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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: crazy-for-praja


Thanks natasha! 😊Did you read the prologue as well?


Yes I did 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
#22
Finally read the story! A very unique concept efficienctly executed warna generally mujhe praja ke sivay koi love story achi nahi lagti but shAn is really good only because of ur characters 👏
I loved shalivahan's full niharofying mode 😳
All the best for the newsletter I know it will be successful 😉
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: aayu_26

Finally read the story! A very unique concept efficienctly executed warna generally mujhe praja ke sivay koi love story achi nahi lagti but shAn is really good only because of ur characters 👏
I loved shalivahan's full niharofying mode 😳
All the best for the newsletter I know it will be successful 😉

Thanks aayu! I'm glad you liked it. 😊
BTW,it is more on pratap-chand-maan bonding. ShaAn is only the demand of a few chapters. 😉
All the best to you too.👍🏼 Waiting for your section.😛
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Posted: 10 years ago
#24
Ramyaaa !!! 🤗🤗🤗
Beautiful update !! 👏

Ohooo...humaari confused si Maan Kunwar ab dhire dhire pyaar mein padne lagi hain 😳😆
Love the ShaAn bonding ! 😃

Pratap's yojna is working !! 🥳
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Posted: 10 years ago
#25
ShaAn.. !!so the new love birds are in town... 🥳
read the both parts in one go.. & I totally loved it..well done dear.. 👏 pls don't loose ur hopes.. and continue the story.. 😉 & wishing the best for all of us for our first newsletter...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: rinall

Ramyaaa !!! 🤗🤗🤗

Beautiful update !! 👏

Ohooo...humaari confused si Maan Kunwar ab dhire dhire pyaar mein padne lagi hain 😳😆
Love the ShaAn bonding ! 😃

Pratap's yojna is working !! 🥳

Rinal yaara!!🤗🤗 Thanks friend.😊
Yes,pratap's plan is working and maan is falling in love.😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: ApekshaM

ShaAn.. !!so the new love birds are in town... 🥳
read the both parts in one go.. & I totally loved it..well done dear.. 👏 pls don't loose ur hopes.. and continue the story.. 😉 & wishing the best for all of us for our first newsletter...

Thanks apeksha!😊 I'm so glad you liked this new couple.😃
Yes,will surely continue.😉 And all the very best to you too.😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Congrats for the new story Ramya 😃
The prologue and two chapters are amazing😆
Loved the conversation between ajabde and maan ❤️
The bonding of maan and KS is very cute😳
PM me for the next chapter⭐️
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Nonie12345

Congrats for the new story Ramya 😃

The prologue and two chapters are amazing😆
Loved the conversation between ajabde and maan ❤️
The bonding of maan and KS is very cute😳
PM me for the next chapter⭐️

Thank you so much nonie! 😊 Sure,will pm you.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Good morning everyone! First of all i'm really sorry for updating late.I was a little busy,first with NL,my other ruqlal ff and then with my admissions.😔I hope you all will forgive me!😛
Now,without more delay,i'm giving you the next update-

CHAPTER-3

When maan returned to her room,she was still the colour of blood and was smiling shyly to herself.When chand saw this,she took the opportunity to tease her.

chand:kya baat hai jija,aap badi prasanna lag rahin hain.aur aapka ye mookh itna laal kyun ho raha hai,kahin ye suryadev ka chamatkar to nahi kyunki aap humare karan bahut samay tak bahar hi thi?
maan:ab bas kijiye chand,humme kuch kshana akela chod dijiye.
chand:thik hai jaisa aap kahein.kintu kya hum jijusa ko bula lein?
maan(blushing badly):chand aap bhi na.(pretending anger) ab aap jayiye yahan se.(chand left)

maan's pov:ye kya ho raha hai humme?hum kunwarji ke prati iss prakar ka vyavahar kyun kar rahein hain?nahi,humme toh unse ghrina hai,ki ve humme apne parivar se,apne dadabhai se, aur chand se alag karna chahte hain.arey nahi maan,kunwarji toh bahut acche hain.unhone aaj do baar humari sahayata ki.

And the head and the heart were at war with each other until ajabde came in.

ajab:kyun maan kaise lage aapko KS?
maan(stammering):hum...humme kaise lag sakte hain ve?hum toh unse... ghrina karte hain.haan ghrina karte hain.
ajab:accha kripya apne hriday se puchiye.
maan(thinking hard):nahi shayad nahi karte..ya shayad karte hain..ya... bhabhisa humme kuch samajh nahi aa raha hai ki humme kya ho raha hai.pata nahi humme ek ajeeb sa khichav anubhav ho raha hai.aisa lag raha hai ki kunwarji itne bure bhi nahi hain.
ajab:ya phir shayad bahut acche hain?
maan:haan ve bahut acche hain.Unhone aaj do baar humari sahayata ki aur ve kitna dhyan rakhte hain humara.
ajab:toh hum bhi toh yahi keh rahein hain na ki ve aapka bahut dhyan rakhenge.aur hum batate hain aapko ki kya hua hai,aapko kunwarji se prem ho gaya hai.
maan:nahi nahi bhabhisa aisa kuch nahi hai,aur na hi kabhi hoga...ya..
ajab:ek baar punah apne hriday se puchiye,kya aap unke bina reh payengi?
maan:nahi! arthat haan..vo..
ajab:ab aap swayam se to asatya mat kahiye,aur aap man lijiye ki aap unse prem karne lagi hain.accha ab hum chalte hain.

After ajab left,maan was trying to reason with herself.
maan:nahi hum nahi karte hain unse prem ya kuch aur.ve toh humare mitra bhi nahi hai...ya shayad hain kyunki unhone humare prano ki raksha ki..ya..
She couldn't sleep the whole night,thinking about this and about him.But somewhere her heart knew that it belonged only to him.

Meanwhile in praja's room,ajabde came in only to find chand and kp waiting for her.
ajab:kp,aapki yojana kaam kar rahi hai,maan ko toh lagta hai sachmuch KS acche lagne lagein hain.
chand:bhabhisa,sab humara kamal hai.humne hi toh jija ko uss vriksha se humari gend nikalne ko kaha aur baad mein jijusa ko bhi bulane hum hi gaye.
ajab:ye baat to manni padegi chand.
kp:haan toh ab maan ka kya haal hai?
ajab:ve toh aaj ratbhar so nahi payengi.ve swayam itni udhedbun mein hai.
kp:uttam,aur ab toh humme vishwas hai ki ve kal ks ko na nahi keh payengi.
ajab:bilkul nahi,ab toh ve unse prem karne lagengi.
chand:dadabhai kya yukti sochi hai aapne.
ajab:haan kp.
kp:dhanyawad ajabde,chand.humne toh ye sab keval apni behen ke liye kiya hai.hum chahte hain ki ve sadaiv prasanna rahein.

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Waiting for your reviews.😃
Have a great day everyone.😊


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