Dastaan-e-Ishq (Index pg 1) note at pg 89 - Page 4

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Viren moved away from her and almost ran over to the window. What was he doing, was he thinking. Tomorrow they are going to get separated and if today, something happen between them… How would Nivedita be able to move forward? Would he able to forgive himself for giving her pain once again? He had made his mind that no one besides her is going to be his wife, but Nivedita deserved happiness in every way.

Nivedita was shocked and couldn't believe what was happened. Viren, who always tried something to be near her and how many times hadn't she stopped him from crossing the line and today, when she was agreeing with everything in every sense, then he walked away.

She knew that something was wrong… She had to ask him. She went over to him. She places her hand as usual on his shoulder and this made Viren turn towards her. He looked at her and finding it difficult to stay away from her. She was more than ever irresistable... But he had to stay away from her, because of her. She was looking at him with so many questions in her eyes.

And he started saying that my only wish for you is that you are happy wherever you live and… and… whomever you live with. I will always pray for your happiness Nivedita because those we love, those people's happiness is dear to us and I will always pray for your happiness. I know that the man, who will come into your life this time, will love and honor you more than me. I just came here to say this to you and if you one day need a friend then you will find me there with you… I have hurted you enough for life time, please forgive me and I cannot expect that, but I hope that you will remember me in a positive manner…

Nivedita was looking at him unable to blink. Does he love me that much? This man has certainly annihilated himself in my love and what am I doing? She was unable to forgive herself for putting Viren in this sort of pain. She wanted to take his pain away but how? If they had time…

Viren couldn't stand there anymore. Circumstances had made it difficult for him to be with her in the future and now when both of them wanted to be with them, he had to be strong and take the decision on behalf of both of them. He decided to leave the room. This was the best thing he could do for both of them

Originally posted by: anjubala

Abidah, I am breathless right now after reading all of the scenes. They are out of this world and this is how we all have imagined Nivren's love story to be. You have captured the essence of our Nivren beautifully. I have no words to describe how I am feeling after reading the scenes. The picture of their love, passion is right infront of my eyes. Thanks dear for doing this to us. Love you so much. Please continue soon. You are a fabulous writer. Thanks once again as these scenes brought our Navz back to forum. Welcome back Navz, have missed you so much.
Abidah, please complete Viren's sentence soon else I will not be able to sleep.

Originally posted by: anjubala

Navz it is close to 6 in the morning for you. How come you are still awake?

Abidah, this is teh Viren we and Nivi fell in Love with. This is what Love is all about, you captured it perfectly girl. You are making me lose myself in your scenes. Please do continue soon

Scene 8:

And he started to walk towards the door when he suddenly stopped. Someone was holding his hand and this time he did not have the courage of going away. He did it so many times after he was caught as the stalker' But this time' He couldn't do it.

Nivedita didn't wanted to let him go and this was the only way to stop him for a while. She knew that if she did not say anything on this level, then he will be gone forever and this moment was to precious to finish so soon.

She decided to walk towards him and stopped when she stood in front of him. His head was bowed and he was looking at the ground. She knew that he was sincere in every sense and now she understood why she did not get her seal of love. It reminded her of a saying that even though the lover is in possession of his or her love, the nobility of the love is that the lover ask its love whether the decrease in the distances are allowed or not. She respected and loved Viren even more in this moment.

She decreased the distances between them. Viren was noticing that and he was thinking that this is not the Nivedita he knew' This one is different yet the same. He looked up and saw how near she was and her eyes was a exact reflection of his.