FF - Dil Ko Tumse Pyar Hua Part 11 Pg 34 - Page 8

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Posted: 16 years ago
#71

Originally posted by: Dew-drop

Zoya ...It waz mindblowing ...
Awwwwwwwwwwwwwww sooooooooooooooooo Romantic .....
I m still lost in their world ....


I agree wid u Kaninika ... Kaash aisa real mein ho jaye ....

It waz so gud Zoya ...Alwayz write like this ...

Thanks for you comment sweety
Will try to write some romantic scenes
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Posted: 16 years ago
#72
Thanx dear for commenting
Will continue soon
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey dear, sorry for the late comment!
just read part 3, truly beautifully written!
cnt wait for the next part!
thanks for the pm!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: Ansh_Arti

hey dear, sorry for the late comment!

just read part 3, truly beautifully written!
cnt wait for the next part!
thanks for the pm!

Thanx for commenting dear
Will continue soon
TAke Care
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Posted: 16 years ago
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marvelous update zoya!! it was sooo sweet and romantic!! luved it!! specially the arbi pyaar and the bhayal masti!! it was soo cute!! bhaskar was totally falling for payal!! and arman and bharti were so lost in their love😳 thanks for the pm. and if itz a hassle, then itz ok if you write in hindi😃 fab update!! bohut pyaara!!
srry for late comment
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: bmtdluver

marvelous update zoya!! it was sooo sweet and romantic!! luved it!! specially the arbi pyaar and the bhayal masti!! it was soo cute!! bhaskar was totally falling for payal!! and arman and bharti were so lost in their love😳 thanks for the pm. and if itz a hassle, then itz ok if you write in hindi😃 fab update!! bohut pyaara!!

srry for late comment

Thanx for replying dear
Glad that you liked it
Dont mention
Thanx yaar it was really tough for me to first write in hindi and then the same thing in english
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Hey guys
Back with an update
Here it goes
For Previous Part check pg 8

Bhaskar stopped himself

Bhaskar:That's it I cannot run more let's sit somewhere

Payal was looking at him with wide eyes

Bhaskar:Okay bab I am sorry Happy now. Lets go and sit somewhere

Payal smiled and both of them sat on the rocks chatting and then realizing that it is getting late they made their way towards home

Bharti was feeling really strange she was not able to figure out what strange feeling was rising inside her

Bharti(thinking):what is happening to me I need to talk to Payal right now

Armaan made his way towards the table but did not find Bharti with him he turns to look for her

Armaan saw Bharti still standing on the same point he went back to her and called her name

Armaan:Bharti???

Bharti:Haan' What happened

Armaan:I think we should be going now

Bharti:Haan chalo na maine kab roka hai??

Armaan: Okay lets go

Bharti knew that she was rude so she was about to say sorry when

Armaan:I know you hate saying sorry so don't say it

Bharti: How you came to know that I was about to say sorry??

Armaan(Holds her from her shoulders):Bharti I am your friend and it has been quite long since we know each other so I know what you feel and are trying to convey

Bharti was again lost in his words(Oh God this girl is getting out of control)

She soon realizes it and nods and moves a little to get out of his touch

Armaan who understood her awkwardness left her

Bhart and Armaan made their way to the parking lot and moved towards their respective cars and were now on their way to home

Bharti in her car was thinking about the moments that took place in the evening

She was trying hard not to think about all of that but was not able to do so

His face was again and again coming in front of her eyes

Bharti:Oh God whats happening to me? Why I am seeing his face again and again?? May be I spent the evening with him that's why yeah it is because of I have spend the whole evening that's why this is happening to me

On the other hand Armaan was also in the same confusion

Not that why he likes being close to her he knows he loves her

He was confuse because of Bharti's behavior with him

Armaan:Bharti is really changing or it's just my imagination??? But the way she is behaving with me in past few days was not like the way she uses to be with me. She is often lost when I am with him. Is everything ok??? Is Bharti in any problem??? I hope not but if she was in some problem she would have told me because she always tells me everything so no she can't be in a trouble then what?? Has she fallen in love with me??? No it can't be possible she can't fall in love with me I mean she does not even believe in love no its not the reason but then what????


NEXT DAY AT MEN'S UNIVERSE

Bharti came to the office and found that everyone was staring her with big eyes

She became a little confused and looked from top to toe herself thinking if there is something wrong

She asked jenny about it and she replied

Jenny:Amarjeet sir tumhe bula rahe hain he has some good news to give you

Bharti:Wo sab tou theek hain but why everyone is staring at me like this???

Jenny:Because what Amarjeet sir has to tell you is that he has not told anyone he says that he will only tell Bharti and if she agrees he will share the news with us that's why everyone is just wondering what is it???

Bharti:Oh ok

Bharti goes to Amarjeet's cabin also wondering why he had called her???

Bharti knocks on the door

Bharti gets out of the cabin looking really sad

But this was not the situation a minute ago when she entered and got to know what Amarjeet wants to share with her

FLASHBACK

Bharti:May I come in???

Amarjeet: Yes you can come in

Bharti:Sir aapne mujhe bulaaya tha???

Amarjeet: Haan bhai Bharti main tujhe aik bahut hi important good news dena chahta hoon

Today's Word

IMPORTANT

Bharti first laughed at the combination of important and good news but then stops as she sees Amarjeet staring her

Amarjeet:Bhai bharti jaisa ke tu jaanti hai ke har saal designers ki aik IMPORTANT event hota hai jis mein har magazine us bande ko bhejta hai jo uske magazine ke liye bahut IMPORTANT hota hai tou is baar humaara wo IMPORTANT designer tu hai. Tou maine tujh se yeh baat poochne ke liye bulaaya tha ke kya tu is IMPORTANT event ke liye jaye gi???

Bhart was literally shocked to hear this

It always been Bharti's dream to go in the event and here she was getting her dream fulfilled

Bharti:Ofcourse sir mujhe koi problem nahin hai waise sir event kab se start ho raha hai??

Amarjeet:Well date tou abhi finalize nahin hui but yeh event March mein hoga

Bharti:Tou sir aap yeh baat mujhe itni pehle kyon bata rahe hai I mean its seven months till March

Amarjeet:Yehi tou Important issue hai ke is event mein participate karne se pehle tumhe 6 minths ke liye train kia jaye ga jis ke liye tujhe Paris bheja jaa raha hai tout u jaane ke lye agrre karti hai ya nahin

Bharti:Sir I am ready to go waise kab jaana hai???

Amarjeet:Next week tujhe wahan bheja jaye ga wahan per teri complete training hogi us training ki basis per decide hoga ke tu iss important task ke kabil hai ya nahin???

Bharti:Sir yeh baat office mein kis kis ko pata hai???

Amarjeet:Abhi tak tou Sirf tujhe aur mujhe lekin ab tune haan kardi hai tou main abhi jaake announce karta hoon

Bharti:Sir kya aap please yeh baat aaj ke baad kal announce kar sakte hain???

Amarjeet:Aur yeh kis liye???

Bharti:Sir please ' Kcuh log hain jinhe main yeh baat khud akele main bataana chahti hoon

Amarjeet:Theek hai bhai lekin iss mportant baat ko announce karna ke liye main kal se zyaada intezaar nahin karoon ga

Bharti: Okay sir


REALITY

Bharti was surrounded by her thoughts

When Amarjeet told her that she has to go Paris for training she was only worried about how she will break the news in front of Bhaskar and how she will convince him for this??

Bharti:Oh God what will I do now?? Its like impossible to get Bhaskar convinced for this

Then an idea struck her mind and she called Payal and told her to bring some vegetables home and cook Bhaskar's favourites

Payal:Per kyun na tou aaj uska birthday hai na hi use koi promotion mila hai phir???

Bharti:tu chup chap jo main keh rahi hoon wo karo main aa rahi hoon ghar aake tuhhe sab bataati hoon


In the evening

Bhart completes her work super fast and goes to Amarjeet

Bharti asks Amarjeet to let her go a bit early and Amarjeet agrees

She goes and make her way towards

No guys not towards her home but Armaan's

She ring the bell and mrs Francis open the door

Bharti aska about Armaan and she tells her that he is in his room with Jiya

She goes towards the room and saw the perfect father daughter duo completeing Jiya's homework

She stood still on the door admiring them when Mrs Francis come and offer her a glass of water

Armaan and Jiya looks up and find Bharti standing there

Jiya goes and hugs Bharti

Jiya:Bharti auntie aap yahan kab aayi??

Bharti:Jab aap dono cutely aapka homework complete kar rah the

Armaan:Bharti tum yahaan kaise???

Bharti:Actually Armaan main Jiya se milne aayi thi kya pata phir mauka mile na mile

Armaan:Tum tou aise baat kar rahi ho jaise kahin jaa rahi ho

Bharti nodded

Amraan and Jiya (Together):Kahan???

Bharti:Well you are the first one to know this Armaan tumhe tou pata hi hai har saal aik event hota hai jis mein fashion designers participate karte hain well I am selected for it

Armaan was feeling really happy foir Bharti he has saw how badly Bharti wanted to be a part of this event

Armaan:Per wo event tou yahin hota hai Mumbai mein

Bharti: Event tou Mumbai mein hota hai lekin uss se pehle six months ki training hai in Paris

Armaan's face which a moment ago was glowing with happiness was now all gloomy

Jiya:Bharti auntie aap jaa rahi hain??

Bharti:Haan baby main jaa rahi hoon lekin fikr na karo its only for 6 months

Jiya nods and goes from there while Armaan was still in a daze

Bharti slightly shakes him and he come back to reality

Bharti:Kya hua???

Armaan: Kuch nahin will miss you yaar

Bharti on seeing him sad hugs him

Bharti:Don't worry main bahut jaldi waapis aaon gi

Armaan(Breaking the hug):Will miss you a laods

Bharti was about to say something when she received a call after hanging up

Bharti:Armaan I have to go now its urgent say Bye to Jiya

Armaan:Bye Bharti


Bharti went out and drived super fast and reached her house

Here Payal was waiting for her

Bharti comes and apologizes for coming late and tells her all about her trip to Paris

Bharti and Payal were busy arranging the table when Bhaskar came

Bhaskar enters the house and saw Bharti and Payl standing near the dining table with big smiles

He at first got confused but then thought its his imagination

He came after changing his clothes and sat on the dining table and was surprised to see the dishes

They were Biryaani, Bhindi ki sabzi and also his most favorite sweet dish Kheer

Bhaskar was now 100% sure that something is fishy

He looked at Bharti and Payal who were trying to behave as stupid as they can by praising him and giving him a lot of compliments'..

Bhaskar:Okay that's it now tell me what is the catch?? And what are the conditions for it???

Bharti:Wo,,, Wo'

Bhaskar:I am listening

Bharti(Quickly with her eyes closed): Wo Amarjeet sir ne mujhe Paris bhejne ka decision liya hai Fashion designing event mein participate karne ke liye for 6 months

Bharti opened her eyes as she did not get any response

Bharti saw that Bhaskar was not on the table she asked Payal and he told her that he is in the balcony

Bhaskar was standing there thinking

He did not want Bharti to leave hi not even for a single second and here she was talking to go for 6 whole months no ways. He did not want her to go because she was the only reason for his smile and was her only family

Bharti goes there and talks to him

Bharti;I know you are angry with me and don't want me to go but please Bro you know it always has been my Dream to take part in this event. I know you are really possessive for me but please try and understand I am now a grown up girl and can take Care of ma self Please bro

Bhaskar:But you know the sweety I cant let you go.You mean life to me and I can live without you

Bhaskar was indeed really scared he did not want Bharti to go as he don't want to lose her

Bharti:But its for 6 months only please Bro

Bhaskar:Please sweety

Bharti:Please bro

Bhaskar lifted his face and looked at Bharti she was looking so much happy and excited to go and he also knew the fact that if he will say no she will not go but she will not be happy as well

Bhaskar:Okay you can go

Bhart: Really

Bhaskar nodded

Bharti hugged Bhaskar

Bharti:Thanx Bro you are the best I love you

Bhaskar:Love you too.

Precap:Same as before

So guys this was part 4

Hope you like it

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Zoya

Edited by Zoya_01 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
#78
Hey, I am the first one to comment!!😛
It was lovely Zoya👏👏👏
though I really felt bad for Armaan and Bhaskar😭😭
But It is good for Bharti, she should go to Paris and fulfill her dreams😍
waiting for the next parts
continue soon

Kaninikadi

Edited by kaninikabasuray - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Waiting for your comments Kaninika Di
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Edited by Zoya_01 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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That was quick
Anyways thanx
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