FF : Deewana Mujhsa Nahin!!!!(Chap38 ud/pg68) - Page 7

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Posted: 14 years ago
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cool update meera...thoroughly enjoyed reading this cute baby love story...bt i can't wait to read the grown up veeru n basanthi's story..😃...thnks yaar...u r an awesome writer...n happy onam...
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Posted: 14 years ago
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sorry meera...mm..need a favour...can u pls send a pm whenever u update this ff..bcz i'm not regular here n also a little bit busy nowadays..hope i'm not troubling u...
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: sana4kinha

cool update meera...thoroughly enjoyed reading this cute baby love story...bt i can't wait to read the grown up veeru n basanthi's story..😃...thnks yaar...u r an awesome writer...n happy onam...


Ohhh,,...Sana Dear...Thank u... Thank u very much😍...

then about Grown up Veeru n Basanti..😉... they are on their way... they will surely meet u soon...

I will surely send u a PM...
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Posted: 14 years ago
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hi meera just read all ur chapters.. all i can say is ur ff is very different... i liked it very much... pls continue soon.. loved choti nivi and chota viren 😉... hope we get good romance b/w nivren 😳
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: Alphabet26

hi meera just read all ur chapters.. all i can say is ur ff is very different... i liked it very much... pls continue soon.. loved choti nivi and chota viren 😉... hope we get good romance b/w nivren 😳



Thank u very much for your wonderful comment.😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Voice Over: Viren

In above chapters I explained about my happiest days in my life. I was like a butterfly. I was the happiest person in the world at that time.

But now I am going to tell u about that day. The day forced me to go away from my Nivi. The day which give me loneliness. The day I stayed at my heaven last time.

Chapter 7: The 'D' Day

After Kaveri's death, Nivi took some responsibilities of Yash. Sometime Viren become jealous of Yash. But he knew Yash is a motherless baby and he need more attention. Sometime he helped Nivi to take care Yash.

Time passed. Now Viren is about 10 years old. After Nivi's arrival at school, Viren rarely involved in fighting. Whenever he involved to some fight, he gets punishment from Dada Sahib too. Kesav also came to know about these. He became feared about growing friendship between Nivi and Viren. So he warned Nivi not to meet Viren.

Viren's main rival was Vivek Malhothra, son of Asish Malhothra who is the main opponent of Sood industries. Whenever he got chance he used to trouble Sid and Viren. He knew Viren is a short tempered person, so he troubled him more.

It was an examination day. Viren noticed that Vivek trying to do Malpractice. Viren informed this to teacher. Principal called both of them. Viren explained what happened. Principal ordered that Vivek should admit this in front of School assembly and he must take pledge that he will not repeat time again. After hearing Viren smiled. He looked at Vivek through the corner of his eyes.

Vivek became restless after this incident. He wanted to see Viren in the same situation. He thought about many plan. Finally he decided one.

Vivek had a 'Rado Watch' which was gifted by his father. He showed that to everyone. Now most of student in that school knew about that watch. He planned that he would put it in Viren's bag and complaint teacher that his watch is missing. Then teacher search every student's bag and then they found it from Viren's bag and they kick him out of the school.

While Vivek explained this to his Gang members during the interval Sid's friend Rahul heard this. He went search for Viren and Sid. But he couldn't find them. Finally bell rang. He went to his class. Sid entered class along with teacher. He went to meet him in order to clarify some doubts. Rahul made a note about what is happening and give that to Sid. After reading this Sid became very angry. He tore the paper into pieces. He ran out of the class. Teacher shocked to see this. "Sid, what are you doing?"

When Sid reached Viren's class, teacher was searching Viren's bag. Viren was confident. Teacher found out Watch from his bag. He shocked. He said, "No…teacher I didn't do that.." Seeing this Sid stormed into the class. He saw Vivek standing next to teacher. He pulled him and started to beat. Teacher and other boys tried to stop him. But they couldn't. Finally Viren hold his hand and said, "Bhai… please stop." Sid said, "Viren this stupid planned this drama. He wanted to take revenge." Viren said,"I know bhai. But now u calm down please.." "But Viren???" "Please Bhai.. Please…." "Ok. Viren..Ok."

Principal called Viren, Sid and Vivek to his room. Teacher explained what happened in the school. Two members of Vivek's gang told principal that they saw Viren stealing the watch. Hearing this Sid became angry again. Viren suddenly hold his hand. Viren said to Principal that he is innocent.

Principal shouted at Sid, "Sid, I heard that you are a good boy. Then when did u start this Dadagiri?" Viren said to him, "Sir, he is innocent. Please leave him." Principal said,"Ohhh.. U Robinhood.. I know u r the mastermind. U r using Sid too in order to get my sympathy. But I believe that u have done that. So you want to say sorry to Vivek during school assembly."

Viren said,"No Sir. I will not say sorry to him. I am innocent." Principal said, "Then you will be suspending for one week." Viren said, "That is ok for me." This time Vivek smiled at Viren.

When they come out of the Principal's room, Nivi was waiting there for them. Viren ran to her. "Nivi, I didn't do that." His eyes filled with water. "Veeru.. I know… I know my Veeru never ever do that.." "Sach…" "Hmmm"." Then I am not feared of anyone. My Bhai and my friend believing me. That's enough for me."

They reached home. They planned that they didn't tell anything at home about what happened that day at school. They knew if Dada Sahib came to know this, things become worse. They warned Divya, Adithya and Nivi too about this.

But Destiny planned something else for them….


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Posted: 14 years ago
#67
Meera..that was lovely..poor Viren what had he not suffered in his childhood..but happy that Sid and Nivi were always with him...
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Poor viren, but he is lucky to have sid like brother... Gud brother bonding... Thanx for the PM and continue soon...
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Posted: 14 years ago
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oh sad that viren suffered a lot but sid was there to help him..good bonding and support from sid😊
and thanx for the pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hey Meera i can't describe how much i love your ff...it's different , unique story, perfectly written by an awesome writer like you dear...your ff is just simply superb...Viren suffered so much...i think that Dada Sahib will get to know about what happened in the school and Viren will get punished...Sid is such a caring brother...continue soon dear...i am waiting for the next
thanks a ton for the PM

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