NivRen FF:Muskan(pt4/pg13) - Page 5

resham, thanks for pm..sorry i still hvnt read ur ff as i just came back from india and need to catch up with some work in class so might not be able to read them now but do pm me whenever u update it..

just read them..wonderful chaters..waiting for ur next update

Please continue soon miss reading you ff

when i can get u mext chapter...

Please continue soon miss reading you ff

i'm really sorry for making the update soo late... thanks a lot guys for ur support till now...love all... hope u'll like this one...sorry guys if its boring...

PART 3

Viren opened his eyes slowly and found him top of the same cute girl. She had her eyes closed and was havin a frightened look. A few strands of hair was falling on her face...this made his heart go more restless... He couldn't help himself from moving her hair...he badly wanted to see her partially hidden face. He felt his heart beat freeze for the first time as he moved away all the strands of hair...she was looking even more beautiful now...she had great features that enhanced her simple beauty...he jus couldn't stop staring at her...He felt his heart beat raising insanely...He was confused with this new feeling that he's experiencing now...but still enjoying it a lot!!! He was closely learning each n every part of her face...This was not the first time he had seen a beautiful girl...he had seen many who all were drooling over him n wer dying to date him...but he felt something special about this girl...no other girl had influenced him this much...He dint know why all these thoughts were clouding up in his mind...

Nivi was totaly horrified after the fall she had a few moments before. She knew someone was on her top...n soon she felt someone moving her hair...she was fighting with herself to overcome the fear...she slowly opened her eyes...she felt panicked by the sight in front of her...she was embarrassed to find a guy lying on top of her...nothing more awkard have ever happened in her life before...

She dint know why this guy was not moving away or why he was going on staring at her... all she wanted was to get over this situation ASAP... She started to wriggle her body thinking that this would make him move...but his naive response surprised her...feeling irritated n tensed she cleared her voice and said..."Excuse me..."

Viren saw her opening her eyes...her eyes were big n beautiful...he laid paralysed,,,lost in her eyes...he came to his senses when he heard her voice...He said in a husky n low voice, "Hai!!!"...He dint have ay clue why and what he was saying...Nivi couldn't take it anymore,, 'couldn't he make out that i wanted him to move apart and instead of that he's greeting me..arghh'..her mindly thoughts were fuming with anger...she was just about to blast before which she saw the rickshaw driver tapping on the guy's shoulder...

Viren saw change in the girl's expression...he guessed that she dint like his gesture at all...'of course how could she??? I'm on top of her n causing her pain...n above all that i'm greetin her...what the *** has happened to you Viren...sick of you...now just pls do something good before she gets frustrated with you...oh god damn it Viren still you are not moving...what is wrong with you idiot???'...soon he was interrupted from his self cursing thoughts when he found someone tapping on his shoulder...he turned around to see a rickshaw wala looking at them in concern.

Viren soon stood up and held out his hands to help the girl...but Nivi managed to stand up on her own ignoring him...Nivi was feeling a slight pain in her back...it dint seem to be a bad accident as she thought it would be...she dusted off herself and then turned to where Viren and the driver were standing.

Viren had now turned to the place where his bike was laying...he rushed towards the spot and examined his bike...it was fine with a little bit of damage in the front part and some scratches here n there...while he was checking out his bike the driver came to him and in a stern voice he said "Saabji u need to compensate for this.." and pointed towards the large dent on the back of the rickshaw.

Nivi was listening to there conversation...and she too turned towards where the rickshaw driver was pointing out...she got worried after seeing the damage...she started askin the driver, "Oh pls bhaiyaji...now dont say the rickshaw wont go!!"..her voice shivered as she talked... Before the driver could answer her Viren interrupted and asked the driver to come with him...they moved to a side...Nivi was feeling low now,,,she dint know would do if this rickshaw wont go...she was feeling scared to get scoldings from her papa n dadi...they r surely not gonna spare her today.

Viren was actually planning for something...he dint want to let the girl go soo soon...he very well knew what the driver is gonna reply to her...it was sure that the rickshaw is perfectly fine for a ride...a dent in the lower part of the vehcile wont cause any harm to it... So without lettin go this oppurtunity, he went towards the driver and asked to come with him...he bribed the driver to do what all he says...n after discussing his plan they went towards Nivi.

Nivi saw them coming towards her... Viren smiled to her and said "sorry for making you wait...actually went to compensate for the damage"...She was not at all interested to know about their settlements now...so she turned towards the driver for her answer... The Rickshaw driver with a soft voice said "I'm really very sorry madamji...ab yeh nahi chal payega!!!"...this was the last thing she wanted to hear...she almost felt like crying now.

Viren saw her getting upset...he too felt bad for doing this to her...but he was helpless,,,he just wanted to spend some good time with her...but he was still in a dilemma on why he's doing such things...n why he's gettin soo much attracted to her!!!..Viren moved close to her n started off with a concerned voice..."its okay!! i'll drop you miss." Nivi couldn't control herself now...she started shouting at him "this all happened only because of you..." . Viren was finding her even more cute when she was angry..."No its because of you sweetie"...he wispered in a low voice. Before Nivi could continue the rickshaw driver interrupted..."haan madamji,,sirji teek keh rahe hai...aapko inke saath hi jaana chahiye...ab toh bohot der ho chuki hai...samajne ki koshish karo!!!"

Nivi was speechless now...all she could do now was either to go with a stranger or to wait there for donno how long...she chose the former coz she dint want to make her dadi n others to get worried for her...she decided to go with him...

Originally posted by: edwardcullen19

res hehehe me first this time

Originally posted by: Butifuleyes

wow what a wonderful ud, it was funny and romantic viren lost his head 😆.

Originally posted by: ash_nivren

lovely updates reshma...so viren on top of nivi...can't wait to read the next updates...

wish you a very happy and prosperous ONAM...

awww thnx a lot dear...*hugs*

Originally posted by: Nivren123

<font color="#0066ff" size="4" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">Please continue soon btw nice update.</font> 😊

thanks dear...updated