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Hii guys,

So Without wasting anyone time let's continue the story,

After Mehendi,

All girls sit together and start teasing Lakshmi.

Neha: (teasingly) Aree Shalu, after Lakshmi wash her hands, please check her Mehendi.

Shalu: (confusingly) Why???

Neha: (teasingly) Aree yaar when In my sasural, everyone says that When bride's Mehendi color got dark then it is the sign that the grooms loves her a lot.

Avni: Then surely her mehendi will be darkest of all.

Bani: Yes, you are right.

Lakshmi blushes hardly.

Lakshmi : (blushing) Don't you all have some work.

All: (together) NOOOOO

Just then Lakshmi phone rings it is Viraj Call.

Now Lakshmi blushes like beetroot color.

Shalu: (On Call) Hii Jiju, You're missing my Di so much that you can't wait till evening to meet her.

Viraj: Hii Shalu, Please give Lakshmi the phone. I want to talk to her.

Shalu: (teasingly) No Jiju you will get time to talk to her in evening. Till then wait for her and only 2 hours are left in evening. Bye Jiju.

Shalu cuts the call.

Lakshmi : (Blushing but little angry too) Aree Viraj ji called me to talk and you didn't let him to talk to me.

Neha: Aree Lakshmi have some patience. The fruit of patience is more fruitful.

Avni: Yes.

Then Rano comes and asked them all to get ready fast as they have to welcome guest too. So everyone goes to their respective rooms to change.

Now in evening, there is Sangeet cermony. In which groom and bride family will together celebrate.

So Everyone Outfit 👇

Lakshmi's Outfit 👇



Shalu's Outfit 👇



Neha's Outfit👇



Bani's Outfit👇



Avni's Outfit👇




Rano's Outfit👇



Viraj's Outfit👇 (As always VirMi dressed matched)



Dadu's Outfit👇



Chachaji Outfit👇



Rano: (shouting a little) Aree Bani, go and check whether Lakshmi is ready or not.

Bani: Yes Chachiji. She is also most ready.

Rano: ( little panicked) Ok , Avni did everything is ready like DJ etc.

Avni: Ji Chachiji Don't worry.

Rano: (shouting) Aree Bhaiya I asked for Red roses not white roses.

the person correct it.

After sometime,

Rano, Avni, Shalu, Neha and Bani comes in Lakshmi's Room.

Rano: (putting black kajal behind Lakshmi's ear) You are looking so beautiful today. Aree today everyone eyes will be on you.

Lakshmi : (smiling) Thank you Chachiji.

Rano: (giving Lakshmi a box) It had a Lakshmi's Mom Dad pic and Some diamonds bangles. It is given to me by Veerji and now I'm giving you as a blessing from them.

All get emotional special Shalu, Lakshmi and Bani.

Lakshmi : (hugging rano and crying) Thank you so much Chachiji for this. It is rhe best gift of my life.

Rano: (comforting her) Don't Cry beta otherwise your makeup will be spoiled and Bride's make up is the shine of the party and you will spoil it.

Lakshmi stopped crying.

Rano: Accha we all are going downstair. When Viraj's family will arrive I will call you.

Lakshmi Nods. Everyone leaves.

As all come downstair, Viraj family comes and Bajwa Family welcome them grandly.

Then Viraj start searching for Lakshmi. Bani saw this, So she decided to tease Viraj.

Bani: (teasingly) Jiju do you need something.

Viraj: (stammering) Nooo.... I don't.... need... anything.

Bani :(smiling mischievously) Then why are you stammering Jiju.

Viraj : Nothing..... is... like that.

And he left from there.

Bani laughs.

Dadu: Please call my daughter.

Rano: (smiling) Ji, I will call her.

Shalu and Avni goes and bring Lakshmi. Viraj get spellbounded by seeing Lakshmi.

Viraj: Beautiful!

Neha: (teasingly) Did you said something Jiju?

Viraj nods negatively.

Bani Neha hi-fi each other.

Lakshmi comes and sit with Viraj.

Decorations 👇



Viraj : (awestruck) You are looking really Beautiful just like Princess.

Lakshmi : (blushing) Thank you ☺

Viraj: (teasing) Your face color is matching your outfit. I like it. And your mehendi design is also very very beautiful.

Lakshmi : Thank you Viraj. You know what everyone is saying that Mehendi color describe husband's love.

Viraj: So what do you get to know about my love?

Lakshmi : (blushing) That you love me very much.

Viraj smiles.

Host: (smiling and cheerful) So Myself is Shruti and I am the host of this Party. So you all are warmly welcomed in the Sangeet Night of Miss.Lakshmi Bajwa and Mr.Viraj Singhania. So I will like to Congratulate the couple of the evening for their upcoming life.

VirMi did gesture of thanks.

Shruti: So I must say that VirMi are looking really cute together just like Made for each other.

Everyone claps for Them.

Shruti : So today is the Day of VirMi, so the first dance performance will be of VirMi. So I request them to come on stage and give a beautiful Dance Performance.

Everyone Claps for them.

VirMi performed on the following songs👇





https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=BukHiHrbFpA


Both performed very gracefully and they have a eyelock too. When the songs ended and everyone claps then they came out of their dreamworld.

Shruti: Wow! What a performance. They are really mad for each other. But Now the next performance is of Viraj's Dadaji

Song👇



As the song ended everyone claps.

Shruti: What a energetic performance. Now the next performance is of Lakshmi's Chacha ji and Chachiji

Song👇


Lakshmi got teary eyed and remember her parents. But Viraj wipes her tears and ask her to smile. Lakshmi smiles.


https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=jDErhADhhmg

(I don't know whether this song is right or wrong but I thought it would suit chacha ji that's why I added)

Everyone claps.

Shruti: What a wonderful performance by Chachaji Chachiji. Now the next will be Neha and Dr.Ranbeer

Songs👇




https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=IWZFRzF_ndg


They also dance very Nicely.

Everyone claps.

Shruti : The Dance was very lovely and Cute. Now the next one will be Shalu and Bani.





Everyone claps for them.

Shruti: What a beautiful and brilliant performance by the two beautiful girls. The next one is Avni, who is VirMi Close friend



https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=dXpG0kavjUo

Everyone claps for her.

Shruti : Excellent performance by Avni. So now let's enjoy the party and have dinner.

Avni was going to check the security just then she got a call from an unknown number.

Avni: (On Call) Hello.

Malishka : (stammering) Hel.... Hello Avni..... It's me..... Malishka..... I'm waiting..... outside..... please com.... come..... fast.

Avni: (Shocked) Ok I am coming Mrs.Oberoi.

Avni come outside and saw Malishka, she goes to Malishka.
Malishka was about to say something but she got unconscious.

Avni: (tapping Malishka cheeks) Mrs.Oberoi please wake up! Please wake up.

Avni calls the guards and ask them to take her to guest room and she calls the doctor.

On the other hand,

Rishi goes to meet Malishka but got to know about Malishka's escape.

Rishi: (angrily) What! Malishka run away and what were you doing at that time. You all are useless. If my plan got ruined then I will kill all of you. Now go and find her at any cost.

Rishi in anger ruined everything.

In Bajwa Niwas,

When guards bring Malishka inside, Everyone get shocked.

That's it for today guys.

Tell me your reviews, and do votes please.

So what do you think what Malishka want to say???? Tell me in comment section.

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Posted: 3 years ago
#72


Hii guys,

So without wasting anyone time let's continue the story,

The episode start with everyone get shocked to see an unconscious Malishka.

Rano asked the Shruti to announce that all should have food. Shruti announced the same.

All the family members comes to Avni asked about Malishka.

Avni: Actually I had gone to check the Security Arrangements, just then I got a call from Mrs. Oberoi and she was very worried and asked me to come outside. When I came there, she was very weak and was going to say something but before she could say something she got unconscious.

Everyone saw Malishka she is looking very weak and she had Marks on her hand and mouth like someone had tiedup her ropes.

Lakshmi become afraid seeing Malishka's Condition.

Lakshmi : (worried) I am sure she want to tell something about Rishi. I know he is behind of everything. Please don't go Viraj, he will harm you which I can't afford. Please Viraj.

Viraj: (calming her) Nothing will happen to me. I have a tight security.

Lakshmi : But Viraj.

Viraj: Lakshmi I am saying Nothing will happen to me. We will surely get married.

Avni: (calming her) Nothing will happen to Viraj Lakshmi. I will Security Incharge to tighten Viraj's Security.

Lakshmi : Ok Viraj.But please take care of yourself.

Viraj: Yes, I will but take care of yourself too. I don't want my bride look pale in her wedding.

In the meantime Doctor came and checked Malishka.

Rano: (worried) How is she now.

Doctor : Actually her condition isn't good at all. She hasn't eaten anything from Last 2 days and top of that she is torture a lot. Where she has been kept, there is too much dark and less air. Because of all this her condition is weak but I had given her injection. She will get conscious by morning but please take a good care of her.

Bani: Ok Doctor.

After that everyone goes back to the party and had dinner. After that all guests return back to their home. Viraj and Dadu also leaves. Viraj smiles and said bye to Lakshmi and ask her to smile and Lakshmi smiles a bit.

Rano: Avni Beta can you sleep with Malishka. Because maybe she need something in night or she waked up in night, so there must be someone who can calm her down.

Avni: Sure Aunty.

Rano: and I will sleep with Lakshmi.

After that everyone retired to their respective rooms.

In Lakshmi room,

Lakshmi and Rano lay down on bed to sleep.

Just then Lakshmi phone beeps,

Its Viraj Message.

Message : I and Dadu had reached home safely. So don't worry and take a good sleep. Good Night!

Lakshmi smiles and replied back :Good Night 😴

Rano saw all this. She smile and sleep.

(Narrator : They don't know what is waiting for them. Their peace will be ruined)

Next Day,


Singhania House,

Viraj got a call from Dress Designer,

DD: (someone has point gun on his head) Sir Actually I want to inform your Sherwani is ready and please came check its fitting.

Viraj: Then you send the sherwani at home. I will try it at home.

DD: (Sweating) Sir but its fitting is not get fit to you then you will send it back and then I will fit it and again I will send it. It will take a lot of time. So that's why I am saying to you to come and check its fitting.

Viraj: Ok I am coming.

Viraj cut the call and get ready.

DD: I have done your work now please leave me.

Goon: No way, until boss work isn't done. I won't leave you.

Viraj was going when a bodyguard sits with him in the car and another car of bodyguard is ready to follow their Car.

Viraj: Why are you coming with me. I'm just going to pick up my outfit.

Bodyguard : Sir it's Avni Mam order to go every where with you.

Viraj : Ok

To reach the Costume Designer shop, they have to cross the forest, Viraj Car was crossing the forest. When suddenly Another Car of bodyguards got puncher. And Viraj Car had already gone forward.

Just when Viraj Car was about to Cross just then someone shout at the tiers. The Car got puncher.As Viraj Bodyguard comes out to check, someone shoot The Bodyguard three times . Bodyguard fall down. Then Some goons comes out and start fighting with Viraj. Viraj beat them blue and black but a goon hit Viraj head with iron rod and Viraj Fall unconscious. They take Viraj with them to Rishi's house.

As Rishi saw Viraj unconscious, he start laughing sarcastically and evily .

Rishi: (laughing evily) So you was going to marry my Lakshmi, Now I will marry her and you will go to God. You want to snatch my Lakshmi but now I will snatch your breathes.
He hit Viraj very hardly.

In Bajwa Mansion,

Malishka doesn't get conscious till now.

Lakshmi feel like something happened bad and she shout Virajjj!

Rano: (worried) What happened Lakshmi?

Lakshmi : I feel like something wrong has happened.

Rano: Nothing wrong happened Lakshmi. Don't Worry. You're over thinking.

Lakshmi : I think you are right Chachiji.

Rano: Now let's get ready.

Lakshmi : Ji Chachiji.

On the other hand,

Malishka get conscious, Avni saw this.

Avni: Mrs. Oberoi, Thank God you get consciousness. All are so worried for you.

Just then Malishka remembers what happened in this few days.

Malishka : I want to say that..........

That's it for today guys. I hope you guys will like it.

What you all think What Malishka want to tell? Did Viraj will be able to get run away from Rishi's Captive. Did Rishi will able to fulfill his motives.

To know what happened next you have to till next episode.

Till then Bye guys 👋
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Posted: 3 years ago
#73


Hii guys,

With wasting anyone time let's continue the story,

Malishka: (weakly) I want to..... say that.....please save Viraj and Lakshmi. Rishi has become mad...... for Lakshmi. He get obsessed with......Lakshmi. He has become physco .......for Lakshmi. He had kidnapped me....... because I was coming to inform ......the same to Lakshmi. He had a plan to...... kidnap Viraj.

Avni got shocked

Avni: (shocked) Whatttt!

Malishka : (requesting) Please inform Viraj to be careful.

Avni tries to call Viraj but his phone is switched off then he call the bodyguards. One Bodyguard pick up the phone and informed her that Viraj has been kidnapped.

Avni: (shocked and worried) What! What were you all are doing? How can this happen.

Bodyguard informed Avni all the incidents of Sherwani's fitting and One bodyguard was with him, another car of Bodyguards got puncher.

Avni cut the call and start crying but just then remember something.

Avni: How can this be possible, Dress Designer call came, Viraj goes and suddenly Bodyguard's car got puncher. It can't be a coincidence. It is pre-planned.

Malishka: (worried) What happened Avni. Is Viraj alright.

Avni: (crying) Viraj got kidnapped.

Malishka : (shocked and worried) It must be Rishi. I have to go. I have to save Viraj. He will kill him.

Malishka start going.

Avni: (stopping Malishka) Mrs. Oberoi Please stop we have to think everything very well.

Malishka : We have to do something really fast.

Avni message everyone except Lakshmi to come in Guest room.

Everyone comes.

Avni tells everyone about Viraj kidnapping.

Rano: (Shocked) What! How did this happen? And why happened to my daughter only! God I asked you thousands times to give Lakshmi happiness this time but you didn't hear me.

Shalu: (Shocked and crying) What will happen when Di comes to know this

Bani: (Crying) She will be broken completely.

Chachaji: No we will do something.

Rajveer (Neha's husband) Papaji let's go and find Viraj ji.

Both goes.

Neha: I think we should inform Police about this.

Avni: Yes, you are right Neha. I will call commissioner.

Avni called Commissioner.

Avni: (on call) Hello Mr.Gupta, I am Avni Mittal, P.A. of Miss Lakshmi Bajwa from Bajwa Sister Enterprise. I want your help as you already know that Lakshmi mam is going to marry Mr.Viraj Singhania but Business Tycoon Mr.Rishi kidnapped Viraj Sir. And then Avni narrated him whole thing.

Mr. Gupta: Ok I am coming personally. Till then please take care of everyone. Maybe Mr. Oberoi will try to kidnap Mrs. Oberoi as she know everything about him.

Avni: Ok Sir.

Call cuts.

Avni: I had called Commissioner, now he will find Viraj for sure.

On the other hand,

Viraj was trying to untied himself but failed miserably. Just then Rishi comes with a wire.

Rishi: You tried to snatch away my Lakshmi from me. I am asking you to forget her. I will leave you.

Viraj: (angrily) NOOOO! RISHI I WILL NOT FORGET HER TILL MY LAST BREATH. YOU KNOW WHAT YOU DON'T DESERVE EVEN MALISHKA. YOU ARE REALLY A PSYCHO.

Rishi : (acting like a psycho) So you won't forget her then I have to make you forcefully forget her. And yaa I don't deserve Malishka because I deserve Lakshmi. Because I am her husband. She is mine and only mine.

Viraj: (Laughs loudly) Rishi you thought a good dream but remember that it is a dream only. And dream are not always true. So stop dreaming, it will be good for you.

But Rishi didn't said anything just give him electric shock, due to which Viraj scream really loud. Hearing it Rishi felt peace and laughs loudly.

Viraj: (screamed) Aaaaaaaaa.......

Viraj get unconscious and Rishi left from there.

In Bajwa Niwas,

As soon as Avni turned she got shocked. And seeing Avni shocked face Everyone turned and also got shocked.

Girl: (shocked and a lone tear skipped from her eyes) What! What did you said Avni! What happened to Viraj. Tell me what happened to Viraj asked the girl shaking Avni again and again.

Avni: (crying) Wo...Woh.... Woh....

Girl : (angrily) What Woh Woh Woh. Tell me what happened to Viraj.

Avni: (crying) Woh.... Woh.... Lakshmi..... Viraj...... Viraj.... has been..... Kidnapped.... by Rishi.

(Yes, the girl is Lakshmi)

Lakshmi fall down on her knees. She start crying uncontrollably.

Lakshmi : (crying) I told you that he will harm Viraj but no one listen to me. See he kidnapped him. I know Rishi he will torture him very badly. Lakshmi goes to Rano and start crying hugging her. She said Chachi please bring him back. I can't live without him. I will die without him.

Malishka feels really bad for Lakshmi. She is really determined to bring Viraj back. So Malishka said.

Malishka : (determinedly) Lakshmi dont cry I will bring Viraj back at any cost. I'm promising you that I will bring Viraj back.

Just then A Voice then you can help us in finding him.

Everyone turns and find out that it is commissioner Mr. Gupta's voice. I had found Rishi and Viraj location and they both are at same place.

Just then Lakshmi phone Rings and she find out that Rishi is calling her. She inform about this to commissioner. And commissioner told her to pick up his call and goes to meet him and told his plan. Hearing his plan. Everyone nods.

Lakshmi picked up his call,

Rishi: (smiling and talking tp Lakshmi in his psycho style) Hii Sweetheart. How's are you. I know you will be good and I also know that you got to know about Viraj kidnapping. Isn't you. So if you want your Viraj safe and sound then come to in bridal outfit and yaa get ready beautifully.

Lakshmi : (Angrily) Why are you doing this. I told you that I don't love you. I had move on. Please leave Viraj.

Rishi: (Angrily) Come on the address which I will send you. Come there in 1 hour otherwise I will kill him and don't you dare to inform Police or someone else. Then you know naa it won't be good for Viraj.

Lakshmi : Ok I will come. Don't do anything to him.

Rishi: (smiling) That's like my sweetheart. Meet you soon.

Then he cut the call.

Commissioner : Now you get ready Miss. Lakshmi. Turning towards Avni and malishka Are you both ready. Remember that it will be dangerous for both of you.

Avni: (determined) We are ready.

Malishka: Yes, I will do anything to make them together.

That's it for today guys, I hope you guys will like today's part and it's humble request please tell us your opinions as it gives me motivation to write and top of that this ff is going to end soon. So I think atleast now you can tell about your opinions. So I request you all to give your valuable reviews.

What do you think what is commissioner plan. Did his plan will be successful. Did Malishka and Avni are putting their life at risk.

Till the next update bye guys 👋
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Posted: 3 years ago
#74


Hii guys,

Without wasting anyone time let's continue the story,

After 30 mins,

Lakshmi came down.

Lakshmi Lehenga 👇


Mr. Gupta cum Commissioner : So you are ready Mrs. Oberoi. My inspector will drop you at the given address as your driver. And As per plan Miss. Mittal and Mrs.Oberoi will reach in 20 mins. Don't worry nothing will happen to Mr. Singhania.

Lakshmi leave with the inspector and reached to the given adress.

Inspector : Don't Worry everything is going as per plan.

Lakshmi nods and goes inside.

Lakshmi : (Coming inside and shouting) Rishi Where are you. I am here now please Leave Viraj.

Rishi : (He is wearing a sherwani and comes there and get awestruck after looking at Lakshmi) Sweetheart, You are looking breathtaking. I must say anyone get heart attack by looking at you.

Lakshmi : (Angrily) Just stop your nonsense and tell me where is Viraj. Please leave him.

Rishi: (laughing sarcastically) This much love for him. But I won't leave him until we got married.

Lakshmi : (shouting) Rishi please try to understand I don't love you anymore but I am in love with Viraj now. And even if I got married to you then also I won't be able to love you. So don't ruin 4 lives like this. You already ruined many lives long ago. Don't do this again . Please leave Viraj I am begging you. She fold her hand and fall on her knees with thud and start crying.

Rishi : Please don't cry my jaan. Your makeup will be spoiled and I don't want my bride look messy. But if you want to see Viraj, then I can you a glimpse of him.

Lakshmi nods.

Rishi sign to his man and he opened a door and Lakshmi saw Viraj he is unconscious. Viraj was tied with ropes.

Lakshmi runs towards Viraj but held her.

Rishi : I told you to see him not to go him. It's time for our marriage.
And you know what I have arranged a dance performance for our marriage.

Lakshmi cries.

Just then two girls came there for dance performance.

Girl 1 Outfit 👇



Girl2 Outfit 👇



Girl1 : (Whispering) Be Careful, We have to be very conscious. Even a slightest mistakes can put Viraj Life in danger.

Girl2: (nodding) You're right.

Girl1 : But how will we reach Viraj

Girl2 : I think Lakshmi know about him Mrs. Oberoi.

(Yes, Girl1 is Malishka and Girl 2 is Avni)

Rishi: (smiling) Hey you both dance and entertain us.

Both nods.

Both start dancing on this song👇


Oye oye (oye oye)
Oye o o aa (oye o o aa)

Kadar ne kiya hai ishara
Ghadi bhar ka hai khel saara (x2)

Tamasha hi khud ban jaayenge khud tamasha
Badal jaayega ye nazara
Haan badal jaayega ye nazara

Avni looks at Rishi with hate. Avni moves around Lakshmi.

Kadar ne kiya hai ishara

Oye oye (oye oye)
Oye o o aa (oye o o aa) (x4)

Isharon pe humko nacha lo
Chalo jashan tum ye mana lo
Ke jee bharke humko sata lo (x2)

Now Malishka start moving around Rishi and Lakshmi and through her moves ask Lakshmi where is Viraj. Lakshmi signs her through her eyes toward A Room.

Nahi kuch kahenge
Ke hans kar sahenge
Sitam dar sitam hum tumhara
Sitam dar sitam hum tumhara
Kadar ne kiya hai ishara

Avni and Malishka came bavk on the stage.

Oye oye (oye oye)
Oye o o aa (oye o o aa) (x2)

Gali mein firta hai
Tu kyun banke banjara

Avni and Malishka saw Commissioner in casual and sign towards the room and Commissioner understands and goes towards that room through window.

Aa mere dil mein bas jaa
Mere aashiq aawara

Now again both start dancing around Rishi and other goons to distract them.

Aa mere dil mein bas jaa
Mere aashiq aawara

Now two goons start dancing around Malishka and Avni.

O tera pyar hai ik sone ka
Pinjra oh shehzadi
Mujhko apni jaan se pyari
Hai apni aazadi
O mujhko apni jaan se pyari
Hai apni aazadi

Now the commissioner sign Avni, Lakshmi and Malishka that they had cover the whole Farm house and Viraj has gain his consciousness back.
Oye oye (oye oye)
Oye o o aa (oye o o aa) (x2)

As the song ends there is loud voice of guns, Commissioner shoot many goons .

Rishi : You betrayed me Lakshmi, I won't leave you and Viraj.

He was about to hut her but Malishka pushed him . Lakshmi was about to fall but Avni saved her from falling down.

Rishi look at the girl and Malishka removed her cover. Rishi got shocked to see Lakshmi and he looked at other girl, Avni also removed her cover. Rishi got more shocked.

Rishi: Lakshmi and Malishka you both betrayed me. I won't leave anyone.

He was about to hit Lakshmi but Viraj came and they both have a huge fight. Both were beating each other badly. Police was about to arrest Rishi but Rishi get a gun and he pointed on Viraj and held him gunpoint.

Rishi : Commissioner let me go otherwise I will kill him. Let me go.

Commissioner : No Rishi stop it.

Commissioner tries to come closer so he fired in air.

Lakshmi : Please leave him.

Malishka : You're doing wrong.

Avni: It will be very bad for you Mr. Oberoi.

Rishi : Let me go, this time I fired in air but next time it will be Viraj.

Commissioner : Ok.

Rishi take Viraj with himself out of the farm house and he locked it with the help of his one goon and put Viraj in car tied his hand and mouth. He start his car and goes out.

Inside the farm house,

Lakshmi start crying because he again lost Viraj. Avni consoles her.

Then,
Commissioner, Malishka and Avni start finding some way to get out.

That's it for today guys,

I hope you will like today's part and please do comments and votes. As it means a lot to me. It gives me motivation to write more.

By the way What all you think, Will Viraj be saved. Will VirMi be together. Will Rishi be successful in his plan.

Tell me what do you think.

Till the next update bye guys 👋

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#75


Hii guys,

Without wasting anyone time let's continue the story,

So the episode started with Malishka, Avni and Commissioner finding way to go out.

Avni saw a gate and she tell about this to Malishka, Lakshmi and Commissioner.

All goes out and Lakshmi, Malishka and Avni sits in one car and Commissioner and his team in another Car.

Malishka start driving in very high speed. After then their is Police Car.

On the other hand,

In Rishi Car,

Rishi Call someone and told him something .

Person : (on call) Ok boss

Viraj: (painfully) You're doing wrong Rishi. Leave me Lakshmi dont love you anymore. You are doing wrong.

Rishi : I love her and I will get her at any cost She was, us and will be mine. I love her and she will also start to love me with time.

Viraj: She will hate you more Rishi. Try to understand.

Rishi : We will see who will get Lakshmi. And ge made Viraj unconscious.

Rishi laughs and says I will get you Lakshmi at any cost.

On the other hand,

Malishka us driving very fast and she is still far away from Rishi's Car

Lakshmi : (Crying) Please Mali... Malishka Please drive fast. I just cant lose Viraj at any cost. I will die without him. Please Malishka be fast.

Malishka: Please Lakshmi don't cry nothing will happen to Viraj. I promised you that I will return your Viraj safely to you then I will fulfill my promise.

Avni: (Worried) Mrs. Oberoi Is there any property of your or he is going outside of city. Because as per my information, there is two ways, one goes to out of Mumbai and another one to Hills. (See I don't know whether in mumbai there is hill or not but I am just imagining, So please don't mind it)

Malishka : I don't know where he is taking us yaar. I just really don't know.

Lakshmi was crying bitterly.

In Police Car,

Commissioner : We have to save everyone and specially Mr.Singhania.

Inspector : Don't worry Sir We will save him.

Commissioner : Hope so. Please Drive fast.

Inspector nods.

All the Cars are going through Forests and someone is watching them.

As soon as Rishi and Malishka Car Cross the Forest, Someone through Three Trees Trunk in the middle of Road and Police Car isn't able to cross the road.

The person smiles and Rishi looked towards that person and smiles

Commissioner : Dammit This is surely done by Mr.Oberoi.

Inspector :Now what we will do? If we tried to remove this trunks, then it will make us delayed.

Commissioner : Now we will have only one option, RUNNN!

Commissioner and his team start running behind them.

On the other hand, Rishi reached the hill and Viraj get conscious.

Avni saw Rishi Taking car towards the hill,

Avni: Why he is taking Viraj to hill, Is he gone mad.

Malishka : He have gone mad Avni.

Malishka, Avni and Lakshmi also reached there.

Rishi comes out of the Car and forcefully take out Viraj too out of the car.

Rishi: Now one person will go alive from here. Today will be final decision, Let see who will get Lakshmi.

Both start beating each other blue and black.

Lakshmi, Malishka and Avni also came out of the Car,

Lakshmi : (crying and pleading) Please Rishi! Please Viraj! Please stop it. There is long and dangerous hill. You both will fell.

Malishka: (crying and worried) Please Rishi stop it, you are doing wrong. Rishi this is madness please stop it.

Rishi: (Shouting) No Today this story will end for sure.

Avni: (worried) You're doing wrong Mr.Oberoi. Please stop this madness.

Rishi: This is not a madness but love. And Everything is fair in love or war.

Hearing this Viraj got angry, Viraj punch Rishi on his face. Rishi fall with a siund of Boommm. Blood start coming out from hus lips and nose.

On the other hand,

Commissioner and his team was running to reach the hill.

Commissioner: Run fast, we have to reach as soon as possible. We will reach their in 5 minutes.

Inspector :Yes Sir.

On hill,

Rishi touched his lips and nose. Seeing his blood he got very very angry and take out his gun and pointed it on Viraj.

Rishi : (angrily) HOW DARE YOU TO HIT ME, BEAT ME. NOW I WON'T LEAVE YOU AT ALL. I WILL KILL YOU .

Seeing the gun, Malishka, Lakshmi and Avni got really shocked.

Malishka : (angrily) Leave it Rishi, You're not doing right. Leave it Rishi.

Lakshmi : (crying) I am begging you Rishi, please I beg you please leave him. If you want to kill someone then please kill me but don't do anything. But please for god sake Leave him.

Rishi:(laughing) No, I will not kill you because I want to spend my whole life with you. I will kill him because he tried to snatch away you from me.

Avni: Please leave him Mr. Oberoi.

Rishi: (On top of his lungs) NOOOOOOOO.........

Hearing Rishi voice,

Commissioner : Let's run fast.

On Hill,

Rishi: Remember your loved ones last time Viraj. After that you won't be able to see them again.

Viraj closed his eyes and remember his dadu and Lakshmi.

Rishi shoot at Viraj.

Lakshmi : (On top of her lungs) Virajjjjjjjj.......

Avni :Virajjjjjjj......

Malishka : Virajjjj...

Viraj opened his eyes and got shocked of hus life that he isn't hit by the bullet.

Viraj: Malishkaaaaaa.....

Yes, the bullet hit her in stomach. Malishka falls in Viraj laps and smiles painfully.

Rishi: Malishkaaaaaa.....

Lakshmi : Malishkaaaa....

Avni : Malishkaaa..........

All reached her.

Rishi: (guilty) Why did you came in between Malishka. This bullet isn't meant to hit you but Viraj.

Malishka : (painfully and stammering) You.... You know th... that I love..... Viraj... How can I let..... Any.... Anything happened to him.... I. know I won't be able...... to su.... survive..... Please promise me Rishi...... you will fulfill it.... ( Rishi promised) Please let them..... get married... Trust me It gives happiness when...... your loved one is happy ..... And..... Lakshmi happiness is Viraj..... Please Rishi.

All are crying.

Rishi: (crying now genuinely) I will Malishka, We Will see their wedding together. Nothing will happen to you. You... will be alright.

Avni: I will call the ambulance

Malishka : ( breathing heavily) No I won't survive..... Rishi..... please fulfill your..... pro.. promise. And Lakshmi.... I fulfilled my.... promise..... (she promised Lakshmi that she will bring Viraj back) Now please..... take.... Care.... of... Viraj.... (Now looking at Viraj) I really love you .....Viraj in this birth..... Lakshmi won you ....but in.... next..... birth.... you.... will be..... mine.

Just then Commissioner and hus team came and got shocked....

Lakshmi : ( Crying) Nothing will happen to you.

Malishka: No.... Lakshmi.... promise me...... you will.... take care..... of Viraj

Lakshmi : (crying) I promised.

Malishka smiles hearing this and breath her last.

Rishi: (crying) Malishkaaaa........

Lakshmi : ( crying) Malishkaaa.....

Viraj: (crying) Malishkaaaa.......

Avni: (crying) Malishkaaaaa......

Rishi : (crying) I killed my best friend... please arrest me..... Commissioner.

Commissioner arrested him. Police take him away.

Viraj: (crying) She died while saving me. She really loved me.

Lakshmi : (crying) She fulfilled her promise at the cost of life.

Avni: Now please take her to her moms home.

(I am not dragging her last rites part)

That's it for today guys.

I really don't know whether this end is like how you all want..
Now I more part is left in this story. After that it will be finished. So please I request you to tell me your views on my story. please please please!

So Please do vote and comment.

And forgive me if you don't like this part or this story isn't upto your expectations.

Till the next update bye guys 👋
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Hii guys,

I want to inform you guys that it is rhe last part of this Book. So please atleast now tell me whether you liked this story or not as many of you have asked for VirMi pair.

So now I won't waste your and mine time and let continue this story.

After 6 months,

In Bajwa Mansion,

Rano: (shouting) Please do fast, today is wedding , not tomorrow.

Person: Mam Don't worry everything will be done.

Rano: But looking at your speed, it isn't looking that you will complete your work.

Person: It will be completed.

Shalu: Chachi I had checked all the food arrangements.

Neha: ( coming toward Rano) Mom I have called the beautician, she will come in 30 minutes.

Rano :(worried) Ok but what about Lakshmi's lehenga. After this much problems, her wedding is going to happen. I don't want anything go wrong now.

Bani: (coming) Chachi everything is ready, I have checked Di's Lehenga and it is perfect and her jewellery is also and awesome.

Rano : Ok but where is Avni.

Shalu: Chachi She has come and she is in Di's Room.

In Lakshmi's Room

Avni: (knocking) Can I come?

Lakshmi : Yaa Sure, you can come Avni without any permission.

Avni smiles and comes inside.

Avni gives Lakshmi a packet.

Lakshmi : (surprised) What is this Avni.

Avni: It is a gift which is sent by Rishi.

Lakshmi becomes afraid.

Avni : (calming Lakshmi) I have checked it Lakshmi. Everything is OK. And Rishi has also changed after Malishka's death. He is regretting on his deeds. That's why he sent a gift from jail. So don't worry.

Lakshmi felt relieved.

Lakshmi opened the box and found a beautiful Lord Ganesha Murti and a letter.

Murti👇



Letter:

Hii Lakshmi,

How are you? I hope you are alright. But First of all congratulations for your marriage. I know you may be get afraid by listening that I had sent a gift to you but trust me this time I am genuinely feeling happy for you. Malishka used to say true that seeing your loved ones happy, gives you really a good feeling. And I am currently getting that good feeling. I know neither you can't forgive me nor can't forget what I had done and trust me I also can't able to forgive myself for what I had done. But still if you can then please forgive me Lakshmi.

Ok Now no more sad talks. As you are starting your new life, I am sending you a Lord Ganesh idol as it is said that when we start something new we take blessing of Lord Ganesh. I don't know what will Malishka have done if she is here but I tried my best to fulfill her place.

Again Congratulations for your marriage. Have a Happy Married Life but yaa in next birth you will be mine tell this to Viraj also.

Take Care of yourself. Lots of good wishes from my and Malishka's side.

Bye Lakshmi.

Your Friend
Rishi

Lakshmi got teary eyed and remember Malishka's death.

Lakshmi : (crying) Avni I am happy today but because..... of Malishka but she isn't here..... She saved Viraj, think how much .....she loved Viraj. She loves .....Viraj.... more than me and.... she died while giving me her love..... How much pain she would .....have gone..... through. I am getting..... Viraj because of her. I wish she ......would be here. I hope wherever she is, she should be happy. And Rishi he is also changed....

Avni: (consoling her) Don't cry Lakshmi, Mrs. Oberoi last wish is that you both got married without any problem. So see you both are getting married. Please fulfill her wish with smiling face. So stop crying.

Lakshmi stopped crying.

Neha: Lakshmi here is your beautician. (Then she see that Lakshmi was crying) What happened Lakshmi, Why are you crying.

Avni : (signing Neha) Nothing much, Lakshmi get ready fast.

Lakshmi goes to change and after 10 mins came out and beautician
done her makeup.

Lakshmi outfit, jewellery and makeup 👇



Neha: (awestruck) You're looking so pretty today yaar

Avni: (nodding) Really, you're looking so beautiful today that Viraj can't take his eye off from you.

Just then all hear the baarat sound.

Avni and Neha goes downstairs. Lakshmi saw the baarat from window.

Viraj Outfit 👇



Viraj saw her and sign her 👌of looking good and if falling down by keeping his hand on his heart.

Lakshmi signs like 🤦‍♀

Then Lakshmi thought : Thank you Malishka for giving me my happiness. Thank you so much. I hope wherever you are, you are happy.

On the other hand,

All welcomed Viraj grandly.

After that Viraj sit in the mandap and Pandit ji asked Shalu and Rano to bring Lakshmi.

Lakshmi came grandly with flower rain and putting her legs in flower plates.



(This song is playing in the background in the whole wedding rituals)

Lakshmi sits besides Viraj and pandit start chanting Mantras. VirMi looked towards each other and smiles widely.

Then VirMi start taking Pheres keep hand in each other hands.

Then Viraj put mangalsutra in Lakshmi's neck and put vermilion in Lakshmi's maang and sime sindoor fell on Lakshmi's nose.

Everyone start laughing and said that Viraj will keep her very happy.

VirMi blushes.

Then VirMi takes blessings from everyone.

Dadu: Always stay happy.

Rano: Always stay happy and no bad eyesight fall on you both.

Chachaji: Sada suhaagan Raho.

Then VirMi hugs had a group hug with Shalu, Bani, Avni, Neha and Rajveer.

Neha and Rajveer: Congratulations, Have a Happy Married Life.

Shalu and Bani: Congratulations both of you di and jiju. Please jiju keep our di always happy. And hugged her Di.

Avni: Congratulations ,May you both get life's every happiness.

Dadu: But wedding is incomplete.

Rano: (shocked and worried) But how ji, all rituals got completed.

Dadu: In our house, every marriage is incomplete without groom and bride dance.

Everyone had a breathe of relief and start laughing.

VirMi get shy as well as blushes.

Both dance on the song👇


Both dance romantically and closely. Both forget about their surroundings. Both get lost in each other.

As the song ends, both came out of their dreamworld.

Viraj: You're looking very beautiful today Mrs. Lakshmi Viraj Singhania.

Lakshmi blushes.

Viraj : You look more beautiful when you blush.

Lakshmi hit him lightly and both smiles whole heartily.

THE END.

I don't know whether the end is good or not. And I am sorry if this story hurts anyone emotions as I have no intentions to hurt anyone emotions.

So for now guys,

Bye guys 👋

Take Care

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