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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: ghazal_naz

awwww... soooo sweet ending

well bhaskar's acting was mindblowing😆.... nice idea of getting out from the truble😆....
and i love bharti's dress... she must be looking stuning in that dress😳
and really beautiful the way armaan was telling his feelings😳
and really beautiful
nice part yaar
con soonn😃



thanx girl glad u like my Idea for bhasker ...😆 that's Gr8 u like the outfits god Naley fashion 0% knowledge😆 it was so hard to pick out the dress any ways ....i think it went well 😳
thanx girl
take care
Naley




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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: Armu4eva

Sweetipie........... welcome back dear..🤗 Missed u soo much..!!
n Oh man............a fun filled epi...i luvd Bhaskar faking memory loss act..😆 Bhartis a smart girl.....saw thru her bros act..rightaway..!! 😉
Btw i so totally luvd the ArBi interaction..i luv it when Armu gets naughty...n romantic wit his Jaan 😳 ...i wish they KISS in this epi.. n make this moment even more romantic...
Beautiful epi....absolutely wortht the wait Naley.... 🤗



missed ur lovely comments + u the most 🤗
girl totally agree luv Armu when he is romanticlynaughty Always 😳 soooo glad u like it girl
take care
Naley

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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: BUBLAI

Great part !!! 👏
Bhaskar was awesome ....his acting was superb 😆
loved the way Armaan proposed Bharti ....😊
loved both the dresses 😛
loved reading it a lot ... please continue soon



hey thank u soooo much 🤗 wow I'm so glad u like the part
love hearing from u 😃
i will try my best to continue sooon 😉
take care
Naley

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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: Blueberry_07

First of all replying back to your reply to my comments..😆
WOW i must say Naley girl, you're one heck of a romantic person...!! Wonder who's that sweet, SEXY, HOT, lucky and all the other good qualities in there (just added the impt one like hot and sexy😉😆) boy who's gonna be getting ya...😳 😳...It'll be romance for ya'll 24/7......😳...
That whole quote that you wrote down in the reply..SOOOOOOOO sweeeettttt and SOOOOOOO nice to read...haaiiiii...*vini gone in her dreamland thinking abt it*...😍
Thanks for that..!!.🤗..Plus i think any girl reading it would go "awwwww"....and start dreaming like me..😆
Okay so back to your FF! No worries abt updating late, we know you're busy..But what an update..!! It had humour, those Bhaskar and Bharti bits, had romance..and a fashion show in it.....😆 Naley i LOVE the outfits...Love the male one more..cos it's looks so damn fineeeeee....The colour..and oohh.... Armaan must be looking so very handsome in it..Imagine him with the wet hair look in that outfit, one hand in his pocket..and the other hand holding a champagne glass (since that's being served)........☺️ 😆.........
Bhaskar is hilarious! The way he pretended and all..and i love the bro-sis relationship..very cute..and as much as they fight with each other and all..am sure ther's lotsa of lurveee down there..😳😆
Bharti and Armaan's romance at the rooftop (is it?)....SO wonderful!! Me was excited to read that part...!.😳...Love every single detail abt it...how you described ahem this "running her fingers into the thick hair that curled at the back of his neck"........☺️..yea that's the way girl, i love it..That line is even better than the kiss...😳...Love such minor details...and loved how Armaan said "crazy in love with you..."......and how Bharti ended off with that same line...I say Sweeeeettt!! 😉....
Enjoyed reading this part Naley and do keep them coming in! 😛



Viniiiiii my girl u are soooo sweet yet very crazy 😆 🤗yeah a bout the sexy hot guy ...me still looking continuously☺️😆 24/7 nice one vini😳😆
o girl glad u love the quote & made u go all dreamland for it 😃

girl not dreming u will find him Naley 100% sure he is got your name on him 😳

ok now me coming back to ur reply for my FF 😆

girl I'm so glad you like the part + the outfits yeah me to love armaan's suit more 😳

him with the wet hair look in that outfit, one hand in his pocket..and the other hand holding a champagne glass girl i simply love your imagination 👏😆 we should write a story together 😆😉

ArBi romance yeah rooftop girl u got it....👍🏼 ...girl all my minor details in the FF is just for u 🤗
girl love the end to 😳
me Always have smile on my face when reading ur replies Always thanx a lot girl
take care
luv Always
Naley

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Edited by naley4ever - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: mahnaz_00

Hey Naley
Verrrrrrry cute part dear
Luved every bit of it
Do cont sooooon

TC
Mahnaz😊



Mahnaz hank u soooooooooooooo much girl 🤗
me so glad you loved every bit & soooo happy to
i will continue soon
take care
luv
Naley

Edited by naley4ever - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: kaninikabasuray

Loved it Naley👏
The first Bhaskar Bharti part was funny😆

Armaan Bharti part was sooooo hot☺️ you create such lovely moments and I can imagine how cool both of them looking in those lovely dresses😍

Do continue soon😃



wooooooooow kaninika sooo happy u read it and liked it 🤗
thnax girl for the lovely comments Always it means a lot to me Always
take care
luv
naley

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Posted: 15 years ago

CHANGE

Part 18

Armaan: looking into her eyes there it is ..it scares me a little bit but there it is ...I love you Bharti Khanna and I don't think I can ever stop loving you.. .Armaan sinha is crazy in love with you

Bharti : still speechless ..her eyes widened...wow there it is as her hands made their way clear of his waist and made their way up around his neck as she rose on the tips of her toes ..Armaan slowly lowered his head she closed her eyes and when her lips touched his a deep sense of joy filled her whole being.. kissing him softly running her fingers into the thick hair that curled at the back of his neck for moment Bharti stop gently pulling her lips from his she looked in to his eyes ..I love you to as she stroked his face Bharti khanna is crazy in love with you to ....


They stood there just looking into each others eyes several moments suddenly Armaan broke into dazzling smile reaching to take her two hands in his brought them closer towards his lips and kiss them softly .. Bharti looked down shyly as he came much closer to her caressing her soft cheek bring his hand under her chin lifted it up so that she had to face him their noses almost touching she could feel the warmth of his breath brushing the top of her lip Armaan parting his lips slightly as he leant towards her lips pulling her upper lip softly into his as he kissed her softly ,lovingly their lips were embracing in along kiss sharing they're breathed their souls & their love into each other... '.


In the dinning hall Mr.Khanna was furious of Bharti walking out on him again

Bhasker: chill dad I'm sure she is in the ladies room ..'like we came here so quickly she hardly dint have time to put those pink stuff on her face '...pretty much annoyed with Bharti... try to pay back his sister for saving him in the morning....

Mr.khanna: ok that it ..go find your sister ..right now'.!!

Bhasker: okay.. okay... I'm going as he excused himself and turned around to look to see Bharti walking towards the table ..o there she is'..

Mr.khanna: Bharti what took you so long..?

Bharti: ... ahhh..ahh..i ..was ..was..on a call..dad.. it ..it..was pretty urgent ..telling to her self it was Amazing .. and..and.. I had to..Answer it I'm sorry dad.. as she took her seat..still dazed about the lovely feel she is having ...

Mr.khanna: is ok ...lets have our dinner shall we ...as he notice Armaan coming...Armaan come site here with us ....by the way Armaan where have you been... ? i was finding you allover ...

Armaan: ahh...I..I.. got hang up sir with a very....very.. important client I had to direct my attention..as soon as possible.. smiled giving quick glance to Bharti took a seat near Bhasker..who was opposite to Bharti while every on else was Having dinner ..Armaan just kept on looking at her while Bharti tried her level best not to look at him but she couldn't stop her self looking at him..they just kept on looking and every time someone notice them ..they looked somewhere else or simply act as they were enjoying the dinner.... Armaan was really good at the fake acting more than Bharti....and Bhasker was just simply confuse because of the over consumption of champagne.. ..

while the dinner was over the dining room lights were dimmed as the slow tune music was playing to join the dance floor some gust were already dancing for the soft romantic music which was playing Bhasker was already on the dance floor with Mr.khanna's new secretary and Mr.khanna & his fiancee... joined the dance floor but she was much interested in Armaan & Bharti ....

Mrs.Tiwari: darling have you notice your new engineer ...what his name..

Mr.Khanna: Armaan..

Mrs: Tiwari: yes.. Armaan.. don't you think his..bit to friendly with Bharti..

Mr.Khanna: looking at Bharti and Armaan turns to face his fiancee again...No..No...Bharti is like that she is a very friendly person...and Armaan is very responsible young man I'm sure he knows his limits

Mrs.Tiwari: Darling I'm just saying if i was Bharti's Father I'll be little bit concern considering Bharti's friendly nature she is Beautiful sweet .. and very wealthy young girl sometimes People try to take advantage of it

Mr.khanna:
i know Armaan and i trust him... i trust my daughter even more...

Mrs.Tiwari:
i know darling I'm just trying to protect her....you never know this middle class people..


Mr.Khanna:
dint say anything thinking of what his fiancee said..just made him think more....as he continued dance with her...


in the meantime Armaan took the opportunity to cross over to Bharti who was looking at everyone at the dance floor

Armaan: do you feel brave enough to risk dancing with me gazing down at her with a smile as he reached out his hand to her'..

Bharti: look at him with a smile ..well there's only one way to find out and that's to try as she took his hand' ..whispering have you notice my step mum looking at us all the time.... continued on towards the dance floor ..

Armaan:whispering back yeah she is ...i think she is stalking us ...wow she is scary as he smiles leading Bharti on to the dance floor just be cool ok..and I'm sure the next song will surprise you

Bharti: what..song..? smiles as she moved into Armaan's arms looking in to each other eyes...and suddenly 'the music stopped just then'

Ladies and gentlemen there a request tonight for a very special young lady by a special someone who is truly madly deeply in love with her and Always will be as the song plays '.

Armaan: moved closer to Bharti holding her gently slowly lowered his head as he whispered in to her ear god I love you'...as he turns her round brings her into his arms again....his mouth at her ear ....so do you like the song


Bharti: looked up to meet with his eyes as she whispered back to him..'not as much as I love you 'Armaan sinha'...as their bodies came closely together 'her arms were twined around him and she was gazing up at him with a secret intimate smile as they continue dancing...


Armaan: gazing down at her 'can you remember the surprise I was telling you about

Bharti : yeah'

Armaan: well I can't keep it any more 'I think is time to give it to you

Bharti: really ..where is it..?

Armaan: not here'...as he smiled.. I have to take you to it..

Bharti: where ?

Armaan: you'll find out soon'.shall we as he takes her hand making his way through the crowd ..Bharti was a little nervous of leaving the dinner but she could not stop her heart from saying no ..hurrying through the crowd to make there way outside the Hotel in to Armaan's car

Bharti: Armaan where are we going '?..

Armaan: jaan is surprise '.ok no more questions till we get there... okay

Bharti: No....you know i cant stop talking ...

Armaan: .ssh..... promise me that you wont utter a word ..starting right now...

Bharti: okay.. fine Mr.sinha ... bit mad at Armaan...looking out of the window the drive was quit silent' and finally they Arrived 'near the old house where the new project was happening '

Bharti: Armaan is the new project....okay...'what are we doing here ?

Armaan: 'ok so hears the thing I want you to close your eyes don't open them till I say so okay...

Bharti: No'...

Armaan: yes'........as he came closer and turns her around closing her eyes from his hand taking her along with him' inside the land

Bharti: are we there yet '. whining like small child..

Armaan: just few steps more .. as he takes his hand away'.... ok Open your eyes

Bharti : opens her eyes slowly and was Simply Blown away just Amazed of what she saw .....

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Edited by naley4ever - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
Hmm!!! continue soon sis
and no comments about the part......
I just luved it to bits
Edited by haaki.b - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: haaki.b

Hmm!!! continue soon sis

and no comments about the part......
I just luved it to bits



thank u sweet heart u scared me for second there 😆when i read the no comments bit
glad u luv it to bits ...🤗
take care girl
luv
Naley

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Posted: 15 years ago
An awesome Update as always

Sorry could not comment earlier As Doing someting for a wedding
it's like a party Out here at my house setting Choreography For my Relative/Family Friend's SANGEET
it's a 20 minute song remix
Leave all tht and tell me wassup???

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