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Guys i'm coming up with my ff...i'm really scared to post it...but still doing it😕...
this is the very first time i'm writing a ff...i've not even written a nivren scene...so expect te least from this ff...it wud b te worst ff u'd have ever read😆...
i got inspired by many sweet members of tis forum... but still amazed that i've done it😕😆...🤣

And here it goes...

MUSKAN
INTRODUCTION


Characters:


Same as in the show'.no change'


Nivedita:


She's a very caring, simple and a down to earth person.
She's from a middle class family, she's
working in a private firm. Her world revolves around her family.


Viren:

He's a cool guy, fun loving and energetic. He has
completed his studies in US and is now returning back to Shimla. He loves to
live his life to the fullest.



itz all for them...NivRen...the most magical couple😳
(and this is ma first collage tooo😊...hope its not that bad😕...wud lyk to thank ma jaan... loji for her guidance🤗.)

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Posted: 14 years ago
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guys it'll be having te least logic ... n it'll definitely hav many mistakes too😆...pls do forgive me...


PART 1


There was a cool breeze blowing across his thick black hair as he approached Shimla. A smile grew automatically on his face and he was enjoying every bit of his bike ride. It was a feeling of nostalgia for him, all his childhood memories were enlinked with this city. He was really excited to return back to his hometown after a long time.

He remembered the day when he was sent to U.S along with his brother to continue their studies abroad. Both of them were shaken by their dadaji's decision….they tried a lot by crying and acting good, but nothing worked coz dadaji was adamant in his decision.

Both of them later on dwelled up very well with their new life in the boarding school and then did their graduation in U.S itself….he remembered the days he, Siddharth and his friends used to hang out….they used to have a lot of masti and fun…..It was last year when Siddharth completed his graduation and went back to Shimla…He has now joined their family business. He really missed his brother a lot eventhough Siddharth used to meet him every now and then during his official visits….

Today he too was returning back, but unlike Siddharth he had no intensions to join their family business now, as he himself felt that he's not ready for it.

Now he was soo happy to return back, he had missed everyone sooo much. The last time he saw everyone was 2 years back during his summer vacations…..all of 'em came over to U.S and they had spend a great time over there….

Suddenly he was interrupted from his thoughts when he heard his phone ringing….slowly he parked his bike and answered the phone…it was his Tayji, he felt himself smiling after seeing it….."Hello Tayji!!! so wassup ma cutie-pie??"…he asked with a cheeky smile on his face…"Viren, where are you, havn't you reached Shimla yet???...you have become soo wicked and irresponsible now….we were sending car to the airport to pick you up….but NO…. you insisted us to arrange a bike for you in the airport….and now see what you are doing……no calls no messages…..we all are worried for you here…..do you know that???"…Viren was really enjoying his Tayji's scoldings….he missed it a lot…."ooops tayji….i'm really sorry….i've just reached Shimla…..will be there in a moment.."... Vandana was overwhelmed and felt so happy hearing this…"Okay beta…reach here soon….can't wait to see you…..but ride carefully….roads here are different "….."oh don't worry Tayji….these all don't make any difference to me….so chill…see you soon…bye." Viren ended the convo and started off with his bike….

Scene shifts

The whole sood koti was awaiting for Viren. Both Soods and Sharmas were gathered there to welcome him….just then Vandana came to the main hall and informed everyone that Viren had reached Shimla and will be here soon….All of them were happy to hear this, they all were eager to meet him. As they all were talking ,Yashodara asked Nayathara about Niveditha, "Arrey where is Nivi???...hasn't she returned from her work yet???" Nayanthara too was feeling worried for Nivi "No Yashodara !!!...i had asked her to come early…she too wanted to be here today…donno what happened???...think I should ask Keshav to look for her."…"oh oh Nayanthara don't worry, she'll be fine…may be she had a lot of work to complete today"..Yashodara made Nayanthara to calm down…

While the elders were chit-chattin…Divya , Siddharth, Aditya and Yash grouped out and indulged in their masti …Yash was finding fun in teasing his Divya dii….Sid and Adi was enjoying all this!!!

Scene shifts

Viren was now in thoughts about his childhood days in Shimla. He always used to fool around with his friends. He used to play the whole day with them. They were a gang of five…himself, Siddharth, Aditya, Divya and Nivedita…All of them used to play, fight and would even play pranks on one another…It always used to be Nivi who was more close to him….they were the youngest in the group and were bullied the most….so they used to share almost everything with eachother…and enjoyed being with each other….

It had been ages since he have seen them….he never got a chance to visit Shimla before even though he wanted to. He was fully occupied with his life in U.S….but now he was very much excited to meet everyone…..

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Posted: 14 years ago
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nice intro...love and enjoyed it
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Posted: 14 years ago
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heyyy...sweetheart..u started an ff..n i must say well written chapter..i enjoyed it to the core..n it created a curiosity n excitement in me to wait for the next chapter...thnx reshu...it's really good dear..don't say it's bad n all..else i'll hit u with something...😆
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Resh...merrri jann..am so Happy u start ur ff...first i love ur collage it's lovly ..love NivRen...u rock ..want many collages jan..😉...ur ff is great yarr i love it ..and it's awesome chapter ..verin in U.S ..he is good boy there right not nouty boy 😆...all the family waiting for him am so excited to know what will happen next ..and he will see nivii in the way or not ...update it soon merri jann..u rock 🤗
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Ohhh..my little Sis... that was fantastic...😆 nice intro...i fell in luv with ur Viren.😉... thank u so much for starting a new FF. waiting for next update...
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Ohhh... that was fantastic...😆 nice intro...i fell in luv with ur Viren.😉... thank u so much for starting a new FF. waiting for next update...lov u hug u
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hey resh,,, gud u too started FF... Nice start dear and i don't think it s your first attempt becoz very well written dear,,, i liked it and love the collage very much...
Eagerly waiting to read more... 😍
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Posted: 14 years ago
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very nice collage Resh..and loved your ff..dont look like you are writing first time..loved the introduction..wating for next...😊

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Resh wonderful start Hun. I can't wait to read the next chapter.
Btw I love the collage.
Mwah

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