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Zoya

@-Zoya-

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+ 4

Posted: 15 years ago

#71

Awesome part Di...
Loved it completely...
The way you ended the FF was fantabulous...
Waise there is a prize for you for writing such beautiful FF...
Go check BB creation gallery....

Take Care
Zoya

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Lekha Ishwar

@-Destiny-

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+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#72

Touching hai jii BEhad touching

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Arpita Sarkar

@BUBLAI

Voyager

Posted: 15 years ago

#73

loved the ending completely ....😛 the songs are absolutely apt for the situations ...

the twist with the 6 months old letter was quite unexpecting ... liked the entire idea ...

loved reading it a lot ...

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ShiningStar18

@ShiningStar18

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Posted: 15 years ago

#74

Its absolutely awesome...👏👏

Its such a cute and sweet love story...

Thanks a lot for writing it Kanu api...😊

Would love to read more from you...😊

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tanu

@Armu4eva

Moderator

+ 14

Posted: 15 years ago

#75

OMG.. another intense epi.. yaar..!! Gosh i was so much in knots to figure out.. whether.. the Bharti wit Armu.. is the original one.. n then got to knw abt Raksha.. then ..Raksha becoming.. Bharti.. n then Bharti becoming Ragini.. .phew...

Gr8 epi kanu.. luvd it..!! The Suhag raat bit.. made my heart flutter..n skip a few beats..😳

I was so so sad to find out abt Bharti dying.. n Armu.. leaving Raksha @ the hostel.. 😭

But very very happy abt the fact that Armu realised that he now luvs Raksha.. n goes in search of her.. n finds her n his KID (Wow girl u get pappis for this.. *muahs* coz ArBi havng a baby is the bestest thing..) ... 😍❤️

Hv to say. .kanu.. ur truly a mind blowing..multi faceted n amazing Creative.. 👏

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Shabnam

@Dew-drop

Trailblazer

+ 4

Posted: 15 years ago

#76

Oh such a beautiful ending Stormy ..
Arbi hav a kid ...hw sweet ....!😃

u should really write more one shots Stormy ...
ur really very talented ..!👏👏

P.s : Plzz write one OS 4 TaSha ...!😳

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Vinitha

@Blueberry_07

Sparkler

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Posted: 15 years ago

#77

Wow thats alot of emotions thrown in in the last part..!!

Gotta agree with Tanu i too was trying hard to follow up and see who this Bharti really is..Whether it was Bharti the real Bharti or Raksha or Ragini.?...

😆

Really loved the way you ended this part..! Very beautiful ending and i love that hug, A big Family hug!

I too felt sad that the real Bharti died....😭 I like the starting part where the two of them were fighting over when to get married..and how they got married eventually, walking around the snow....Sooo sad that his real Bharti died..:( BUT having said that i still like Raksha..She's a nice girl..

As for Armaan leaving Raksha at the NGO Hostel..Well can't blame him actually, to find out that the person you thought was alive is actually dead..That's very harsh!..Plus he didn't know abt the child yet..

Kanu this full three parts were very fun to read..!

You got me hooked onto it cos i was curious to find out what happened eventually..

Do make more of these mini FFs..!

It's great fun to read! and You're exceptionally good at it!..👏.........😊

As for me figuring out that she wasn't his real Bharti..Well i don't know i just felt it somehow..You didn't give any clues in your previous part..I just was reading it yst and somehow i felt like that wasn't his own Bharti..

Maybe because you had another part to add today, so there has to be climax..

It it was the real Bharti then you woudn't have a third part..So maybe that could be the reason..?....🤔....😆

PS: Love the filmy part...😆 😆

The paper flying in the air? Wah, kya baat hai!..I can imagine it, having watched a few Ekta shows...😆 and yes love the added VMs inside.Great VMs you made! Love both of them much much..! ❤️