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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: Blueberry_07

Naleyyyy, wonderful part as always!! 😊

Was going on so fine and like a romantic feel to it and then suddenly you brought in the tense moment..😲 with Bharti going unconscious!!..
Hahah this is so Naley's Style.😎..Bringing in the intensity of the FF to a notch higher everytime..!!...
The starting part with the convo between Aimeera and Bharti was so sweet..and aww the clip is like a family heirloom...so glad Bharti has the clip on..must have looked really beautiful on her..
Next i love love love the flirtatious Armaan!! My my..him calling himself charming..and then saying he can give Bharti lessons..FOR FREE OF CHARGE...Naughty naughty..!! 😉...and i am loving it..! 😃.....
Then comes that rain falling down scene..and Bharti remembering everything...i mean not everything..but slightly here and there..on their first kiss...Ahh would have loved for that Kiss memory to carry on before Bharti blackout..😳 😳.....😆...But yea i was pretty shocked that she fainted..but glad she's alright...and ArBi spending a night together huh...
Loving it..and continueee....🤗...I want more! 😆



viniiiiiiiii my girl woooooooooow girl thank u sooooooooooo much 🤗
trying my best in the Naley style 😆 i just love to add tense moments 😃
armaan what can i say is always such a joy to make him naughty😳
the KISS will come very soooon I'm sure u will love it
thanx again girl
take care
luv
Naley


Edited by naley4ever - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: kaninikabasuray

awwwwwwwwwww it was so cute😳
loving ARBi sooo much and the moments you are creating...you are a fab writer👏
loved Amieera Bharti convo
please continue soon😊



thanx kaninika sooooooooooooo much 🤗
wow coming from a writer like you thank you girl
take care
luv
Naley

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Posted: 15 years ago


CHANGE

Part 10

Bhart: still in Armaan's arms..Armaan will you stay here with me tonight

Armaan: looks in to Bharti's deep brown eyes finally says ok


Bharti: I'm ok now looking in to his eyes

Armaan: stroked a gentle hand across her smooth wet hair to resist it ....I'm sorry Bharti

Bharti: for what Armaan?

Armaan: for pushing you to remember looks down

Bharti: reached out her hands to hold his face up to face her, listen to me Armaan is not your fault .. I wanted to know the past.. Our love for each other so badly the wonderful man I fell in love with & is not your fault ...I want to know

Armaan: but jaan I can't bear to see you in this condition

Bharti: I know Armaan...but I want to know....please tell me about us how I fell in love with you..... I want to know ....

Armaan: takes deep breath smiles at her I think you should rest Bharti.. After what happened

Bharti: No..Armaan ..I want to know.. Besides if you are going to spend the night with me we must think of way to keep us busy don't we ..I don't wont you to pace around the room all night

Armaan: O God you still haven't changed have you? Still the sweet stubborn girl who never agrees with me

Bharti: well Mr. Perfect are you going to tell me about us...Looking a way from him with a sad pulse angry expression on her face

Armaan: giving her along look.. O jaan please don't do that...Reached out to hold her cheek. Look at me... ok ..ok ...baba I'm sorry I will tell you about us ... please smile... Listen I will tell you about us if you promise you won't fall unconscious again smiling at her trying to connect with her eyes

Bharti: a slow grin began to spread cross her face in to beautiful smile ....I promise cross my heart

Armaan: ok then Mrs. Bharti Sinha let me tell you very romantic love story as he came closer to her sitting up right on the bed leaned back against the pillows

Bharti : romantic interesting smiles at Armaan

Armaan: smiles at her very romantic...he cleared his throat , ok well it all started when I moved to Mumbai to work under your Father as his Apprentice

Bharti :Wow

Armaan: Yeah..Wow..smiling at her again, well..I came for a medial class family we lived in the district of Agra in Bangalore, my father worked very hard to bring me up he saved all his money to give me a good education I worked hard in my studies I always did very well passing with full marks to fulfill my fathers dreams but a few years after my mother's death & Amieera's responsibilities my father couldn't handle everything along .so I made decision to leave university before my last finales I dint tell my father about it ... I had friend who lived in Mumbai he knew I was geek in engineering and I was very good in it ,I asked him for some help but In that time I got a job in a engineering company in Bangalore pay was small but at that time I really needed a job so I could help my father , I send money to my father saying I got a part-time job while I was studding.. I had to lie I just had to help my father who made his entire life revolving only around me

Few months later I got a call form my friend about job in Mumbai it was a huge company , they were looking for there next Apprentice in the engineering division, I really dint keep any hope in the job but my friend he came all the way to Bangalore dragged me to the interview One week later I got a call from Khanna Industries that I got the job ..I was flying at that moment but I knew I had to convince my father first ,so I did.. he was so angry with me at first but like all fathers he loved me for who I had become

So I left to Mumbai for my new job with lot of hopes dreams loads of nervousness but when I reached Khanna Industries the first time I step in it felt as I somehow belong to come to work in the company it felt right that's the first time I meet your father looks at Bharti and smiled to continued the story again

Work was getting bit trying I had to travel a lot some times with your farther and sometimes I spend the whole day in office ,so I moved my Father & sister to Mumbai so I can meet them when ever I had the time but still I enjoyed working learning new things I just loved it

Bharti : So Mr.Sinha in your busy schedule how did you meet me ?

Armaan: similes at her well that's the day my entire schedule changed

It was the end of summer Khanna Industries was busy as usual I finish the project plans with Mr.khanna and was heading out of his Cabin I heard huge argument in the front desk reception on the 3rd floor close by to Mr.Khanna's cabin so me being the helpful guy that I' am I went towards there .. I saw a girl who was arguing with receptionist couldn't see her face because of the staff who was gathered around her but I just had to find out I had see this girls face who was making the center attraction of Khanna Industries so I made my way towards her slowly

Amaan: excuse me Miss is there a problem?. she turn her self to reply but instead found my self gazing into those deep drown depths held me there by some invisible force her long eyelashes swept the high cheek bones.. I could see the smallest details in her deep brown eyes and I was suddenly speechless.. Her expression was dead serious, her eyes slightly widened, as though she was as much at a loss as I was. Then she turned her head to one side smiled quickly and gave me a cool appraising look

Girl: snapping her fingers hello.... Where are you?.. waving her hand in front of Armaan's face bring him back to reality

Armaan : still dazed ... lost in your eyes

Girl: what?

Armaan: faltered .. No...No.. Is just that .. he takes a deep breath..Looks at her again

Girl: I'm here to meet Mr Khanna

Armaan: good.. No... I meant do you have a appointment?

Girl : stared at Armaan No ..I don't think is necessary is he the president of India?

Armaan: well Miss....?

Girl : Bharti

Armaan: well...Miss Bharti he is not the president of India but... I think you will need one or you should wait till you get Appointment

Bharti: leaning closer to Armaan , I think I'm getting a little tired of witting turns around goes behind Armaan runs towards Mr.khanna's Cabin

Armaan: Miss Bharti wait don't go in there running behind her

Bharti: pushers the cabin door goes in

Armaan: comes running goes inside..I'm so sorry sir..I tried to stop her...

Mr. Khanna: but you couldn't ..that always happiness to me with her

Armaan: puzzled as he looks at Mr. Khanna

Mr. Khanna: Armaan I like you to meet my daughter Bharti Khanna

Armaan: eyes widened embarrassed... outstretched his hand in greeting to Bharti

Bharti : I must say you should keep up with girls who runs fast ..smiled and reached out her hand is a pleasure meeting you Mr.....

Armaan: Armaan Sinha ...the pleasure is all mine as they gazes in to each others eyes again for a while and drew a way quickly

Mr.Khanna: Bharti ...what are you doing here?

Bharti: you know why I'm here dad ...that's why you told the receptionist not to let me in

Mr.Khanna: No...

Bhart: yes! .. You know what dad I.. will not stop..till you agree with me

Mr.Khanna: No I won't

Bharti: Yes you will

Mr.khanna: No I won't...Armaan tell her I won't agree

Armaan: confused..what ?

Bhart: yeah Armaan tell him that he will agree with me

Armaan: looking at Bharti and again at Mr.Khanna.. I'm sorry but I don't know what the agreement is about

Mr.Khanna: she is asking me to stop our new project because she wants to keep the old house in the land i wont let her... you listen here young lady I paid good money for that land I will not stop till I put that old house down

Bharti: NO. you will not put down the house! I'll not let you I'll ... I'll go on strike

Mr.Khanna: NO.. you will not do that

Bharti: O..Yes I will..Let me see what will the head lines be Mr.khanna the man without heart breaks down old library of homeless children for non environmental friendly industries

Mr.Khanna: No... you will not do that

Bharti: Yes I will

Mr.Khanna: No

Bharti: Yes..Yes

Mr.Khanna: No

Armaan: ..ek..ek.. second please ok ..Ok..come down Mr.khanna ..Miss Bharti

Mr.Khanna: No I won't come down you never listen to me

Bharti: if you are right I will listen

Mr.Khanna : No

Bharti: Yes

Mr.Khanna: No

Bharti:Yes

Mr.khanna: Ok.. then did you agree with me when I told you to get married to Karan

Bharti: looks at Armaan looks at her father again.. I will never get married to arrogant stupid person like karan... I'm better off getting married to a Gorilla

Armaan: couldn't catch him self from laughing.. Mr.Khanna stared at him ..I'm sorry sir I dint mean to...placing his fingers on his month looking down

Mr.Khanna: ok then Bharti I will make you a deal but under on condition..if you agree to Marry Karan I will stop the project keep the old house only if you agree to Marry Karan ...glaring at Bharti.. so do you agree?



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Edited by naley4ever - 14 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
ArBi love story?
I am so happy😃, you are creating so cute and wonderful moments😊
The first part where Bharti wants to know their love story......toooooo cute😛
And the flashback part, Bharti in the office, is very funny😆
I am eager to know what will Bharti do now.

Yes, Naley you are a very good writer👏
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: kaninikabasuray

ArBi love story?
I am so happy😃, you are creating so cute and wonderful moments😊
The first part where Bharti wants to know their love story......toooooo cute😛
And the flashback part, Bharti in the office, is very funny😆
I am eager to know what will Bharti do now.

Yes, Naley you are a very good writer👏



o wooooooow thank u soooooooooooooo much girl🤗
i just wanted to bring out ArBi love story in my 10th part
I'm sooooo happy you liked it
thanx again kaninika
take care
luv
naley


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Posted: 15 years ago
very cute part Sis!!!!!!!!!!
waiting to read more of Arbi love story!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
wow nice part
i love the way you started the story of how bharti and armaan meet....
and the way armaan was staring at her at the first sight
really nice part
looking forward to know that what sepreated them
hope to know that soon
con sooonnn
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Posted: 15 years ago
😍😍😍 Hai ...what an update .....😍😍😍 Mar jawa gud khake!! 😍😍
Oh Naley.. u r writing is just too good yaar.. just awesome..!! Luvd the flashback soo much...!! but before that ..the cuteness wit which Bharti wanted Armu to repeat their past ...was just soooo sweet 😛
n a Gr8 update yaar 👏👏👏 just loved how u hv described ArBis first meet.... just too good...!!
The whole bit of Bharti Khanna vs. Mr. Khanna.. n Armu getting sandwiched... ROCKINGGGGGGGGGGGG ClapClapClapClap
Luvd it loadssssssss....cant wait to read more of ArBis pyaari mulakat-takrar-ikrar & PYAAR ❤️
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: haaki.b

very cute part Sis!!!!!!!!!!

waiting to read more of Arbi love story!!!!!!!!



THANK U SOOOOOOOO MUCH SWEET HEART 🤗
GLAD U LIKED IT
TAKE CARE
NALEY



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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: ghazal_naz

wow nice part

i love the way you started the story of how bharti and armaan meet....
and the way armaan was staring at her at the first sight
really nice part
looking forward to know that what sepreated them
hope to know that soon
con sooonnn



WOOW THANX GHAZAL SOOO MUCH 🤗
I'LL TRY MY BEST TO CONTINUE SOOON
TAKE CARE
NALEY



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