ff ASHOKA & DEVI.......forever yours my love (updated on pg 28)

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hey! so this my ff based only on history it has nothing to do with the serial...
i have written it in my blog but writing here to for u guys...
hope u like it...😳
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ashoka was the 2nd son of emperor bindusar, now has turned 18 ,his mother dharma is all set to look for a bride for his son to get married.
"but here lies the problem, maharani" said Rani subhrasi
"what problem, myson is in marriage age , i have to get him married" said maharani dharma.
"this is the problem, who will marry ashoka everyone is scared of him, any princess of entire magadha reign , runs away just by seeing him" said Rani noor
"NO, i known someone is there for him, we just have to find her, that's all" subhadrangi.
MEANWHILE, in the court,
" you called me father" ashok
"yes, my son , we are stuck in a problem , acharya chanakya said only you could solve " samrat bindusar.
" What is it ?" ashoka
"the provision of ujjaini gose rebellious, someone has to go to clear the problem with them , we approched Rajkumar Sushim, but he is busy with his new bride" acharya
"dont disturb him acharya, i will go to ujjaini" ashoka said laughingly on his brother.
"the samanth (mukhiya, head) of vedisanagari and his son Sumitra will help you with the situtation"
"ok, father"
EARLY in the morning , ashok is all set to leave for ujjaini, When
"why, you have to go now, your mother and i am looking for a bride, now" subharasi
"i don't need wife now"
" one day, one will come and drive u head over heels" subharasi.
"ohh come on, its not that easy, i will take your leave now " trying to hide his embarrasement , he heads for his trip.
"Asandhimitra, Where r u ?" said devi's mother
" what happened? Mother"
"did you clean the guest room for prince "
" yes, i hope he will like it"
" ohho, the fierce prince of magadha , is coming to see your decoration" said the twin brother sumitra teasingly.
"shut up, brother, i don't want to meet the prince , i m going in the kitchen to look is everything all right" said devi.
"u r gonna cook for him devi," sumitra winking.
"brother, i will kill u now"
"acharya radhagupt , i dont think its safe to rely on the vedisnagari peoples , i will go first and look all around the house, to see the mukhiya has no unani with them" ashok.
"u r thinking too much, they are good peoples"
"just to make sure, achraya"
" come first"
IN the back of the house little hungry kids were seen the dishes preparation for prince ashok. suddenly , devi spotted them " what r u doing here"
" we r sorry, shakyakumari, we were just seeing the dishes" "why for" devi said.
"we only eat once in a day , so we are little hungry"
the kind , warm hearted asandhimitra was melted by seeing the children in such a condition , not knowing of rajkumar ashok , watching all this from behind , she said " the prince would'nt notice some food missing"
"she comes from the kitchen with thaali full of laado " "eat now"
" i too love laados ,shakyakumari"
Devi frowned, "who is it ?" she said.
" the prince who would'nt notice missing food" Ashok winks at her.
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should i continue this or not plzz tell me guys
and if it is not upto the mark plzz tell me...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Nice story Aditi😊
Please continue soon😳
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but i don't think soo that in this forum anyone is interested in my ff
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Please continue I would like to read FF on Ashoka and Devi
Please I request its good story
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alright m gonna post to my silent readers soon...
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Hey Aditi!!!! Pls post ur ff yaar. I follow it in ur blog.. bt wud luv if u post here.
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alright, as i know i have some silents readers , i m posting my ff.
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SHE felt someone behind her , she turned , a man with eyes of lion , perfectly build body,a fierce warrior she was busy and lost in noticing the man who is going to be her life.

and ashok smiles thinking a goddesses in a white saree is standing in front of him, with his favourite laddoo. mesmerized by her beauty , ashok don't even known when she runs away inside the house out of embarrassment.

he returned to his army, all smiling, "u okay, mitra" said vasunandan , who was shocked to see ashoka smiling.

" what happened to me? i m all right" ashoka still unknowingly smiling.

"then, we should go , its all ready dinner time" acharya akarmak.

REACHING ,the mansion , all peoples flocked to see there fierce prince. sumitra and bodhigupt (mukhiya of vidisanagari ) came to welcome them. the hall was well decorated, and full of people, the officers and army peoples coming to ashok and introducing themselves.soon, everyone get busy discussing politics, temperature but ashok was silent , his eyes was still searching for just one look of the lady , suddenly his heart starts pounding faster ,he knew that she is around "but where?" the dasi came to inform and food is ready to serve .

They headed towards the dining area which was specially for prince ashok, acharya radhagupt, acharaya akarmak, and vasunandan, and the mukhiya's family. the smell of fresh flowers, the scent of perfume and noice made by tiny bells of payal reached his ear, he looked behind "it was she".

"its asandhimitra , my daughter, my pride"said bodhigupt.

"pranam achrya" she said in a soft voice to both acharya and started serving them food.

ashok was constantly staring at her,"she is beautiful, isn't she , mitra" vasunandan following ashok gaze.

"don't look at her " ashok.

" mitra , she is a follower of sambuddha , no one will approve your love, don't fall for her"

"i don't care " ashok. "would u taste the halwa?" there discussion ended with asandhimitra standing in front of her with halwa.

"sure, shakyakumari" vasunandan. "i want those ladoo's which u gave to them" ashok.

she skipped her heart bit. and again run inside the kitchen.

after finishing the dinner , sumitra showed vasunandan and ashok there rooms,

"would u guys with me and my friends for a shikar, tomorrow " sumitra

"sure , we will" ashok smiling at his new friend.

after sumitra took his leave, he was all alone in room standing in the balcony noticing the full moon.

the smell of flowers fill the room, he turned back , she came from the dark room to the open balcony , a thaali in hand, the moonlight fall on her and she started shining more brightly then the moon ,open hairs , black eyes, pink lips , all looks so beautiful, he thought .

he approached to her,

to be continue...

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Beautiful!!! The last scene 😳 ❤️
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Posted: 10 years ago
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I liked the way Ashoka was bowled by Devi on first sight
You beautifully described Devi beauty in last paragraph
Loved it
Update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Nice update Aditi😊
PM me for the next update 😃

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