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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: Armu4eva

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Gorgeous....absolutely gorgeous update Naley....
👏 Luvd it to bits.....!! Fantastic update....esp the part of Armu trying to comfort Bharti....n trying to maker her not hate her dad...!!
The beach part of ArBi was oohhh my goooddd so gorgeous....😛 n totally romance-filled..!! Luvd it..!! n Naley....the end was a clincher wit ArBi coming closer for a 'wat looks like' a PaSSIONATE KISS 😍
👏 FANTASTIC 👏👏




WOOOOOOOOOOW tanu thank u soooooooooo much🤗 for the sweet comments love u girl I'm glad you felt the romance between ArBi 😳 there will be more to come + ArBi ups & downs as well about the kiss just wait for it girl ...me love beach part to 😳
thanx again girl
take care
luv
Naley



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Posted: 15 years ago
OMG😭 how could u 😭 stop it😭😭
i was soooo much lost in the part yaar
well Arbi😍😍😍😍😍
sooooo beautiful yaar
i am loving bharti.... and the way she venished her teanion😳😆
well all the night scean and everything was sooooo awsome
and really well discribed👏👏👏👏
please please let it happnd... u know what i am talking about😉... plzzzzz😃
sorry for late comment
busy with exams
con soonnn😃
Edited by ghazal_naz - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
Naley dear i forgot to read this part of yours..So sorry for late reply..
First of all your comments to my previous comments 😆, man girl am sorry!! I went to read back that part and noticed the eyes part you wrote about...Sweeetttt!!.....His deep brown eyes..Haaii...lovely...😍...Sorry Naley..my bad!.......
Now now back to the current update..My goodness!! Naley i LOVE that picture of the beach.!! Gosh it is SO romantic...and the night sky with the sea...what a lovely setting girl!!
That part where they were pushing each other in the water...and how Armaan pulled Bharti out of the water by her AHEM! Waist....😳...and thennnn how Bharti was shivering..anndddddd that staring moment..andddd both leaning closer to each other...andddddddddddd YOU HAD TO STOP IT?! 😡.............😆 😆 😆
Am kidding girl..I love the ending in this part.makes me wanna read more!! So am eagerly waiting for your next update..!!
I love how Armaan is so supportive of Bharti...So nice of him..Pplus Naley you described his EYE again...haiiiiiiii...plus plus.....you mentioned his hair flying...😳 😆..Sorry i get evry excited with all these teeny weeny details of human features...😆...
I love how Bhaskar was here.."That hot chick"......😆 😆...I won't be surprised if he goes after his step mom..😆...AND I esp love that part where both Bhaskar and Bharti will be like what is this..and Armaan so innocently and cutely answers "LOVE"....and Bhaskar and Bharti answers "MONEY!"...........🤣
Greeaaattt update!! Looking forward to the next part..and am sure i'll be gushing like a cuckoo infront of my laptop screen...☺️
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: ghazal_naz

OMG😭 how could u 😭 stop it😭😭

i was soooo much lost in the part yaar
well Arbi😍
sooooo beautiful yaar
i am loving bharti.... and the way she venished her teanion😳😆
well all the night scean and everything was sooooo awsome
and really well discribed👏
please please let it happnd... u know what i am talking about😉... plzzzzz😃
sorry for late comment
busy with exams
con soonnn😃



hey ghazal ...o i had to stop girl just to make all you People wait for the rest 😆 thank u sooo much for being lost in that part 🤗 thank u girl i do try my best on describing Hot parts😳😆
girl i was thinking of not letting it happened but you wait and find out what will happened 😳

o girl is ok i really like late comments ...girl all the best in your exams🤗

thanx girl
take care
luv
naley


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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: Blueberry_07

Naley dear i forgot to read this part of yours..So sorry for late reply..

First of all your comments to my previous comments 😆, man girl am sorry!! I went to read back that part and noticed the eyes part you wrote about...Sweeetttt!!.....His deep brown eyes..Haaii...lovely...😍...Sorry Naley..my bad!.......
Now now back to the current update..My goodness!! Naley i LOVE that picture of the beach.!! Gosh it is SO romantic...and the night sky with the sea...what a lovely setting girl!!
That part where they were pushing each other in the water...and how Armaan pulled Bharti out of the water by her AHEM! Waist....😳...and thennnn how Bharti was shivering..anndddddd that staring moment..andddd both leaning closer to each other...andddddddddddd YOU HAD TO STOP IT?! 😡.............😆 😆 😆
Am kidding girl..I love the ending in this part.makes me wanna read more!! So am eagerly waiting for your next update..!!
I love how Armaan is so supportive of Bharti...So nice of him..Pplus Naley you described his EYE again...haiiiiiiii...plus plus.....you mentioned his hair flying...😳 😆..Sorry i get evry excited with all these teeny weeny details of human features...😆...
I love how Bhaskar was here.."That hot chick"......😆 😆...I won't be surprised if he goes after his step mom..😆...AND I esp love that part where both Bhaskar and Bharti will be like what is this..and Armaan so innocently and cutely answers "LOVE"....and Bhaskar and Bharti answers "MONEY!"...........🤣
Greeaaattt update!! Looking forward to the next part..and am sure i'll be gushing like a cuckoo infront of my laptop screen...☺️



1st of all girl thank u sooo much loved ur comments 🤗 is ok girl don't say sorry like i said me love late reptiles becoz me always late 😆😃 ok I'm sooo happy that everyone is mad at me for stopping the kiss that rocks😎 😆 girl is to build up ur tension😆😆 ok girl the red under lined part I'll keep that in mind 😳😆 human or hot guys ? ☺️ guys right 😳😆 i knew it 😆Bhaskar will surprised u always😆 the Money part for soo coming out ....... i like that part to 😃
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thank u thank u soooooooooooooooo much ..i will try my best on making u
☺️☺️☺️
thanx again girl
take care
luv u always 🤗
naley



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Edited by naley4ever - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago

CHANGE

PART 15

Armaan: shivering I told you.. smiling down at her starts rubbing his palms on her shoulders to make her warm

Bharti: feeling his warm touch on her looking up at him ..thanks

Armaan: sure.. Stroked a gentle hand across her wet hair to resist it back her ear

Bharti: comes closer to Armaan her eyes meeting with his she reached out her hand to touch his face gently wiping the water touching his lips

Armaan: leaned towards her so that his face was almost touching from hers.. their lips were inches away and getting closer

Bharti: could feel his warm breath on her face the wind blowing his strong slender wet body were just touching hers she could feel the tension building up between them she finally closed her eyes, waiting for his lips

suddenly it began to rain Bharti opened her eyes to look up , Armaan was so close to her their bodies touching each other suddenly she realized that she was about to kiss him ..she moved back and turned to go away from him

Armaan: holds on to her hand stopping her not letting her go gazing at Bharti the rain lashing against them , Armaan.. looking at her closely... rain drop running along her face down her neck on to her dress make it soak the material clinching on to her body reveling her beauty as she turned slowly to face him

Bharti: Armaan.....

Armaan: shh ...Don't say anything .... as he comes closer to her reaching out touch her face slowly bring his hand under her chin lifting in up so that she had to face him Bharti looked in to his eyes the touch of his hand had come like an electric shock to her and as their eyes locked together again ..this time she couldn't move her heart started to pound so hard that her whole body shook... Bharti could feel Armaan's warm breathe on her face once again ..as his hand slipped from her chin to the back of her neck, pulling her gently towards him until their bodies were touching as he slowly bent his head his hair brushing against her check ...he kissed her softly, sweetly, an hidden warmth began to build inside Bharti those warm seeking lips on her felt so good that she was simply unable to resist..she simply reacted ..her lips parted softly under his and when his arms tightened around her..she could feel his heart pounding next to hers ..his mouth still on hers it felt wonderful she clung to him running her fingers in to his wet thick hair sliding in to his neck ...his lips kept on going with hers finally slowing down his mouth left hers and moved slowly across her cheek , Armaan lifted her hair up and Bharti could feel the warmth of his breath in her ear his other hand came to rest at the base of her throat as he began to kiss her cheeks, her forehead, her eyes, her neck, her shoulders Bharti keep on resisting lifting, moving her face but the pleasure of his warmth lips made her wanting more ... her fingers tightly holding on to his strong shoulder moving along on to the back clinching on to his wet shirt tightly and finally he held her face in his palms as he kissed her again harder this time Bharti reacting for every move of his lips with pleasure... as they continued to share the most Amazing first kiss of theirs


Next Morning ....Bharti awakened beside Armaan...her head on Armaan's lap ..Armaan..back against car seat ... gazing down at her running his fingers trough her hair

Bharti: smiled looking into his eyes ...Morning

Armaan: smiling down at her ..Morning ...as they kept on looking at each other

Bharti: took his hand which was interlocked with hers she kissed it softly ..as she notice the time on his wrist watch ....O my god is 9.30 quickly making herself sit up

Armaan: what.... he checked his watch again ..shit!!

Bharti: Armaan..my dad is going to kill me !

Armaan: i think he will kill me first smiles...as he jumps over to the Driving seat from the back giving his hand to Bharti take her to the front seat

Bharti: turns the view mirror to look at her face..gosh... look at my hair making her mess up hair trying to get rid of the sea sand out from her hair...

Armaan..smiling away

Bharti: turn to face him smiling ....what?

Armaan: nothing ....

Bharti: what ...do I look so bad in the morning... what tell me ?

Armaan: you look great Bharti... leaned towards her his face inches away her matter of fact ..I love your hair and your eyes..your cheeks, your ears

Bharti: Mmm.. Really what else .....

Armaan: much closer to her ..your skin...your nose..and I love your lips reaching out his hand his fingers touching her lips gently as his lips come down on her kissing her softly again

Bharti : kissing Armaan ...it felt so good..but she knew she had break a way from his lips now or she be lost in them again...Armaan we cant do this right now

Armaan: we already did smiling away ....

Bharti: smiling shyly

Armaan: ok then I'll kiss you later...smiling away again.. he kisses Bharti's cheek and starts the car

Bharti: was silence all through the drive.... thinking about most Amazing moment they shared last night .the wonderful feeling she having right now with Armaan....she was whole new person with him ..she loved it...

Armaan: wow half an hour still silence ... that's not the Bharti I know ..what are you thinking?

Bharti: about us ..so...what do we call this relationship..? I'm sure we are not friends anymore after that kiss ..looking at Armaan ..trying to control her smile

Armaan: gives quick glance..smiles and looks at the road again..well I'm sure we can figure out a name very soon ...and more kissers like that will definitely give a name

Bharti: smiling more kissers ..Or more kissers from me ....

Armaan: you already know the Answer for that one ..as he takes her hand interlocking with his gently placing a kiss ..Bharti keeps her head on his shoulder as as they drove away ....

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Edited by naley4ever - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
My My Naley......
What hv you done girl??
You gave me goosebumps!!😳
Every single bit of it was written so very beautifully.....
Luved the way you discribed their passionate kiss
Do continue soon dear

TC
Mahnaz😊

Edited by mahnaz_00 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
Naley dear😊

The whole part is soooooooooooo hot😳

I loved the way you described everything😳

Very good writing👏

Can't wait to read more😊

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Posted: 15 years ago
☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️ Hot ....hot ....hot ....hot .......soooo hot!!
☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️
What an epi girl......luv u luv u luvvvvvvvvvvvv u for this 🤗 u hv made my weekend soo special..!! Luvd the update from the bottom of my heart....😳
The ArBi kiss was soo perfectly described...by u...!! Naley.....my mastero of FF writing....luv u to bits...❤️
*Tanu in ArBi heaven.........watching them KISS 😍*
Fab update...👏👏👏👏👏👏
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Posted: 15 years ago

Naley Naley Naleyyyyyyyyyy......😍 😍 😍 😍 😍 😍

Now girl this is the FIRST time i use so many of that "dreamy" emoticon at one go....Hayyeee...😍.... Totally gone in dreamland when i read this part of yours..I read it earlier..and was gushing like crazyyyyy..Woman i had to pause, take in all the parts...and then carry on reading..Wayy too hot to handle..Oucchhhh!!...*burns finger*........😆...i was smiling like a cuckoo...😆....
Loved the way you describe the parts..and Naley girl i LOVE those minor teeny weeny details you put in...The eyes, wet hair, wet body, Armaan's HAIR brushing against Bharti's cheeks, the way he holds her...Gosh every single small details..i lowwweee..!! I told ya i love it esp when someone describes human's features..ahem..
guys features..😳 😳😆...and you did JUST that!!....
I esp loved the last scene, in the car..when he says he wants to kiss her..and eventually they share a moment ..and Bharti HAD to break from it..to prevent herself from getting carried away...Woaahh...Bharti getting lost in Armaan's charms huh...😉...and also my fave line of Armaan was when he said "we already DID that.."......😳😆..Naughty boy!...
Totally worth the wait..cos you made it uber duber super duper romantica..with a capital R...!! ..That's ma girl......!! 😎.......😆
Do update whenever you're free..right now i think all of us are lost in this part..finding it very tough to come out of it...getting back to my dream land......haayyeee...😍......😆

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