladies in there gossips , or say staring at devi with hawk eyes .

noor : i don't know maharani dharma , what your son find outs in a sambuddha girl that to a commoner , she is no match to the princess.

charu : noor , u r talking about ashok , every princess hates his presence , its good that he finds someone just like him . they all laughed , as always .

dharma : if only your status , your religion can define a person , then i too should say that noor and asnadhimitra both are from different religions entered our home .

noor : maharani ,don't compare me to a commoner , i m a princess . she groaned in anger.

helena was fed up with them , she came and sat beside asandhimitra with a fake smile .

helena : so tell me , what will u do after coming pataliputr. her question curved a smile on her face .

asandhi : can i request for something ?

helena : yeah say

asandhi : i am always reading about the custom , tradition , and god , goddesses of greek . but its always a lack of info.

helena : ohh ! come to pataliputr i will tell u everything , after a month it will one of our festival , will u help me . someone taking interest in her religion make helena forget her evil plans .

asnadhi : ohh yes yes rajmata , i will take part in that . she said with a puppy like face.

at the dinner , sushim was constantly eyeing devi , making his wife worry , the food was served as the tasty aroma fillled the room , bindusaar smiled and ask bg who make the food.

bg : don't u like the food samrat , asandhimitra cooked it .

bindusaar : its good , bodhiguptji. but i m here to make an announcement , tomorrow following all the rituals and respecting our gurus , it will be the engagement of rajkumar ashok and shkyakumari asandhimira . with his decision dharma , subharasi, ashok , was happy , and helena becoz he got a liking for asandhimitra.

the next morning , asandhimitra was all ready , she was bearing a baby pink dress , with the jewellery her mother gifted her , the daasi was making her hairs , the door was open with a chirpy , bubbly girl enter her room .

girl : hello, oh yeah u don't know me... i m rajkumari suman , bhrata ashok sister i m . she came and hugged her bhabhi .

asandhi : nice to meet u, she hugged her back .

suman : brother send this for u . she handed devi a gajra for her hairs , making her blush .

asandhi : daasi do fast , i have to leave now . suman took asandhimitra towrds the main hall , she know he is staring at her , but doesn't have the courage to look at him.

suman made her sit beside him , soon the ceremony started and now she is betrothed to him .

when everyone was busy , he hold her hand it was cold.

ashok : nervous . she nodded.

dharma : ashok , it is our ritual that after engagement the girl get a name , give her a name .

everyone was staring at him .

ashok : DEVI !!!

bindusaar : why???

ashok : because she treated me when i was injured , get me back to health ,helped me to walk , and ask nothing in return , because of her nature i m giving her this name . like a goddess . his words got tears in her eyes.

asandhimitra then now ashoka's devi looked at him with teary eyes , he is looking back with a smile for a future . but devi didn't know , what future aheads of them . dharma came to them with a serious face ,

dharma : ashok , the jyuotish had said that there is no good muhurat for your wedding , we have to wait .

ashok : but mother , ashok anger is on his par , the chandashok had taken a upper hand on ashok , he got up from his seat , by seeing him there was a dead silent in the room , as everyone know that now no one could handle ashok nor even his parents , suddenly a hand came to held his strong arm , ashok looked at devi's smile ,

devi : we will wait . ashok just smiled and took his seat again , by seeing them bindusaar looked at dharma and just said to himself " my son is changing ".

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Posted: 10 years ago
#92
Beautiful update...
I loved it...
Finally their engagement happened...
That moron Sushim.. better he stay away from Ashoka 's Devi 😉
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Posted: 10 years ago
#93

Originally posted by: musicndance2

Beautiful update...
I loved it...
Finally their engagement Happened...
That moron Sushim.. better he stay away from Ashoka 's Devi 😉


Thanks ... 😛
In real , sushi tried to kill her and in that process got his bones broken by ashoka.
And here to will happen the same 😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
#94
Oohh so sorry for late reply...
I'll read both updates...
And I m enjoying...Beautiful written...
So ashoka gave her name DEVI...
How beautifully he describes her name...I like it...
Evil eye sushim don't stare her like this...She is your bhabhi...
Well jaldi Inn ki shadi karado...bohot sare enemies hai jinki nazar Inn ko kabhi bhi lag sakti hai...

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Posted: 10 years ago
#95
Wow :D
now chandashok changing :D
bt why susim starring at devi? Its nt good, she is going to his bhabi ! Bt wht cn we xpct frm him?!
Waiting fr grand wedding.
Updt soon.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#96
Superb Update Aditi😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
#97

Originally posted by: aditi_angel

soo i m really happy , as soo many peoples liking my storu as i m here posting first after coming home 😉------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------

ashok and siamak left the ladies in there gossips , or say staring at devi with hawk eyes .

noor : i don't know maharani dharma , what your son find outs in a sambuddha girl that to a commoner , she is no match to the princess.

charu : noor , u r talking about ashok , every princess hates his presence , its good that he finds someone just like him . they all laughed , as always .

dharma : if only your status , your religion can define a person , then i too should say that noor and asnadhimitra both are from different religions entered our home .

noor : maharani ,don't compare me to a commoner , i m a princess . she groaned in anger.

helena was fed up with them , she came and sat beside asandhimitra with a fake smile .

helena : so tell me , what will u do after coming pataliputr. her question curved a smile on her face .

asandhi : can i request for something ?

helena : yeah say

asandhi : i am always reading about the custom , tradition , and god , goddesses of greek . but its always a lack of info.

helena : ohh ! come to pataliputr i will tell u everything , after a month it will one of our festival , will u help me . someone taking interest in her religion make helena forget her evil plans .

asnadhi : ohh yes yes rajmata , i will take part in that . she said with a puppy like face.

at the dinner , sushim was constantly eyeing devi , making his wife worry , the food was served as the tasty aroma fillled the room , bindusaar smiled and ask bg who make the food.

bg : don't u like the food samrat , asandhimitra cooked it .

bindusaar : its good , bodhiguptji. but i m here to make an announcement , tomorrow following all the rituals and respecting our gurus , it will be the engagement of rajkumar ashok and shkyakumari asandhimira . with his decision dharma , subharasi, ashok , was happy , and helena becoz he got a liking for asandhimitra.

the next morning , asandhimitra was all ready , she was bearing a baby pink dress , with the jewellery her mother gifted her , the daasi was making her hairs , the door was open with a chirpy , bubbly girl enter her room .

girl : hello, oh yeah u don't know me... i m rajkumari suman , bhrata ashok sister i m . she came and hugged her bhabhi .

asandhi : nice to meet u, she hugged her back .

suman : brother send this for u . she handed devi a gajra for her hairs , making her blush .

asandhi : daasi do fast , i have to leave now . suman took asandhimitra towrds the main hall , she know he is staring at her , but doesn't have the courage to look at him.

suman made her sit beside him , soon the ceremony started and now she is betrothed to him .

when everyone was busy , he hold her hand it was cold.

ashok : nervous . she nodded.

dharma : ashok , it is our ritual that after engagement the girl get a name , give her a name .

everyone was staring at him .

ashok : DEVI !!!

bindusaar : why???

ashok : because she treated me when i was injured , get me back to health ,helped me to walk , and ask nothing in return , because of her nature i m giving her this name . like a goddess . his words got tears in her eyes.

asandhimitra then now ashoka's devi looked at him with teary eyes , he is looking back with a smile for a future . but devi didn't know , what future aheads of them . dharma came to them with a serious face ,

dharma : ashok , the jyuotish had said that there is no good muhurat for your wedding , we have to wait .

ashok : but mother , ashok anger is on his par , the chandashok had taken a upper hand on ashok , he got up from his seat , by seeing him there was a dead silent in the room , as everyone know that now no one could handle ashok nor even his parents , suddenly a hand came to held his strong arm , ashok looked at devi's smile ,

devi : we will wait . ashok just smiled and took his seat again , by seeing them bindusaar looked at dharma and just said to himself " my son is changing ".

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read and review guys...😳


omg yay :D u posted finallly ... posttt more love <3
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Posted: 10 years ago
#98

Originally posted by: riddzykhanmalik

Oohh so sorry for late reply...

I'll read both updates...
And I m enjoying...Beautiful written...
So ashoka gave her name DEVI...
How beautifully he describes her name...I like it...
Evil eye sushim don't stare her like this...She is your bhabhi...
Well jaldi Inn ki shadi karado...bohot sare enemies hai jinki nazar Inn ko kabhi bhi lag sakti hai...

no worries , glad u enjoyed it ...
sushim will get injured for this soon...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#99

Originally posted by: SujaLuvsMayur

Wow :D
now chandashok changing :D
bt why susim starring at devi? Its nt good, she is going to his bhabi ! Bt wht cn we xpct frm him?!
Waiting fr grand wedding.
Updt soon.

thanks..
now, chandashok is smailing
wedding will be soon...😳
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Nonie12345

Superb Update Aditi😊

thanks yr...😊

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