Short OS....A Rajputaani's Inner Turmoil - Page 2

Originally posted by: swara98

Great OS nutz 👏 you rightly defined the inner turmoil of a rajput lady
do continue it na 😛

Thanks 😊 I'll try to continue..let's see 😉

So short but so sweet
Well expressed
And in few lines you gave the whole turmoil in that rajputani
Really breathtaking even though it was short
Loved it 👏 👏

Originally posted by: roshallovepraja

So short but so sweet
Well expressed
And in few lines you gave the whole turmoil in that rajputani
Really breathtaking even though it was short
Loved it 👏 👏

Thank you so much for loving it 😳

wow you left me speechless! this made me travel backto the pre jauhar scenes. and yes this still applies to all the wives of the army navy and airforce servicemen. a salute to their families!👏

Brilliant writing👏👏👏 very touching⭐️

Originally posted by: Suranya_Titli

wow you left me speechless! this made me travel backto the pre jauhar scenes. and yes this still applies to all the wives of the army navy and airforce servicemen. a salute to their families!👏

Thanks! Yes! It still applies for a the world end of the soldiers today who must be. Facing all these emotions but still be giving support and motivation to their husbands...and even husbands to their wives who are in the army!
I'm glad you liked it 😛

Originally posted by: dsm123

Brilliant writing👏👏👏very touching⭐️

salute to them

Thanks 😳 glad you liked it! 😛

OH! Natasha!! My darling!!!


This is so beautiful!!And yet so full of pain and sacrifice... 😭

You have captured the emotions so wonderfully - a Rajputaani is a Rajputaani before being everything else - that includes being a mother, a wife, a daughter, a sister...


No other relationship is more important than her relationship to her motherland - and so she must smile and bid goodbye - to all these relations - while they sacrifice themselves, and she sacrifices herself for the honour and protection of the motherland they all value more than everything else.

This filled me, again with the pride, and humility, that the last week's track on the show had...


My head bows in respect, and devotion for these incomparably brave women...

And hats off to you, for doing so much justice to their life and their sacrifice - in so few words. I love the simplicity and yet the complexity and depth of this OS.


Love and respect,
RuVa

Originally posted by: RuVa

OH! Natasha!! My darling!!!


This is so beautiful!!And yet so full of pain and sacrifice... 😭

You have captured the emotions so wonderfully - a Rajputaani is a Rajputaani before being everything else - that includes being a mother, a wife, a daughter, a sister...


No other relationship is more important than her relationship to her motherland - and so she must smile and bid goodbye - to all these relations - while they sacrifice themselves, and she sacrifices herself for the honour and protection of the motherland they all value more than everything else.

This filled me, again with the pride, and humility, that the last week's track on the show had...


My head bows in respect, and devotion for these incomparably brave women...

And hats off to you, for doing so much justice to their life and their sacrifice - in so few words. I love the simplicity and yet the complexity and depth of this OS.


Love and respect,
RuVa

Thank you so so much!!
You know when I began to write...I didn't have to even think...words just flowed from my mind and found their way on the paper...
I'm really glad that you'll liked it so much!
Though nothing said about them can ever be enough to express what feelings we have in our hearts for these brave Kshatranis!
Thanks a lot 😳

Sometimes just a few lines are all that is needed. You captured so much in these few words.