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naley4ever thumbnail
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: Armu4eva

๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜ Hai ...what an update .....๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜ Mar jawa gud khake!! ๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜

Oh Naley.. u r writing is just too good yaar.. just awesome..!! Luvd the flashback soo much...!! but before that ..the cuteness wit which Bharti wanted Armu to repeat their past ...was just soooo sweet ๐Ÿ˜›
n a Gr8 update yaar ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘ just loved how u hv described ArBis first meet.... just too good...!!
The whole bit of Bharti Khanna vs. Mr. Khanna.. n Armu getting sandwiched... ROCKINGGGGGGGGGGGG ๐Ÿ‘
Luvd it loadssssssss....cant wait to read more of ArBis pyaari mulakat-takrar-ikrar & PYAAR โค๏ธ



THANK U SOOOO MUCH TANU ๐Ÿค—
I'M SO HAPPY THAT U LOVED IT & ENJOYED IT
I LIKE THE Mr.KHANNA & BHARTI ARGUMENT TO
TAKE CARE GIRL
LUV
NALEY

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Posted: 15 years ago
Yay! Yay! Naleyyy we get to hear ArBi's love story!!...Was wondering how ArBi met and voila' i get to know it now!..Am loving the flashback!
But before i get to the flashback bit, let me just say i loveeeee how Armaan reacted when Bharti asked to tell her the story! It was so sweet and yet funny at the same time! He kept on saying "No"..and Bharti said " If we're gona be sleeping in the same room then we hace to find a way to keep ourselves occupied cos i dun want you to be pacing around the room".........๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ˜†..........She is so naughty to have made fun of Armaan!
The flashback, love the arguement that was going on between Bharti and her father..and how Armaan was stuck in between...Those "No"..and "Yes" moments between Bharti and Mr Khaana were hilarious!....๐Ÿคฃ..
Bharti: Yes
Mr Khaana: No
Bharti: Yes
Mr Khaana: No
Bharti: YES, Armaan say YES!
Armaan : Yes, huh what?.........
๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ˜† Too good Naley! ๐Ÿ‘
Though i think i kinda changed it abit..sorry can't rmb what you wrote...but it was smth like this right..? ๐Ÿ˜ƒ
Like how Armaan met Bharti, him getting lost in her eyes...Awwww sweeeettt!! And Armaan worked for Mr Khaana? ๐Ÿ˜ฒ..and who's that Karan huh..? Coming in between ArBi? ๐Ÿ˜ณ ๐Ÿ˜†
Love love love it...and waiting for more!! Want to know Armaan's reaction! ๐Ÿ˜›
Edited by Blueberry_07 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
hey naley : )

Nice FF you got here hun Well written and wellexecuted

I am A Fan!!!!
do Pm me the next update


Love Always
Lekha
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: Blueberry_07

Yay! Yay! Naleyyy we get to hear ArBi's love story!!...Was wondering how ArBi met and voila' i get to know it now!..Am loving the flashback!

But before i get to the flashback bit, let me just say i loveeeee how Armaan reacted when Bharti asked to tell her the story! It was so sweet and yet funny at the same time! He kept on saying "No"..and Bharti said " If we're gona be sleeping in the same room then we hace to find a way to keep ourselves occupied cos i dun want you to be pacing around the room".........๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ˜†..........She is so naughty to have made fun of Armaan!
The flashback, love the arguement that was going on between Bharti and her father..and how Armaan was stuck in between...Those "No"..and "Yes" moments between Bharti and Mr Khaana were hilarious!....๐Ÿคฃ..
Bharti: Yes
Mr Khaana: No
Bharti: Yes
Mr Khaana: No
Bharti: YES, Armaan say YES!
Armaan : Yes, huh what?.........
๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ˜† Too good Naley! ๐Ÿ‘
Though i think i kinda changed it abit..sorry can't rmb what you wrote...but it was smth like this right..? ๐Ÿ˜ƒ
Like how Armaan met Bharti, him getting lost in her eyes...Awwww sweeeettt!! And Armaan worked for Mr Khaana? ๐Ÿ˜ฒ..and who's that Karan huh..? Coming in between ArBi? ๐Ÿ˜ณ ๐Ÿ˜†
Love love love it...and waiting for more!! Want to know Armaan's reaction! ๐Ÿ˜›



Hey Viniiiiiiii thank u soooo much girl๐Ÿค— love the fact that you loved the part and hope u will enjoy they're love story in the coming parts ๐Ÿ˜ณ
Mr.khanna is going to be coming in the coming parts to girl yeah u will find out about Karan
thank u girl soooooooooooooooooo much for your lovely comments it make me feel so good all the time

take care girl
luv
Naley


Edited by naley4ever - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: -Destiny-

hey naley : )

Nice FF you got here hun Well written and wellexecuted

I am A Fan!!!!
do Pm me the next update


Love Always
Lekha



Hey lekha thank you sooo much for reading my FF and liking it ๐Ÿค—
lovely to comment girl i will definitely PM u
thanx again
take care
Naley



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Posted: 15 years ago

CHANGE

Part 11

Mr.khann: ok then Bharti I will make you a deal but under on condition. if you agree to Marry Karan I will stop the project keep the old house only if you agree to Marry Karan glaring at Bharti so do you agree?


Bharti: No I will never agree to Marry Karan

Mr.Khanna: ok then say good bye to the house

Bharti: No.. dad....please..ok.. ok ..I ..I ..Need time to think about it

Mr.khanna: ok I'll give you 3 days

Bharti: 4 days

Mr.khanna : 3days only

Bharti: 5days please.......

MrKhanna: ok 4 days

Bharti: 5 days please ...please...I really need time to think dad especially to make up my mind about karan...please ..dad.....please..

Mr.khanna : ok ..ok..fine I'll give you 5days to make up your mind that's all 5days only to make the right decision to save the old house looking at Bharti firmly ..Armaan can you show my daughter the way out make sure she doesn't come in again

Bharti glared at her dad and at Armaan starts walking towards the door Armaan comes quickly opens the door to let Bharti out while he comes behind her

Bharti: you know you don't have to baby sit me I know the way out

Armaan: well Miss Bharti I must make sure you don't come in again smiles at her as he holds the lift.. after you Miss Bharti ..she stares at him and gets in while he follows her inside the lift.

Bharti : leaned back in one corner of the lift staring at Armaan who was looking at her from the opposite corner

Armaan: Miss Bharti can I tell you something

Bharti: still staring what?

Armaan: the thing what you are doing... trying to save the house ..is really nice I can't imagine person like you who have everything in life doing something like that going against your own dad to save the old house for homeless children.... that's amazing I really respect what you are doing

Bharti: are you sure you work under my dad?

Armaan: yeah I'm sure I'm your dad's employee smiling at her

Bharti: wow .. thank you Armaan ..you know what I don't think I can save the old house..I really want to save it ...I so wanted to save it on my own.. but.. but now I must agree for what my dad says I hate doing that especially when I know his wrong

Armaan: this house can I see it

Bharti: looks at him why?

Armaan: Mr.khanna was telling about the project in the meeting today..I'm really not sure where the location is... I like to see it before the... I meant before Mr.khanna showing it to me I would like see it first by myself

Bharti: okay.. I will come to my previous question again why?

Armaan: giving her along look. Well.. I like to help you

Bharti : eyes widened ... what!! Can you like say that again I think I dint hear you clearly?

Armaan: I like to help you

Bharti: mouth fell open in utter astonishment ....you like to help me ?

Armaan: yes ...but if you don't want my help .....

Bharti: No..No.. I meant Yes ..Yes of course I won't you to help me

Armaan: smiling at her ok then is deal pulse a date

Bharti: is a deal looks at Armaan smiles wait a second a date? as they get of the lift

Armaan: yeah.. you must show me the land! You are going to show me the land right?

Bharti: O the land showing date....yeah .. yeah...of cause I'm going to show you the land ..ok...ok.. I'll pick you up at 5 then

Armaan: ok 5 it is and Miss Bharti ... don't worry will think of something

Bharti: we better think of something or else I be stuck with Karan smiles at him, and Armaan please call me Bharti besides I don't wont my date to call me Miss smiles as she walks away from him

Armaan: smiles wow she is amazing standing still watching her leave

It was almost 5 and Armaan was waiting out side for Bharti ...but she dint show up so he was walking towards the car park while bike horned and stop in front of him

Armaan:Bharti

Bharti: come on we are already late....

Armaan: gets on quickly ... nice bike

Bharti: thanks ..I'm sorry I got late I had to sneak out of the house

Armaan: what?...wow I'm so dead

Bharti: don't worry I'll handle it relax Armaan ....

Bharti was talking all the way while driving Armaan kept listening to her at times accidentally his body touch hers, it was whole new experience for Armaan it felt different only because it's so unfamiliar and in that moment he realize how happy he was with her ... it took them a hour to reach the land

Bharti: so Arman Sinha here we are

Armaan: Bharti the gate is locked

Bharti: I know the gate is lock ... that's why I brought you at this time because no one is here to see us ....

Armaan: wow brilliant idea .. how in the world are we suppose to go in

Bharti: climb up the gate

Armaan: looks at Bharti for while I can't believe you.. Shaking his head ' fine lets climb up the gate

Bharti : cool ...ok me first

Armaan: No..No..please... I'll climb first and then take you.. ok

Bhart: Ok ...Ok ..I'll stay here

Armaan: starts to climbing up the gate goes to the other side of the gate reached out his hand for Bharti .

Bharti: starts climbing up the gate and reached Armans hand slowly coming down the other side of the gate while Armaan was down guiding her to come down slowly but suddenly she lost the grip on the gate she couldn't balance her foot she slip falling on top of Armaan on the ground

Bharti's hair covering Armaans face holing Bharti up against him on his body they're cheeks touching each other Bharti slowly raised her head while Armaan stroked a gentle hand across her smooth silky hair back her ear.. they were gazing into each others eyes a slow grin began to spread cross there face they were both literally helpless with laughter

Bharti: rolled over next to him on the ground looking up still laughing I can't believe I fell on you this is so embarrassing.......

Armaan: no is not embarrassing you slipped

Bharti: yeah ...on you

Armaan: yeah on me... turned his head slightly to look at her smiling

Bharti: turned her head to meet his eyes looking at her ..can you see that star right over there points her finger towards the sky

Armaan: looked up at the sky is that the one pointing his finger

Bharti: right over there she takes his hand pointed it to where the star was exactly.... that's my mum

Amaan: turned his head to look at her again looking at the star

Bharti: she died when I was six,I dint get much time to spend with her I hardly remember but except for one thing the only thing I remember of my mum is, every night we used to look up at sky to find the prettiest stars in the sky just me and my mum we spend hours looking for the prettiest star .. The day she died the sky was all empty except for this one star which was so pretty..I knew it was her looking at me except this time I was alone looking at the most prettiest star which was my mum a tear rolled down from the corner of her eye coursing silently down

Armaan: reached out his hand to wipe her tear

Bharti: suddenly turned her head for the warm touch of Armaan's fingers

Armaan: she is beautiful your mum

Bharti: smiles slightly thank you looking at the star again for a while as she turned back to him .... thank you for catching me not letting me fall

Armaan: don't thank me yet we have to climb the gate again as he smiles at her taking her with him in his arms to stand up right.. You're welcome Bharti ..... so shall we go

Bharti: smiles back .... yeah as they walk in to the old house together


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Hey guys happy 1st Year BB Anniversary loads more to come

take care

luv

naley


Edited by naley4ever - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
wow!!!!!!!!!!!cute epi sis!!!! carry on soon!!!
Edited by haaki.b - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago

Naley honey.. my piped piper of story telling... wow... what a rocking ..ArBi update yaar... oh man...๐Ÿ˜ beautiful...!!

Luvd the ArBi convo in the lift...esp. that bit abt the DATE part..where Bharti gets confused...that Armu is asking her out for a DATE n Armu is talking abt the land visit date.... ๐Ÿ˜†
The next bit is also awesome...their bike ride..that climb over the gate n then..the most...โ˜บ๏ธ bit... of ArBi on top of each other.. n grinning... omg... rocking..๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘
n kash.. aise....hi dono ke beech ..Pyaar ho jae.... btw luvd Armus offer to help Bharti in the land issue... kudos my HE-Man โค๏ธ
Gr8 update.. ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ
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Posted: 15 years ago

Naleyyyyy!!..What a threat for the BB Anniv Bash!! ๐Ÿ˜›

Love it like so much! ArBi moments were way too cute..and that fall..!! The way Armaan held the lift for Bharti..and kept on calling her "Miss Bharti"...Awww so cutee!!

The part when Bharti says "Okay let me repeat my first question again".....๐Ÿ˜†..and also the way she said "Can you say it again"..I liked how she coudn't believe Armaan wants to help her..andd i liked how she also said," Are you really working for my father..? ".....๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ˜†....
Love how she is here, so daring..and the fact that she suggested to climb over the gate....๐Ÿ˜†..I say Cuteeeeee!!...
The part where she talks abt her mom was kinda sad..but Armaan was just so understanding...๐Ÿ˜ณ
Great great update!! Love it!๐Ÿ‘........
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Posted: 15 years ago
Naley
I read ur whole ff from start till now loved it
just roccking yaar love the concept plz do pm when
u update thanks sweets
tc
fiza

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