NivRen FF:Muskan(pt4/pg13) - Page 4

Originally posted by: Butifuleyes

So nice collage and what a interesting start of your ff, please do continue.

ma next update frnds...sorry for makin it late...it wud b a lil bit confusing...forgive me for ma mistakes too...

PART 2

She was getting frustrated now. Its been half an hour since she's waiting for a bus…and till now there isn't a sign of any. She wanted to reach home early today…coz today was really special for her…its her childhood friend whose returning back after a long time. She was really excited to see him…she doesn't even have a clue hows he gonna look now…will he be the same old shabby look or would he be like his brother????..."Why does this always happen to you Nivedita Sharma??..Whatever u plan…it always turns upside down!!!...gosh….that stupid report….can't GM wait till tomorrow ….made me complete te entire thing today itself….arghhh!!!!...hope I cud make it there before Viren."

She was interrupted from all her thoughts when she heard the sound of an Auto Rickshaw…it was approaching her…soon she held out her hand to make it stop…"pls..pls..pls rokh dhijiye bhaiya"…all she could think was to pray…there was nothing left out for her to do!! …. She became more upset when she saw the rickshaw passing her…she almost started to cry when to her surprise she saw the Rickshaw slowing down…"OMG..Finally"…she exclaimed with a sweet smile …

Viren drove the bike in a moderate speed…that was not at all his way…but still doing it for his Tayji…he loved her so much...he never used to do or say anything that would hurt her…He was abruptly distracted by the site infront of him…"Beautiful…very beautiful"…he whispered…

Scene shifts

"Maa did you see Chanchal???...dint see her since long time….do you know where is she???"….Vandana stared at Yashodhara with a questioning look. "Bahu she will be in the kitchen!!"…Yashodhara seemed happy while replying…this was rather too suprising for rest of the people over there…"Chanchal aur kitchen mein!!!...Maa what are u saying??"…Vandana was more precisely asking in a loud voice…..this made Yashodhara laugh….and she was finding it hard to reply Vandana…but controlled herself as she saw all of them staring at her weirdly…."Why are you all staring at me like this???...dont worry Vandana…calm down….i know that Chanchal have never been to kitchen for years….but today she's preparing Halwa for her son….you remember right Gajjar ka halwa is his favorite"….Everyone seemed to be more worried now….Jawahar couldn't believe his hears…"Maa…u know how horribly Chanchal cooks…i was not able to get off the bed for a whole day after eating her paneer tikka she prepared the very first day after marriage…I was really relieved when she quited cooking…that too thanks to Bhabhi"…..everyone started laughing hearing this…

"Arrey Jawahar don't be so mean…I asked her not to cook coz I dint want her to be troubled….i wanted her to feel this as her home!!!...but still Maa..are you sure Chanchal could do it???"…Vandana asked again. "I really hope so bahu…I gave her my recipe book…she came to me in the morning and she sounded really excited too…so dint feel like stopping her!!!"….Vandana was really glad to hear this… but Jawahar was still unsure about it…"Bhagvan..ab aap hi bacha leejiye mere bache ko…" he sounded helpless…this made everyone laugh…and they started laughing even more when Yashodhara started pulling his ears.

Scene shifts

Viren was now at the same junction where Nivedita was standing….He was totally blown by her beauty…he couldn't help himself to stop staring at her….he was admiring her and precisely lost all his consciousness…he was head over heels for her simple but elegant beauty….he found it hard to breath when he saw her smiling…."Kya Muskan hai yaar……haaye maar daala"

He was full and full in his dream world…that he even forgot that he was driving….he got to reality when he saw himself going ahead of her….before he could apply breaks…his bike got collided with the Rickshaw that was standing in front of him…he was thrown out of his bike…he just closed his eyes and had no clue where he was heading!!!

Niveditha was very happy to see the rickshaw stop a bit ahead of her…she was about to make a move ….just when she saw a bike colliding with the Rickshaw….there was a huge crashing sound…and all she could feel was being hit by something and found herself heading towards the ground…she became really scared and closed her eyes very tightly….she fell on the ground with a thud…she also felt someone on top of her…..

res hehehe me first this time

wow what a wonderful ud, it was funny and romantic viren lost his head 😆.

lovely updates reshma...so viren on top of nivi...can't wait to read the next updates...

Please continue soon btw nice update. 😊

Jan...i love cc😆 ..waw really make me laugh that scene😆 ,,and u just left me so excited with the last scene 😳...and nivi ka smile even she makes me go to the dream land😛 ..love the chapter👏 ..really awesome⭐️⭐️ ..and the way u r writing not only romantic but also fun ..i love that ..u r like me in this and love u morrre merrri jan ..miss u ...wating for the next 😉

i want more collage merri jan 😉

Resh,,, very funny and lovely chapter... I like CC part and viren's expressions after seeing the girl(nivi),,, i know viren is on top of nivi... 😉... Continue soon dear...

nice chapter resh..so viren fell for nivi in first look itself..good going..love it..wating for next😊

My little sweetu... that was too good yaar... Hayyy... Viren become blind after seeing Nivi... I loved last part very much...