I'll be there for you Final part page 8

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Posted: 15 years ago
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I'll be there for you


Characters: Armaan - A busynessman



Bharti



Index:


Part 1...............pg 1

Part 2...............pg 4

Part 3...............pg 8



Part 1

Armaan: Tum kaho to abhi chalte hai, paas mein hi ek mata rani ke mandir hai๐Ÿ˜‰


Bharti: I am serious. OK? Its almost three years, aur tum apne kaam ke bahane de kar hamare shaadi ko postponed karte ja rahe ho.๐Ÿ˜’


Armaan: Does it really matter? We love each other๐Ÿ˜ณ, isn't that enough? Waise tum janti ho main apna project leke kitna busy hun.๐Ÿ˜”


Bharti: ha pata hai, yahan pe bhi tum apna project ke kaam ke liye hi to aye ho ๐Ÿ˜กmain yahan is liye a payi kyunki mujhe tumhari assistant banne ka kaam jo mila hai (she looked annoyed).๐Ÿ˜’


Armaan coming closer to her and giving a mischievous look "tum janti ho ke main tumhe yahan sirf apni assistant ki hasiyat se nahi laya" ๐Ÿ˜‰and he lifted her up into his arms.๐Ÿ˜ณ


Bharti: kya kar rahe ho? mujhe kahan le ja rahe ho?๐Ÿ˜ฒ


Armaan carried her to a place which looked like this:


Bharti was confused.๐Ÿ˜•


Armaan: don't you think it's the best place to do it?


Bharti: par....par..... it's a tourist place, yahan pe koi bhi a sakta hai (she was afraid).



Armaan: kyun? Humlog kuchh galat to nahi kar rahe hai na?



Armaan gently placed her on the snow. He came closer to her, Bharti closed her eyes, she was very very nervous.โ˜บ๏ธ When she opened her eyes she saw Armaan was not there.๐Ÿ˜ฒ Suddenly she noticed Armaan making a snowman with the snow.


Armaan: come here, isn't it cute?๐Ÿ˜›


Bharti: ya, very cute. She was confused.๐Ÿ˜•


Armaan took Bharti's hand into his hand and said: come with me, this is OK I think. ๐Ÿ˜ŠBharti looked at him, still confused.๐Ÿ˜•


Armaan: Agni ko sakshi manke to bohut log shaadi karte hai, kyun na ham barf ko sakshi mane?๐Ÿ˜ณ Yeh bhi nature ka gift hi to hai.๐Ÿ˜ƒ


Bharti was so happy. She couldn't tell anything.๐Ÿ˜ƒ They completed the first round.๐Ÿ˜Š


Armaan: This is for our first day together; we didn't notice each other on that day, it was a India-Australia cricket match, but you were there in the stadium among the 70,000 audiences and I was also there.๐Ÿ˜ณ


They completed the second round: This is for the day when I first saw you. I still remember, it was raining heavily and you were enjoying eating your favorite Cornetto ice-cream, you were totally drenched but you were totally ignoring it.๐Ÿ˜ณ



They completed the third round: This is for the first day we met. Though it was a boring meeting for you as you joined as my assistant and I was quite boring as a boss. But I still remember, for me it was "love at 2nd site".๐Ÿ˜ณ



Bharti was totally surprised.๐Ÿ˜ฒ She never knew Armaan remembered all those things. โ˜บ๏ธShe has always seen him very busy in his work.


They completed the fourth round. Armaan: This is for the day you first noticed that I am not so boring, and you invited me to attend your dance function.๐Ÿ˜ณ


They completed 5th round: This is for the day when you spent the night in the office with me, when we were struck in the office. We shared everything about each other. Some thing magical happened on that day, I couldn't understand what it was, but I know we couldn't stop sharing glances at each other. You looked magical in that candle light.๐Ÿ˜ณ


Bharti was listening to all this, may be this is the heaven. She will never regret if it's her last day of life.๐Ÿ˜ณ


They completed the 6th round. Armaan: This is for the day you said you love me. I was such a shy guy at that time, I don't think so I would ever ask you first. Thanks for giving your heart to me.๐Ÿ˜ณ



They completed the 7th round. Armaan: This is for the....oh, sorry, main hi sab kuch bolta ja raha hun, ab tum kuchh kaho.


Bharti was not able to say anything, tears running down her cheeks.๐Ÿ˜ณ


Armaan wiped her tears and said : kuchh kaho


Bharti: I love you Armaan,๐Ÿ˜ณ you are my life. Main hamesha tumhari zindagi mein aise hi khushiya lati rahungi.๐Ÿ˜ƒ



Armaan: I love you too Bharti, main humesha tumhare saath rahunga. He took some snow in his hands and applied them to Bharti's forhead (as one does with Sindoor).

๐Ÿ˜ณ


And they hugged each other.๐Ÿ˜ƒ

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Armaan lifted Bharti into his arms and headed towards his car. They were feeling so happy. They were not talking with each other; they just kept glancing at each other.๐Ÿ˜ณ


Suddenly a huge lorry came from the back and collided with the car. ๐ŸคขActually the lorry had a break fell. Armaan couldn't control the steering;๐Ÿ˜’ the car fell down into the gorge.๐Ÿ˜ฒ


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Armaan opened his eyes. He was lying on a bed. A person was standing beside the bed.


The man: aap abh kaise feel kar rahe hai? aap thik ho?


Armaan tried to sit : main kahan hun? Suddenly he realized he couldn't see Bharti.๐Ÿ˜”


Armaan: Bharti, Bharti kahan hai?


The man: kaun Bharti? Aapke car accident hua tha, kuchh logon ne aapko accident ki jaga se yahan leke aya. Aap tab behosh the.


Armaan: lekin Bharti kahan hai? mere saath ek larki bhi thi na?๐Ÿค”


The man: nahi, unlogo ko wahan sirf aap hi mile.


Armaan was shocked. ๐Ÿ˜ฒHe tried to get up from the bed in hurry. The man stopped him.

"rukie rukie, aap abhi bimar hai"


Armaan: I don't care, mujhe Bharti ko dhundna hai. He thanked that person and went out to look for Bharti. He was quite injured, but he had no option.๐Ÿ˜’


He searched for Bharti everywhere, he asked everybody, he went to police station, he went to the accident area, but everything was in vein. ๐Ÿ˜”Armaan called Bharti's home.

Armaan: Hi uncle, main Armaan bol raha hun, Bharti...


Bharti's father: Hello beta, tumlog kab wapas a rahe ho? mujhe apni Bharti ki bohut chinta hoti hai.๐Ÿ˜”


Armaan understood uncle didn't know about Bharti.๐Ÿ˜”

Armaan: wo thik hai uncle, hum jaldi hi wapas ayenge.


Armaan was totally shattered. He went to the place where they married each other. Now the snowman is not there, but the place is equally beautiful, only Bharti is not with him.๐Ÿ˜’


"Bharti tum kahan ho? you know I can't live without you. tum ne hi kaha tha ke tum hamesha meri zindagi mein khushiya lati rahogi. You promised me."


He looked up into the sky and started crying.๐Ÿ˜ญ

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P.S. : No, its not the end, it can't be. I thought I will write a one shot but it was quite long. So I thought I will post it in two or three parts. Please do read and tell me whether you like to read the continuation. Its not a running FF,so I will not bore you๐Ÿ˜†


BTW the pic is from Kufri, a place near Shimla, India I went here few days back, I have taken this pic myself.๐Ÿ˜ƒ

Edited by kaninikabasuray - 15 years ago

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Posted: 15 years ago
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hey kanu di..nice story..
Bharti was so pissed with him since he didn't ever give time for her!..then he took her to such a beautiful place..
he made a snowman, and they circled around it..she said she loves him..n they got married..lol..
they were going back by car when he met with an accident..aww..n when he woke up he couldn't find her..he searched everywhere but she was nowhere..aww thats sad..
thnx 4 d PM
update soon
-aish
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: aish_punk

hey kanu di..nice story..

Bharti was so pissed with him since he didn't ever give time for her!..then he took her to such a beautiful place..
he made a snowman, and they circled around it..she said she loves him..n they got married..lol..
they were going back by car when he met with an accident..aww..n when he woke up he couldn't find her..he searched everywhere but she was nowhere..aww thats sad..
thnx 4 d PM
update soon
-aish



Thanks a lot Aish๐Ÿค—
I am glad that you liked it๐Ÿ˜ณ
Ya, will update tomorrow๐Ÿ˜ƒ

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Posted: 15 years ago
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OMG!! ........๐Ÿ˜†

Kanu this is so exciting!!..
Pls post the next parts soon...!..
BTW me abit confused with this line...๐Ÿค”.......๐Ÿ˜†
As in what was Armaan's intention at first by saying that..
"Bharti was confused...๐Ÿ˜•
Armaan: don't you think it's the best place to do it?
Bharti: par....par..... it's a tourist place, yahan pe koi bhi a sakta hai (she was afraid)"
So Bharti thought it was smth else he meant and she closes her eyes but when she opens her eyes she sees Armaan with the Snowman...๐Ÿ˜† Naughty Armu!..
I actually like this mischievous side of Armu..! So cute! And the fact that they walked around the snowman to complete the rites/ 7 Pheras..was just SO SO VERY Sweet!! And to top it off Armu explaining what each round meant to him ..Uberly sweet!!..Gosh i love the WHOLE part!!...
But how sad now Bharti is missing and to think they got into an accident straight away after their wedding..?....๐Ÿ˜ญ
Update the next part soon!!..Me want to know what happens!..:(
PS: Forgot too add..Lovely pict man!!..The place looks beautiful.!
Edited by Blueberry_07 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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๐Ÿ‘ very nice, am lovin it but i was a bit worried when Armaan placed Bharti in the snow๐Ÿ˜† i was thinkin ufff ho a hot hot hot scene to melt the snow away๐Ÿ˜†
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Posted: 15 years ago
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OMG I came to the BB forum after such a long time and I just got a beautiful gift..๐Ÿ˜Š
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Its awesome Kanu api...๐Ÿ‘
I loved the pheras wala scene...
Armaan is such a character who will always be loved...๐Ÿ˜ณ
Please don't kill Bharti and continue soon...๐Ÿ˜Š
Take Care
Wafa
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Posted: 15 years ago
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REserved
Bio paper...
Preparing for it...

*EDITED*
That was awesome Di....
Loved the way Armaan took Bharti to the snows and married her making snow sakshi....
I loved this side of Armaan...
The scene was really cute romantic and naughty also....๐Ÿ˜‰
I mean these girls na...
Always think something AHEM AHEM!!!!๐Ÿ˜ณ
Then soon after you showed the accident...
I was so sad and mad as I thought that it was the end....
But then I looked carefully (By taking ma glasses from ma nose upto ma eyes๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†) And realized that it was not the end....
More parts are coming....
Okay now....
Yeh update hogayi...
Its time for the next one....
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Take Care
Zoya


Edited by Zoya_01 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Please continue soon ..... I really want to know what happened to Bharti ........
loved reading this a lot .... liked the idea of getting married by making the snowman the witness of it ... the idea is quite unique indeed ...
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Gr8 OS Stormy ...!๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘
Liked it very much ...
Continue soon ...i wanna knw wat happened to Bharti ..!

The place in the pix is beautiful ....U lucky girl u went there ..!
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Aha..BARF SAKSHI marriage.. hmm... hmm.. u knw what kanu.. a Friend of mine too had a Barf Sakshi Marriage a couple of days back.. ๐Ÿ˜‰ what a coincidence ๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜† But it so so romantic.. yaar!! ๐Ÿ˜
Wow yaar.. rocking part.. luvd it.. ๐Ÿค— Fantastic epi.. n well it was quite Fast paced as well..!!
N ur ending has left my BP .. at an all time High level. .m so so worried for Bharti.. God pls. let her be safe.. ๐Ÿ˜›
Truly wonderful part yaar.. u rock.. !! ๐Ÿ˜‰

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