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kamu_zainaddict

@kamu_zainaddict

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#11

Brilliant start. bt are u doing praphool marraige

BTW continue soon

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MaxMayfield

@MaxMayfield

Trailblazer

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#12

beautiful start Celu👏 do continue😳

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....Khushboo...

@....Khushboo...

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#13

Thanx for PM Celu.

Very nice intro.

Loved it so much.

Do update soon.

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Ridhi

@mayalnee

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#14

That is Beautiful celena👏 .You made Ajabdeh's aghast and pain, so believable and real ⭐️Please keep writing more.😊 And thanks for the pm .

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MOHini21

@MOHini21

Beginner

Posted: 11 years ago

#15

Each & every emotion & each & every dialogue is beautifully written. Awesome! Eagerly looking forward for the next part.

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geetpagli

@geetpagli

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#16

Very very well written ...pls continue...😛😊

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Nethravathi Jagadish

@Nethravathi

Sparkler

Posted: 11 years ago

#17

Nice start for the Story. What? Kunwar Pratap's marriage is fixed with Ajabdeh. This is the last thing I want to see in the show. Rao Maldeo bhi maan gaye aur tho aur Kunwar Pratap jo Ajabdeh ko chaahte hai unhone bhi haan kehdiya. Yeh Ajabdeh bhi na sabki khushi ke baare mein sochthi hai sivaaye khudki. Do continue soon.

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khusam

@khusam

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#18

awww too short..
waise beautifl updt
n hw cn u say dat u vl nt updt yr nxt part..
lvd to c hw u shw pain in ajab eyes..
thanku fr d pm..totly amazng updt..plz do hpy endng.

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Srushti

@cutesrushti

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#19

Wow awesome start celena...
I think u should be a part of maharana pratap team...
Not joking...u write really well...
Plz update soon n plz PM me once u update...