PrAja (SS)- Can't live without you [Ch12-Pg35] - Page 7

Originally posted by: princessSonia

hey Aru

m Soniya..

new to MP forum..

well i was a silent member for a while..😛

Amazing ss

seems quite interesting..

do cont soon..

n do pm me if possible..

Originally posted by: Aru_A

#awesomeness #yayyayayay!!!

thanks dear,,,and what may i call u...??

don't worry, i'll update it earlier than the official date i set...

Call me kusum :) love you SS amazing love it wait for next update :D you're doing a fab job keep it up :D

really??? i really wasn't expecting people to find this update amazing...coz Ajab is not physically present here...

really????

even i wanted to kick him while i was writing this...

oh!!! those ppl...they needed to know...they simply needed to know...

yayaya!!! u happy!!!

DW, i'll update sooner than i expect...

Hi Soniya!!!

welcome here!!!!

even i was a silent...ermmm...reader. but then i joined IF n i cudn't resist myself... :P

Oh thank u so much!!!!

well...i hoe i can keep up its interestingness throughout...

yup...next udate...very soon...

k i'll try... :)
Thanks for the appreciation... :)

Originally posted by: Bonhi_ipkknd

Just read part 3, 4 and 5. -i hope u found them good...

But first of all...Im really really really sorry for commenting so abysymally late. My laptop crashed & I got a new one just today. But Im sorry again. Forgive me? -i know ur laptop story...i was worried that where were u...but have i mentioned before that no sorry's are allowed on my thread? if i haven't then i'm telling now...

der aaye, durust aaye...u atleast commented at last...some ppl don't even do that...so no need to say sorry... okay???

Now, back to the updates. Ok it was simply superb. I'll go into details. -yayayay!!! #excited

Part 3:

So Pratap is still unconsious. And we see the two girl's two completely different thought process. Where ajabdeh is all concerned, worried & evidently sad, we see Phool being the self-centered Rajkumari. Not only didn't she think of Pratap being wounded & still unconsious but wasn't even traumatized by what she gotta see. No reparcations & she also fails to know her friend as she should have guessed Pratap being after ajab's sad countenance after all Ajab did to save Pratap. Two best friends...two different personalities..comes out stark & clear over here. Wonderfully done.👏 -dhanyawaad...yup it does...coz Phool, even if she was worried in the beginning and too shocked to do anything, or inconsiderate towards Pratap, or just at ease knowing that Ajabdeh is at work,so no need to worry,everything will be fine...she is simply taking thing lightly, she knows Ajabdeh is working so nothing will happen, she is told by rajvaidyaji that Pratap is out of danger, then why to worry?? while she is going with the flow and taking things for granted as the rajkumari of Marwar, Ajabdeh doesn't even care for her position as the rajkumari...she knows the worth and value of Pratap and his life, and she also loves him to the core...she just can't let him die...infact she would have done that if anybody was on the deathbed, its her personality which is full of devotion and seva...and added that it was Pratap's life at question, nothing could have stopped her...

Ajab shares her worries with Laxmi because she can't do that with Phool...she is too self-centered. So, in a way Ajabdeh is still lonely. -there are some things for which even the close ones become the wrong people to confide in...and Laxmi being a cow, an avtar of param-shakti and purity...she is best one for confiding thinngs...

Ajab taking care of Pratap...desperate not to let any more harm come in his way. -if u compare with the coming parts, it can be called parallel to JB hugging Pratap and not letting him go away...and she is very concerned for him...she is ready to take alll his pain on herself, mark of a connected souls made-for-each-other pair... The way she told Hansa that she has to go...it was like she is already Pratap's wife.😳-lol...cute!! even i loved watching this scene in my head...Loved it. Im guessing Hansa has got the Praja intuition, right?-yep u right...HB has started catching things...which will go beyond...

Ajab's prayer to Shivji...I was touched. The girl's trying to hold up the fort but she's crumbling inside. And she has no one to lend her a shoulder. -oh i know...its so sad...and it needs so much strength...Ajab is a Rajputani, by Karm, by Dharm, by Janm, by Soch, by Shabd, by Resistance, by everything...and this state of sadness and lonliness kills so much...when u have ur close ones but u just can't tell them...even i was in this state for a year, i know perfectly well how it feels...

Jaivantha is upset. That's a mother's intuition & it's almost always right. - JB is a true mother...and she knows when her son is in pain...if u remember in the mahayudh of Boondi...when BK was beating Pratap with a hunter...Jaivantha could feel the pain miles away in Bijolia...The chapter ends with a signal that something good is gonna happen. Pratap out of awakens..?-well...do u really think??? o_O :P :D

Part 4:

JB+US arrives in Bijolia & Hansa sees them. And as expected Rao Mahamurkh doesnt even have spies who can tell him about Ranaji entering the bijolia premises. What a waste of position.😕 -even if he gets the info, he is not going to recieve them...but then, thats not much...HB le hi aayegi itni der me,so he isn't troubling himself...And that man has the nerve to outright lie in front of of US+JB about Phool saving Pratap...like really?-he is not lying actually...its that he is so strong on his belief that his doughter is good for nothing, so all the work must have been done by Phool, and if not done by phool,she must be giving instuctions...even with Ajab's partial-disappearance for three days, he can't make out what she is really up to...and he doesn't care to find out...he is simply happy that the gem for a doughter he has who he believes is good for nothing, he is simply happy that the is away from them...the bad omen is away from them...Not liking Ajab is one thing but this really...he is the worst father one can get. -we all agree on that...The Know-It-All doesnt even introduces ajab but that was best. Our Ajab doesnt need his words...she will be welcomed in a grander way when the truth actually comes out. -oh u just wait for her welcome...its one of my fav scenes...oh i feel so happy at just its thought...!!! wait for it...it'll be here soon...Tamatars & rotten eggs for MM.😡 -he definitely deserves them...i simply wanted to go inside the story and kick him while i was writing this...

So Ranaji doesnt like Phool here too..hehehe...And there's no DB over here & even Phool doesnt like Pratap yet...so no Mewar-Marwar relations crap...Can I dance?😆😆 -yup u can!!!...but then...MM's courtesy that the dislike evaporates the second it appears...

Oh God...is Phool for real...all she sees is shringaar. Mini DB. Pakka she would own a beauty salon range if she was here in these days. -lol!!vo madam to...she actually can't see things beyond shringar...do u remember in the show...when they were leaving for chittor...she spent the whole day just getting ready...nah,she is not DB...this shringar thing is present in both DB and SB...Phool is self-centred and a proud royal rajkumari,i agree, but she is not bad...she never got jealous of the attention Ajab was getting from Pratap(thaal scene...dawat scene if u remember)...she was actually giving credit to Ajab for saving Pratap...but courtesy of MM, it went to her only...

Pratap wakes up..!!! -yayaya!!!! The good happens...ajabdeh was right as always. -her inner voice is beneficial and always right...so trueee!!! Boy sleeps seeing ajab all assured that he will be safe & wakes up comforted, when his Rani Maa comes up...the two most imp persons in his life. - so true...Pratap is alive because of both of their efforts combined...JB's pooja, and chinta, and love for her son + Ajab's determination, devotion, quick thinking,seva and sacrificial mind and heart, and her love for him...these two together made it possible for Pratap to wake up from death...well, when i was writing...i once imagined that Ajab will be there aiding Pratap and he would wake up all of a sudden saying 'Ajabdeh'...but it really didn't seem right to me...it had to be the mother, it just had to be...Pratap becoming conscious in front of the den while speaking Ajabdeh's name...that just fit in perfectly...coz she was his last and only and fully faithed hope...but here...the love from a mother, its priceless, and to bring a child back from his death, the strength in mother's love can not be beaten by anyone...

Part 5:

The awesome entry of Chakri & Venidas...great timing here. -Bheem i also here. Vo kya karega apne mitron se door akela...he was also present...The eyewitnesses.-trustworthy eyewitnesses...we needed them.. And tan-ta-na- the truth.😃 - Pratap was so desperate to know every single thing...so very desperate...

Pratap's friends tells the complete story to their Baujiraj in front of US+JB & Hansa. The one's who matters gotta know. -they actually gotta know...so much efforts in by Ajab, they can't go unnoticed...Not only Ajab saving Pratap but also taking care of him relentlessly throughout these 3 days. Saving someone is one thing...you can expect it from anyone respectable but going to such lengths? Not even thinking about one's life...that's a big thing. -it is definitely big...anyone would be awestuck if they got to know that someone did so much for them...and Ajab actually crossed the limits of so much also...and everyone doesn't do that, not even for thier close ones...but it isn't a big thing for Ajabdeh...coz it was Pratap's life at stake...how could she even care to look at food when Pratap was battling every single moment with his death... Moreover chunni is the maryada which a girl wouldn't give away to just about anybody like that & Ajab even forgot about it in her worried state. - it clearly shows Ajabdeh's trust in Pratap, and ofcourse her care for him...she trusts with her whole life that Pratap will not let anything happen to anyone,not only just her...if u remember MS's attack on Bijolia, she sends her chunni to Pratap, again showing this epic symbol of respect at stake plus trust in him...And the care & prayer...everything was said in details...Ohk can I hug Pratu's friends.- oh!!deffo u can!!! as u wish!! ;) You are a star. I so so sooo love you for doing this. -who??they or me??? :P ...well, one line from a song pops in my head at this comment.. ,'My mom told me when i was young...we are all born superstars!!!" yes yes yes now everyone knows what happened. Ajab is introduced in such a royal manner...the Rajputani Ajabdeh. ⭐️ -i always wanted to show the Rajputani in her...these little things...i posted it here...and the Rajputani thing started in the show also... :P ...i love giving such parallels with small yet important things...one OS i was writing...where i was showing parallelism bw PrAja and the story of Ramayana...after all, Rajputs are Lord Rama's descendents...so thought of making it somewhat like that...

Everyone is talking without Jaivantha & US...does that mean they are analyzing something or are too shocked to say anything? -ermmm...they are difinitely shocked...even Pratap is (Pratap knows that what kind of a person id Ajabdeh and still, he is shocked at knowing what she did...JB US will to be awestruck)...they are also analying that how can someone do so much...and also...they are waiting for the story and all the argument to finish... ;P

And Pratap's reaction...beta man me laddu phoota??😆 Uska to dil garden garden ho gaya hoga. Bollywood hota to by now he would have been singing love songs in mustard fields & snow-covered mountains. So, now boy will be on a Chunni dhundho abhyan?😉 -lol!!!! lets just wait n see...what will the chunni do for him...and his Rani maa had appeared out of the blue besides him, but when he heard about Ajabdeh, he goes...what????

Now, what news have this dasi brought..? Has Ajabdeh fainted coz of lack of food or is it of that Mehmud Shah in the Bijolia? Or anything else...now Im tensed... -keep guessing...the wait isn't very long now...

P.S. OMG...what am I seeing...Is this true?? Oh no..is it? *Faints* -Oiii!!! what happened???? if u fainted than itne amazing wale comments kaun dega??????
You wrote this update for me. OMG you remembered. Omg omg omg... I so wanted this to happen in the show & I got it over here. -any wishes, any scenarois in anybody's head...please post it...if it fits in my story, i'll definitely put it...Hey Eklingji...this is the sweetest thing someone has done for me. -Awww!!!! really!!!*Tears* You've made me emotional...- awww aggain!!!don't cry dear...warna comments smudge ho jayenge... :P Have I said I love you...Have I?? Love u Aru...- oh! i love u and ur comments too!!!

I have a very nice memory...my friends say that the doctor left his pendrive of 10,000 terrabyte in my brain on my birth...whenever u ppl comment...it just gives me flashbacks of the future in the story...and i feel really happy...that u are feeling the story just the way i am...so whenever i go to type the scene which matches someone's wish, i can't help but remember that person...so i did remember u while typing this... thats it... :)
P.P.S. Please update soon...and thanx for the PM😳 -tomorrow :) its okay!!! ;)