FF - Dil Ko Tumse Pyar Hua Part 11 Pg 34 - Page 4

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Posted: 16 years ago
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loved it
plz wrie he nxt part soon can't w8 :)
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loved it
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Posted: 16 years ago
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wawwwwwwwwwww. ... lovely FF... I just read it and loved it a lot... please update soon... can not wait...
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it was too good. Do continue it.
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Originally posted by: ram92

it was too good. Do continue it.

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Originally posted by: Love_ya

I love it !!!!!!!!!

Sooo cute !!!!!!

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Originally posted by: Arjun_mayank

wawwwwwwwwwww. ... lovely FF... I just read it and loved it a lot... please update soon... can not wait...

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Originally posted by: sejal719

loved it

plz wrie he nxt part soon can't w8 :)

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Hey guys
Back with an update
For Part 1 check Page 4
here it goes

Bharti:Narayan Armaan apne cabin mein hai kya???

Narayan:Nahin tou

Bharti:Good

She then opens her purse and take out a 100 rupee note and shows it to Narayan

Narayan:Kaam kya hai???

Bharti tells Narayan her plan and gives him an envelope with a note

The meeting starts and it goes really great

Everyone appreciates Bhaskar's cover page ideas and Bharti's designs

Amarjeet:Bhai I am very much IMPRESSED

TODAY's WORD IMPRESS

bhai tum dono behan bhai to ho hi aise tumhe khub pata hai logon ko IMPRESS karne ka tareeka ab jaaon humaari janta ko IMPRESS karo aur mere liye paise kamaao

All of them get out of the conference hall

Bharti tries to talk to Armaan but he doesn't let her and heads towards his cabin

Bharti:Jaao Jaao wapis tou mere paas hi aao ge

Bhaskar:kaun waapis tumhaare paas hi aaye ga???

Bharti(unknowingly):Armaan aur kaun???

Bhaskar:Armaan ???

Bharti: Haan nahin haan wo haan Armaan mere paas hi tou aaye ga models ko call karne ke liye

Bhaskar:Acha tou Armaan numbers laye ga. Kyun???

Bharti:Kya bro tum bhi na mujhe kya pata wo kyun aaye ga jab wo aaye ga aap ussi se jaake pooch lena saying this she goes from there

Bhaskar:Are suno meri baat tou suno

He laughs and then thinks

Bhaskar:Kiddo tum apne aap se jitna bhi jhoot bolo ya chuppaane ki koshish karlo but I know you love him


ARMAAN's CABIN

Armaan enters his cabin and sits on his chair he then picks up his phone to call someone but stops when he sees a purple colured envelope on his table with a note

He opens the envelope and find a sorry card in it with a letter

He opens the card to read it

Which was something like this

He Then reads the letter

Hey Armaan

Waise maine tumhe subah bhi Hello bola tha

isliye I don't think is waale ki koi zaroorat thi

Phir bhi Hai

Ahhh yeh main kya likh rahi hoon

Okay coming straight to the point

I AM SORRY

Waise mujhe sorry bolna acha nahin lagta

Aur maine aaj tak kissi ko bola bhi nahin hai

No wait? aaj subah Payal ko sorry bola tha

Aur aik bar bro ko bhi bola tha

Well let me change my statement

Maine aaj tak bro aur Payal ke ilaawa kissi ko sorry nahin bola

Lekin phir bhi tumhe sorry keh rahi hoon

I Know main subah thori rude thi

Armaan:Thori rude???

Acha baba

Thori nahin bahut zyaada rude thi

Uss ke liye

DIL SE SORRY

This is the limit maine do martabba aik hi bande

Ko sorry bola

Aaj tak maine bro ya Payal se bhi do bar sorry nahin kaha

Wo bhi itni si ghalti ke liye

So you are the first person to get this honor

Congrats for that

Armaan laughs on her silly reason to congratulate him

Please ab tou maaf kardo

Dekho maine tumhe PLEASE bhi bola

Ab tou tumhe mujhe maaf karna hi padega

Nahin tou?.

Armaan:Nahin to?.

Well forget it

Aur aggar maaf kia hai tou hi is card ke saath waala note panda

Warna paadh dena

Aur haan agar office mein kissi ko bhi pata chal ke maine tumhe sorry

bola hai ya bro ke maine tumhe ik ghalti ke liye do bar sorry bola tou?

Armaan:Tou???

you should watch out for the consequences of it

UNDERSTAND
Bharti

Armaan's smile widened after reading the letter

He then opens the note to read it

Dinner at 8 p.m Sharp

Blue Lounge

Come on time

Or else

I guess I am not forgiven

Don't be late

Armaan just smiles again on reading the note

He goes towards Bharti's cabin but it was empty

He looks everywhere for Bharti but does not find her

On his way Amarjeet stops him

Amarjeet:Bhai Armaan wo jo model thi jiska number maine tumhe dia thaw o humaare idea se IMPRESS hui ke nahin

Armaan:Sir wo tayyar hai

Amarjeet:Well then I am quite IMPRESSED

Then He leaves and Armaan also starts to walk

He was looking for her when he bumped into Bhaskar

Bhaskar:Watch it dude

Armaan:Sorry actually mera dehaan kahin aur tha is liye maine tumhe dekha nahin

Bhaskar:Okay Waise any problem??

Armaan:Haan wo main Bharti ko dhund raha tha wo mil nahin rahi

Bhaskar:Aur mile gi bhi nahin

Armaan:Kyun

Bhaskar:Wo aaj jaldi chali gayi keh rahi thi sham ko usko kahin jaana hai isliye

Armaan(smiling):Acha

Bhaskar(grinning):Waise pata nahin use kahan jaana hai sham ko jo itni jaldi chali gayi.Tumhe pata hai bharti kahan jaa rahi hai???

Armaan:Haan matlab nahin matlab mujhe kya pata wo kahan jaa rahi tum uske bhai ho tumhe pata hona chahiye

Bhaskr:Yeh bhi theek hai meri behan hai mujhe pata hona chahiye

Bhaskar leaves from there grinning while Armaan went towards his cabin


On the otherhand Bharti goes to the mall

She buys herself a new dress

She goes to the parlour to get her facial etc and goes to the venue

She reserves a side table for three and tells the manager what she wanted and how it would be like

She comes to home and heads straight towards her room to get ready

When she enters the room her eyes fall on the clock and she realizes that it was only 4 o clock

She laughs on her silly act and keep the things she has bought on the table and goes to the washroom to get fresh

She comes out of the washroom wearing her trousers and shirt (like in the serial) and lays on her bed

She closes her eyes and soon she was in her dream world

While Bharti is sleeping lets see what our cutie is up to


Well Armaan after his shift went to home

He entered home whisting which did not went unnoticed by his angel

Jia:Kya baat hai dada jab maine aap ko subah phone kia tha tab you were in a very bad mood btu it does not seem like you are still pissed off

Armaan:No bacha I am not in a bad moodokay now come on help in selecting dress for you and me

Jia:Why dada?? Are we going somewhere??

Armaan:Yes bacha aapki bharti auntie ne aaj hume dinner ke liye invite kia hai tou we have to go

Jia:Per dada mujhe tou kal assignment submit karni hai school main aur uska thora sa kaam rehta hai so I cant come na

Armaan:Bacha if you want my help main Bharti auntie ko manna kar doon???

Jia:No dada you enjoy main khud finish kar loon gi

Armaan:Sure??

Jia:Positive dada

Armaan:Okay well come and help me pick my clothes

Jia:Okay

Armaan and jia go towards Armaan's wardrobe

Well it was really hard for Jia because whatever dress she takes out Armaan rejects it giving different excuses that ye acha nahin lag raha ye maine bahut pehna hai etc etc

Finally he agrees on a suit

Jia:What dada yeh wahi suit hai jo maine sabse pehle nikaala tha

Armaan:Acha tab acha nahin lag raha ab zyaada acha lag raha hai

Jia:Uff ho dada aap tou aise tayaar ho rahe ho jaise jaise date per jaa rahe ho

Armaan:Date per?? main date per nahin jaa raha main tou sirf Bharti ke saath dinner per jaa raha hoon

Jia:Per lag tou nahin raha

Armaan:Bacha

Jia:Dada

Armaan:Main jaa rah hoon tayar hone nahin tou Bharti samjhe gi ke main ab bhi uss se naraaz hoon

Saying this he headed towards changing room


On the other hand Bharti was now awake getting ready and talking to herself

Bharti(while wearing earings):Pata nahin aaye ga bhi ya nahin waise usse aana tou chahiye lekin agar wo abhi bhi naraaz hua tou???

Payal:Kaun naraaz hai??

Finds the source of the voice and then replies

Bharti:Armaan

Payal:Ab tumne kya kia ??

Bharti tells her the whole incident

Payal:Tum bhi na itni rude ho jaati ho

Bharti(brushing her hair):Haan haan saari ghalti tou meri hi hai na main rude ho jaati ho aur agar main rude ho bhi jaati hoon tou usse pata hona chahiye ke main aisi hi hoon aur usse naraaz hone ka koi right nahin

Payal: Very good pehle usse larai ki ab mujhse karo aur ik baat batao tum kaun hoti ho uske rights the karne waali

Bharti(wearing her sandles):Main uski dost hoon is liye mujhe poora haq hai

Payal: Sirf dost?? Tum jis authority se baat kar rahi ho na us se nahin lagta ke tum uski sirf dost ho

Bharti: Come on Payal ab please tum phir shuru mat ho jaana aur waise bhi I am getting late okay

Payal:Waise aik baat kahun

Bharti:Agaar mujhe daantne ke liye hai tou nahin aur agar it is something positive then yes

Payal:You are looking really beautiful and all the best

Bharti hugs Payal and says thank you

Payal:Thank you nahin I want to hear sorry

Bharti:Sorry no ways

Payal:Acha baba theek hai I am sorry ke maine tumhe sorry bolne ko kaha ab jao you are getting late

Bharti bids Payal good bye and goes she was getting out of the door when she saw Bhaskar entering

Bhaskar:Going somewhere

Harti:Bro bataya to tha

Bhaskar(evil grin):Yes you told me that you are going to a friend's birthday

Payal:Friend's birthday???

Bharti steps on payal's foot and she shouts

Bharti:Friend's birthday tumhe bataya tou tha

Payal(understands what she means):Oh haan friend's birthday

Bharti:Okay guys I am going getting late bye

Bhaskar and Payal:Bye

Bhaskar (after Bharti left):So Bharti apni friend ki party main gayi hai???

Payal:Haan abhi bataya tou usne

Bhaskar:Kaunse friend ki party main????

Payal:Wo thin a bharti ki dost Anita

Bhaskar:Anita??? Acha acha wo jo 5th standard main Bharti se saath parhti thi

Payal:Haan

Bhaskar:Aur jo shaadi karke hamesha ke liye US chali gayi thi

Payal:US???? (She gets worried now as she was thinking what to say next)

Bhaskar:Waise bahaane dhoondhne ki zaroorat nahin hai mujhe pata hai Bharti Armaan ke saath gayi hai

Payal:Tumhe pata hai???

Bhaskar:Haan


Bharti reaches the venue and checks the arrangements which were all done

Bharti:Now all that missing is the guest of honour ARMAAN

Armaan:Well here I am

Bharti turns around and sees that the person for whom she was waiting was here with a bunch of red roses in his hand

Well this was the part 2

I hope it is big and good enough for you people to read and press the like button
One important thing guys
I will update the next part atleast after 10 days
Please understand
Ramadan are starting and I also have tests in my college starting from monday
Take Care
Zoya
Edited by -Zoya- - 15 years ago


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Posted: 16 years ago
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very good yaar
specially Bharti's sorry letter to Armaan
we will wait for the update, take your time
greetings for Ramadan
and best of luck for your exam again

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