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Posted: 16 years ago
#51

Originally posted by: sejal719

loved the part plz write more soon :)

goodluck in ur tests.... and take care :)

Thanks for commeting
Will updating today or most proably tomorrow
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Posted: 16 years ago
#52
When did u post part 2 ....how cum I didn't notice it ..😲😲
Zoya its very good ..the letter part waz beautiful ...I luved it ...👏
well done & continue soon ...👍🏼
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Posted: 16 years ago
#53

Originally posted by: Dew-drop

When did u post part 2 ....how cum I didn't notice it ..😲😲
Zoya its very good ..the letter part waz beautiful ...I luved it ...👏
well done & continue soon ...👍🏼

Thanks dear for appreciating
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Posted: 16 years ago
#54

really very nice update

plz update next-part soon

👏👍🏼👏

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: nikitaira

really very nice update

plz update next-part soon

👏👍🏼👏

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Posted: 16 years ago
#56
wow!! great job....i loved the letter..so cute!!
the anita part was funny...haha
i love the bond between bhaskar and bharti
waiting for next part...happy ramadan to you
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: helloaamir

wow!! great job....i loved the letter..so cute!!

the anita part was funny...haha
i love the bond between bhaskar and bharti
waiting for next part...happy ramadan to you

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Glad that you liked it
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Posted: 16 years ago
#58
Hey Guys
back with a update
So here it goes
Please Read Before Reading
On the reqeust of a person I have tried to write the part mostly in english but there are some dialogues in which I have used Hindi so for them I have written english translation in a bracket below them so please dont get confused that why I have written in Hindi as well as English
For the previous part check Pg 6


Bhaskar:Waise bahaane dhoondhne ki zaroorat nahin hai mujhe pata hai Bharti Armaan ke saath gayi hai

Payal:Tumhe pata hai???

Bhaskar:Haan

Bharti reaches the venue and checks the arrangements which were all done

Bharti:Now all that missing is the guest of honour ARMAAN

Armaan:Well here I am

Bharti turns around and sees that the person for whom she was waiting was here with a bunch of red roses in his hand

Bhaskar and Payal were sitting watching TV

Bhaskar looked at Payal and saw that she was a little puzzled

Bhaskar:tujhe kya hua tu itni pareshaan kyun hai???

(What happened to you??? Why are you looking so confused???)

Payal:Tumhe kaise pata ke Bharti Armaan ke saath gayi hai

(How you come to know that Bharti is going out with Armaan??)

Bhaskar tells her the whole incident that took place in the office that Bharti and Armaan were damn confused when he caught them looking for each other

Payal bursted laughing and Bhaskar stared at her

Payal:Aise kya dekh rahe ho???

(Why are you looking me like this???)

Bhaskar:Main dekh raha hoon ke tum itni si baat per itna kaise hans sakti ho

(I am trying to figure out how you can laugh on such a smaal thing??)

Payal: Main is baat per nahin hans rahi hoon actually mujhe yaad aa gaya ke how Bharti was pleading to me not to tell you anything

(I am not laughing about what you told me but on the fact Bharti was pleading not to tell you anything)

FLASHBACK

Bharti hugs Payal and says thank you

Payal:Thank you nahin I want to hear sorry

Bharti:Sorry no ways

Payal:Acha baba theek hai I am sorry ke maine tumhe sorry bolne ko kaha ab jao you are getting late

Bharti:Aur haan ik baat yaad rakhna ye baat bro ko nahin pata chalni chahiye

(And yes remember one thing this whole thing should not be disclosed infront of bro)

Payal:Why not??

Bharti:Because main nahin chahti

(Because I don't want to tell him)

Payal:Okay I will not tell him

Bhati:Promise

Payal:Pakka promise

Bharti bids Payal good bye and goes she was getting out of the door when she saw Bhaskar entering

REALITY

Bhaskar and Payal were now getting bored so they tried to think of some idea to safe them from getting bored

Bhaskar:Lets go on a long drive

Payal:Okay Main ready ho kar aati hoon

(I'll go and get ready)


IN THE RESTRAURANT

Bharti saw Armaan standing and for a moment she got lost in him

Bharti(Thinking):God he is looking so handsome then mentally kicking herself What are you thinking girl

Armaan on seeing her lost grins a little and then snap in front of her

Bharti come to her senses

Bharti:haan oh sorry come

Armaan:Sure lets go

Both go and sit on their respected chair with one chair empty

Armaan:Is someone else also coming???

Bharti:No

Armaan:Then whose gonna sit on the third seat???

Bharti:Its for Jiya by the way where is Jiya????

Armaan:Jiya wo actually kal usko school main koi assignment submit karni thi is liye she did not came

(Jiya had to submit her assignment so she did not came)

Bharti:Ohh okay

Armaan then gives her flowers

Armaan:Flowers for you

Bharti at first blushes a little but then asks him

Bharti:Flowers??? Date pea aye ho kya???

(Are you on a date??)

Armaan:Actually jab Jiya ne mujhe flowers le jaane ko kaha tou maine bhi us se yehi poocha tha

(When Jiya told me to take flowers with me I also asked her the same thing)

Bharti:So this is all Jiya's idea

Armaan:Yeah

Bharti:Anyways thanks for the flowers

Both of them then kept silent for a while

Armaan Bharti Togther

Armaan:Nice place

Bharti:Lets order some food

Both laugh and order food for them

After having the food they started to talk on random thing when a waiter comes and place a cake on the table

It was a chocolate cake with written I am sorry with vanilla icing

Armaan:Oh God bharti tum kitni baar sorry bolo gi jab ke main tumhe maaf kar chukka hoon

(How many times will you say sorry I have already forgiven you)

Bharti:But you have not said that you have forgiven me

Armaan;Does not my presence make it obvious

Bharti(Thinking):Yeah it does

Armaan;Okay then lets talk about something else

waise wo card ke saath ik poem thi that was really nice

(There was a poem with the letter also)

Bharti:Haina mujhe bhi bahut achi lagi thi jab maine magazine mein parhi thi

(I also liked it when I read it in a magazine)

Armaan:I knew it it was not your idea oh thats why it was looking familiar

BhartI: Well yes but you know I don't have the habbit of saying sorry and nor I am a poetess that's why I used it

Both laughed and continue Talking

They were talking when they heard the announcement

Guy:All you people out there please join us on the dance floor

Armaan was about to ask Bharti for dance when

Bharti(forwading her hand):Dance?? With me???

Armaan was at first really shocked of Bharti's behavior asking him for dance but then he thought that she Bharti she can do the things you least expect from a girl

Bharti saw him lost in his thoughts

Bharti:Kya hua?? Mere saath dance nahin karna Kya???

(What happened don't you want to dance with me??)

Armaan:Nahin Karna hai na.

(No I want to)

How can I lose a golden chane of dancing with the most beautiful lady of Men's Universe

Bharti blushed at his compliment

Bharti:Flirting shuru ho gayi tumhari

(You started flirting)

Armaan:Its not my fault Its all because of your charm lady

Bharti:Bas Armaan bahut ho gaya

(Enough Armaan)

Armaan:Okay lets go


BHASKAR AND PAYAL

Bhaskar was sitting in his car from past five minutes waiting for Payal he then hit the horn and was beeping it when he saw Payal coming

He was so lost in her charisma that he did not realize that his hand was still on the horn

Payal came hurriedly towards the car and shaked him

Bhaskar came out of his thoughts and quickly take his hands of the horn

Both start moving towards an unknown destination

They were moving on the roads when Payal says

Payal:Bhaskar yaar maza nahin aa raha chal na beach per chalte hain

Bhaskar:Okay

He turns and soon they were on the beach

As it was night time so not many people were on the beach

Both of them took of their shoes and started walking on the wet sand in silence when Payal saw a pani puri stand

Payal:Bhaskar mujhe panipuri khaani hai

(I want to eat panipuri)

Bhaskar:Okay lets go

They moved towards the pani puri stall and started to eat panipuris

Bhaskar was eating when his gaze fell on Payal

A smile automatically carved on his lips on seeing Payal

She was just eating like a small kid very fastly as if she is in the thought that someone will take them from her

They finished the panipuris

Bhaskar paid the bill and both of them again started to walk

Bhaskar was thinking about the happenings that took place in the parking lot and also the one few moments ago

Bhaskar(Thinking and trying to figure out the new feeling rising in him):Why was I staring Payal like this but yes she was looking beautiful but wait she is the same old Payal I know since childhood then why she is like I have met someone else Oh god whats happening to me

Bhaskar came out of his thoughts when he felt some water on his face

He looked towards Payal and saw her laughing and again throwing water on him

Bhaskar:Payal I will not spear you for this

He started running after Payal

Payal on seeing him run also started to run in full speed

She was running really fast but was not able to match his speed

He caught her and lifted her in his arms

Payal(Hitting him on his chest):Leave me Bhaskar

Bhaskar:Chhor doon

Payal:Yes

Bhaskar left her wnd splash

Payal was wet from head to toe

Actually Bhaskar left her in the water



ARMAAN AND BHARTI

Both make their way towards the dance floor with the following song playing

Ek Ajnabi Sa Ehsaas Dil Ko Sataye

Armaan forwards his hand Bharti gives her Hand in his hand
Shayad Yahi To Pyaar Hai

He keeps his hand Around her waist which makes Bharti shiver
Betabiyon Mein Dhadkan Meri Chal Paye

They start to move
Shayad Yahi To Pyaar Hai

Bharti looks into his eyes and found something in his eyes unknown to her
Kutch Bhi Kaha Na

Armaan was also looking her lost in her
Kutch Bhi Suna Na

Bharti was trying to know what was in his eyes which was making her lose herself of her control
Phir Bhi
Bechain Dil Hai Humara

Armaan twirled her around
Behke Kadam Hai

They again start to dance
Mushkil Main Hum Hai

Bhari this time tried not to look in his eyes and lowered her gaze
Dekho

But she was not able to so she raised her eyes
Sambhle Bhala Kaise Yaara

She felt that there is no one in the her surroundings accept Armaan
Chahe Bina Bhi

She was feeling shy and was confused why

Nazdeek Hum Chale Aaye

Armaan moved a little close to her because of a sudden push by another couple

Shayad Yahi Toh Pyaar Hai

Armaan was trying to figure out the changes he was seeing of expression on her face

Nazrein Bichade

Armaan send her a little far from him
Pehre Laga De

He then pulled her towards him
Dil Pe

Bharti hitted him on his chest
Par Dil Kisiki Na Maane

Armaan held her from waist and moved with the music
Kaaton Pe Chalke

Bharti was now completely lost in his charm
Sholon Mein Jalke

Roke

Armaan again make Bharti move a little
Milke Rahenge Deewane
O O O

Now they were like Bharti's back was touching his chest
Chahat Ki Lau To

He held Bharti's both hands with his
Aandhi Mein Bhi Zilmilaye

Bharti closed her eyes feeling him to close to him
Shayad Yahi To Pyaar Hai

Armaan found that she was not responding
Ek Ajnabi Sa Ehsaas Dil Ko Sataye

He shakes her little making her come out of her dreamland
Shayad Yahi To Pyaar Hai

Bharti opens her eyes and turns around
Ye Mulaqatein

Now she was facing Armaan
Yeh Teri Ankhein

Armaan saw in her eyes but did not find anything in them
Ek Pal Na Main Bhool Pau

Armaan remembered the morning incident the way she landed in his arms
Kitni Mohabbat

Bharti was also lost in his thoughts
Hai Kitni Chahat

Tumse

She came out and looked at Armaan and found him lost also
Kaise Bhala Main Bataoo

She then lowered her eyes and was trying to figure out the new feeling rising in her heart
Acha Lage Jo

Armaan slowly whispers her name she looks up
Toh Samne Muskuraye

Bharti on seeing him asking what happened just shaked her head and passed him a smile
Shayad Yahi To Pyaar Hai

A smile also made way towards Armaan's lips when he saw her smiling
Ek Ajnabi Sa Ehsaas Dil Ko Sataye

Now both stated to look in each others eyes lost
Shayad Yahi To Pyaar Hai
Kutch Bhi Kaha Na
Kutch Bhi Suna Na
Phir Bhi

Bechain Dil Hai Humara

Behke Kadam Hai

Mushkil Main Hum Hai

Dekho

Sambhle Bhala Kaise Yaara

Chahe Bina Bhi

Nazdeek Hum Chale Aaye

Shayad Yahi Toh Pyaar Hai

Shayad Yahi Toh Pyaar Hai

Shayad Yahi Toh Pyaar Hai

Shayad Yahi Toh Pyaar Hai

Shayad Yahi Toh Pyaar Hai

Both came back to the world on hearing the claps

Bharti was feeling really strange she was not able to figure out what strange feeling was rising inside her

Bharti(thinking):what is happening to me I need to talk to Payal right now


BHASKAR AND PAYAL

Bhaskar was running with Payal after him throwing water on him continuously

Both of them were now completely drenched and were also tired

Bhaskar stopped himself

Bhaskar:That's it I cannot run more let's sit somewhere

Payal was looking at him with wide eyes

Bhaskar:Okay bab I am sorry Happy now. Lets go and sit somewhere

Payal smiled and both of them sat on the rocks chatting and then realizing that it is getting late they made their way towards home

Precap:

Bharti:I dont know what happens to me when I am with him I dont remain the same person as I am with others' with you Payal and with bro
I dont know why I feel so different and so special when he looks at me like this Whats going on with me???
Well this was part 3
hope you like it
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And please guys if you want me to PM you informing about the update then please tell me in you comment
Will continue soon
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Zoya
Edited by Zoya_01 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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It is lovely Zoya,🥳🥳

It is so romantic❤️
❤️ ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ ❤️

Kash aisa hum e dikhne ko milta,😍
😍 😍 😍 😍

BB to humlogo ko abhi dukh dene ke hi soch rahe hai😭😭😭, let us call Aamir, Ragini, Anchal and Eijaz, tumhari script unlogo ko zaroor pasand ayegi, I am ready to do the direction😆😆.
I would love to see them acting on this lovely script.👏👏👏

And the way you put the lyrics in between the main script is just wonderful!!!


waiting for the next part dear.

Take care

Kaninikadi
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Posted: 16 years ago
#60

Originally posted by: kaninikabasuray

It is lovely Zoya,🥳🥳

It is so romantic❤️
❤️ ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ ❤️

Kash aisa hum e dikhne ko milta,😍
😍 😍 😍 😍

BB to humlogo ko abhi dukh dene ke hi soch rahe hai😭😭😭, let us call Aamir, Ragini, Anchal and Eijaz, tumhari script unlogo ko zaroor pasand ayegi, I am ready to do the direction😆😆.
I would love to see them acting on this lovely script.👏👏👏

And the way you put the lyrics in between the main script is just wonderful!!!


waiting for the next part dear.

Take care

Kaninikadi

Thanks dear for comenting
Hope to see too
But I will only give them the script if they give assurance that you are directing😆😆
well the song and the description was the most difficult thing to write
Will try to continue soon
Take Care
Zoya

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