ff ASHOKA & DEVI.......forever yours my love (updated on pg 28) - Page 8

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Posted: 10 years ago
#71

Originally posted by: riddzykhanmalik

Oohh what a great news...

Everyone is happy with ashoka's decision...good
But but raajmata and his brothers...unka koi bharosa nahi...
Let see...amazing update as usual dear...👍🏼😛

thnks yr
the family drama is starting soon...😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
#72
Fantastic update Aditi
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Posted: 10 years ago
#73

Originally posted by: Nonie12345

Fantastic update Aditi

thnks yr 😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
#74
Nice story.
I love samrat ashok & i love 2 knw evrything reltd 2 him :D
i acidnty cm acros ur ff & frnkly speaking frm 1st updt i strt lovin ur ff.
Plz pm me.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#75

Originally posted by: SujaLuvsMayur

Nice story.
I love samrat ashok & i love 2 knw evrything reltd 2 him :D
i acidnty cm acros ur ff & frnkly speaking frm 1st updt i strt lovin ur ff.
Plz pm me.

hey thnks
i too love it
glad u like it
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Posted: 10 years ago
#76
m sorry ...for the late update
but u see sundays are always busy days...
soo, here the update...
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Everyone was eating in silence , but siamak and drupad got a glance of their brother who is angry , shiver run down their spine , as they know his anger.

helena: ashok , are u okay ? do u have any problem with the food.

ashok : who made this ? doesn't they know how to make food . it has no taste.

dharma : but ashok , u ate this food since you was a child , what problem u have today ?

ashok : it isn't tasty like it was in vedi... , he stopped mid sentence , after realizing what he said , his own family member including samrat , his maa , sushim , helena , siamak , his step mom find it hard to control their laughter.

drupad: bharata , the food is tasty , only it is not made of love like it was in vedisanagari . laughing sound echoed in the whole palace , following by drupad getting glance " meet me after dinner " from ashok.

samrat bindusaar planned of going to vedisanagari 2 days after ashok's arrival .

daasi : " maharani , i heard that the princess of vedisanagari is beautiful , that know no in the entire magadha could be compared to her , the whole avanti knows about her kindness , and humble nature .

charumitra yelled : where were u , when i was finding a girl for sushim , why u didn't told me then .

daasi (feared ): becoz , i thought that she is a buddhist , and u wouldn't like the fact about your son's marriage with her.

charumitra slapped her tight on face.

noor : no , a princess more beautiful then me can never enter this palace , and that too ashok's wife , NEVER .

subharasi : jiji , i have packed all the necessary things for wedding , what happened by u look tense .

dharma : look in the garden , ashok is there but his soul is visiting vedisanagari . both laughed at there sons condition .

two days after ,

they arrived at vedisanagari uninformed , bodhigupt and sumitra startled at the sight of maurya family . they welcomed the royal with full courtesy , but it was visible that half of the peoples are here for rejecting there daughter.

samrat and the whole family was amused why seeing such a charming decoration on a normal day .

samrat : bodhigupt , do u have any festival , the palace is looking like a beautiful bride ,

helena : exactly , tell who did it , and i m gonna take her with me , back to pataliputr .

bg : no samrat , its my daughter , she loves to decorate home. smile faded from helena's face , and ashok was beaming with pride looking at his parents.

dharma : where is my daughter ,

bg : she is visiting vihar , i will call her now .

samrat : no need , bodhigupt ji , we have to deal with some political issues now, ashok go with siamak and vasu to the vihar . samrat winked at his son .

in the vihar , they could here , soft prayers , while siamak waited outside , ashok goes for devi , she was looking beautiful in her pink dress , pearl jewellery , hands folded , he sat beside her .

her prayer ended , she looked at him smiled , and look away , realising something , again looked at him , touched his cheek , and smiled curved on her lips.

devi : ashok .

ashok : did u think u were dreaming ? he wink at her.

devi : no , who said i just didn't beleved first . she was blushing . he hugged her .

ashok : i missed u

devi : no , don't ...its vihar , be away , be r in front of god.

ashok : come with me , my whole family came to meet u .

he held her hand , siamak was waiting outside , or say saving himself from puppies who were licking his foot .

ashok : siamak , he looked at devi , as she freed herself from ashok's grip.

siamak : pranam , bha... rajkumari .

asandhi : pranam .

siamak (in ashoka's ears ) : nice choice , brother .

the three of them walked to mahal , helena , charumitra , noor , revati (sushim's wife ) all was shocked to see the scary wild prince , the princess of entire magadha doesn't like his rough skin got such a beautiful wife , they were all women but still they find it hard to not look at her.

dharma came forward and hugged her to be daughter-in-law,

subharasi : ashok , u never told us that u have such a beautiful choice . she said it aloud making devi look like a tomato , and ashok ran away with some excuse .

--------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------the wedding is going to start soon, don't miss it .

plzz read and review.

Edited by aditi_angel - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#77
Beautiful update
poor ashok, devi k alava aur kuch soch hi nahi paraha :P
chalo sab ne permission de dia, ab waiting 4 a grand rajakia shadi.
Do updt soon.
Thanx 4 pm.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#78
Awesome update
Ashoka and devi are awesome
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Posted: 10 years ago
#79

Originally posted by: SujaLuvsMayur

Beautiful update
poor ashok, devi k alava aur kuch soch hi nahi paraha :P
chalo sab ne permission de dia, ab waiting 4 a grand rajakia shadi.
Do updt soon.
Thanx 4 pm.

thanks
but bhe have our sushim who will disturb ashvi the most..
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Posted: 10 years ago
#80

Originally posted by: Chit15

Awesome update

Ashoka and devi are awesome

thanks
they are always fab...😳

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