SS: Ek Hazaaron Mein Meri Behna Hai(Complete pg25!!!) - Page 2

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Posted: 10 years ago
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hi Ramya! Fantastic update👏 Maan has become very naughty😆, planning to trick her dadabhai, kuch karna padega. loved the bonding between Maan and Ajab. eager to read next part😃.

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: poeple1234

hi Ramya! Fantastic update👏 Maan has become very naughty😆, planning to trick her dadabhai, kuch karna padega. loved the bonding between Maan and Ajab. eager to read next part😃.

Hi vibha! Thanks a lot friend!😃 Will update soon.😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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This silence is killing me!😭 Guys atleast like toh karo!!😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hey Ramya saw the update abhi I'll read it later and then comment kyunki am off for dinner theek hai and also as I ahve assignment due on Saturday isiliye day mein nahi dekh paayi update...sorry

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: twilightlover29

Hey Ramya saw the update abhi I'll read it later and then comment kyunki am off for dinner theek hai and also as I ahve assignment due on Saturday isiliye day mein nahi dekh paayi update...sorry

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No worries dear! Pls take your time.😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Heya guys! As i would be a little busy with the newsletter and all now,i'm giving you the next update today.I know,that many of you are busy but iss baar koi bahana nahi chalega.Sab ko comment karna padega,story par bhi aur more importantly,NL par bhi.😉
CHAPTER-2
(flashback continued)

After maan finally agreed to meet ks, kp,ajab and chand decided to leave her alone for some time.So,they came out of the room,but ajab was looking a little tensed.She rebuked kp for his negligence and foolishness.

ajab:kp,aapne ye kya kiya?nirnay maan par chod diya?ab ve awashya hi vivah se inkaar kar dengi,chahe ve ks se mile ya nahi.
kp:ajabde,aap chinta na karein.hum apni behen ke rag-rage se parichit hain.hum jante hain,ki ve aisa hi karna chahti hain.kintu ve aisa kar nahi payengi.
ajab:parantu kyun?
kp:humare paas ek upay hai ajabde,kintu humme aap dono ki sahayata chahiye.
ajab:batayiye kp,hum aapki kya sahayata karein?
kp:kripya thoda nikat aayiye.(he whispered something to them in their ears) toh boliye kya kehti hain aap dono?
chand:vaah dadabhai kya yojana hai.ab toh jija nahi bach payengi.
ajab:haan kp,aapki yojana awashya hi safal hogi.hum saath denge aapka isme.
kp:dhanyawad ajabde,chand.ab humme kal tak ki pratiksha karni hogi,jab ks aur unke dajiraj mewar padharenge.

The next day,ks and raja ramshah were given a warm welcome by US and kp.After a little discussion of state matters admist others,both ks and rajaji retired to the guest rooms to take a nap after the long journey.
When ks was still in deep sleep,chand came to him looking really nervous.

chand:jijusa jijusa humari sahayata kijiye jijusa.
ks:kya baat hai chand kanwar?aap itni ghabrayi hui kyun lag rahin hain?
chand:jijusa,jija..jija ve humare karan sankat mein pad gayin hain.
ks:sankat,kaisa sankat?humme batayiye ,hum aapki sahayata karenge.
chand:darasal jijusa,hum voh bahar khel rahe the,kintu na jane kaise humari gend vahan ek vriksha par phas gayi thi.humne jija se kaha ki ve humari sahayata karein kintu ve jab usse lene ke liye thoda upar chadhin toh vriksha ki ek tehni tootne lagi.yadi humne shighra kuch nahi kiya toh ve gir jayengi.
ks:kya?hum abhi jate hain unki sahayata ke liye.
chand:aap shighra jayiye jijusa,tab tak hum dadabhai ko bhi suchit karte hain.
ks:thik hai.

Ks ran desperately in the direction as described by chand to save his would-be wife.He found her clinging to a branch with great difficulty.As soon as he came closer to her,the branch broke,but fortunately,she fell right into his arms and he caught hold of her.Being scared,she closed her eyes,fearing a painful fall,but when no such thing happened,she opened her eyes to behold her hero.Her eyes met with those of this unknown saviour of hers and she paused for a few moments,not realising the awkward position she was in.Even ks was lost in her beauty and couldn't take his eyes off her.When she realised her situation,she was all red and too embarresed and shy to speak anything more.She got down and a silence prevailed between them until ks decided to break it.

ks:aap thik toh hain na?
maan:ji?ji hum thik hain.aapka dhanyawad aapne humari sahayata ki.humme girne se bacha liya.
ks:uski koi awashyakta nahi hai baisa,ye toh humara kartavya tha.
maan(smiling shyly):accha ab hum chalte hain.

She went on to go,but found out that her leg was paining badly.

ks:aap kuch kshana yahin vishram kar lijiye.
maan:ji...(noticing his attire and concluding he was some prince)kunwarji.
maan(seeing a beautiful parrot in the garden)dekhiye na kunwarj,kitna pyara tota hai.kya aap isse pakad sakte hain humare liye?
ks:pakad toh hum sakte hain,kintu humare vicahar se panchiyon ko sadaiv khule aakash mein hi udte rehna chahiye.yadi koi aapko ya humme ya kisi bhi manushya par apna adhikar jama le,bilkul jaise vo mughal humari mathrubhumi ka adhigrahan karne ka prayas kar raha hai toh sochiye humme kaisa lagega?
maan(impressed by his sensitivity and patriotism):aap sahi keh hain kunwarji.
ks:baisa,prakriti ke saundarya se badhkar aur kuch nahi.
maan:haan kunwarji,ye vriksha aur van,ye pashu-pakshi,inn sabka saundarya toh amulya hai.
ks(looking at her):aur aapka bhi...nahi,vo humara artha tha ki...
maan(blushing):aapka dhanyawad kunwarji humari prashansa karne ke liye.vaise aapne humne aapko pehchana nahi..
ks:ji hum hain gwalior ke kunwar shalivahan.

Maan was shocked to hear his name.Oh god!this was the same kunwar shalivahan who had sought her hand from dajiraj.And she hated him for doing that.She couldn't bear the sight of him and she so wanted to just go away immediately,but something was stopping her from doing so.She felt a sudden attachment towards him,something that she herself couldn't explain.Ironically,she wanted to stay with him more and talk to him for long.This was a strange feeling,something that she had encountered for the first time in her life.She herself couldn't monitor what she did next.

maan:aapse milkar humme bahut prasannata hui kunwarji.accha ab humme chalna chahiye,chand humari pratiksha kar rahi hongi.hum dobara aapse jald hi milenge.
ks:ji baisa.

Words mere words,she didn't move an inch from the place as if she wanted him to stop her and nature,in its strange ways,helped her with this.Some pollen fell into her eyes and she cried in pain.Ks helped her again this time, by bringing some cool water for her to wash her face.After washing,she felt better and she was grateful to him once again.

maan:kunwarji,humme samajh mein nahi aa raha hai ki hum aapka dhanyawad kaise karein?aapne aaj do(2) baar humari sahayata ki.
ks:uski koi awashyakta nahi hai.
maan:ab humme chalna chahiye.

And she ran from the place before her heart could stop her from doing so,smiling at herself and blushing all over.

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I hope you all will like the update😊.Even if you don't just tell me.I won't continue if you don't find it interesting.😔
Now that maan and kunwar shalivahan are a couple,how about a couple name for them?Any suggestions?😉
Edited by crazy-for-praja - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Finally maine story padh li - honestly yeh studies na mereko bahut tang kar rahi thi but maine break liya and read your story

Interesting concept at work here Ramya - good job for bringing out the other characters as well
So Maan and Shalivahan are a couple nice inke liye - Maliva or Mahaan or Shalaan chalega - I know itne interesting nahi hei re but abhi studies se aayi hoon so bheja fry ho rakha hai

Two stories at once + newsletter + games + bak bak thread- alot of things happening Ramya- just be calm and patient and give time because wahan toh its a working day na so everyone would be busy I'm sure sab log weekends par story padenge and comment karenge
Don't loose heart

PS: I'm first!!!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: twilightlover29

Finally maine story padh li - honestly yeh studies na mereko bahut tang kar rahi thi but maine break liya and read your story

Interesting concept at work here Ramya - good job for bringing out the other characters as well
So Maan and Shalivahan are a couple nice inke liye - Maliva or Mahaan or Shalaan chalega - I know itne interesting nahi hei re but abhi studies se aayi hoon so bheja fry ho rakha hai

Two stories at once + newsletter + games + bak bak thread- alot of things happening Ramya- just be calm and patient and give time because wahan toh its a working day na so everyone would be busy I'm sure sab log weekends par story padenge and comment karenge
Don't loose heart

PS: I'm first!!!!

Yes yaar studies.😭Badi mushkil se ab jaake piche choota hai unse.But now i'm free so zyada se zyada updates kar rahi hun.😛
Thanks for liking my story.Vaise,i thought of ShaAn.ye kaisa hai?😕
Yes yaar, and i hope ki NL is also successful.
Yes you are first.😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
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This story is really amazing...I read both updates in one go..and they are really nice!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Natasha_1234

This story is really amazing...I read both updates in one go..and they are really nice!

Thanks natasha! 😊Did you read the prologue as well?

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