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Part #6
NEXT DAY.
Jaywanta Bai and Uday Singh arrived in Bijoliya. Ajabde welcomed them.
Pratap and Ajabde both together took US AND JB's blessings.
US and JB : SaKushal raho.
Ajabde : Andar aiye.
JB : Hansa Kaisi ho ?
HB : Achi hu. Ab bas Ajab ki shadi hojaye to iskeliye meri sari chinta khatam.
Andar ao.
They all sat in the hall.
JB : Ajab idhar aiye.
Ajabde came and JB gave her bangles in shagun.
Ajabde : Dhanyavad Rani Maa.
US : Abhi kaha khatam hota hai , hum apke liye bohot sara shagun le kar aye hai.
Ajabde : Dhanyavad Rana ji.
HB : Kunwar Pratap , Ajabde ko ap acche se dekhlijiye haan..
Pratap : Kyun ?
HB : Kyunki iske bad apke vivah tak ap unhe nahi dekh payengi.
Pratap : Arreh yeh kaisa niyam hai ? Hum Ajabde ko dekhbhi nahi sakte itne din tak.
HB : Haan , yehi niyam hai. Apki Rani maa jo ek chunri lai hai na apne sath voh Ajabde ko pehnane ke bad ap unhe nahi dekh payenge.
Pratap very sad.
JB : Idhar aye Ajab.
Ajabde came infront of her. JB put the chunri over her head and covered her face.
HB : Humne apse kaha th KunwaR pRATAP ki Ajab ko dekh lijiye par apne nahi dekha. Ab to vivah tak nahi dekh payenge unhe ap.
Pratap : Toh kya hua.. Jivan bhar hume sath hi to rehna hai.
Ajabde went away.
JB : Hansa , kal Ajabde ka aur Pratap ka faldan hai fir mehendi aur fir vivah. Kitne sare kam bakh hai. Kaltak hum yaha rukenge fir hum chittor lout jayenge.
Chittor loutke hume haldi ki taiyari karni hai , aur fir vivah ki bhi to kitne sare taiyariya baki hai.
HB : Thikaha tumne.
Scene changes
Ajabde was sitting in her bed and was thinking about her sweet moments with Pratap.
Ajabde to herself : Kaisa din bitgaye aisa lagta hai ki kal hum log mile tha aur aj hamara vivah ho raha hai !
Pratap : Uchit kaha apne Ajab.
Ajabde was shocked she put her chunri down and said : Ap yaha. apse Maa ne kaha tha na ki ap humse mil nahi sakte.
Pratap : Nahi. Unhone yeh to nahi kaha tha na ki hum apko mil nahi sakte. Unhone kaha tha ki hum apko dekh nahi sakte.
Ajabde : Ab bataye kya kam ha ?
Pratap : Kam kuch nahi hai. Bas apse kuch bate karni thi.
Ajabde : Thik hai. Baitiye.
Pratap : Ajab , ap mangay ?
Ajabde : Haan. Ab kya kare. Hum agar koi karya karne jate hai rasoi me ya kuch aur to Maa karne nahi deti. Voh kehti hai ki vivah se pehle ye sab hum nahi karsakte. sIRF puja karne ke liye agya karne ke bad unhone agya di ha.
Pratap : Tab to mujhe Hansa Masi ji ko dhanyavad karna chahiye , unke liye aj hum hamare Ajab se kuch bat kar payenge.
Pata hai apko Ajabde hum kal rat soch rehe the , ki voh haldi wali bat sach nikli.
Ajabde : Haldi ?
Pratap : Arreh.. Chakrapani ke vivah ke samay haldi...
Ajabde : Oh haan. Voh haldi hamare chehre pe aggaya tha tab Maa samajh gayi thi ki hamara vivah jald hi hone wala hai.
Pratap : Han. Chakrapani ke ma ne bhi mujhe kaha tha ki mera vivah to hokar..
They both shyed..
Pratap and Ajabde together said : Arreh ! Hum yeh aisa bate kar raha hai..!
Then they loooked at each other and smiled loudly...
Precap : Ajabde's chunri flew away for the sudden wind outside , Pratap was standing behind her.
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