PrAja - Before and After Marriage. - Page 7

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hye Dear... Aree Woh Pratap Ko Pratishodh Lena Hai Na From Hand Chudaying Scene... (Part 5)... I Just Remembered While Reading Once Again...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Part #7

NEXT MORNING.
Pratap and Ajabde's faldan ceremony occurred.
Everyone was very happy. Ajabde was sitting beside Pratap ( her face was covered still )
After the ceremony Ajabde was talking with Saubhagyawati.
Beside her JB AND HB were dicussing..
JB : Aj hi hume yaha se jana hoga Hansa 2 din bad vivah hai. Bohot sari taiyariya karni hogi.
HB : Haan. Ab to hum apko chah kar bhi rok nahi sakte. Kal hamari Ajab ki mehendi hai , uske bad sangeet hai. Kitne sare kam baki hai.
JB : Haan. Aur 2 din bad to firse ana hai hamesha hamesha ke liye Ajabde ko le jana hai.
Ajabde heard it.. She felt sad and runned away from there in the garden.
Ajabde to herself : Hum kaisa rahenge Maa , data , Balwant sabke bina.
Pratap came behind her. He said : Ajabde , Sabko bura lagta hai hume pata hai , par humne kaha na Ajab apse hum apko itna itna khush rakhenge , itna adar aur samman ke sasth apko rakhenge ki apko fursat hi nahi milegi Hansa Masi ji aur Rao Mamrat ji ko yad karne ka.
Ajabde was crying and she suddenly turned around and kept her head on Pratap's chest. Pratap kept his hand on her shoulder.
They both felt that heavenly pleasure.
Ajabde : Dhanyavad Kunwar Pratap.
Then she suddenly put her head up ( her face was covered as usual :(... ) and turned arund.
Suddenly a wind came and her chunri was flying away but Pratap catched it and put it on Ajab's head from behind only.
Pratap : Ajabde , ache se dhak lijiye apne apko ki jab ham hamare Ajab ko vivah ke din dekhe uske bad hum kisike taraf bhi na dekhe.
Ajabde smiled...

Scene changes.
After having their lunch Ajabde went to her room.
Pratap , US AND JB were going back to Chittor.
They all were about to set off but Pratap thought where is AJAB ?
Pratap : Rani maa hume kuch kam hai hum abhi loutte hai.
JB : Thik hai.
Pratap went.
US : Ye Kunwar Pratap ab kaha chale gaye ?
JB : Samajhte nahi hai Ajab se milne gaye hai aur kya ?
US : Hume pura vishwas hai ki Ajabde Pratap ka bohot khayal rakhegi.

Scene changes.
Ajabde was standing in the window of her room.
Pratap came from behind and said : Ap niche kyu nahi ayi ?
Ajabde : Bas hamara man nahi hai..
Pratap : Accha.. Hume pata hai Ajab ap kyun nahi ayi kyunki apko bohot duh ho raha hai na hum jarahe hai isliye ???
Ajabde : Nah..i... Matlab.. Haan.. 2 saal bad to hum mile the aur ap firse lout rahe hai.
Pratap : Arreh.. Ajab.. Sirf 2 din ki hi to bat hai. Ab jake 2 din bad jivan bhar ke liye apko lene jo ana hai.
Ajabde smiled..
Pratap went from there. Ajabde runned towards the terrace and was watching Pratap from there.
Pratap rode on his horse and while going he looked behind and saw Ajabde ans smiled and Ajabde also smiled.
{ nOTE ; In the whole part , Ajabde's face was covered with that ' chunri ' and Pratap was not able to see her face }
Precap : Ajabde's Mehendi ceremony is taking place.
( All these ceremonies is just an imagination actually , this maybe the reality also but it's actually my imagination for the story formation )
So do share your views after reading my story ! Hope u are going to like it and love it also !
I will try to update the 8th part soon.. Till then bye and thanks a lot for commenting in my previous part of the story !
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Love this whole part...blush blush blush 😳 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awesomeee too good lovely part
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awesome update!!!! Update as soon as possible! 😳😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
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wow
so cute
i loved the way he consoled her all the time
waiting plz update soon
LOVE❤️
RADHI😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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hayee! this was so cute ...
thnks for pm ... nd sorry I always forget to comment 😆 ...
keep writing... nd update asap ... will be waiting 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Thanks for PM Dear
Awesome Writings Feels really good to Read
Update ASAP👏👏👏
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Part #8
NEXT MORNING.
Ajabde's mehendi ceremony started. Hansa Bai was sitting besidde her. Saubhagyawat was doing the mehendi.
HB : Hamari Ajab kitni jaldi bari hogayi , she was crying.
Ajabde : Ap mat roiya ma , hum apse milne ayenge avaashya.
HB : Haan.. hann. Kunwar Pratap apko ane denge.. In do dino ke liye apse juda hone jarahe the. Tab hi voh kitne dukhi the. Aur ve apko kuch dino kee liye yahape rakh ke jayenge ye to sochna bhi papa hai..
Aur kyu na ho hamare Ajab itni sundar jo hai.
Ajabde : Pata hai maa , hum Phool ko boht yad kar rahe hai.
HB : Uske bare me apke is vivah ke shubh muhrat me hum bat bhi nahi karna chahte.
Ajabde : Phool ka kya dosh hai Ma , unko to ye bhi nahi pata ki hamara vivah ho raha hai ?
HB : Aur pata na hi chale o acha hai , firse koi unhoni na hi ho to acha hai.
Ajabde : Phool kya koi unhoni hai ?
HB : Haan , Ajabde vohi thi jo apse apki khushiyan chinna chahti thi..
Ajabde : Parantu Maa..
HB : Bas Ajab hum aur kuch nahi sunna chahte. Ap hume vachan dijiye ki ap Phool ke bare me koi bat bi nahi karenge , aur Phool ko is bare me kkuch bhi nahi batayengi.
Ajabde thought for sometime and said : Thik hai maa , hum apko vachan dete hai.

Scene changes.
Pratap was going towards the rajdarbar , but JB stopped him.
JB : Ap kaha ja rehe hai Pratap ? Ab humse ye mat kahiyega ki Vivah se thik 1 din pehle ap rajdarbar ja rehe hai.
Pratap : Parantu Rani Maa , hume ja...
JB : Hum kuch nahi sunna chahte , jaiye apne kaksh mein.
Pratap : Jo agya Rani maa.
While going towards his room he saw Sajja Baigetting ready in her room.
Pratap : Manjli maa , kya hum andar aajaye ?
SB : Haan aye na.
Pratap sat on the bed.
SB : Kunwar Pratap apke vivah ke liye humne bohot sari taaiyariya ki hai , dekhiye kitne sare kapre aur zehrat ( jewelleries , actually i don't know what it is know in shudh hindi )
Kunwar Pratap , Ajabde ko apne vivah ke liye kuch diya bhi ya nahi ?
Pratap : Haan , humne unhe ek bhet diya hai ?
SB : Kya bhet diya hai , zara hume bhi to bataiya ?
Pratap : Vivah ke din dekhlijiyega Manjli maa. :P
SB : Haan haan , dekh to lenge par voh bhet Ajabde ko pasand bhi ayi ya nahi ?
Pratap : Haan , Ajabde ne kaha ki unhe ye bohot pasand aya hai.
SB : Toh thik hai abhi ap humse hi bat karte rehenge ya ap apne vivah ke din kaya pehnenge voh bhi sochenge ?
Pratap : Haan , hume to ye bhi nahi socha ki hum pehne bhi to kaya pehne ? Hum Rani maa se puchkar ate hai.

Scene changes .
Ajabde's hand was full of mehendi.
She said to Laxmi : Hum to bas sare mahal me yun hi ghumraha hai , hum koi kam bhi nahi ar pa rahe hai aur agar karne bhi jaye to Maa akee hume bar bar kaksh me bhej deti hai.
Laxmi hamara vivah ho raha hai , ap hume apke bina hi rehna hoga , Maa , data sabke bina hume rehna hoga aur ab to hume apke bina bhi rehna hoga.
Hum kisse batenge hamara sukh dukh.
HB came there.
HB : Ap zarror hamse alag ho rahe hai par apke ath ek naya rishta bandhne ja raha hai. Aur ap aisa kyun kah rahi hai ki koi nahi hai jisse ap apne sukh dukh batenge.
Kunwar Pratap hai na , vohi hai apke janmo janmo ke sathi , apke jeevan sathi aur jeevan sathi to hote hi hai apne jivan ke sukh dukh batne ke liye.
Ajabde was crying and she hugged her mother.
HB was also crying.

Scene changes
Pratap was searching for JB.
Pratap : Pata nahi ab ye Rani maa kaha chali gayi.
JB : Kya hua Kunwar Pratap , Sajja Bai ji ne kaha ki ap hume dhund rahe hai.
Pratap : Han , Rani maa voh hamara vivah to ho raHA hai par hum vivah me pehnenge kya ?
JB smiled and said : Offo itni choti bat ! Agar ap humse itne choti choti bato ke liye puchte rehengi to apke hone wali patni , Ajabde ko humse shikayat to hog.. :D
Pratap : Ajabde apka bohot adar aur samman karti hai , voh kabhi aisa soch bhi nahi sakti.
JB : Haan haan , hume pata hai ap apne patni ki prashangsa bad me kijiyega ab ap jaiya apne kaksh me jakar dekhiye.
Pratap : Kya dekhenge Rani maa ?
JB : Ap khud hi jakar dekhiyega.
Pratap : Thk hai.
Pratap went towards his room.
Precap : Pratap's and Ajabde's haldi ceremony started.
I know there is no pRaja scene. But i wil add lots of romantic scenes after their marriage but it's time for the grand wedding now ! :D
Do share your opinion ! :D

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awesome update! After seeing the back to back segments i guess everyone is in form ha? Very good very good! Keep it up and update as soon as soon as possible! 😳😉

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