Short OS....A Rajputaani's Inner Turmoil

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Ok..so this isn't very good...and it is quite short..but I just felt like writing this..it's my take on what a woman feels while bidding her husband goodbye when he is going off to war..
It is the other side of the brave Rajputaanis we see..
No disrespect meant to anybody...this is just something I had in my mind and I penned it down



And There he was going...a smile on his face...he was going to embrace his death..
Not a trace of fear...nor a trace of sadness..
Just pure enthusiasm..and love for his motherland
That feeling of love for his motherland overcame all his difficulties and it just somehow jumped over all the hesitations he had..

Don't get me wrong..I'm proud of him..his courage...his bravery...and soon his sacrifice
But it is difficult for me to accept all this without a foolish tear dropping from my eyes..
Not that I don't try to keep it from dropping..
But I love him...I love him more than anything in this love..
Hadn't I asked for only one thing in my life...my husband should stay with me..
But I knew in mind that he has asked for only one thing...his motherland's safety..
It was always his priority..
I know I ought to be happy that he is dying for something he lives for..
But it isn't easy! It is taking away the life in me!
It feels as if my world will collapse the second I bid him goodbye!
I want to scream, cry and shout but I can't!
I can't because I'm a warrior's wife...I can't just let my emotions jump over me..
Even though it takes my life away..I have to be brave...a brave Rajputani!
Because I am a Rajputani before being a mother, a wife or anything else...


Do let me know if you like it 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Beautiful!👏👏This is the very style of writing i like,twined up in emotions!😃
Very emotional one!
I want more of it natasha!😛😉
PS-I'm first.🥳
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: crazy-for-praja

Beautiful!👏👏This is the very style of writing i like,twined up in emotions!😃

Very emotional one!
I want more of it natasha!😛😉
PS-I'm first.🥳


Thank you 😳 I didn't really plan it...I just thought of it and then it started flowing by itself...I meant to make it longer but did not..I'm really glad you liked it
I will try to give you more Firstie darling ❤️
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Natasha

This is me at the moment
You have penned down something that was there in the back side of my head especially when we saw the last week track of the show
A Rajputani at the end of the day has to forget all relations and be a brave person so that she can become others strength
We forget that she herself is a human being with some dreams and aspirations but duty comes first

Brilliantly written OS

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: twilightlover29

Natasha

This is me at the moment
You have penned down something that was there in the back side of my head especially when we saw the last week track of the show
A Rajputani at the end of the day has to forget all relations and be a brave person so that she can become others strength
We forget that she herself is a human being with some dreams and aspirations but duty comes first

Brilliantly written OS



Awww 😊
A Rajputani is truly amazingly brave!
Thanks a lot! I'm glad you liked it 😛
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Mindblowing OS Natasha 👏
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Nonie12345

<font size="4" color="#ff0000">Mindblowing OS Natasha👏</font>


Thank you so much 😉
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Awesome one there Nutz. Very touching, very true.
The brave Kshatraanus will not be bereft of emotions, it is just how they deal with it that makes them brave. You brought out this beautiful subtle side of them ver well.

Well thought one dear. Keep rocking!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Kaana

Awesome one there Nutz. Very touching, very true.
The brave Kshatraanus will not be bereft of emotions, it is just how they deal with it that makes them brave. You brought out this beautiful subtle side of them ver well.

Well thought one dear. Keep rocking!


Thank you 😛 I'm glad you liked it! 😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Great OS nutz 👏 you rightly defined the inner turmoil of a rajput lady
do continue it na 😛

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