Love makes Life Beautiful : Adiya FF Part 11 - pg 15

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Anuva714

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Posted: 6 years ago

#11

Originally posted by: jasminerahul
nice ff. surprised to know that wassim harsh are childhood friends and wassim was looked after by harsh's family.happy to know that both families stay together.

Thank u sissy... you are supporting me a lot n guiding me from beginning...

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Anuva714

@Anuva714

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Posted: 6 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: aditi_jain
Update next one soon 😃

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Anuva714

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Posted: 6 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: asifiqbalsh
Look interesting
Continue soon please
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Anuva714

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Posted: 6 years ago

#14

part 1:

A great mansion is shown... A lady is asking servants whether everything is ready... They will be here by anytime... A girl comes to her...

Girl: Anju ma... Why are you stressing up??? Everything is ready...

Anjana: yeah dear... Why ahould i worry when you are with me??? See how you decorated our house... It's really marvellous...

Harsh: how it won't be... Who decorated the house??? My daughter zoya... Then it will be marvellous only...

zoya smiles...

zoya: papaji you are making me melt in winter itself...

wasim n Roshnaq come there...

Arjun: why are they delaying??? When they will come???

zoya: my dear Arjun... This is not your court to come at correct time... They will come here by auspicious time...

Wasim: where is our little princess???

Arjun: probably eating chips somewhere...

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IN ROAD:

Noor is standing near,cross to cross the road... Heavy traffic... She open a chips packet n starts munching it... She lots herself in eating it... Suddenly she came to sense n look at the watch...

Noor: oh Noor... You are standing here for half n hour... You are going to be late... Today didi is coming na... You are gone...

she crossed the road in hurry n starts running...

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IN MANSION:

A car arrives... Pooja stepped out of car with child in her hand... Adi n Shakshi support her...

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Asif

@asifiqbalsh

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Posted: 6 years ago

#15

Nice start
Short but good update
Continue soon please
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saira

@sezo

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Posted: 6 years ago

#16

thanks for pm.

short but sweet.

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Jasmine

@jasminerahul

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Posted: 6 years ago

#17

nice to see harsh anjana praising zoya.funny comment by arjun on noor.just like he said noor is eating chips on the road.short part.waiting for part2

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Gopika

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Posted: 6 years ago

#18

Nice CS dear... Thanks Jasmine for the PM...

Edited by gopsss - 6 years ago

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Tyshal

@Tyshal

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Posted: 6 years ago

#19

Actually this is called chhota packet bada dhamaka...Pooja...Child..Nd adi????

Update soon!!

Nice update:)

Edited by Tyshal - 6 years ago

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Gopika

@gopsss

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Posted: 6 years ago

#20

Awesome update dear!!! Nice start... Aww Arjun's comment on Noor😆... Zoya had done everything... Anju n Harsh praised Zoya... Zoya's comment on Arjun's hurry... Even in road to Noor is with her chips packet... Loved it to the core dear... Eagerly waiting for next part... Jasmine dear thanks for the PM...

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