Originally posted by: Bee222
@pink: YES! This!!! Thank god, I thought I was the only one 😭 That third act breakup came outta nowhere, and then the resolution made it even worse 😭 with how distant he started behaving, I really thought he was having doubts bcz they weren't a Platinum match. I mean, it was his life's work and that incredible score is what made him wanna try in the first place, so knowing that score wasn't actually true was bound to create doubts. I would've found it a more reasonable explanation than him forgetting to reach out to her bcz of his business crisis. I mean, it explained the radio silence but then why did he avoid her hands and act hesitant and all that. What was that for? Maybe FMC was being an unreliable narrator? Anyway, it would've been more meaningful if he admitted that he was having doubts bcz of their score but then he decided to believe in them, more than the numbers.
Honestly, a big part of what makes Christina Lauren books work for me is her writing style. Somehow she manages to suck me in without knowing it, and even if I start out wary she ends up turning me stupid and giggly, and then somehow something happens towards the end that brings me out of that trance. And then I feel kinda dissatisfied but also like I shouldn't feel dissatisfied, bcz the rest of the book was so good? Like for TSE I actually considered giving it a 3.5 but then I truly enjoyed the middle half sm that anything less than 4 instantly felt unfair. Her writing is what does it. She's a trickster 😭
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