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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: Blueberry_07

Naley girl..apart from that mega Kiss mania..(☺️) that was so uberly romantic...making my insides all go mushy..and "AWW"..........that last bit with Mr Khanna, Bhaskar and Bharti was hilarious...!!........🤣 🤣 🤣...

Man i could so picture it happening infront of my eyes...I could imagine Bhaskar having FINALLY climbed over the wall quietly being caught by his father..Gosh imagining it is so funny..his body halfway stuck on the wall..and he's all happy..and then suddenlt his father questions him..asking him what's he doing in that position...........😆 😆 😆.....
Bhasti is so naughty to have make use of that opportunity..and the way she was explaining behind, showing hand movements..Swwwweeett..!!...
Fab stuff., totally enjoyed reading it..and yaar Armu is so sweet.....What a guy....😍...
The words he used...and the feeling of heartbeat...nice nice...actually since you're writing it..so Naley dear..a romantic person huh...😉 😉.......
Loved it..!!...😛..



hey girl love love love reading ur comments it really is full of everything😆🤗
girl i luv ur imagination😆 yeah the position was funny thanx for loving it girl

girl naley Totally mega romantic person 😳😆 + me sure you are one big romantic person to😉 this is for u .....

Find a guy who calls you beautiful instead of hot, who calls you back when you hang up on him, who will lie under the stars and listen to your heartbeat, or will stay awake just to watch you sleep... wait for the boy who kisses your forehead, who wants to show you off to the world when you are in sweats, who holds your hand in front of his friends, who thinks you're just as pretty without makeup on. One who is constantly reminding you of how much he cares and how lucky his is to have you.... The one who turns to his friends and says, 'that's her.'"

take care girl
luv
Naley




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Edited by naley4ever - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
hey guys 🤗I'm sooo sorry for the very long wait is been along busy month soo anyways hear I'm doing my thing with a new up date hope u all like it

CHANGE
Part 17


Bhasker: I ..was..Bird... watching.. ..I ..was....bird watching Yes.. Yes... I was bird watching jumps up in delight that he got the words right ...suddenly he slips falling down the wall ..... .

Mr.Khanna & Bharti: ....Bhaskar... Coming running towards him .....

MrKhanna: son ..are you ok...holding him in his arms..

Bharti: Bhaskar..open your eyes ..please..

Bhaskar: groans...Ooo.. ..my head..I cant feel my legs...am I in heaven...who am. I..?.. keeps on groaning

Mr.khanna: panics.. what...O my god ....Bharti wait here I'll get help leaving her with Bhasker...

Bhasker: who..are...you..? are you a angel..?.

Bharti: ok...bro can you Please cut the fake heaven memory lost act think..dad has gone for help already..

Bhasker: but..but....how did you know..

Bharti: I have seen you fall, jump,slip down this wall many times .. you except me to believe this ...

Bhasker: converting her mouth quickly..ok..ok..you got..me..I stayed out late partying with my friends dint want to catch up with time after the intro of our new step mum ...Bharti ...this is the only way out...please help ..me please....

Bharti: thinking to her self ..if I help him I don't have to answer dad's questions about last night'.o just love to see Bhasker beg..

Bhaskar;.. Please .. Please Bharti....Please..

Bharti: keeps silent for while ...OK.. deal..but you owe me big time

Bhasker: have I ever told you how much I love you...

Bharti: No..... Except when you want to borrow money from me....

Bhasker: okay...then I love you even more ..as he see Mr.khanna coming quickly gets in to his fake act again ...

Mr.Khanna: comes running with all the servants ...

Bharti: with a fake cry dad..his pulse are slowing down..

Mr.Khanna: what!!!!ok...lets take him to hospital..

Bharti :No...No..I meant...

Bhasker: groans ouch.. ouch..No..No..my...pulse are fine ouch.. Is my head...it hurts.. I think I have to rest ...can you take me to my room.. ouch..ouch..my head..

Mr.khanna: don't worry son everything is going to be ok ..as they take Bhasker inside while Bharti followers them..

Bhasker: on the bed ..I'm sorry dad...for climbing the wall..

Mr.Khanna: is ok son.. try not to talk just rest ok ..I'm leaving now .. Bharti I'll talk with you later please take care of your brother...and please don't let him climb any walls ....

Bharti: ok dad.. I'll take care of him ...staring at Bhasker..who is enjoying all the attention and comfort

Mr.Khanna: I almost for got.. I have arranged huge dinner ...some new clients are going to finalize there contacts with us for the new project ... so is going to be a very special dinner for me and your step mum she wanted to get to know the two of you! so.. be ready I don't want to hear any excuses from both of you! be present .. Don't be late.. did I make myself clear....

Bhasker: Yes! Dad totally cleared will be ready don't worry about Bharti..I'll make sure she will be there on time ....


It was Almost 5.30..Bharti was going through her wardrobe finding something to wear .. finally come out looking like this


Bhasker: Bharti..hurry up..we are getting late...is along drive ..god we are so screwed

Bharti comes down quickly ... they left for dinner late as usual .. Bhaker was whining all through the drive for being late ..and finally reached the hotel As they got out of the car and started walking towards the entrance of the hotel .. they were getting closer to the dining hall ..Bharti could hear the faint strains of music the sound of voices the dinner had obviously begun they were among the last to arrive..and the dining room was already crowded..




Bharti: hey where is dad..?

Bhasker: man we are late..ok chill just act as if we where the first to come here ok..bharti..as he looks around grabs a glass of champagne from a waiter who was walking by him smiling with everyone trying blend in at the same time trying to spot his dad..

Bharti: god you are unbelievable ..as she goes to find her dad by herself..although there were a lot of people Bharti dint recognize, she was amazed to see so many People it made her so happy it was all because of Armaan saving the old house for the children and his idea for the new project was working really well ..she was so happy for him and much excited to meet him again..finally she made her way through the crowd to her dad ... Bhasker was already seated with everyone enjoying as she smiled and took a seat near her father trying to ignoring her step mum few mints past her Mobile began to ring as she excuse herself quickly to answer the call..while she was walking outside the hall suddenly she is been grab by the hand and pulled outside the hall way in to the balcony

Bharti came up with a stifled scream as she turn to find her self thoroughly enfolded in Armaan arms ,pressed against his soft white cotton shirt looking very handsome in a formal suit


Holding her in his arms... said nothing for a moment merely stared at her...wow you looked Amazing Bharti..as he stroked a gentle hand across her silky smooth hair to resist it back her ear..staring at every detail of her face

Bharti: stop it Armaan. Stop staring you make me nervous as she smiled looked down and looked in to his eyes again I was finding you allover the place where were you?

Armaan: lost in you...you know what.. they should name agenda after you.. looking at you doesn't do it staring is the only way that makes scenes trying not to blink so that you won't miss a single detail and all of that and you are you ..God you are Beautiful so much so that I cant stop staring at you..

Bharti: said nothing for a moment looking in to his eyes as she smiled..thank you.

Armaan: for what?

Bharti: for making me special...I feel a different person when I'm with you..

Armaan: you are always special to me Bharti always..you are the only reason I'm different..and that difference is the only think that makes my girl the most beautiful the most precious the most wonderful the most sexiest as he smiled and held her closer ..thank you for coming in to my life changing me stroking her hair

Bharti: smiled and when her arms tightened around him to kept her head on his broad chest ...she could hear his heart pounding the feeling was simply wonderful his hands running along her body softly yet very gently

Armaan: I can go on about you forever like I can't stop staring at you even sometimes though I cant help it as he take deep breath ..just like I cant help that I fell in love with you cause I did.. I love you Bharti

Bharti: raised her head slowly ..she was speechless literally struck .. looked in his eyes ..

Armaan: looking into her eyes there it is ..it scares me a little bit but there it is ...I love you Bharti Khanna and I don't think I can ever stop loving you.. .Armaan sinha is crazy in love with you

Bharti : still speechless ..her eyes widened...wow there it is as her hands made their way clear of his waist and made their way up around his neck as she rose on the tips of her toes ..Armaan slowly lowered his head she closed her eyes and when her lips touched his a deep sense of joy filled her whole being.. kissing him softly running her fingers into the thick hair that curled at the back of his neck for moment Bharti stop gently pulling her lips from his she looked in to his eyes ..I love you to as she stroked his face Bharti khanna is crazy in love with you to ....

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Edited by naley4ever - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
Beautiful part Sis!!!!! Loved it very much and I was waiting like hell for ur update:)
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Posted: 15 years ago
awwww... soooo sweet ending
well bhaskar's acting was mindblowing😆.... nice idea of getting out from the truble😆....
and i love bharti's dress... she must be looking stuning in that dress😳
and really beautiful the way armaan was telling his feelings😳
and really beautiful
nice part yaar
con soonn😃
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Posted: 15 years ago
Sweetipie........... welcome back dear..🤗 Missed u soo much..!!
n Oh man............a fun filled epi...i luvd Bhaskar faking memory loss act..😆😆😆😆 Bhartis a smart girl.....saw thru her bros act..rightaway..!! 😉
Btw i so totally luvd the ArBi interaction..i luv it when Armu gets naughty...n romantic wit his Jaan 😳 ...i wish they KISS in this epi.. n make this moment even more romantic...
Beautiful epi....absolutely wortht the wait Naley.... 🤗
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Posted: 15 years ago
Great part !!! 👏
Bhaskar was awesome ....his acting was superb 😆
loved the way Armaan proposed Bharti ....😊
loved both the dresses 😛
loved reading it a lot ... please continue soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
First of all replying back to your reply to my comments..😆
WOW i must say Naley girl, you're one heck of a romantic person...!! Wonder who's that sweet, SEXY, HOT, lucky and all the other good qualities in there (just added the impt one like hot and sexy😉😆) boy who's gonna be getting ya...😳 😳...It'll be romance for ya'll 24/7......😳...
That whole quote that you wrote down in the reply..SOOOOOOOO sweeeettttt and SOOOOOOO nice to read...haaiiiii...*vini gone in her dreamland thinking abt it*...😍
Thanks for that..!!.🤗..Plus i think any girl reading it would go "awwwww"....and start dreaming like me..😆
Okay so back to your FF! No worries abt updating late, we know you're busy..But what an update..!! It had humour, those Bhaskar and Bharti bits, had romance..and a fashion show in it.....😆 Naley i LOVE the outfits...Love the male one more..cos it's looks so damn fineeeeee....The colour..and oohh.... Armaan must be looking so very handsome in it..Imagine him with the wet hair look in that outfit, one hand in his pocket..and the other hand holding a champagne glass (since that's being served)........☺️ 😆.........
Bhaskar is hilarious! The way he pretended and all..and i love the bro-sis relationship..very cute..and as much as they fight with each other and all..am sure ther's lotsa of lurveee down there..😳😆
Bharti and Armaan's romance at the rooftop (is it?)....SO wonderful!! Me was excited to read that part...!.😳...Love every single detail abt it...how you described ahem this "running her fingers into the thick hair that curled at the back of his neck"........☺️..yea that's the way girl, i love it..That line is even better than the kiss...😳...Love such minor details...and loved how Armaan said "crazy in love with you..."......and how Bharti ended off with that same line...I say Sweeeeettt!! 😉....
Enjoyed reading this part Naley and do keep them coming in! 😛
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Posted: 15 years ago
Hey Naley
Verrrrrrry cute part dear
Luved every bit of it
Do cont sooooon

TC
Mahnaz😊

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Posted: 15 years ago
Loved it Naley👏
The first Bhaskar Bharti part was funny😆

Armaan Bharti part was sooooo hot☺️ you create such lovely moments and I can imagine how cool both of them looking in those lovely dresses😍

Do continue soon😃

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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: haaki.b

Beautiful part Sis!!!!! Loved it very much and I was waiting like hell for ur update:)



wow thank u sooo much sweet heart 🤗 glad u loved it girl
take care
naley

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