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Posted: 15 years ago
#91

Originally posted by: sejal719

loved it can;t w8 for the nxt part :)

Thanx dear
Will continue soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
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PROMO
Bharti:Life has indeed changed for me.These 5 months have made me realise what is the importance of some people in my Life.Log sahi kehta hain dooriyaan hi ehsaas dilaati hai ke koi aapke kitna kareeb hai bas 1 month aur phir I will be back to them
Well I know it has been a long time I have not updated and today I am only giving the promo but please try and understand It is all because of eid and also because the school are about to begin and a little because of my laziness
Will continue soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Great promo dear..Can't wait to read the parts!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
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awsmoe promo nowi can;t really w8 ;p
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Zoya,
the promo is really good.
waiting for the real one
😛
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Hey guys
Back with an update
Hope you like it
Here it goes
For previous part check Page 11

Bhaskar lifted his face and looked at Bharti she was looking so much happy and excited to go and he also knew the fact that if he will say no she will not go but she will not be happy as well
Bhaskar:Okay you can go
Bhart: Really
Bhaskar nodded
Bharti hugged Bhaskar
Bharti:Thanx Bro you are the best I love you
Bhaskar:Love you too.
5 Months Later
Bharti came back to her room after the hetic schedule She was hell tired and goes to the wasjroom to get fresh
She comes out and lies on her bed in a towel and closes her eyes
Suddenly opens her eyes and realizes that someone was in her room

Jaanam, dekh lo, mit gayi dooriyaan

Bharti was quite surpised seeing Armaan

Main yahaan hoon, yahaan hoon, yahaan hoon, yahaan..

He comes to her she was sitting on the bed and goes really close

Jaanam, dekh lo, mit gayi dooriyaan

Bharti was getting back

Main yahaan hoon, yahaan hoon, yahaan hoon, yahaan

She was now lying on the bed Armaan came closer and kissed her on her cheecks

Jaanam, dekh lo, mit gayi dooriyaan

He gets up and pull bharti towards him

Main yahaan hoon, yahaan hoon, yahaan hoon, yahaan

Bharti get hit on his chest

Kaisi, sarhadein, kaisi majbooriyaan

Armaan removes Bharti's wet hair from her face which were blocking his view

Main yahaan hoon, yahaan hoon, yahaan hoon, yahaan

He make Bharti stand in such a position that her back was facing him and kisses her on her shoulder
Bharti shivers and turns around and found nobody there she looked here and there but he was not in the sight
She gets changed and sits out in the balcony on the swing closing her eyes

Tum chhupa na sakogi main woh raaz hoon

She opens her eyes to see Armaan lying on her lap looking at her

Tum bhoola na sakogi woh andaaz hoon

He gets up and nuzzles into her hair

Goonjta hoon jo dil mein toh hairaan ho kyun

Bharti feels her heart beat raising feeling him so close to her

Main tumhaare hi dil ki toh awaaz hoon

She gets up to go but Armaan held her hand

Sun sako, toh suno, dhadkanon ki zabaan

He keeps her hand near to his heart

Main yahaan hoon, yahaan hoon, yahaan hoon, yahaan

Bharti was about to hug him but he again got lost

Kaisi, sarhadein, kaisi majbooriyaan

She looks here and there and found him in the room behind the window

Main yahaan hoon, yahaan hoon, yahaan hoon, yahaan

She goes to him and held him in a hug closing her eyes
She hear the phone rang and opens her eyes
Armaan was nowhere to be seen

Main hi main ab tumhaare khayaalon mein hoon

Armaan keeps his hand on her eyes
Bharti remembers the moment she spent with Armaan

Main jawaabon mein hoon, main sawaalon mein hoon

Bharti opens her eyes and found Armaan standing infront of her

Main tumhaare har ek khwaab mein hoon basa

Bharti again closes her eyes

Main tumhaari nazar ke ujaalon mein hoon

She feels Armaan's hand make their way to her waist and holds her

Dekhti, ho mujhe, dekhti ho jahaan

Bharti opens her eyes and gets up from the bed and sees Armaan's reflection in the mirror standing behind her looking at her through the mirror

Main yahaan hoon, yahaan hoon, yahaan hoon, yahaan
Jaanam, dekh lo, mit gayi dooriyaan

Armaan comes to her and hold her from behind

Main yahaan hoon, yahaan hoon, yahaan hoon, yahaan
Kaisi sarhadein, kaisi majbooriyaan

He goes and sits infront of her and his hand touches her face

Main yahaan hoon, yahaan hoon, yahaan hoon, yahaan

He keeps his hand on her eyes making her to close them

Main yahaan hoon, yahaan hoon, yahaan hoon, yahaan

She opens them and found him going and then completely out of her sight
Bharti(shouts):Armaan but he was nowhere to be seen
Bharti immediately calls Payal
Payal:hello
Bharti:Payal wo yahaan hai wo har jagah hai Payal
Payal:Kaun??
Bharti:Payal mujhe bahut darr lag raha hai Payal he is every where he can see me
Payal:Kaun Bhati???
Bharti:Armaan wo har jagaah hai yaar
Payal:Oh Armaan well welcome to the world of Lovers
Bharti:What???
Payal:Aur nahin tou kya wo tumhe har jagaah dikh raha hai tum usko sabse zyaada miss karti ho jab bhi phone karti ho sirf aur sirf Armaan ki baat karti ho.Isnt ithis Love???
Bharti:I don't know Payal what is going on.I mean I love his company he so sweet I love him being around me. I dont know what happens to me when I am with him I dont remain the same person as I am with others' with you Payal and with bro.I never bother if you are angry with me but when he does not talk to me I feel like nothing in the world has meaning to ii. I dont know why I feel so different and so special when he looks at me like this Whats going on with me???
Payal:This is love yaar>Oh God I cant believe it You falling in love Oh god.
Just then the bell rings
Payal;Acha main chalti hoon.Bell baj rahi hain Bye
Bharti:Bye
Bhati:These five months have indeed changed my life.They have made me realize that how much some people are important in ma life.Log sahi kehte hain dooriyaan hi ehsaas dilaati hain ke koi aap ke kitna kareeb hai.Aaj inhi dooriyon ne mujhe dekhaaya ke main Armaan se kitna attached hoon ke main har pal har waqt usi ke khayaalon mewin khoi rehti hoon har waqt mujhe uski aahat mehsoos hoti hai har pal yeh ehsaas mere saath hai ke Armaan mere bahut kareeb hai.Kya Payal sahi hai?? Kya waqai mujhe Armaan se pyar ho raha hai???Well its just a matter of one month I will be back to them
Bharti went to sleep


On the otherhand Armaan was sitting in his balcony thinking about Bharti
Armaan:Paanch mahine ho gaye hain usko gaye hue parphir bhi uski yaadon ne mujhe ik pal ke liye bhi nahin choda saaye ki tarhan wo yaadein mera peecha kar rahi hain aur afsos tou mujhe iss baat ka hai ke main usko akhri bar jaane se pehle dekh bhi nahin saka uske jaane se pehle ik akhiri baar usko mil nahin saka uss ka chehra in aankhon mein hamesha se bassa hai phir bhi iss dil ko uski uss jhalak ko dekhne ki aarzoo hai jo usne mere intezaar mein guzaari


Flashback
Armaan entered MU and say everyone gathered around Bhati giving her flowers wishing her luck and all
He saw that Bharti was looking towards him expecting him to come to her and wish her luck but she was left disappointed as he made his way towards his cabin
Armaan was sitting in his cabin when Bharti came to him loaded with flowers
Bharti:Hey Armaan
Armaan without looking to her:Hey Bharti
Bharti:Armaan tou tum aa rahe ho na?? Airport??
Armaan:Nahin Bharti main nahin aa sakta
Bharti:Kyun???
Armaan(Yelling):Kaha na main nahin aa sakta tumhe ik baar ki baat samajh main nahin aati kya???
Bharti:Tou iss mein chilaane ki kya zaroorat hai mujhe bhi koi farak nahin parta ke tum aao ya na aao
Armaan(Armaan standing with his back facing Bhati):Haan tumhe kyun farak pare ga tumhe thori na koi farak parta hai tabhi tou itni door jaa rahi mujhe chor ke
Bharti leaves from there without listening what he said at the end
It was evening and Bharti was in the airport Payal was telling her something but she was not listening to her as she was waiting for Armaan to come
Armaan on the other hand was sitting in his lounge remembering all the moments spent with Bharti
Armaan:That's it I am going
He picks his keys up and rushes towards airport
Here the announcement was made and Bharti was about to go in still waiting for Armaan
She hugged Bhaskar
Bharti:Will miss yo bro
Bhaskar:Miss you too sweety Please take care of yourself and call us regularly okay
Bharti:Yeah
She breaks the hug and goes to Payal both of them hug eachother
Bharti:Take care of him
Payal:I will you don't worry and take care
Bharti:Will miss you
Payal:Will miss you too
This is the final announcement for the pessengers travelling to Paris
Bharti:Gotta go Bye
She leaves just then Armaan reaches
He sees Payal and Bhaskar and goes to them
He was panting and asked them about Bharti
Bhaskar:Wo to gayee
Armaan:Chali gayee
Payal:Haan tumhaara wait to usne bahut kiya lekin tum nahin aaye aur woh chali gayee
Armaan was now completely shattered
Armaan:I could not even meet her the last time she was going and I did not stopped her She was waiting for me may be till the final call but I I did not even made it up
Kitna kuch kehna tha mujhe

Khudaya ve?
Ishq hai kaisa yeh ajeeb.

Armaan stops his car at the beach at a lone corner
Khudaya ve?
Ishq hai kaisa yeh ajeeb.

He starts to walk on the sand
Dil ke kareeb laaya,
Dil ka naseeb re

Remembers their dance and the closeness he shared with her that day
Dil ke kareeb laaya,
Dil ka naseeb re

He rememebers how she shivered when he held her
Khudaya ve, haiii..
Ishq hai kaisa yeh ajeeb re,

Khudaya ve, haiii..
Ishq hai kaisa yeh ajeeb re?

He sits on the rocks
Aaaa?aaaa??tana re tana?.derena
Aaaa?aaaa??tana re tana?.derena
Aaaa?aaaa??tana re tana?.derena

All the moments keep moving in his mind like a projection
Aakhon se khawab ruthe,
Apno ke saath choote,

He imagines Bharti going away
Tapti hue rahon mein,
Pairon ke chaale phoote

He remembers how Bharti left in morning from his cabin
Aakhon se khawab ruthe,
Apno ke saath choote,
Tapti hue rahon mein,
Pairon ke chaale phoote
He gets up and sees some children making sand castle
Pyaase tadap rahe hai,
Saahil kareeb re

He remembers how once He Bharti and Jiya came to beach and Jiya and her were making sand castles
Pyaase tadap rahe hai,
Saahil kareeb re

He sees Bharti standing waving he goes to her but she vanished
Khudaya ve, haiii..
Ishq hai kaisa yeh ajeeb re,
Khudaya ve, haiii..
Ishq hai kaisa yeh ajeeb re?

He sits on the sand with her memories filled in his mind
Ni sa re ni sa re re ga re ga re re ga re,
Ma ga re sa ma ga re sa ma ga re sa?

He remembers how he used to have fun with her and Jiya whenever they meet
Aansu namak se lage,
Rishte hai kachhe dhaage,
Raite pe apne saaye,
Khud se kyu durr bhaage

He remembers how he once scolded Jiya nad bharti ws pissed off with him
Aansu namak se lage,
Rishte hai kachhe dhaage,
Raite pe apne saaye,
Khud se kyu durr bhaage

He remembers how much effort it took to finally please her by becoming a clown and smiles
Kheech ke humko laaye,
kahan pe rakeeb re

His smile vanishes as he again remember how he fighted with her o the morning
Kheech ke humko laaye,
kahan pe rakeeb re

He hits the stone in his way really hard
Khudaya ve, haiii..
Ishq hai kaisa yeh ajeeb re,
Khudaya ve, haiii..
Ishq hai kaisa yeh ajeeb re?

Dil ke karib aaya dil ka naseeb ve
He makes his way towards home as Jiya must be waiting for him


Reality
Armaan hears that his phone was ringing he picks it up
Armaan(In a low voice):Hello
The person on the otherhand kept mum
Armaan:Hello
Still no reply
Armaan:Bharti???
Bharti was stunned
Bharti:He recognized me she was about to cut
Armaan:I know its you Bharti please don't cut the call Can you please say a word
Bharti:Armaan
Armaan: You know it have been 5 months I have not seen you or atleast heard your voice. Itni naarz thi mujhse???
Bhartii:Tou tum bhi tou nahin aaye the na I should be angry
Armaan:Hey listen I am sorry for that but that does not mean I forgive you for not calling me
Bharti:You shoul have called me na
Armaan:As if you have give me your number??
Bharti:Ver nice excuse. Well you should have asked Bhaskar or Payal for it
Armaan:But I thought you would not like to talk to me
Both of them remained silent for a while
Armaan and Bharti together:I miss you yaar
Both laugh
Bharti:Anyways hows Jiya??
Armaan:She is fine misses you a lot
Bharti:Can I talk to her??
Armaan:Yeah sure
Armaan calls Jiya
Armaan:Jiya call for you
Jiya comes and asks
Jiya:Who is it Dada??
Armaan:Don't know one of your friend I guess
Jiya was suspicious as she have not given any of her friends his dada's personal number
Armaan:Well what are you waiting for??
Jiya takes the call
Jiya:Hello who is it??
Bharti:Itni jaldi bhool gayi mujhe not fair
Jiya(excitedly):Bharti Auntie
Bharti:Yes.. So hows my cutie pie??
Jiya:I am fine. Aap kaise ho ???
Bharti:I am also good but missing my cutie pie
Jiya I miss you too
Bharti:So who is school??
Jiya:Its good
Bharti:Aur kya chal raha hai??
JIya:Yeh sab choro aur bataao aap kab aa rahe ho
Bharti:Well main kal hi waapis aa rahi hoon
Jiya:What you are coming back tomorrow
Armaan hears it and snatches the phone from Jiya
Armaan:What you are coming back tomorrow??
Bharti:Yes I am
Armaan:I mean how you were to come one month later na??
Bharti:Actually I talked to the organizers and they said that they are quite impressed with me so they are sending me back
Armaan:That's a great news
Bharti:But one thing please don't tell Bhaskar about it I want to surprise him and Payal
Armaan:Okay
Bharti:Can you pick me up from the airpart??
Armaan:Yeh bhi koi poochne ki baat hai of course I will
Bhart:Okay then Bye
Armaan:Bye
Armaan keeps the phone and start dancing Jiya laughs seeing his dad dancing like a maniac Armaan holds Jiya's Hand and start doing couple dance with her but she did not match him because of height difference so he picked her up and started dance
Both father and daughter do a lot of masti dancing with music playing o full volume
Jiya was really happy from inside as it was the first time she saw his dada so happy after Bharti went
Jiya took advantage of this golden chance and said
Jiya:Dada lets go on a long drive
Armaan:Sure anything else
Jiya:Well firstly we will go to the mall and buy me some clothes and gifts for Bharti auntie then we will go for a dinner then ice-cream at the beach and finally we will come home after a long drive
Armaan:Well the list is quite long.But okay
Jiya:Okay?? Are you sure??
Armaan:I am positive bacha now come on lets get going
They both go make their way towards the mall and buy a lot of stuff for Jiya and some gifts for Bharti
Armaan then takes Jiya to her favourite restraurant and have dinner then upon his angel's request both go to the beach and have a lot of ice-creams and then playing in the water splashing water at each other
Their masti comes to an end after a long drive with music in full volume
They come back home and soon they were in their dreamland as they were hell tired and were waiting eagerly for tomorrow
Phew
So this was part 5
The most longest part till now with two songs
Dont blame me for the songs Actually was only adding Main yahaan hoon
But while writing I was listening to Khudaya Ve so added it also
Hope you like it
Do comment or atleast press the like button to appreciate it
Take Care
Zoya
Edited by Zoya_01 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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awesome yaar!
just loved it
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: Ansh_Arti

awesome yaar!

just loved it

Thanx dear for commenting
Take Care
Zoya
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Posted: 15 years ago
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u r going rockinggg jaana ! im soo proud of u ! u took ALL MY IDEAS!! N WROTE IT DOWN!!!
Waise how u come to kno abt my ideas:O
love
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Posted: 15 years ago
Dear Zoya,

It was too good dear.👏
very sweet.😛
Bharti missing Armaan so much. And the main yahan hu song. It was just lovely. though it reminded me of the "Veer Zara" song😆
And Armaan misses her too. His song is too touching as well.
I felt so bad how Armaan couldn't meet Bharti at the airport.
But I felt so happy that Bharti is coming back.😃
I loved their phone conversation.
And lastly the Armaan-Jia part. It was too cute. It reminded me todays BB show.
Continue soon dear

Kaninikadi

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