Dastaan-e-Ishq (Index pg 1) note at pg 89 - Page 2

Scene 4:

Viren was getting restless. He couldn't take the chance of getting Nivedita ill but at the same time, he was fearing the moments after this moment. He was at such stage in love that his own happiness did not meant anything, so he slowly lifts his head from her neck. He can feel a resistance in Nivedita… When he reaches her ears he whispers that u might get a cold… Let's move from here.

Nivedita was not herself today and instead of letting Viren go away from her, even if it was for a second… She quickly turns around, puts her arms around his neck and places her head on the left side of his chest. She was holding him tightly and Viren was shocked… He closes one side of the window and places his arms around her and whispers… I am honoured Mrs. Nivedita Viren Sood…

Listening to his whispers, which was filled with love and sadness, the storm of tears in Niveditas eyes starts to flow. She couldn't control herself any longer and what more could she ask for today… She could cry her pain out with the person whom she loved so dearly… She was listening to his heartbeat and each one of them was crying out to her… Asking her not to leave them. For every heartbeat she listened to, it made her cry more and more.

Viren was walking slowly towards the bed with Nivedita. She was following him physically, but mentally she was somewhere else. He was experiencing this with her. He wanted to get loose of his emotions too, but he didn't because Nivedita needed him. He had almost reached the bed and now he wanted to make her sit...

But Nivedita tightened her arms around him more and more for every time he tried to loose his grip to make her sit. It also inceased Niveditas cry and Viren gave up.

He touched her hair and removed them to one side, so her face was not covered by them any longer. Afterwards he tried to wipe some of the tears from her cheeks and while doing that he ran his fingers over the upper part of her naked back. His touch stopped her tears slowly and her breath became stable. He touched her face again, ran his fingers over her neck and moved them up towards her chin…

WOW I just had a massive smile on my face reading the passionate scenes and you captured their emotions beautifully!

Go on Abidah.we are all ears

WOW!!!!!!!!! I am speechless Abidah. I loved that you linked that feather wish to this particular scene. Oh my gosh girl its so breathtaking to read it.

Abidah, its just mesmerizing. I am visualizing them so clearly and its simply beautiful.

Originally posted by: xaviara

OMG Abidah !!!! What amazing and beautiful scenes !! The way you have explained NivRen's relation, their pain and the passion is exactly how I always wanted the CT's to perceive NivRen and their relationship ! This is the sort of intensity their love track needs !!! Bravo !! Love it !! Can't wait to read the next scene !!! My heartbeat is still racing like anything !! 😳 Thank you hun for these beautiful scenes !! 😳