Dastaan-e-Ishq (Index pg 1) note at pg 89 - Page 5

Originally posted by: savera2007

Scene 8:

And he started to walk towards the door when he suddenly stopped. Someone was holding his hand and this time he did not have the courage of going away. He did it so many times after he was caught as the stalker' But this time' He couldn't do it.

Nivedita didn't wanted to let him go and this was the only way to stop him for a while. She knew that if she did not say anything on this level, then he will be gone forever and this moment was to precious to finish so soon.

She decided to walk towards him and stopped when she stood in front of him. His head was bowed and he was looking at the ground. She knew that he was sincere in every sense and now she understood why she did not get her seal of love. It reminded her of a saying that even though the lover is in possession of his or her love, the nobility of the love is that the lover ask its love whether the decrease in the distances are allowed or not. She respected and loved Viren even more in this moment.

She decreased the distances between them. Viren was noticing that and he was thinking that this is not the Nivedita he knew' This one is different yet the same. He looked up and saw how near she was and her eyes was a exact reflection of his.

Abidah you have intoxicated me and only you can take me out of this condition. Loved the last scene to the core. Love is all about giving and that is what Viren is doing.
Bye for now got to go.

I can't move away from my computer, what have you done to me Abidah. I need to go and prepare dinner,so see you hopefully later or tomorrow. I hope you are off tomorrow dear, if not if will be hanging in the middle with so many thoughts running thru our minds.

Scene 9:

Nivedita was about to say something when Viren put his finger on her lips. This moment was the moment he had waited since he had decided to repent. This was the moment where they were going to be united and the separation will come to an end.

He was still looking into her intoxicating eyes, had his finger placed on her lips and he moved towards her. He felt her breathtaking unstable breath, her eyes was revealing the mystry and he was melted to the extend that there was room to go back.

He removed her long beautiful hair from her even more beautiful neck and placed a kiss there. While placing his emphasis on her neck he found his way to her lips. So relaxed was Nivedita in his arms that he was getting more and more passionate. He looked at her and then at her lips. He was once again hesitating, and this was something Nivedita noticed.

She opened her eyes, took his face in her hands and said, I love you from bottom of my heart Mr. Viren Sood. He placed a small kiss on her lips and whispers I love you too Mrs. Nivedita Viren Sood and then kissed her passionately till their breaths was united. He took her in his arms and walked towards the bed. On his way, he assured her that she was the only woman he had loved and she will be only woman he will love til death.

Nivedita took all of his words into herself and was ready to give in regardless of consequences in the future. This night was special for both of them and no one could come between them. None of them was thinking of the future which both had in their respective anger and sorrow had chosen. This was the moment they lived for and this was the moment that was precious.

My Heart is Beating Keeps on Repeating and that too with high rythmn. I have butterflies in my stomach, I have smile on my face. You just made my day very special Abidah. They are just living in their present because past is past and future who knows what it holds.😳 Oh my goodness, I think this moment is printed in my mind. Its so magnificently beautiful. Thank you Once again.

Abidah, brilliant writing. Amazing scenes. Love each scene so much that I can't describe in words.....can't wait to read more.