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Posted: 15 years ago
#51

Originally posted by: Dew-drop

wah kya update hai..!👏
I waz kinda sad & also felt like laughing at the same time ...!
I too agree wid Zoya ..thoda filmi tha ..
😆
but i liked it ...😃
At least bharti to mili ..ab Armaan uski memory kaise layega ..I wanna read dat ...!
So continue soon ...!😉




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Yes, the whole FF is quite filmy, I like to write filmy things because they are funny😆
Edited by kaninikabasuray - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#52

Originally posted by: naley4ever

wow excellent part girl totally unique girl !!! 🤗
Wow bharti cant remember 😭
Wow poor armaan man like he fund her but she cant remember him that hurts a lot !!!! please continue sooooooooooooooooon girl
take care
naley
Ps :Vm was beautiful love the song to Gr8 work



Thanks a lot Naley for liking this part😳
I know its sad, Me too felt bad for them😭

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Posted: 15 years ago
#53

Originally posted by: BUBLAI

Great part di 👏 but I didn't like the fact that Armaan was forcing himself on her😒

loved the way Armaan agreed to marry her again 😛
It's very sad that Bharti lost her memory and also her voice --- feeling really bad for her😭
please continue soon



Thank you Arpita😳
Sorry this part was really serious. I know Armaan wouldn't have done that. But his mental condition forced him to do that😒

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Posted: 15 years ago
#54
I'll be there for you

Final Part

Bharti was so scared that she almost fainted.😔 Suddenly Armaan realized what he was doing. How can he hurt Bharti?😒 It's not her fault, she can't remember anything and in addition she can't talk. It's all his fault. 😔He should have driven the car carefully. He moved away from Bharti, he sat down in front of Bharti and started crying "mujhe maaf kar do Bharti".😭


Bharti didn't know what to do. She moved back, rested her back on the wall and she too started crying.😭


Bharti (thinking) : Mujhe maaf kar do Armaan, don't be sorry. Mujhe pata hai tum kitni koshish kar rahe ho mujhe sabkuchh yaad dilane ki. Lekin kya karoo mujhe kuchh bhi yaad nahi ata. Main tumhari halat samajh sakti hun. Tumhari patni bhul gayi hai tumhe, tumhare pyar ko. Main tumhari patni hun, mere upar tumhara pura haq banta hai, lekin main hun ke tumhe chhune tak nahi deti.😭


It was 4'O clock in the morning. Now Armaan was sitting on his bed. Bharti was still standing.


Kyon! hai yeh khamoshiyan
Jaane kyon tehri hai hai zubaan
Jaane kya hogaya
Mausam bhi hai naya
Sukhi zameen
Bheega hai aasmaan


Kyun hai yeh khamoshiya-Armaan Bharti

(An ArBi VM I have made specially for this FF)


Bharti (thinking): Mujhe kuchh yaad nahi hai, mujhe pata nahi ke main abhi tumhe pyar karti hun ya nahi, lekin mujhe pata hai ke main tumhe aisi halat mein nahi dekh sakti.😒 Shayad humara rishta abhi pati patni ka nahi hai, lekin ek ajeeb sa rishta ban chukka hai humdono ke beech, kya yeh pyar hai? 😕pata nahi kya naam dun is rishte ka.😕


She slowly moved towards Armaan and put her hand on his shoulder. He looked up. He could see she was crying, he could see love in her eyes. He hugged her tightly.😭


Bahoon Main De Bas Jaane
Sine Main De Chhup Jaane
Tujh Bin Main Jaaun to Kaha????


It had to happen long time back, but it was their destiny. They had their Suhag Raat at 4'O clock in the morning.😳


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Several days passed. Though Bharti couldn't remember anything but it really didn't matter to Armaan or Bharti.😊 Now Bharti could talk with Armaan, no, she still can't speak but she used "paper chits" to express her feelings. 😊Still their relationship is not "love" but you can name it "something more than a friendship".😳


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One day when Armaan was working in his office he got a letter from very old files.

"Mujhe maaf kardo Armaan, maine barf ko sakshi manke wada kiya tha 'mein humashe tumhari life mein aisi hi khushiya lati rahungi', lekin abh main yeh pura nahi kar sakti. lekin yeh baat humesha yaad rakhna "I love you more than anything".

Bharti


(though the handwriting was not good, the letters were fuzzy, but he could identify Bharti's hand writing)😲


The letter was from a village, Armaan never heard the name. Along with it there was another letter from a person in which it was written that he got a very injured girl lying at the road side. She was almost dying. He tried to save her, but she died. She left the letter with him; she gave the address as well. The letter was 6 months old.😒


He called the Panditji, who got this new Bharti and asked him when did he got Bharti, he told him the date, it was 10 days before the accident.😒


Armaan was totally devastated.🥺


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When Armaan came back home Bharti noticed that Armaan was ignoring her. 😕He seemed to be very upset. She asked him and he said it was due to work load. But finally Bharti came to know about the truth when Armaan was telling everything to Bharti's dad, she heard everything and Armaan didn't notice that Bharti was there. Bharti was shocked. Suddenly Armaan noticed that Bharti was there. He sat down on a chair looking down towards the ground.😔


Bharti felt very bad for Armaan, she understood how Armaan was feeling;😭 he lost her beloved wife. She went near Armaan and put her hand on his hand. Armaan pulled his hand away. 😲Bhart was shocked. She understood "main Bharti nahi hun, main Armaan ki Bharti nahi hun"😭


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Some more days passed. Now Armaan and Bharti stay together but they don't talk with each other. 😒


Humne Socha nahi tha
Aaasun mein doobega Lamha khushi ka
Kaise yeh silsile hain
Hain pass phir bhi bahaut faslein hain

Kyon hain yeh tanhaiyan
Jane kyon suna sa hai jahan
Din jaise raat hai
Jaane kya baat hai
Rootha hua hai humse yeh sama

Jo phele thi abb woh nahi hai hawaaien
Kya ho gaya Hai yeh kaise bataein


One day Armaan came back from his office and asked Bharti to pack her bags. Bharti was confused.😕


Armaan: Bharti......I mean Raksha, humlog aise nahi reh sakte. I have already ruined my life. I can't ruin your life. Main ek NGO se baat kii hai, you can stay in the hostel, you can work for the NGO, you can lead your own life.


Bharti was shocked.😲 But she didn't tell anything. 😔She packed her bag and followed Armaan to the NGO. Armaan introduced Bharti with the head of the NGO. The lady welcomed Bharti, she seemed nice.


Armaan: I hope tum yahan thikthak rahogi. Devorce papers kuchhi dino mein a jayega, main tumhe bhej dunga.


Bharti still didn't tell anything. She watched Armaan going, tears ran down her cheeks.😭


(Now a very filmy scene)


We could see Bharti holding a scrambled paper in her hand. She drops it. The paper flies along with the wind. We could see it is the pregnancy report which states "positive". 😲Bharti thought she would tell this to Armaan but before she could tell anything Armaan brought her here.😒


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After two years:


Now Armaan is always busy in his work. Actually he feels very lonely so he spends most of his time in office. He thinks of Bharti, the moments he spent with her.

But he also thinks about Raksha. He feels her absence in his house. When she was there Armaan never noticed her, but now nobody cooks for him, nobody makes his bed, nobody arranges his clothes, nobody gives him coffee when he is tired. 😒

But Armaan tries to ignore it. He tries to remember the "beautiful moments" he spent with Bharti. Thoughts of Bharti brings smile in his face. 😊He imagines Bharti is with her (as Shahid did in Jab We Met)

Na Hai Yeh Pana
Na Khona Hi Hai
Tera Na Hona Jane
Kyun Hona Hi Hai

Tum Se Hi Din Hota Hai
Surmaiye Shaam Aati
Tumse Hi Tumse Hi


Armaan Bharti - Tum Se Hi


Armaan kissed Bharti's hands.😳 "I love you Bharti". Bharti put forward her palm, Armaan could see it was written "I love you too"😳 in her hand. Armaan was shocked. 😲He held Bharti and shook her "Bharti, tum bolo ke tum bhi pyar karti ho, Bharti speak up, Bharti....."😲 but Bharti didn't answer.😲


Armaan was shocked. He was dreaming about Raksha?😲


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Armaan: kya main Raksha se mil sakta hun?


The head: kaun hai aap? Then she recognized Armaan.


The head: Raksha? Wo to apne ghar wapas chali gayi apne bachche ke saath, use sabkuchh yaad jo a gaya tha.


Armaan: par kahan? Suddenly he noticed that the head mentioned about a child.😲


Armaan: bachcha?😲


The head: Ha, wo pregnant thi jab wo yahan ayi thi. Uska ek beta hua tha. Ekdin achanak use sab yaad a gaya, wo chali gayi apne pitaji ke paas.


Armaan couldn't believe his ears. He felt awful.😔 He asked Raksha's address. The head gave him one. He went to her house. But Raksha was not there. A neighbor informed that she left after her father died. The neighbour told him her name is not "Raksha" but "Bharti".😲 Armaan was shocked again.😲


Armaan started searching Bharti again. But she was nowhere.😭


Noor e khudaaa
Ohhhhooo ohhoooo
Noor e khuda

Ajnabe mod hai
Khauf har ore hai
Har nazar pe dhua cha gaya
Pal bhar mein jaane kya kho gaya


http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=cZxiRBoIBOs

Now this song is played at the back ground and we could see Armaan searching Bharti. On the other hand we could see Bharti is bringing up her son alone.😒


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After another year:


Finally Armaan got some information about Bharti and her son. He came to the play ground where Bharti was playing with her 2 year old son. A He was so happy to see them. He looked up to the sky and thanked god. Armaan came to Bharti. Bharti was shocked. She held her son's hand and turned to go.


Armaan: ruk jao Bharti, mujhe tumse kuchh kehna hai. Bharti I love you, main tumdono ko ghar wapas le jana chahta hun.😊


Bharti didn't stop she started walking and Armaan following her. Finally she stopped. She took out a pen and paper from her bag, she wrote something and gave it to Armaan.


"Armaan, mera naam Bharti nahi hai, mera naam Ragini hai, main tumhari Bharti nahi hun. Tum mujhse nahi, meri shakal se pyar karte ho. Main tumhare saath nahi jaungi, is liye ke tumhara ghar mera ghar nahi hai. lekin main tumhe tumhare bete se milne ke liye rok nahi sakti. Tum kabhi kabhi apne bete se milne a sakte ho"😒


Armaan: ruko, you can't go. Main aj yeh keh sakta hun ke main Bharti se nahi tumse pyar karta hun. Tumhare bina mera ghar bilkul suna suna lagta hai. Main pichhle ek saal se har jagah tumhe hi dhunda hai. Tum mere liye sirf ek shakal nahi ho, tum mere liye sabkuchh ho".😳


Bharti turned and started walking again.


Armaan: I know you still love me. Agar tumhara naam Ragini hai to kyun sablog tumhe Bharti ke naam se jante hai? kya yeh sach nahi hai ke tum abhi bhi apne aapko meri Bharti samajhti ho?


She was crying, she knew whatever Armaan was telling is absolutely true. 😊She stopped walking. Her son was scared as well as confused. Armaan picked him up and kissed his cheeks.😛 No, the child was not crying, he was looking at Armaan trying to understand what this man wants.😊 Bharti was watching everything.


Armaan: kya tum mujhe maaf nahi kar sakti?


Bharti looked at him. She could see the "love" in his eyes. 😳She missed this "love" so much.😭


Armaan spread his arms so that there is space in between his son and his right hand where Bharti can fit perfectly.😳


Bharti came slowly towards him and rested her head on his chest. 😳Armaan hugged his wife and son very tightly.😃

The end


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P.S: So this is the end😃 I hope you all liked it😊.

Waiting for your comments😳

BTW Vini you were right, I think I had given a clue in the 2nd part. Can you tell me what was it?

Edited by kaninikabasuray - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#55
PART 1:
Yay! So so glad that there is something else for me to read and I must tell you that I have completely fallen in love with it. Such a beautiful beautiful start, love that the romance is already there and that they are in love and want to get married. So cute that Bharti is working as Armaan's assistant...evrything is so new and fresh and I'm actually sad that this won't be a long FF.
Love how Bharti wants to get married and Armaan too, but because of work it gets delayed - so sweet. The whole part where Armaan took Bharti to the snow and what she initially thought was funny. That whole scene was really sweet, I don't know how you thought of the snow to replace the fire and sindhoor..it's very cute, I loved it.

Kaninika, those 7 pheras is i think the most creative, cutest, sweetest, most beautiful and most sincere thing that I have read. I'm not surprised that Bharti had tears in her eyes. Each phera, each moment of those were just described in such a beautiful and special way.

But then the lorry!? I was not expecting that! It happened so fast, glad that Armaan is okay, but wondering where Bharti is, what condition she is in..hope he finds her in his injured condition. Great first part, I'm totally hooked!
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Posted: 15 years ago
#56

Originally posted by: Blueberry_07

Great part Kanu!

Me actually like the condition that Armu is in....😆..Like what Zoya said all Devdas like..😆 The fact that he force himself on Bharti..Hmm well can understand him..Arrey Bharti shd be happy na..Armu is so Hot...😳


😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳 yes he is hot😆

.............😆 Ok ok am kidding! It's definitely NOT the right thing to do..!!..But why can't Bharti speack now..? That's so sad..! :(
You know part of me is thinking that this may not be Armu's Bharti..I think his real Bharti is still missing out there..But pls make it a happy ending!! Me want ArBi together..:)

So you have seen what happened😳🤗
Love this part, eager to find out how it ends and yes Loved Hasini's VM inside..! 😊

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Posted: 15 years ago
#57

Originally posted by: ghazal_naz

oh man😭😭😭

poor armu is becoming majno and his laila is not reconising him😭😭 she was getting marry😭😭
plzzzzzzz someone help that poor guy 😆
i am felling sad for him😭
but how can he get angry on her or force her😭😭he is forgeting that he is armaan not OK😭
plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz cone soon😭




😆 Armaan reminded me of OK in this part too😉
No no he is not that bad😳
Thanks for your lovely comments😊

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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: *Sohana*Singh*

PART 1:
Yay! So so glad that there is something else for me to read and I must tell you that I have completely fallen in love with it. Such a beautiful beautiful start, love that the romance is already there and that they are in love and want to get married. So cute that Bharti is working as Armaan's assistant...evrything is so new and fresh and I'm actually sad that this won't be a long FF.
Love how Bharti wants to get married and Armaan too, but because of work it gets delayed - so sweet. The whole part where Armaan took Bharti to the snow and what she initially thought was funny. That whole scene was really sweet, I don't know how you thought of the snow to replace the fire and sindhoor..it's very cute, I loved it.

Kaninika, those 7 pheras is i think the most creative, cutest, sweetest, most beautiful and most sincere thing that I have read. I'm not surprised that Bharti had tears in her eyes. Each phera, each moment of those were just described in such a beautiful and special way.

But then the lorry!? I was not expecting that! It happened so fast, glad that Armaan is okay, but wondering where Bharti is, what condition she is in..hope he finds her in his injured condition. Great first part, I'm totally hooked!



Sohana, Thanks a lot.🤗
Totally loved your long lovely comments😊
I am glad that you liked the idea of Barf Sakshi and the 7 pheras😊. Its not all creativity, there are some personal experiances as well😳
Do read the other parts and tell me whether you liked them and not.😊

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Posted: 15 years ago
#59

Originally posted by: haaki.b

its so beautiful

marriage before ice-its an amazing thought.
but what happened to Bharti?
i cant wait.....
plzzzzzzzzzz continue soon😉



Thanks a lot Haaki for your lovely comments😳
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: sejal719

awwww that was very cute plz do write more i really want to read it:DD



Thank you Sejal🤗

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