SS: Ek Hazaaron Mein Meri Behna Hai(Complete pg25!!!)

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hello everyone out there! 😊First of all thanks for liking my first ff 'symbol of love'.😃As u all know,the story is now just towards its ending and i will wind it up in another 4-5 chapters. Meanwhile, another story idea has already come to me and i thought of sharing it with u all.I'm off for 2 days on a small vacation with family and till then i hope to get ur comments and views on this story which would be enough for me to continue.However,it will take some time to update this story and i hope u all will be patient with it.😉

PROLOGUE

The whole of chittor was decorated with diyas and flowers,bandhanas and lanterns.Afterall it was the big day for the beloved princess of mewar,rajkumari maan kanwar.She was getting married to the prince of gwalior,kunwar shalivahan singh tomar.Preparations were in full swing as the baraat was expected any time now.Delicious food was being prepared for the guests.The mandap was being adorned with beautiful garlands and candles.Maids were running to and fro making arrangements.Pandit chakrapani mishra was incharge of the whole celebration.He had to ensure that all the festivities took place in a grand manner as instructed by ranaji and rajaji.He was also responsible for the pheras and the saat vachans to be taken by newly wed couple.

While all the people of mewar were thus engrossed,ajabde and chand were helping the bride get ready.When she was almost done with her make up and jewellery ,ajab took her in front of the mirror and said to her.

ajab:dekhiye maan swayam ko.kitni sundar lag rahin hain aap.aaj toh kunwar shalivahan(ks) aapko dekhte hi reh jayenge.
chand(laughing):haan jija.humne toh pehle hi soch rakha hai ki hum bhaari neg lenge jijusa se.aakhir humari jija ko le jaa rahein hain ve.hum unse kahenge ki ve aapka dhyan rakhein anyatha hum unhe aapko nahi le jaane denge.

Somehow,maan didn't seem too pleased at their comments.She did try to smile,but her inner being was being torn with emotions.For a second she was happy and unhappy in the other.For a moment,she experienced tension and relaxation in the other.
She wasn't able to make out what was happening with her and her heart when kunwar pratap(kp) entered the room.He looked at her awestruck.She was wearing a sparkling red ghaghra with a colourful odhni.She was decked up in ornaments from top to toe and was finding it difficult to even stand with all those.She was looking gorgeous in the bridal attire.

kp:maan,kitni sundar lag rahin hain aap.

When maan saw kp,she just hastened to him and hugged him leaving kp shocked.
kp:kya hua maan?aap janti hain achanak se kitni badi ho gayin hain aap.ab aapka vivah hone jaa raha hai.aap janti hain aap kitni choti thi jab hum saath-saath khela karte the.aur aaj itne varshon ke baad lagta hai jaise,jaise kal ki hi baat ho.
maan:dadabhai hum aapse punah keh rahein hain.humme nahi karna yeh vivah.humme yahin rehne dijiye naa apne paas.aap sabke paas.

And both brother and sister cried their hearts out while still hugging each other tightly.
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This story is mostly on brother-sister bonding and i really hope u all like it.😃
Eagerly waiting for ur reviews.Both appreciation and criticism are most welcome.😊



INDEX

Prologue ^^
Chapter-1 pg2
Chapter-2 pg3
Chapter-3 pg4
Chapter-4 pg6
Chapter-5 pg7
Chapter-6 pg9
Chapter-7 pg12
Chapter-8 pg17
Chapter-9 pg19
Chapter-10 pg22
Chapter-11 pg25
Epilogue pg25

Edited by ramya06 - 9 years ago


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Posted: 10 years ago
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In love with your unique idea ramya 😉
Do continue 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: aayu_26

In love with your unique idea ramya 😉
Do continue 😊

Awww thanks aayu!😳 Will surely continue.😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Awww this is so cute yar !! 🤗
What a wonderful idea, Ramya !! 👏
Please continue with the story !! 😊

PS----Finally caught the name of that prince from Gwalior Otherwise, I used to call him Gwalior ka Golu 😆😆(that pseudonym was the idea of Dhanashree 😉😆)
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Nice prologue ramya 👏
Do continue with the story
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: rinall

Awww this is so cute yar !! 🤗

What a wonderful idea, Ramya !! 👏
Please continue with the story !! 😊

PS----Finally caught the name of that prince from Gwalior Otherwise, I used to call him Gwalior ka Golu 😆😆(that pseudonym was the idea of Dhanashree 😉😆)

Thanks rinal.🤗Will surely continue.😊
Vaise naam toh mujhe bhi nahi pata tha.Found it on wikipedia.😉
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Originally posted by: swara98

Nice prologue ramya 👏
Do continue with the story

Thanks swara!😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Looking forward to it. it will be cute.
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Originally posted by: coderlady

Looking forward to it. it will be cute.

Thanks friend! Will surely continue.😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hello everyone! 😊I know you all are waiting for my updates but i haven't finished yet with the other story so i wasn't able to update.But now for some days,i will come on to this ss.
Here is the first chapter-
CHAPTER-1

(flashback)
Chand kanwar came heaving and panting to her room,where her sister maan was trying to stitch something for herself. She was struggling to put the thread into the needle hole and was exhausted of wetting it again and again.She had finally succeeded in her job when an excited chand came in calling for her and the needle escaped from her hands,much to her disappointment.

chand:jija!
maan(getting irritated):kya hai chand?aapko dikhayi nahi deta hum ek atyawashyak karya karne ka prayas kar rahein hain aur aapne sab kuch bigad diya.
chand(catching up with her breath):jija,aap janti hain,dajiraj aur dadabhai aapke vivah ki baat kar rahein hain.
maan(without listening):toh usme hum kya karein...ek kshana rukiye,aapne abhi-abhi jo kaha kripya dohrayiye.
chand:jija,dajiraj aapke vivaah ke vishay mein soch rahein hain.ve aapke vivah ke liye gwalior naresh se baat kar rahe the.
maan:kya humara vivah??

It was as if an entire world had broken down on her.Like most other teenagers,she didn't want to get married at this point of time.She considered herself too young to shoulder such responsibilities.And most importantly she didn't want to leave this home-the only home she knew.She wanted to spend her whole life with her parents and her siblings.She wasn't ready for marriage-atleast not now.

maan(shocked):kintu unhone humse toh kuch kaha hi nahi iss baare mein.aur dadabhai vo humare saath aisa kaise kar sakte hain?
chand:jija,aapko toh prasanna hona chahiye na.aapka vivah ho raha hai,gwalior ke kunwar shalivahan ke saath.
maan:ek baar dadabhai ko aane dijiye phir hum unhe batate hain.ve bhi iss sab mein dajiraj ke saath samilit ho gaye?


At the same time ajabde and Kunwar pratap entered the room to inform maan about this.

kp(hearing half of what she just said):kya?hum kisme samilit ho gaye?
maan:dadabhai,aap yahaan se chale jayiye.humme aapse koi baat nahi karni.aap yahi chahte hain na ki hum yahan se chale jayein.kintu hum aisa nahi karenge.aur ek baat,humme vivah nahi karna,nahi karna,nahi karna.
kp:kintu kyun maan?
chand:humme bhi toh yahi samajh nahi aa raha hai dadabhai.pata nahi jabse humne inse kaha ki aap aur dajiraj inke vivah ki bat kar rahein hain toh...
kp(understanding):accha toh ye baat hai.
ajab:aap apne dadabhai se rusht hain na.humse toh nahi?
maan:ji nahi bhabhisa.bhala hum aapse kaise rusht ho sakte hain.
ajab:toh hum aapse kuch akele mein baat karna chahte hain.
maan:kintu aap vachan dijiye ki aap vivah ke vishay mein humse koi baat nahi karengi
ajab:accha thik hai vachan..(signalling kp and chand to leave)
ajab(when they left):haan toh ab batayiye ki aap vivah kyun nahi karna chahti?
maan:ye toh galat hai bhabhisa,aapne humse kaha tha ki aap iss vishay par koi baat nahi karengi.
ajab:maan,jab tak kisi samasya ka karan nahi pata chalta bhala uska samadhan kaise nikal sakta hai.
maan:bhabhisa,hum toh abhi chote hain na.humme iss samay vivah nahi karna.humme aap sabko,dadabhai ko,chand ko chodkar , iss mahal ko chodkar nahi jaana.ye humara ghar hai na.
ajab:accha toh ek baat batayiye, humari kya aayu thi jab humara vivaah hua tha?
maan:humare mat se..aap 17 baras ki thi.
ajab:sochiye yadi humne uss samay aisa hi socha hota toh?yadi humne ye socha hota ki humme humare parivar se alag nahi hona toh?toh kya humme itna accha parivar milta,kya humme aap aur chand jaisi pyari nanand milti?
maan:nahi bhabhisa.
ajab:dekhiye maan,jivan mein kabhi-kabhi kuch paane ke liye kuch khona bhi padta hai.
maan:kintu hum aap sabko chodkar kahin nahi jaana chahte hain.
ajab:maan,aap hum sabko chodkar kahin nahi jaa rahin hain.aap jab chahe yahaan aa sakti hain.hum sab sadaiv aapke apne hi rahenge.
maan:aap shayad thik keh rahin hain bhabhisa.
ajab:toh ab boliye,kya aap ab bhi vivah nahi karengei?
maan:thik hai...
ajab(excitedly):kp,chand aap dono bhitar aa jayiye.
kp:toh maan,kya socha hai aapne?
maan(hugging him and chand):dadabhai hum aap sab ko chodkar kahin nahi jaana chahte hain.
ajab:aapko aisa karne ko koun keh raha hai?humne abhi-abhi aapko kya samjhaya tha?
kp:maan,hum bhi nahi chahte hain,ki aap humse door ho jayein.kintu hum keval itna chahte hain ki humari behen sadaiv prasanna rahe.aur dekhiyega,ks aapko sadaiv prasanna rakhenge.
maan:dadabhai,hum toh yahan bhi bahut prasanna hain.aur phir kaise reh payenge hum aapke bina?
kp:kehte hain ki mata-pita ka kartavya hota hai apni santano ka vivah karna.aur vaise hi ek bade bahi ka bhi.
maan:kintu dadabhai..
ajab:maan,ks aur unke pita parson apse milenge.
maan:accha thik hai dadabhai,yadi aap kehte hain toh, hum unse mil lete hai,kintu vivah par antim nirnay keval humara hoga.
kp:accha thik hai,humari pyari behena.nirnay aapka.
maan's pov(smirking):keval dadabhai ki santushti ke liye hum unse milenge,aur baad mein keh denge ki humme unse vivah hi nahi karna.ve humme acche hi nahi lage.
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I hope that you all like this story as it is based on something slightly different.Waiting for your reviews to continue sooner.😃
Edited by crazy-for-praja - 10 years ago

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