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Posted: 3 years ago
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Part 4

Hii Guys,

I am so excited for the upcoming episodes. Now finally Lakshmi got to know the truth and now it will be interesting how she will confront Rishi.

Now continuing the story,

Dadaji, Lakshmi and Viraj got shocked. Malishka and Rishi got nervous.

Viraj and Lakshmi look at each other shockingly.

Dadaji: What are you saying Madhu. This guy say that he want this lengha for his would be wife.

Madhu: (surely) I am sure Sir, he only sad that he want this lengha for his would be wife.

Lakshmi and Viraj look at Rishi with shock.

Lakshmi: (questioningly) Does Madhu saying the truth? You have asked the lengha for his would be wife?

After 2 minutes,

Rishi: (nervously) No Lakshmi, I didn't ask lengha for my would be wife, but for my friend's would be wife. I think she had some misunderstanding.

Madhu: No Sir, I heard right.

Malishka: I think you should leave its our personal matter.

Madhu leaves.

Lakshmi: ( confidently) If you are saying right Rishi then why are you stammering?

Rishi: (stammering) woh woh w

Viraj interrupting them,

Viraj: I think Madhu have some mistake, Lakshmi (while nodding his head) don't take it seriously.

Lakshmi: Ok Viraj, I think we should search some more lengha.

Just then Lakshmi Phone peeps.

Viraj Message

Just come to meet me outside of the Store. I need to talk to you urgently.

Lakshmi then replied

Ok Viraj, I am coming in 5 minutes.

Lakshmi then purposely make her phone rings and does acting of not getting network.

Lakshmi: Rishi My phone is not getting network here and Shalu have an important work with me. So I am going outside till then you select some Lengha for "Malishka".

Saying this Lakshmi left from there. Then Rishi got a call from his office and thought,
My phone is getting full network then why Lakshmi is not getting.

Then he saw Viraj going outside too.

Rishi P.O.V

Just now Lakshmi gone outside and now Viraj too. Today Morning also Lakshmi told me lie and goes to meet Viraj and now told me that her phone have network issue and gone out and evne Viraj has gone out. They are hiding something or its just my Misunderstanding.

He is just about to go out but Malishka stopped him and ask him to choose one for her. Rishi unwillingly start to choose one for her.

On the Other hand,

Lakshmi comes outside and start to wait for Viraj. After 2 minutes Viraj came.

Viraj: Sorry Lakshmi, I got late as I was making some excuses to Dadaji.

Lakshmi: No its ok, Evem I lied to Rishi that there is some network issue and came here. But why did you call me here and why did you stop me from asking anything to Rishi.

Viraj: To just tell you the reason I called you outside. There are so many incidences that are signing that something is wrong. Otherwise How can Madhu says that Rishi asked for a lengha for his would be wife. How can she commit a big mistake like this. Its her daily work. And Malishka asked only Rishi to accompany him for wedding shopping like seriously. Girls ask there fiance to help them in shopping of wedding but here she asked Rishi.

Lakshmi: I totally agree with you Viraj. In morning Rishi told me that he have an urgent meeting and now he is in mall. You know what he didn't even eat his food because he was getting late. Now he is in mall without any tension. I think he lied to me in morning.

Viraj: Right Lakshmi, and thats why I am asking you to have some patience. First we will collect some evidence against them and then we will confront them infront of everyone. So for Just now, don't do anything and behave normally.

Lakshmi: Ok.

After their talk, They go inside.

They come inside together and Rishi saw this get angry.

Rishi: Did you outside together?

Lakshmi : (confidently) No Rishi I told you naa that I got a call to receive and Viraj also came outside to receive a call as his phone is also having the same problem.

Rishi: (still not convinced and angry) Ok. Leave it. Did we start shopping? I will shop for Lakshmi and Viraj you for Malishka.

Rishi start going.

Viraj: Rishi Stop. Let's do one thing, you shop for Malishka and I will shop for Lakshmi.

Hearing this Rishi get angry because Why will Viraj do shopping for his wife and Malishka feels bad because Viraj denied to shop for her.

Rishi: (angrily) Why will you shop for my wife. I will shop for my wife and you will for your.

Viraj: (calmly) You know Malishka choice better and I know Lakshmi will like simple clothes, so it will be easy to do shopping for her. That's it.

Rishi: (angrily) Still Why will you shop for Lakshmi, she is my wife. I will shop for her that final.

Malishka: (feeling bad unknowingly) Yes Viraj, Rishi is right. Its your responsibility to shop for me, why are you telling rishi to shop for me.

Viraj: If its my responsibility then why you asked rishi to accompany you.

Malishka get silent.

Lakshmi: (calmly) Why you all are fighting? Let's do one thing Whatever we like for any of us, we will give them for try. What say.

Viraj: (smiling) Perfect.

Malishka and Rishi: (unwillingly) Ok

They start to find lengha but Rishi and Malishka are angry but after a lot of time Rishi select Lengha for Lakshmi and Malishka

Lakshmi Lengha


Malishka Lengha


On the Other hand

Viraj selected Lengha for Lakshmi and Malishka are

Lakshmi lengha


Malishka Lengha


Malishka and Lakshmi also select for other functions.

Rishi: I had selected some lengha for both of you and give them their.

Both saw it and their lengha (given by Rishi) and said that the lenghas are best for Mehendi

Then Viraj came and give them( Malishka and Lakshmi)
their lengha.

After seeing it both

Malishka: Its so beautiful Viraj, it will look so beautiful on me. I will wear it on my wedding day for sure.

Lakshmi: Its so beautiful Viraj (looking at the lengha). Even I will wear it on the wedding day.

Hearing Malishka and Lakshmi' s compliment on Viraj's choice but didn't praise his choice, So Rishi got very jealous.

Rishi: (angrily) I am going to select some sherwani for me.

Viraj: (calmly) Ok you go. I already has chosen for myself.

Rishi goes.

Trio know that he is angry but don't know why.

After their shopping they leave.

That's it for today guys.

I hope you guys will like it. Give your opinion and suggestions. And like always Suggestion are always welcome.

Thank you so much for reading my story. Keep reading.

Till the next update Bye

Edited by Tanukirti - 3 years ago
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Posted: 3 years ago
#12

Write superb now rishi is feeling jealous and Malishka too sure to viraj now the story is going interesting.

P.S- TODAY'S EPISODE IS GONNA ROCK REALLY FINALLY LAKSHMI GOT TO KNOW THE TRUTH OF RISHI AND TOMMOROW'S EPISODE WILL BE OUTSTANDING AS RISHI WILL GET SLAP ONLY TWO BUT VERY JOYFUL MOMENT FOR US 😂😅😅😅 REALLY BUT TOMMOROW'S EPISODE YOU WILL HAVE A EMOTIONAL BREAKDOWN SEEING LAKSHMI'S PAINFUL BREAKDOWN 😢😢😥😥😥😥😥

But superb part jealousy part 😂😂😂😍

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Originally posted by: chandujojo

Write superb now rishi is feeling jealous and Malishka too sure to viraj now the story is going interesting.

P.S- TODAY'S EPISODE IS GONNA ROCK REALLY FINALLY LAKSHMI GOT TO KNOW THE TRUTH OF RISHI AND TOMMOROW'S EPISODE WILL BE OUTSTANDING AS RISHI WILL GET SLAP ONLY TWO BUT VERY JOYFUL MOMENT FOR US 😂😅😅😅 REALLY BUT TOMMOROW'S EPISODE YOU WILL HAVE A EMOTIONAL BREAKDOWN SEEING LAKSHMI'S PAINFUL BREAKDOWN 😢😢😥😥😥😥😥

But superb part jealousy part 😂😂😂😍



Yes, I know that tomorrow episode will be fabulous. I am waiting for the slap session. Rishi deserve only Lakshmi hate not love. I really want a strong Lakshmi, she need to be stronger not to fall weak. She should make Neelam realize her mistake and make Karishma and sonia's life hell. Inshort she should give them punishment for their deeds.

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Part 5
Hii guys,

So I have updated last part of my story last year😉.

The show is getting so much fun to watch, I am waiting for Lakshmi confrontation with Rishi, How she is going to react? It will worth to watch the episode.

Without wasting anyone time let's continue,

In Rishmi Side,

Lakshmi and Rishi comes to home but Rishi directly goes to the Study Room as he is very angry. Lakshmi also in her thought remembering all Malishka and Rishi Together moments and goes to her room silently.

In Study Room,

Rishi through many files on floor.

Rishi. P.O.V

WHY EVERYONE WAS PRAISING VIRAJ'S CHOICE THERE? EVEN LAKSHMI PRAISES VIRAJ CHOICE. AND I CAN SEE VIRAJ AND LAKSHMI ARE TALKING TO EACH OTHER A LOT BUT WHY I AM WORRIED ABOUT THAT, SHE CAN TALK ANYONE SHE LIKES. SHE LIKES? HOW COULD SHE LIKE SOMEONE ELSE OTHER THAN ME. WHAT IS HAPPENING TO ME? I SHOULD BE HAPPY THAT I AM GOING TO MARRY THE LOVE OF MY LIFE BUT WHY I AM GETTING RESTLESS AND WHY I AM THINKING ABOUT LAKSHMI AND VIRAJ?WHY ?WHY?

Now he start thinking about his and Lakshmi moments.

On the other hand,

Viraj drop Malishka at her home and goes without saying anything. Malishka found it weird and goes directly in her room.

MALISHKA P.O.V

What is happening to me? I should be happy that I am getting my love, my Rishi but when Viraj denied to choose lengha for me, I got really Angry. But Why? Today Lakshmi didn't said anything to Rishi, she was just choosing a lengha for me silently then I should be happy that she was not close to Rishi but I was angry because she was talking to Viraj. But why it bothers me when she talk to Viraj, Why? Did I love Viraj? No that can't be possible, I love Rishi, I only love Rishi.

Malishka call her P.A. and asked her to send Wedding Card Maker to her office.

Malishka then goes to her office and choose a Wedding Card, you can assume the same serial card. She asked to make three copies of it. She then again though I will Marry Rishi because I love him. I can never love someone else other than, I can't love Viraj. I can't love Viraj.

She goes back to her home.

On the other hand,

Lakshmi call Viraj,

Lakshmi: (worriedly) When will Jeet going to give us Information?

Viraj: I talked to him, he will give us information tomorrow.

Lakshmi: (not getting good vibes) Ok Viraj, But I am feeling that tomorrow everything will be ruined.

Viraj: (calming her) Lakshmi please wait till tomorrow morning, everything will be sorted.

Lakshmi: Ok , but where will we meet?

Viraj: At my home as dadu was going out of the city for some work.

Lakshmi: Ok Viraj, Bye

viraj: Bye

They cut the call. But Lakshmi didn't notice that Rishi is standing behind her back. Rishi goes from there.

Flashback
Rishi was in study Room, Just then Someone knock on the door.

Rishi: (angrily) Come in.

Sudeep comes with Sad face and gives him his food.

Rishi: Why are you looking sad?

Sudeep: (sadly) Woh Lakshmi is looking upset and seeing her upset, I also got sad.

Rishi: Is Lakshmi sad? Why? What happened? Did someone say something to her?

Sudeep: No bhaiyaji, I don't know anything. I just saw bhabhiji sad.

Rishi: Ok now you go.

Then Rishi goes to their room and saw Lakshmi talking to someone on mobile.

He hears,

Lakshmi: Ok Viraj

Flashback end

Hearing Viraj name again he get angry and goes from there silently. He then come back to study room and take out his phone, open a Lakshmi pic and start talking to her

Rishi: (looking at Lakshmi photo) Why Lakshmi, Why are you to that Viraj. I don't like when you talk to Viraj. You know what, you are so good that everyone want you and I can't lose you at any cost. So please don't talk like this to Viraj. I can't bear it.

(NOTE: IT IS RISHI P.O.V ALSO)

Lakshmi P.O.V

Tomorrow Morning will sort out everything. Every doubt, every lie and every secret will end. Tomorrow I will found a new Lakshmi. If my doubt will wrong then I will become new Lakshmi that will never doubt on his Rishi and if Rishi is lying then I don't know what will I do.

Lakshmi P.O.V ended.

Viraj P.O.V

I don't know why but I can feel that something is seriously wrong between Rishi and Malishka. They are hiding something for sure but what. When my marriage got fixed with Malishka, I was not ready for that, then Lakshmi explain me the concept of Marriage and I agreed to Marry Malishka. I slowly start to fall in love with her. I didn't fall for her fully but yes, it started. If they are lying and my doubt is right then I won't be able to bear the pain. But Lakshmi will be 2000 times of my pain. I hope my and Lakshmi doubt will wrong otherwise four live will be ruined. Tomorrow everything will be cleared. I hope tomorrow morning will bring something good for us. But why my heart is saying that tomorrow morning will bring sorrow in our lives.

Viraj P.O.V ended.

Malishka P.O.V

(looking at Rishi Picture)

Rishi I big suprise is waiting for you. Tomorrow morning, I will come to your home and I will give you the surprise and your expression will be worth to watch.

(swipe the photo amd saw a photo of her and Viraj)

Why I am not feeling happy at all. Why I am thinking about Viraj. I also got angry when Viraj refused to select a lengha for me but why. I got happy when he give me a lengha of his choice. Did I love Viraj. No, No Malishka you can't love Viraj. You only love, Rishi only Rishi.

Maliskha P.O.V Ended.

Next Morning,

Lakshmi make breakfast for everyone and look at the clock and saw the time (as she have to meet viraj at 11'O clock) and was going to serve the food just then door bell ring. Sudeep opens the door and saw Malishka. Malishka comes smilingly, then everyone comes and saw her.

Maliskha: Rishi I have to discuss something about a project.

Rishi: (unwillingly as he was upset with Lakshmi regarding Viraj) OK Malishka , we can discuss that in Study Room.

Malishka get upset hearing STUDY ROOM

Malishka: (upsetly) OK. Let's go.

Lakshmi: But Breakfast

Malishka: Please send it in study room.

Lakshmi again think about her doubt and thought today everything will be sorted Just 1 more hour.

Scene Shift to Study Room,

Malishka thought she can't fight with Rishi anymore, otherwise he will leave her.

(Same drama happened as serial just the change is here is that the drama happens in Study Room)

Then Rishi hide the Wedding Invitation Card in his file and goes to his office.

Virender: Lakshmi beta, in Rishi's Wardrobe a brown file is there. So please send it in study room.

Lakshmi: Ok Bauji

Lakshmi goes to her room, open the wardrobe and take the file but fill fall from her hand. Lakshmi then start to pick up the paper and after picking up all the paper. Lakshmi saw a Card backside. When She saw the front side, she got shocked and lone tear comes out of her eyes.

Just then Sudeep comes and ask for the file. Lakshmi gives him the file and he goes.

Just then she got Viraj message :

Lakshmi please come to my home fast. Jeet is coming in 15 mins , please come fast.

Then Lakshmi wipes her tear and goes to his house. She knock the door bell. Viraj open the door.

Viraj: Lakshmi come inside. Jeet had come .

Lakshmi come inside.

Jeet: Hii Lakshmi,

Lakshmi: Hii Jeet, What you got to know about them, please tell us fast.

(She want to know everything first after that she will show him (Viraj) everything )

Jeet: I got to know very much but please sit first after that I will tell you everything.

Viraj and Lakshmi sits.

Jeet: I got to know that They both are studying together since Childhood and you both know that they are business partners. ( Lakshmi and Viraj nods) But they are in relationships since last 5 years (Lakshmi got tears in her eyes. She has expect this already and Viraj get shocked. 5 year ago Rishi proposed Malishka and she accepted his proposal. 4 month ago they got engaged but just after engagement ceremony Rishi meet with an accident and then his family got to know that in his kundali there is a dosh which will take his life. (Lakshmi tear are coming out of her eyes continuosly and Viraj get very shocked that he didn't know about this at all) But they also got to know that special horoscope can save him. After searching for 2 months, they meet you Lakshmi. After seeing your kundali, they got to know that your kundali have that special horoscope. So they got you married to him for an year. (Lakshmi become shocked that how can everyone use her for their own grants). After a year, Rishi will divorce you and will marry Malishka.

Jeet show some photo of Rishika (Malishka + Rishi). Lakshmi and Viraj saw the photo.

After some minutes,

Viraj: (sadly) Thank you Jeet for your all help.

Jeet: Anything for you brother.

Jeet leaves.

Lakshmi: (determined) Viraj I have to show you something.

Viraj: (sadly) What is left to see Lakshmi. Whom we love the most give us World's biggest betrayal.

Lakshmi: (emotionless) Whatever they wanted to do, they have done. I got something which I want to show you.

She show him Rhe Wedding Invitation Card. Seeing the Wedding Invitation Card, Viraj had a big breakdown.

Viraj: (cryingly) Why they did this to us Lakshmi? Why? What wrong we had done to them? We love them selflessly but what they did to us. Leave me, I didn't got married ro Malishka but you ___ you got married to Rishi. How can he do this go you. You are his wife, how can he do this to you. You loved him so selflessly, I saw the love in your eyes. for him. How can betray a girl like you. He is losing a gem💎. And Malishka, she was my friend naa, she can told this to me, I will agree to the marriage, I would have stopped the marriage on any cost but no she choosed to betrayed me. I like a fool, start to love her, saw dreams of her. I will never forgive her, I will never forgive them.

He then look at Lakshmi and saw her crying her silently. She also look at him.

Lakshmi: (crying) You know what Viraj. I regarded Rishi as my god. I worshipped him and our relationship like a person did of God but today I got to know that everything that I was living a lie. I loved him selflessly, more than myself. But he betrayed me. I trust him immensely but what I got is just betrayal. I always saw love, trust and respect in his eyes for me but today I got to know that how easily he lied to me and how eyes also show fake love, respect and trust. Today I am feeling like a fool, how easily they both make a fool of me. He make a joke of marriage, make fun of a pure relation, I will never forgive him (now determined and wiping her tears ) But after today I will not fall weak and you also will not fall weak, we will show them that they can't take away our happiness from us. We will give them what they deserve.

Viraj: (also determined) But Lakshmi what will we do? (Looking at card) Today is their marriage, in such a short period of time, what will we do?

Lakshmi determinedly told him a plan. Hearing the Plan, Viraj noded and told her Everything will be done according to her plan.

Viraj leave to make the arrangements of the same.

Lakshmi: (determined and angrily) Now Get ready Mr. Oberoi, Today you will get a big Suprise, that you will never be able to forget.

That's it for today .

So what do you thought what is Lakshmi Plan? Did Rishika will able to get married? Did Rishika will able to realize their real love or they will lose their real love for forever.

To get to know what will happen next you have to wait for the next part.

I don't know whether today's part is good or not but I tried to give my best to you guys. I have written 2150+ words in this part.

Please share your views regarding todays part.

And as always suggestion are always welcome.

Till the next update bye.

Take care.

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Awesome story

Please update soon

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Part 6


Hii guys,

So Sorry for the delay,

So Without wasting anyone time let's continue the story,

Lakshmi then comes to Oberoi Mansion with Viraj.

Lakshmi: (shouting) Come out Everyone, Oberoi family please come outside.

All came outside and got shocked seeing Lakshmi style to talk to them.

Lakshmi: (angrily) I want to talk to you all something very important.

Karishma: (angrily) What happened to you and in which tone you are talking to us? Did you forget we are your in-laws.

Lakshmi: (angrily and sarcastically) In-laws? Did you all deserve to be called as my In-laws.

Neelam: (angrily ) What do you want to say Lakshmi. How are you talking to us, did you forget your manners?

Everyone was really shocked as soft spoken Lakshmi never spoke to anyone like this.

Lakshmi: (angrily) From where you all get the power to lie. You all ruined my life like a waste tissue paper, you all just use me to save your Rishi ( Everyone get shocked and hung their head in shame). What happened , oh Viraj they get shocked, how do I got to know the truth but you know what every lie will come out one day and your lie has come out Mrs. Oberoi.

Viraj: (angrily) Aunty you're one of the richest person in India, but your heart is very poor aunty, how could you just ruined a life of a simple and sweet girl for your son, who is having an extra marital affair with Malishka. Did you have heart or just stone. You all. disgusting.

(No one have no answer what to say, they just hung their head in shame)

Lakshmi: (shouting angrily but without any tear) I know from very starting that Karishma Aunty and Sonia never liked me but Today I got to know the reason ,WHY. But Dadi aap, I regarded you as my Dadi, I always thought that you love me as your other grand children, but I was wrong totally wrong (Dadi cries) . Then she goes to Ayush, Ayush I thought you were my friend and our relation is just like Sita and Laxman but you proved it today we have no relation at all. Then to Devika and Ahana, Atleast you two could have told me the truth, you are just like my shalu and bani but you both betrayed me ,you both have proved that no nanad (sister in law) can be your sister. Now she goes to Bauji, Bauji you were used to be just like my bauji naa, atleast you could have told me, I swear for your sake I had married Rishi without say anything, but alteast I didn't fall for him, I didn't think of him like my husband as I had known that he is of someone else. Why you didn't tell me Bauji Why? (Virender cries) Atlast she comes to Neelam, How could you do this to a girl, you're also a woman, a mother, but you ruined my life without any regret. Atleast you could have considered me as a human, if you have told me the truth, I have married him happily as I like to help other. But you lied to me. And I hate lies. Even my age is just like devika, if someone have done the same with devika, will you be able to bear the pain. (Neelam and everyone got shocked)

Neelam: (angrily) How could you spoke like this, she is just like my daughter. No one have the dare to do something like this to my any daughter.

Lakshmi: (Angrily) When I just spoke something like this about your daughter, you feel so much pain but when you were doing the same with me you didn't feel any pain because I am not your daughter, just because I am a stranger.

Neelam was about to say something but Lakshmi interrupted her

Lakshmi: (angrily) No, I'm not going to listen anybody now, you all have done enough. Now I won't listen to anyone, I am just leaving the house.

Neelam: (pleadingly) No Lakshmi, Now you know the truth, you know that your support is very important for Rishi. Please stay back, I will do anything you will say but please save my son life.

Lakshmi shake her head unbelievably and said: How disgusting woman you are Mrs. Oberoi. Even after doing this much you are saying that I should stay back. You did even realized my pain, you ruined my life and still asking me to stay back. How could you say this Mrs. Oberoi. How?

Lakshmi: (crying and pleading) Lakshmi I know I have done a crime but a mother is begging infront of you, please save my son Lakshmi please.

Lakshmi: (determinedly) Ok I will stay back but you all have to come with me to a place without any question and you all have to do what I will say.

Karishma: (Angrily) You can't order us Lakshmi.

Lakshmi: Ok I will not order you all, I will leave.

Neelam: No Lakshmi, We will do whatever you say Lakshmi. Karishma jus listen to Lakshmi and obey her.

Karishma: But Bhabhi

Neelam: (interrupting Karishma) I said naa just obey Lakshmi then Just obey her.

Then Lakshmi sign to Viraj and both smirks.

After 5mins,

Viraj came back and gives Some bags to Lakshmi, Then Lakshmi gives everyone a bag and said

Lakshmi: In all the bags, everyone dress are kept. So you all have to get ready till 6 O'clock and yaa get ready like you all got ready on my fake marriage. You all will not inform Rishi that I know the truth about the marriage and if anyone tries to inform then I will leave. And Sonia and Karishma aunty, you both will not say anything to Malishka, otherwise I will leave from here for forever.

Everyone unwillingly nods.

At evening,

All got ready as per Lakshmi instruction. Just then Lakshmi comes downstairs getting ready (She had worn the Same dress which Viraj choosed for her).

Viraj also came there.

Lakshmi: So you all give me your phones and will come behind Viraj Cars. Alright.

Neelam nods.

Karishma: (slowly) For the first I have saw Neelam bhabhi saw so helpless.

Sonia: Yes bua. I am so angry today, I wish I could kill Lakshmi.

Neelam: I am helpless because she can only save my son otherwise, I could have shown Lakshmi her value.

Lakshmi: Did I go to my materal house? Or you all are coming?

Ayush: We are coming.

All goes and sit in three cars,

In one car, Neelam, Karishma, Sonia and Virender.

In second Car, Ayush, Ahana, Devika and Dadi.

In third and last car, Viraj and Lakshmi.

In Viraj and Lakshmi Car,

Viraj: Everything is going according to our plan and whatever things you have asked me to arrange, I have arranged them.

Lakshmi: Now everything will go according to our plan and I will ruined Oberoi Family Fake Reputation.

Viraj: I am with you Lakshmi.

Lakshmi gives a light smile.

Soon they all reach Malishka's house.

Lakshmi take them to garden area, from there they can see everything but RiShka can't see them.

Everyone got shocked seeing RiShka marriage except Lakshmi and Viraj.

Neelam: (shocked) How can he do this? He broke my trust.

Saying this they were about to go but Lakshmi stop them from going and says There is much more to see. Just wait.

On the other hand,

RiShka Wedding Mandap,

Pandit is chanting the wedding Mantras.
RiShka exchange the garlands, (RiShka Remembers Viraj and Lakshmi but still proceed to the wedding) then they put samegri in the havan kund, after that pandit does their gathbandhan ( Rishi remember his marriage with Lakshmi and was doing everything unwillingly).

Then they start taking phere (but both are not feeling well)

RISHI P.O.V

I DON'T KNOW WHY BUT I AM NOT FEELING HAPPY AT ALL. I LOVE MALISHKA BUT STILL I AM NOT HAPPY. I AM REMEMBERING LAKSHMI, MY MARRIAGE WITH LAKSHMI, MY MOMENTS WITH LAKSHMI. I'M FEELING LIKE I AM BETRAYING LAKSHMI BUT LAKSHMI IS BUSY WITH VIRAJ. SHE ALWAYS TALK TO VIRAJ. I HATE THAT VIRAJ, LAKSHMI LIED TO ME FOR THAT VIRAJ. IF LAKSHMI CAN LIED TO ME FOR THAT VIRAJ THEN EVEN I CAN MARRY MALISHKA WHEN I LOVE HER.

RISHI P.O.V ENDS

MALISHKA P.O.V

I don't know but I am not happy but why god, I love Rishi but still marrying him is not giving me any peace but increasing my restlessness. I am feeling like Something very wrong is going to happen. I am marrying Rishi but remembering Viraj, Why. Did I love Viraj? (Now consoling herself) No, No Malishka, No. You can't love anyone other than Rishi. I love Rishi and I should be happy, Yes I am happy.

Malishka P.O.V Ended.

Pandit: Now girl will walk ahead of boy.

Then Malishka comes ahead and start taking phera. They complete all the pheras.

Pandit: Now groom will fill Bride's hairline and make her wear mangalsutra.

Rishi unwillingly make Malishka wear Mangalsutra but when he was about to fill her hairline, he remember filling Lakshmi hairline, her smile.

Just then he hear a voice,

Voice: Fill hairline fast, stopping in middle is a bad omen Mr. Oberoi.

RiShka sees towards the ang get shocked to see Viraj and Malishka there.

Both standup from there place but Rishi saw Viraj and get angry then he notice Lakshmi's outfit and it was the same outfit which Viraj has chosen for Lakshmi.

He got really angry and jealous and fill Malishka's Hairline, shocking Malishka and Oberoi Family.

Pandit: From today onwards You both are husband and wife.

Viraj: So you both have no shame, you both got married infront of us without any regret. I thought you both were my friends but you guys take no time to betray us and we like a fool thought about you guys, start dreaming of future but you. Leave it. You both don't deserve our hate.

Malishka feels really bad, but Rishi got very angry.

Rishi: (angrily) See who is talking about shame, you're saying you regarded me as your friend but you yourself cheated us.

Viraj: (Angrily) What do you want to say?

Rishi: (very angrily) YOU'RE HAVING AFFAIR WITH MY WIFE.

Lakshmi who is still silent, goes toward Rishi and slapped him, shocking everyone.

Lakshmi: (Angrily) How dare you Mr.Oberoi to raise finger on my and Viraj's Character, on our relation. You have no right to rise any finger on us because firstly I am not your wife anymore and secondly when a person is wrong then he think whole world is like him. I loved you with my whole hear but you didn't take Time to break it and you have lost every right on me. I wish I have never meeted you.

RiShka got really shocked.

Rishi: (Angrily) Lakshmi you still are lying because I saw you with Viraj with my own eyes outside of Oberoi Mansion and In Mall too.

Lakshmi: (sarcastically) Oh so you saw us together and thought we are having affair, right. I don't need to give you any explanation but still I will tell you the truth, We both were get doubtful on your relation, so we appointed a Private Detective and start searching evidence against and we got to know all the truth of your relationship and your wedding card and for that we meet each other.

Rishi got highly shocked and get angry on himself for doubting Lakshmi.

He get teary eyes.

Lakshmi: (smilingly) Congratulations both of you for your marriage Mr. and Mrs. Oberoi. I have a gift for both of you and handover them some papers.

Rishi saw the paper and got shocked. Paper fall from his hand and Malishka pick up the paper, and got shocked,

Malishka: (shocked) Divorce Papers.

Lakshmi: (smilingly) Yes, Divorce papers. I know this is the best gift for both of you. I hope you both will like it and happy married Life ahead and yaa Malishka you were my friend and so a tip for you, when Rishi can leave me for his selfishness and then he can leave you too.

Viraj: Congrats both of you and here is your wedding gift and handover them honeymoon tickets and say happy married life.

Malishka got tear in her eyes, she feel really bad seeing Viraj cold behavior with her.

Lakshmi and Viraj leaves from there.

Oberoi family came there too and gives them a angry glare and without saying anything they were about to leave .

Just then Reporters come there with camera man and start taking video.

Reporter 1: So Mr. Oberoi did you cheated on your wife and Mrs. Malishka Oberoi did you cheat on your fiance?

Reporter2: From how much this extra martial affair is going on?

RiShka were silent and trying to away from the media but not able to do so.

Oberoi family got shocked to see the Media and thought now what will happen to their Reputation.

Reporter: So Did you see how a famous business tycoon cheated on his wife. What you thought did he right from how much this affair is going on.

After Many attempts Oberoi family and RiShka goes away from there.

On the other hand,

Lakshmi amd Viraj hear the News Report about RiShka on Car's Radio.

Lakshmi: (smirk) Now they will see what happens when a girl take durga avatar. I will make there life a hell. They make my life a lie for their son. They have much ego of their reputation naa, I will crush their Reputation with my own hands and thank you Viraj for arranging the media there in such a short period of time.

Viraj: (light smile) Anything for Friend Lakshmi.

That's it for today.

Big Sorry for the delay.

But Please give your opinion on this chapter, please guys.

And as always suggestion are always welcome.

Did you like this New Version of Lakshmi?

If it hurt anyone expectations then I am really sorry because I want a strong Lakshmi who make them realize their mistakes and gives them a big punishment.

Again thank you so much for reading my story.

Till the next update bye guys.

Take Care.


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I have updated the next part, please read it and give your opinion please 🙏❤

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Originally posted by: Gurveen

Awesome story

Please update soon


Thank you so much 😊


I have updated the next part, please read the next part and give your opinion please ❤

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Oh my my God well expected from you this part is really mind blowing really when you are episode you mention that your episode means of part is posted I was like i shouted here and there are my family members was shocked why are shouted then like something and I just felt the thing that just mind blowing I was like my inner self was really something imagine to that Viraj and Lakshmi were acting of marrying each other and then Rishi and Malishka saw them but it was mind blowing and in case of opinion i am telling you that now we know that they both are married so we can make viraj and lakshmi marry so that it stabs Rishi and Malishka's heart and they will feel the betrayal they did to them and their family 😭😭❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️

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Originally posted by: chandujojo

Oh my my God well expected from you this part is really mind blowing really when you are episode you mention that your episode means of part is posted I was like i shouted here and there are my family members was shocked why are shouted then like something and I just felt the thing that just mind blowing I was like my inner self was really something imagine to that Viraj and Lakshmi were acting of marrying each other and then Rishi and Malishka saw them but it was mind blowing and in case of opinion i am telling you that now we know that they both are married so we can make viraj and lakshmi marry so that it stabs Rishi and Malishka's heart and they will feel the betrayal they did to them and their family 😭😭❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️



Its really means a lot to me that you wait for my story's part. Thank you so much for reading my story And of course there is lot of twist and turns. You just have to wait for upcoming parts. I will try to update soon.

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