FF : Deewana Mujhsa Nahin!!!!(Chap38 ud/pg68) - Page 14

Originally posted by: Honkytonk

Great updates! Can't wait for Viren n Nivi to find out who each other is!!!

Poor Dadaji, hope he gets better soon.

Many thanks for updating.

Originally posted by: Butifuleyes

Loved Meera, I am loving how you bringing them together. I was laughing the whole time she gave him back for telling her to see psychiatrist. waiting for your new ud..

Originally posted by: Resh_kinhafan

Enjoyed a lot dii...
Loved sid n dadaji...both r really sweet...
Nivi n viren were hilarious...loved der cute-si nokh-jokh...lolz

continue soon...love u!!

Chapter 13: Pal, yeh hain pyaar ke pal

Before Divya could tell anything Nivi's Bell rang. "Yes Madam. Yes. … I will reach there in 30 min". Then Nivi turned towards Divya. "Di.. I want to go now." Then she rushed to office.

Viren forced to stay at hospital till evening. Dada Sahib didn't allow him even to get out from his room. Even though he is at hospital, he was in Nivi's thought. How she looks like and how she responds when she sees him after 15 years. He tried many time to go home. But Dadaji didn't allow him. Finally in the evening he managed to go Sood Mansion. Vandana too went with him.

While get down from the car, he looked towards Sharma's house. There was no one outside. He stood there for few more minutes. Then Vandana came there with Arathi. "Are you not coming inside?" Then Viren turned and looked at Vandana. He smiled. "Tyaji.. You will never change. You still believe in this type of rituals?" She said, "Viren thum bhi na.. Chal andar.."

Viren entered into the home. Everything remains same. He went to his room. He found everything in place and neat and clean. Then he noticed a big card on the bed. He opened it. "Welcome Back Viren…Sid.." Viren's eyes filled with tears. He knew how Sid missed him in those 15 years.

He freshened up and get ready to go Sharma's home. He was wearing white shirt and Black jeans. The thought about Nivi made him very nervous. He could hear his own heart beat. He walked towards Shrama's home.

He entered into the home. But he found nobody there. He looked around. Then he saw a picture on the wall signed by Nivi. In that a girl looking through the door like she is waiting for someone. "Is Nivi waiting for me? Is she too in love?" Many questions raised in Viren's mind. He stood there for some time.

"Who are you?" Viren heard some female voice. He turned towards her. It was Nayantara Dadi. "Dadi.. I am Viren." Dadi surprised to saw him. "Mera Bacha… How are you Viren? You sit down." she was very happy to saw Viren. Viren sat down one of the chairs. "I am fine Dadi.. Nivi??…" "Ohh.. You came here to see Nivi.. Not me.." She made face. "No.. Dadi.. Not like that." Dadi laughed. "I know pagal… Now she is working on a private firm and doing some design work. She will come in any time now."

He felt someone coming. He looked outside. He saw one girl wearing pink salwar coming towards Sharma's house. She was in deep thought and looking down. His heart started to beat again. As she neared the house Viren understood it is the same girl he met yesterday in the bus. His heart stopped at that moment.

"OMG…Is that Nivi? I didn't understand my Nivi…" He shook his head."From some mannerisms I thought this girl was similar to Nivi. But I never expect this girl will be Nivi. I didn't understand I am going through my life's precious moment." He slowly stood up from his seat. Now he is looking at Nivi like he saw her for the first time. He couldn't take eyes from her.

"Koi dil bekaabu kar gaya Aur ishqa dil mein bhar gaya
Aankhon aankhon mein woh lakhon gallan kar gaya oye
Oh rabba main toh mar gaya oye Shaddai mujhe kar gaya kar gaya oye
Oh rabba main toh mar gaya oye Shaddai mujhe kar gaya kar gaya oye"

"Ohhh…She is so beautiful." Then he looked at her eyes." OMG.. I didn't even thought this beautiful eyes are resembles to my Nivi." Her hair was flying in wind." Ohh... God I want to be that wind so that I can also caress her hairs." He looked at her lips. It is like cherry. "I want to go to her heart to know whether she is thinking about me."

"Ab dil chaahe khamoshi ke honthon pe main likh doon Pyaari si baatein kayi
Ho kuch pal mere naam kare woh, main bhi uske naam pe Likhoon mulakaatein kayi
Ho pehli hi takni mein bann gayi jaan pe Naina waina uske mere dil pe chapeh
Ab jaaun kahan pe, dil ruka hai wahaan pe Jahaan dekh ke mujhe woh aagey badh gaya oye
Oh rabba main toh mar gaya oye Shaddai mujhe kar gaya kar gaya oye
Oh rabba main toh mar gaya oye Shaddai mujhe kar gaya kar gaya oye"

He placed his right hand to his heart. He couldn't see anything expect Nivi. Now he felt him and his Nivi was in Heaven. They were surrounded by clouds. Nivi was walking through the cloud. "I am lost. I am lost in her beauty. Ohh.. God.. Please pause this moment. I want to live this moment. I want to feel her. I want to enjoy this pain of love." His eyes followed her.

"Mausam ke azaad parinday, haathon mein hai uske Ya woh bahaaron si hai
Sardi ki woh dhoop ke jaisi, garmi ki shaam hai Pehli puhaaron si hai
Mera pyaar ka mausam bhi hai, lagey meri mehram bhi hai
Mera pyaar ka mausam bhi hai, lagey meri mehram bhi hai
Jaane kya kya do aankhon mein main padh gaya oye
Oh rabba main toh marr gaya oye Shaddai mujhe kar gaya kar gaya oye
Oh rabba main toh marr gaya oye Shaddai mujhe kar gaya kar gaya oye"

Nivi was annoyed then because of her boss. So she didn't notice Viren or NT Dadi. She walked towards her room. Dadi called her, "Nivi…" She wake up from her thoughts and turned. She saw Viren standing there.

wow...very nice update yaar

truly loved it