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Posted: 15 years ago
#61


Thank you Hina😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
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OMG this was awsome hats off tou your imagenation and creation
love it
so she was no bharti but thanks good armaan realise his love for her 😳
and armaan got his wife and his son😊
febulas
loved it
do come up with ideas like this
its good
short but good😃
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Posted: 15 years ago
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PART 2:
What perfect songs are added in, the lyrics are very apt and describe what Armaan must have been feeling very well....So terrible to see that he is so lost and broken without her.
I got so excited when he saw the girl that was Bharti, but then he lost her. I was so glad when he found her yet again, but the whole thing of getting her married was quite unexpected. Very relieved that Armaan could stop it and that he got married to her with the conventional wedding, but I was so worried to see that Bharti was looking so scared of Armaan, I was worried that she will resent him.
Loved that she atleast realised that Armaan won't hurt her and she started behaving like the ideal 'bahu", but very sad that Armaan feels alone even though Bharti is with him...
One thing I've noticed is that Armaan in all our FF's is quite close to being the perfect guy, though he has flaws, one thing that is common in all the FF's is how much he loves Bharti. I can really feel how much he loves her by all that he is doing for her to make her remember.
But what a twist!! She can't speak! That was extremely unexpected and must be tough on Armaan. No wonder he got so drunk, but I can't believe he forcefully kissed her, she may be even more scared of her...Really looking foward to the next part...will read and comment
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Thanks a lot divaa, mahnaz, Nikita, gauranitai😃


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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: ghazal_naz

OMG this was awsome hats off tou your imagenation and creation

love it
so she was no bharti but thanks good armaan realise his love for her 😳
and armaan got his wife and his son😊
febulas
loved it
do come up with ideas like this
its good
short but good😃



awwww Gazal😃 Thanks for your lovely comments😳
You loved it? I am so happy😃
Yes, I will write these type of short stories again😊
Thanks🤗

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Posted: 15 years ago
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👏 loved it so much and nice endin, ur really gd at makin shorts ff;s, make more ssssoooooooon plz u should seriously be a creative head
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: *Sohana*Singh*

PART 2:

What perfect songs are added in, the lyrics are very apt and describe what Armaan must have been feeling very well....So terrible to see that he is so lost and broken without her.

Loved to know that you liked the songs😊
I got so excited when he saw the girl that was Bharti, but then he lost her. I was so glad when he found her yet again, but the whole thing of getting her married was quite unexpected. Very relieved that Armaan could stop it and that he got married to her with the conventional wedding, but I was so worried to see that Bharti was looking so scared of Armaan, I was worried that she will resent him.

Thanks😊
Loved that she atleast realised that Armaan won't hurt her and she started behaving like the ideal 'bahu", but very sad that Armaan feels alone even though Bharti is with him...

Yes, this part was very sad😭
One thing I've noticed is that Armaan in all our FF's is quite close to being the perfect guy, though he has flaws, one thing that is common in all the FF's is how much he loves Bharti. I can really feel how much he loves her by all that he is doing for her to make her remember.

Yes, Armaan is our darling. The credit goes to BB creatives, they made such a lovely character. Hats off to our FF writers as well👏

But what a twist!! She can't speak! That was extremely unexpected and must be tough on Armaan. No wonder he got so drunk, but I can't believe he forcefully kissed her, she may be even more scared of her...Really looking foward to the next part...will read and comment

Armaan was really in a very bad condition😭

Thanks🤗

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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: BlessedSexyone

👏 loved it so much and nice endin, ur really gd at makin shorts ff;s, make more ssssoooooooon plz u should seriously be a creative head



Immu Bhaiya, you made my day😳
Thanks🤗

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Posted: 15 years ago
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WOW kaninika outstanding girl WOW the end was perfect they hv a son how sweeeet !!! i always imagine in BB that Arbi will hv a son
& you made my wish come true in ur FF thanx girl
LOVED LOVED LOVED IT SOOOOOOOOOOO MUCH
U ROX GIRL
take care
naley

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Posted: 15 years ago
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Yeah.....it was filmy......But it was awwwwwwwwwweeesome...⭐️⭐️⭐️
Verrrrrrry well described........I liked every bit of it........
Hatsoff.........
Do write more


TC
Mahnaz😊

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