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Rano told Rishi:Rishi,there is Pag phera function in Tanuja's house.You take her home.

Rishi:Why should I?The whole family cheated on me Maa.

Rano:They did not hide the disease from us.They did'nt expect Tanuja to have fits now.Then how can they be cheaters?

Rishi:I am not interested to go to her house.

Rano:You have to take her there.Because it's a custom...the husband has to take his newly wed bride to her own house.It's a function beta.Please...

Rishi:If I don't take her home people will have doubts about our married life.So to save my reputation in the society I will take her home.

Rano became dull.

She thought:He cares only about his image,not about anyone's happiness.

Rishi told Tanuja:You get ready to go for the Pag Phera ceremony.

Tanuja became very happy.

Rishi:But make sure that nobody comes to know about our married life.We should pretend to be a happy couple there.Otherwise I won't be able to face the public.

Tanuja became very upset.

Lakshmi was sitting in front of the mirror and wearing her earrings.Rishi stood near her.

Rishikesh:I will help you to wear the jewellery.

Lakshmi:It's ok.I can manage.

Rishikesh:Ok.

Lakshmi was struggling hard to fix the necklace behind her neck.Rishikesh held the necklace and tied it around her neck.

Rishi stood close to her romantically and said:You look very beautiful.

Lakshmi felt uncomfortable and moved away from him.

Lakshmi:Thank you Rishi.

Rishikesh smiled.He moved closer to her face and began to touch her face.

But Lakshmi walked away.Rishi:Why did Lakshmi just go away?

Rishi and Tanuja went to Tanuja's house.Her parents Bajaj and Prerna welcomed them.

Bajaj:It's our family tradition that the son in law should carry our daughter in his arms to our house for the function.

Rishi gritted his teeth in irritation.But he controlled his anger and put a fake smile on his face.

Rishi:Why not?

Rishi carried Tanuja in his arms and walked.Tanuja felt an unknown happiness in her mind.She kept looking at him in a dreamy way.

Bajaj and Prerna smiled.

They had puja there.

Bajaj gave gifts to Rishi and Tanuja.

In the bedroom....

Rishi:I am tired of pretending to be a good husband infront of your parents.2 more days I have to stay here.How will I tolerate it?

Tanuja became upset.

Rishi:You father gave nice gifts.But the biggest gift ie you became an utter flop.

Tanuja was shattered.

Rishikesh and Lakshmi went to Lakshmi's house for the pag phera ceremony.

They posed for the photograph cheerfully.

Swarna:In our family during the Pag Phera ceremony the newly wed couple has to feed food to each other.

Rishikesh blushed while Lakshmi became dull.

Rishikesh and Lakshmi fed food to each other with their hands smiling.

Manish and Swarna took Lakshmi to a corner.

Manish:You did not tell anything to Rishi.Right?

Lakshmi:If I had told him everything,instead of food,he would have fed me poison.

Manish-Swarna became upset.

Lakshmi:I have obeyed both of you.I did not tell him anything.

Lakshmi walked away.

Swarna:I am worried for Lakshmi.I hope she will have a peaceful married life.

Manish:Don't worry Swarna.Everything is fine now.

Swarna nodded.

When Rishikesh entered the bedroom he collided with Lakshmi and she began to fall down.

Rishikesh held her tight.

He looked at her beautiful eyes deeply.

Lakshmi moved away from him.

Lakshmi:Thanks for saving me.I feel sleepy.Good night!

Lakshmi went to the bed.Rishi felt neglected and sad.

On the third day at Tanuja's house....

Tanuja and Rishi were getting ready to go back home.

Tanuja went near Prerna.

Tanuja:Maa...today I will leave.I will miss you.

Prerna hugged her.Tanuja controlled her tears.

Prerna:Are you really happy with Rishi or are you both pretending to be a happy couple?

Tanuja was shocked by her question.

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It seems that Rishi misunderstood that Tanuja hid her illness from Rishi deliberately. Rano telling Rishi that Tanuja's fainting was unexpected was sensible. Sad that Lakshmi is avoiding Rishikesh. Glad that Rishi took Tanuja to her place for that ritual. It looks like both Rishi and Rishikesh have grievances towards their spouses.

It seems that Rishi misunderstood that Tanuja hid her illness from Rishi deliberately. Rano telling Rishi that Tanuja's fainting was unexpected was sensible. Sad that Lakshmi is avoiding Rishikesh. Glad that Rishi took Tanuja to her place for that ritual. It looks like both Rishi and Rishikesh have grievances towards their spouses.

Rishi caring about his own image rather than others happinessis not valid, because even he cheated by telling lies about his studies. Rishi isso rude to Tanuja. RishMi necklace scene was romantic, wonder what’s Lakshmi’s problem.Rishi carrying Tanuja in his arms even just for ritual was so romantic. Rishi istoo much, he keeps taunting Tanuja. RishMi feeding scene was cute, what are theyall hiding? Poor Rishi keeps getting avoided by Lakshmi. Bet Prerna heard everythingthat’s why asking like this, perfect pics, waiting for next.

Feeling so bad for Tanuja

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Nice chapter. Rishi is irritating now. Just for the sake of his image, he is doing the pag phera ritual. Calling Tanuja a flop is so mean from him. Surprised to see Prerna and Bajaj as Tanuja's parents. Forcibly Rishi hold Tanuja in his arms. Rishmi's earring scene is nice. Lakshmi is thinking that if she reveal the truth, Rishikesh would kill him. Sad! Lakshmi is still neglecting Rishikesh. Poor man! Wonder how Prerna found the truth of Rishi-Tanuja relationship.

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Dil Beparwah...Oblivious heart...Part 4

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On the third day at Tanuja's home....

Tanuja and Rishi were getting ready to go back home.

Tanuja went near Prerna.

Tanuja:Maa...today I will leave.I will miss you.

Prerna hugged her.Tanuja controlled her tears.

Prerna:Are you really happy with Rishi or were you both pretending to be a happy couple?

Tanuja was shocked by her question.

Tanuja:Maa!

Prerna:I had been observing both of you.I felt that there is a difference between both of you.

Tell me the truth Tanuja.Is everything alright between both of you?

Tanuja:Maa...nothing like that.

Prerna:Don't lie to me.I am your mother.I know whether you are happy or sad.

Tanuja became upset and she told her everything.Prerna was shocked.She got angry.

Prerna:How dare he insult you because of your disease?We did not get you married to him to get insulted by him.I will not leave him.

Tanuja became upset.

Tanuja:Maa..please don't ask Rishi about it.I don't want any fight.

Prerna:Ok.But if you are not happy with Rishi,you don't go with him.You stay here itself.

Tanuja:Maa...I married him.Marriage is not a bond to be broken easily.

Prerna:But no need of staying in a toxic marriage.

Tanuja:We just got married Maa.It's too early to judge him and our marriage.I feel that our problems can be solved.

Prerna became emotional.

Prerna:I hope so.If nothing improves please come back.I don't want you to suffer from any pain.

Prerna and Tanuja hugged each other emotionally.

Tanuja and Rishi went back to Rishi's house.

Rishikesh and Lakshmi went back to Rishikesh's house.

After some days...

The Principal called Rishi to the staff room.

Rishi:Yes Sir!

Principal:Rishi..now a days I am getting complaints about you...like you are shouting at students unnecessarily. You are not taking classes properly.

Rishi was shocked.

Rishi:Sir...I...

Principal:After getting married,what happened to you?All are asking me to take action against you.What should I do?

Rishi became dull.

At home...

Rishi was really upset and disturbed thinking about what the Principal said.

Tanuja went near him.

Tanuja:What happened Rishi?Why are you looking sad?

Rishi smiled sarcastically:You may be happy to see my condition.Right?

Tanuja became dull.

Tanuja:Rishi,I am not your enemy.I am your wife.If you share the problem with me,I maybe able to help you.

Rishi:All are complaining that I am not teaching properly in the school.My job is at my risk.Are you happy?

Tanuja was shocked.

Tanuja:You make the Principal believe that you will give your best from now onwards.But Rishi...you need to really work hard with sincerity to gain their trust again.

Rishi:I will give my best as I can't risk my job.If I get fired my reputation in the society will be harmed.

Tanuja:Then I can give you ideas.

Rishi was relieved.

Rishikesh and Lakshmi were eating food.

Seeing the curry drop near her lips,he wiped it with his finger.She became shy.

Rishikesh:You are eating food like a child.If you eat like this your cheeks will be covered with the potato curry.

They giggled.

Rishikesh:So I will feed you.

Lakshmi was surprised.

Rishikesh took a spoon of food and fed her cutely.

Rishikesh:Come on....eat fast.

She smiled.

Suddenly Rishikesh realised that Lakshmi was eating on her own and he was dreaming.

Without even looking at him,Lakshmi went to the kitchen to wash her plate.He became dull.

He thought:There is not even a proper communication between us.

Rishi went to the Principal's room and talked to him.

Rishi:My next chapter is about the World War.I am planning to go to the place where the World war took place.I will making a video on the details of the World War.Then with those videos I will take class for the children.The Travel expense will be done by me.Please give me the permission to go there Sir.

Principal:I have never seen a sincere teacher like you.I am sad that everyone else misunderstood you.I am permitting you to go there.It's a new teaching style which will be very effective.

Rishi smiled:Thank you Sir.

In the staff room...

Rishikesh was surprised to know that Rishi is going abroad.

Rishikesh:You are going abroad?

Rishi:Yes.

Rishikesh:That's cool.

Rishi:As you know,everyone says that I am the best teacher in this school.So I have to set my standard high.So I am going abroad to introduce new teaching method.

Rishikesh was amazed by it.

Rishikesh:You are really great yaar.

Rishi:Yes..I know that.

Rishikesh:Are you planning for honeymoon?

Rishi became dull.

Rishi thought:It's better to teach rather than going for a honeymoon with Tanuja.But no one should know my condition.

Rishi smiled:Of course yes.Actually the main purpose of going abroad is honeymoon.

Rishikesh:Oh..that's good.

Rishi:What about your honeymoon?

Rishikesh became dull.

Rishikesh:The school schedule is so hectic that I can't take leave for honeymoon.You are lucky,Atleast in the pretex of teaching you can go for honeymoon.

Rishi:Ya.

Rishikesh thought:Rishi is so lucky.He is going for honeymoon.But my first night itself did'nt happen till now.

As usual when Rishikesh came entered the bedroom at night,he found Lakshmi lying on the bed.But her eyes were open.He was relieved that Lakshmi was not asleep.

Rishikesh:I am glad that you are not sleeping.

Lakshmi:Why?You don't like me sleeping?

Rishikesh:Nothing like that.In the day time you are normal with me.But at night I feel that you are avoiding me.

Lakshmi was stunned that he felt that she was avoiding him at night.

Rishikesh:Please don't feel bad.I may be misunderstanding you.But usually newly married couples do not behave like us.Right?So I am asking you.Is it true that you are purposefully avoiding me?

Lakshmi got irritated and blasted at him:Yes.Your doubt is right.I was purposefully avoiding you at night.So that you won't even think of touching me.

Rishikesh was shocked.

Rishikesh:But...why?Why are you avoiding me?You don't like me?You told me that you were not forced to marry me.You married me willingly.Right?Then why are you keeping me at a distance?

Lakshmi:You want to know why?Then listen.

She said something which gave a shock to Rishikesh.