FF - Dil Ko Tumse Pyar Hua Part 11 Pg 34 - Page 7

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Posted: 16 years ago
#61

Originally posted by: Zoya_01

Thanks dear for comenting
Hope to see too
But I will only give them the script if they give assurance that you are directing😆😆
well the song and the description was the most difficult thing to write
Will try to continue soon
Take Care
Zoya



You are welcome dear.
"But I will only give them the script if they give assurance that you are directing😆😆"
yes yes ofcourse, I will be happy to do the direction😆😆 (actually I am 😳)
Waiting for the next part.

Kaninikadi

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Posted: 16 years ago
#62
loved the part it was sooo cute plz write more soon can;t w8 :)
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Posted: 16 years ago
#63

Originally posted by: sejal719

loved the part it was sooo cute plz write more soon can;t w8 :)

Thanks dear for commenting
Will try to continue soon
Take Care
Zoya
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Posted: 16 years ago
#64
Zoya ...It waz mindblowing ...
Awwwwwwwwwwwwwww sooooooooooooooooo Romantic .....
I m still lost in their world ....


I agree wid u Kaninika ... Kaash aisa real mein ho jaye ....

It waz so gud Zoya ...Alwayz write like this ...

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Posted: 16 years ago
#65

oh my god...that was sooo good!! it was sooo romantic.... really i agree with kaninika that i wish we could see this!!! and our bharti is falling in love!! that was really good...great song choice too....

waiting for the next update!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
#66

Originally posted by: Zoya_01

ARMAAN AND BHARTI

Both make their way towards the dance floor with the following song playing

Ek Ajnabi Sa Ehsaas Dil Ko Sataye

Armaan forwards his hand Bharti gives her Hand in his hand
Shayad Yahi To Pyaar Hai

He keeps his hand Around her waist which makes Bharti shiver
Betabiyon Mein Dhadkan Meri Chal Paye

They start to move
Shayad Yahi To Pyaar Hai

Bharti looks into his eyes and found something in his eyes unknown to her
Kutch Bhi Kaha Na

Armaan was also looking her lost in her
Kutch Bhi Suna Na

Bharti was trying to know what was in his eyes which was making her lose herself of her control
Phir Bhi
Bechain Dil Hai Humara

Armaan twirled her around
Behke Kadam Hai

They again start to dance
Mushkil Main Hum Hai

Bhari this time tried not to look in his eyes and lowered her gaze
Dekho

But she was not able to so she raised her eyes
Sambhle Bhala Kaise Yaara

She felt that there is no one in the her surroundings accept Armaan
Chahe Bina Bhi

She was feeling shy and was confused why

Nazdeek Hum Chale Aaye

Armaan moved a little close to her because of a sudden push by another couple

Shayad Yahi Toh Pyaar Hai

Armaan was trying to figure out the changes he was seeing of expression on her face

Nazrein Bichade

Armaan send her a little far from him
Pehre Laga De

He then pulled her towards him
Dil Pe

Bharti hitted him on his chest
Par Dil Kisiki Na Maane

Armaan held her from waist and moved with the music
Kaaton Pe Chalke

Bharti was now completely lost in his charm
Sholon Mein Jalke

Roke

Armaan again make Bharti move a little
Milke Rahenge Deewane
O O O

Now they were like Bharti's back was touching his chest
Chahat Ki Lau To

He held Bharti's both hands with his
Aandhi Mein Bhi Zilmilaye

Bharti closed her eyes feeling him to close to him
Shayad Yahi To Pyaar Hai

Armaan found that she was not responding
Ek Ajnabi Sa Ehsaas Dil Ko Sataye

He shakes her little making her come out of her dreamland
Shayad Yahi To Pyaar Hai

Bharti opens her eyes and turns around
Ye Mulaqatein

Now she was facing Armaan
Yeh Teri Ankhein

Armaan saw in her eyes but did not find anything in them
Ek Pal Na Main Bhool Pau

Armaan remembered the morning incident the way she landed in his arms
Kitni Mohabbat

Bharti was also lost in his thoughts
Hai Kitni Chahat

Tumse

She came out and looked at Armaan and found him lost also
Kaise Bhala Main Bataoo

She then lowered her eyes and was trying to figure out the new feeling rising in her heart
Acha Lage Jo

Armaan slowly whispers her name she looks up
Toh Samne Muskuraye

Bharti on seeing him asking what happened just shaked her head and passed him a smile
Shayad Yahi To Pyaar Hai

A smile also made way towards Armaan's lips when he saw her smiling
Ek Ajnabi Sa Ehsaas Dil Ko Sataye

Now both stated to look in each others eyes lost
Shayad Yahi To Pyaar Hai
Kutch Bhi Kaha Na
Kutch Bhi Suna Na
Phir Bhi

Bechain Dil Hai Humara

Behke Kadam Hai

Mushkil Main Hum Hai

Dekho

Sambhle Bhala Kaise Yaara

Chahe Bina Bhi

Nazdeek Hum Chale Aaye

Shayad Yahi Toh Pyaar Hai

Shayad Yahi Toh Pyaar Hai

Shayad Yahi Toh Pyaar Hai

Shayad Yahi Toh Pyaar Hai

Shayad Yahi Toh Pyaar Hai

Both came back to the world on hearing the claps

Bharti was feeling really strange she was not able to figure out what strange feeling was rising inside her

Bharti(thinking):what is happening to me I need to talk to Payal right now

BHASKAR AND PAYAL

Bhaskar was running with Payal after him throwing water on him continuously

Both of them were now completely drenched and were also tired

Bhaskar stopped himself

Bhaskar:That's it I cannot run more let's sit somewhere

Payal was looking at him with wide eyes

Bhaskar:Okay bab I am sorry Happy now. Lets go and sit somewhere

Payal smiled and both of them sat on the rocks chatting and then realizing that it is getting late they made their way towards home

Precap:

Bharti:I dont know what happens to me when I am with him I dont remain the same person as I am with others' with you Payal and with bro
I dont know why I feel so different and so special when he looks at me like this Whats going on with me???
Well this was part 3
hope you like it
And if yes then please press the like button
And please guys if you want me to PM you informing about the update then please tell me in you comment
Will continue soon
Take Care
Zoya

Zoya....I didn't know you wrote a fan fic tooo....OMG..I'm truly your fan now...I can reallie feel the goosebumps when i'm reading the ArBi scenes yaar...Itz reallie superb..and Bhaskar-Payal are real good...so much better than those in the serial itself......Itz reallie marvellous and I enjoyed reading it and kept reading them again and again.....the sibling chemistry is damn awesome...I simply am looking forward to your future parts with gr8 anticipation.....You have immense talent so pls do continue with the updates whenever you can....Do PM me if you have updated...I have become an ardent fan of the fan fictions written by you and Kaninika......
Gr8 job Zoya...Congratzzz...By the way I reallie lurved the card and dance sequence between Armaan and Bharti..Looking forward to reading more such scenes.....
Cheers,
Jassie
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Posted: 16 years ago
#67
Thanks Dear for commenting
Take Care
Zoya
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Posted: 16 years ago
#68

Originally posted by: jassie_17

Zoya....I didn't know you wrote a fan fic tooo....OMG..I'm truly your fan now...I can reallie feel the goosebumps when i'm reading the ArBi scenes yaar...Itz reallie superb..and Bhaskar-Payal are real good...so much better than those in the serial itself......Itz reallie marvellous and I enjoyed reading it and kept reading them again and again.....the sibling chemistry is damn awesome...I simply am looking forward to your future parts with gr8 anticipation.....You have immense talent so pls do continue with the updates whenever you can....Do PM me if you have updated...I have become an ardent fan of the fan fictions written by you and Kaninika......

Gr8 job Zoya...Congratzzz...By the way I reallie lurved the card and dance sequence between Armaan and Bharti..Looking forward to reading more such scenes.....
Cheers,
Jassie

Thanks dear for your comment and appreciation
It really made me feel on top of the world
Well It was really hard to write the sng sequence
I am an ArBi fan and no story is progressing in BB of them so you will find a lot of cute ArBi moments
Will try to live up with your expectations in the next part
Take Care
Zoya
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Posted: 16 years ago
#69

Originally posted by: helloaamir

oh my god...that was sooo good!! it was sooo romantic.... really i agree with kaninika that i wish we could see this!!! and our bharti is falling in love!! that was really good...great song choice too....

waiting for the next update!!

Thanks dear for commenting
Will continue soon
Take Care
Zoya
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Posted: 16 years ago
#70

Originally posted by: Love_ya

Awwwwwwwwww

Arbi Rock !!!!!

Thanks dear for commenting
Take Care
Zoya

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