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Posted: 15 years ago
OMG Naley dear this part is so sweet! Whatever Armaan did to help Bharti and save the Old house..oh i mean old library (😉)..Aww man Bharti is so lucky to get a guy like Armaan! He's so willing to help her all the way! And that plan that he had was amazing!
So thoughtful! Love how he connected the workers to the library and also the children inside..Nicee!! Last but not the least i love this last few lines...Bharti "Better Gorilla"....🤣
Naley girl for a moment i was like "Bharti wants a gorilla? 😕"...and then when i read further i realised what she meant...and haii Armaan said "A"...Okay this has already made me gone to my dreamland....😍..Excited to read how Armaan proposes to Bharti...and that surprise for Bharti..hope she would like it...!
Continue soon girl..!! 😃
Your FF is getting reall good..I love it oh so much! ❤️
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Posted: 15 years ago
sis!!!!1really great part!!!!!!loved Armaan and Bharti's frndship...
do continue soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
very very cute Naley😛
Loving Armaan and ArBi relationship😳
Really Naley, you are a very good writer👏

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Posted: 15 years ago
o woooooooooooooo w guys thank u sooo much once again lovely comments love you guys always 🤗

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take care guys i will do my best updating My FF ASAP for all you Amazing Girls
luv always
Naley

Edited by naley4ever - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago

CHANGE

Part 13

Armaan: No with A ...hey i got to go see you tomorrow o yeah i have surprise for you take care buy as he cuts line quickly

Bharti: Armaan wait wait ..what surprise ....o god what about the house


Next morning Bharkar and Bharti Arrived to Mumbai while Bharkar was flirting with a air hostess Bharti was so annoyed with Armaan for not answering her calls while she was going to the coffee shop someone tapped on her shoulder from behind

Bharti: are you done flirting with air hostess as she turned

Armaan: which one

Bharti: Armaan what are you doing here dragging him to a corner so that Bharkar wont see him

Armaan: like you said flirting with a air hostess

Bharti: stop it yaar you know I'm still annoyed with you as matter of fact I'll not talk with you starting right now

Armaan: okay ...what if I tell you about the old house

Bharti: eyes opened wildly ..O my god please tell me our plan worked.. you were killing me in Goa Armaan I called you like 100times ..I was dead half way

Armaan: smiling at Bharti his arms folded in front of him it worked

Bharti: mouth dropped opened what ..O my god o my god what did you just say

Armaan: it worked Bharti our plan worked we got the old house back

Bharti : what .. O my god it worked O god our planed worked started to jump up and down holding on to Armaan's arms finally she hugging him tightly

Armaan: was surprised he wanted to hug her so badly but he didn't

Bharti: breaking away from the hug, I'm sorry I didn't ..looking in to his eyes

Armaan: is..ok Bharti....it always happens to me smiling at her

Bharti: What?

Armaan: beautiful girls hugging me all the time

Bharti: yeah right hitting him slightly feeling little embarrassed.... Armaan I still cant believe we got the House o gosh the children will be so happy..so is this my surprise O wow Armaan I love love love it so much thank you for helping me going against my dad this means so much to me Armaan o wow we got the house can you believed it we got the house

Armaan: just stood there looking at her jumping up and down for along time ..I'm so glad that you are happy Bharti but is not my surprise for you ...

Bharti: what?

Armaan: yeah ..I knew my plan is going to work anyways pulse you knew it to smiling down at her so I thought why don't I give her better surprise something which you never expected

Bharti: believe me Armaan this like the best surprise ever in my life hopefully my dad dint have a stroke

Armaan: o god you are unbelievable ..actually your dad loved my plan

Bharti: really....

Armaan: yeah ..and his going to have this huge function celebrating Khanna Industries new successes and something about personnel new surprise in his life I'm really not sure

Bharti: o wow this is awesome can't wait ..but I wonder what my dad's new surprise is

Armaan: Bharti come on just don't think about it lets enjoy our day ok

Bharti: ok I wont think about it I promises..god I'm so happy..Armaan thank you again for everything I'm so glad you helped me out thank you so much I'll meet you at the party ok ..by the way please don't flirt with any air hostess on the way out smiling at him

Armaan: I'll keep that in mind and Bharti stop thanking me I'm simply pleased in helping you to get the old house back I'm happy just like you smiling back at her.. I'll see you at the party as he walk away from her..Bharti kept on looking at him till he left the air port and went to find Bharkar

It was almost 8.00 every one was arriving to Mr.khanna's Mansion to celebrate the night the party had obviously begun Bharti was idling around waiting for Armaan looking at the guest the faint strains of music playing , voices, laughter looking at her brother flirting with all the girls ..her dad talking about some construct's with some guest the hall was already crowded except for Armaan finally she saw him coming she stood there just looking at him suddenly occurred to her that this was the first time since she had known him that she hadn't seen him dressed so casually yet very elegant ,watching him now, she had to admit that he was an attractive guy there was a kind of restless coiled energy in him even when he was standing still he could be called handsome his features were too strong his thick dark hair falling in front to a side on to his forehead his well-built strong tall body was amazing his deep liquid shade of dark brown eyes made her to stare at him while his best feature was his smiled always got to her every time and Bharti was suddenly speechless just looking at him just then he crossed over to her side

Armaan: hey hello.. what are you looking at?

Bharti: huh you I..I meant she hesitates ..I.. was... looking.. at .

Armaan: what ? giving her mischief smile

Bharti: Nothing ...do you like fruit punch ..wait here ..I'll get you some going quickly towards fruit punch table

Armaan: smiling looking at her leaving shaking his head

Bharti: telling to her self what in the world is wrong with you girl control your self ..but he looks so hot .. as she pour the punch in to the glass takes deep breath and turns coming towards Armaan ..here you go giving him the glass of punch

Armaan: thanks Bharti you look beautiful today

Bharti: looking in to his eyes for while .. thank you Armaan , you look very.. ...very..very..

Armaan: Different is it

Bharti: telling to her self god you look hot ...yeah ..yeah Different actually it really suits you taking mouth full of Punch witch was apparently mixed with vodka

Armaan: thanks ...so great party Bharti your house is huge

Bharti: yeah I know sometimes I get lost in it smiling at him

Armaan: yeah right smiling back at her ..

Bharti: are you going to tell me about the surprise?

Armaan: If I do that it won't be surprises will it...

Bharti: ok fine I will not ask about it till you give it to me ok

Armaan: you know what you're so cute when you're mad with a chuckle

Bharti: o really ..well it depends on the person who I get mad with

Armaan: I like that .. Smiling back at her

Armaan and Bharti was enjoying the party as well as the other guest Bharti was so happy that she could share her happiness with Armaan ..while the music was playing Mr.Khanna walked in with very Beautiful women who was much younger to him he came up to the center of the hall stop the music he wonted to make announcement

Mr.Khanna: good evening to all of my wonderful gust who has come here to share the success of Khanna Industries as I totaled you before we have finalized the our new project touch of hope pulse is going to be something new everyone starts clapping .... And I have something that I have to share with all of you in last coupled of years life was good very good ..but I was not happy ..but something changed all that something special happened

Bharti: looking at her Father whispering in Armaan ear who is that women with my dad?

Armaan: I have no idea

Mr.khanna : something special happened I met the most wonderful women

Bharti: what ...!!!

Bharkar: was drinking the fruit punch which was mixed with vodka suddenly putting it out like a spray gun

Mr.Khanna: ladies & gentlemen I would like you to meet my Fiance Tisca Tiwari Khanna every once was surprises for while finally they all stared to clap except for Bharti, Armaan and Bharkar who was completely shock

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Edited by naley4ever - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
nice part sis!!!!!!!!!!! eager to know about Armaan's surprise for bharti...and Armaan hot? waah!!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
wow amazin part naley plz do check out my ff i updated also do cont soon xxxxx
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Posted: 15 years ago
Gr8 part Naley.........
Waiting eagerly to know abt Armu's surprise
Cont soooooon

TC
Mahnaz

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Posted: 15 years ago
wow nanhe nice part yaar
well i am so happy to read when bharti hug armaan😳....
and armaan is soo smart saying that girls always hug him😉😆
well bhaskar as always... flirting 😆
well i am really wondring what is the persnol surprise bharti's dad is thinking
hope its good😉
nice part
con soonn😃
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Posted: 15 years ago
Woman you described Armaan so so very well..!! ☺️....That explaining of his dark brown hair, his physique..him being tall....and his smile..Naley if you had added the eyes too...I think i'll go...🤪....Loved that part alot! And loveee this line of Armaan's...His so naughty..
"Beautiful girls hugging me all the time"....
It has TWO meaning..His calling Bharti beautiful AND he is trying to say how girls go after him...😆 Cuuttee!!
Ahah! So finally Bharti is seeing Armaan in a different way! Wonder what surprise Armaan has in store for Bharti, is he gonna propose to her...? 😛...and what? 😲 Bharti's father having a fiance..?😆 Totally shocking, i thought he wanted his daughter to get marrried first..? 😆 Seems like he coudn't wait no longer...he wants to marry first...😆
Going greatt Naley! 👍🏼..Love it girl! :)

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